Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V46YBM1FFW2YTZTKSDRYB

Run Details

Duration:
38.9s
Cost:
$0.074997
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside the window dripped with October rain, casting an emerald smear across the dark wood of the bar. Inside, The Raven’s Nest smelled of cloves, spilled stout, and old paper. Heavy frames anchored black-and-white photographs of forgotten London streets to the walls. Behind the counter, Silas Blackwood polished a highball glass with rhythmic, measured strokes. His silver signet ring caught the dim pendant light with every turn of his hand. He favored his right leg, leaning his weight away from the old knee injury that gave him his trademark hitch. Rory Carter sat on the corner stool, her fingers tracing the rim of an amber beer. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fell forward, shielding her profile from the few patrons scattered in the booths. Beside her elbow sat a damp paper bag from the Golden Empress, the faint aroma of ginger and fried garlic clinging to her jacket. She had three more deliveries before her shift ended, but the rain had turned the Soho streets into a slick, treacherous labyrinth. The brass bell above the heavy oak door chimed. A man stepped inside, shaking a folding umbrella. Droplets scattered across the entryway rug. He wore a charcoal wool overcoat that screamed Savile Row, draped over a tailored suit. His leather shoes clicked sharply against the floorboards, a sound too crisp for the muffled atmosphere of the pub. He scanned the room, his eyes adjusting to the amber gloom, before they locked onto the corner of the bar. The man froze. He let out a breath that sounded like a laugh, though his face remained tense. "Rory?" Rory kept her gaze on her drink for a silent beat before she faced him. "Gwyn." Gwyn Thomas took three steps forward, his hand automatically reaching out before dropping to his side. He looked her up and down, his gaze lingering on her oversized denim jacket, the faded canvas sneakers, and the sharp, guarded expression in her bright blue eyes. He looked exactly as she remembered, yet entirely different. The soft edges of his university days had hardened into the sleek, calculated angles of a junior partner. "It is you. I thought—someone said you went to Edinburgh. No, someone said Bristol." "London." "Right. London." Gwyn gestured to the empty stool beside her. "May I?" Rory slid her glass an inch to the left. Gwyn sat, his movements stiff, as if the cheap vinyl of the stool might leave a mark on his trousers. He placed his leather briefcase on his lap, clutching it like a shield. Silas limped over, his hazel eyes assessing the newcomer with the cool vigilance of a man who spent decades reading rooms. He set a clean coaster down. "What can I get you, sir?" Gwyn did not look at Silas, his eyes remaining anchored on Rory. "Just a sparkling water, please. Lime." Silas nodded once, his grey-streaked auburn beard twitching in a brief, unreadable expression, before he slid away to fetch the drink. "You look... different, Rory." Gwyn’s voice lacked the booming confidence he used to project in the Cardiff lecture halls. It was softer now, coated in the professional neutrality of a courtroom. "Your hair. You used to keep it long. Down to your waist." "It got in the way." "Of what?" "Everything." She picked up her glass and took a slow sip. Her left sleeve slipped back, exposing her wrist. The small, crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident stood out pale against her skin. Gwyn’s eyes darted to the mark. Recognition, and then something heavier, flashed across his face. "Your mother still asks about you." Gwyn’s voice dropped an octave, the bar's low-humming jazz filling the gaps between his words. "I ran into her at the market in Roath last month. She looked... smaller, Rory. She said you don't call." "I call." "Once a month? A text on her birthday?" Gwyn shook his head. "She thinks you're still in law. She thinks you transferred to a firm here. She boasted about it to Mrs. Jenkins." Rory stared at her reflection in the dark mahogany of the bar. The wood was scarred with decades of glass rings and cigarette burns. "Let her boast." "Is that what this is?" Gwyn motioned to the damp Golden Empress bag, then to the worn collar of her jacket. "Some kind of gap year that got out of hand? You were the top of our contracts class, Rory. Professor Vance used to use your briefs as exam exemplars. You had a training contract lined up with Davies and Sons." "I tore it up." Silas returned, placing the sparkling water on the coaster. His silver signet ring tapped the glass bar top with a sharp clack. He lingered for a second, adjusting a tower of clean napkins, before giving Rory a long, silent look. He was offering a silent exit, but Rory gave a minor, almost imperceptible shake of her head. Silas retreated down the bar, grabbing a bottle of whiskey to restock the back shelf. Gwyn picked up his water but did not drink. He watched the carbonation rise. "Evan is back in Cardiff." The air in the corner of the bar grew cold. Rory did not flinch, but her grip on her glass tightened until her knuckles turned the color of chalk. "I don't care." "He’s asking about you, too. He took a position at his uncle's firm. He looks good, Rory. He’s... settled." Rory let out a sharp, dry laugh that sounded like snapping dry tinder. She turned her head fully to face him, her blue eyes narrowing. "Settled. Is that what they call it now?" Gwyn flinched, his fingers tracing the polished brass clasp of his briefcase. "I know things got... messy at the end. But you left everything behind. Your family, your career, your friends. You fled in the middle of the night like a thief. Eva wouldn't tell us where you went. We thought you were dead, Rory." "I was." Rory leaned closer, her voice a low, steady hum that cut through the low murmur of the pub. "The girl who sat in those Cardiff lecture halls, the one who let herself be molded into some perfect, quiet little ornament for a rising star associate? She died. I buried her. If she’d stayed, she would have ended up in a hospital, or a casket." Gwyn lowered his gaze. "He wasn't always like that. We were all friends." "He was exactly like that, Gwyn. You just chose to look at the sheen on his shoes instead of the bruises under my sleeves." The silence stretched between them, heavy and viscous. The green neon light outside flickered, casting a brief shadow across Gwyn's face that made him look tired, compromised, and old. Gwyn reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a sleek, matte-black business card. He slid it across the damp wood. It rested near her paper bag. "I wanted to help. I’m with Harris and Vance now. Commercial litigation. If you want to finish your qualification, I can talk to the senior partners. We have an administrative role open. It pays twenty-eight thousand to start. You could get back on your feet." Rory looked at the card. The elegant gold lettering of *Gwyn Thomas, Esq.* caught the light. She picked up the card. Rory folded the card in half. Then in half again, until the thick paper creased and split. She dropped the pieces into her empty glass, where they floated in the remaining drops of amber beer. "I'm on my feet, Gwyn." Gwyn stared at the ruined card. He stood up, hoisting his briefcase. The confidence was entirely gone, replaced by a stiff, wounded formality. "Your father’s health isn't great, Rory. You should at least call him." "Give my love to Cardiff, Gwyn. Tell them London is exactly what I deserved." Gwyn lingered for a second, his mouth twitching as if searching for one final argument, one piece of legal jargon that could resolve the division between who they used to be and what they had become. Finding nothing, he turned and walked toward the door. His leather shoes clicked against the floorboards, a retreating rhythm that faded as the brass bell chimed once more, letting in a gust of cold, wet Soho air before the door clicked shut. Rory did not watch him leave. Silas walked back down the bar, his limp slightly more pronounced now as his shift wore on. He reached out, picked up the empty glass containing the folded, sodden business card, and tossed it into the sink below the counter. He poured a fresh double finger of whiskey into a clean tumbler and slid it in front of her. "On the house. You've got ten minutes before Cheung's kitchen closes." Rory took the whiskey. The glass felt heavy, solid, and real in her hand. She stared at the green neon light bleeding through the window, the rain washing away the grime of the street outside. "Thanks, Silas."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count2
4
word"treacherous"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"measured"
2"weight"
3"tracing"
4"treacherous"
5"scanned"
6"gloom"
7"calculated"
8"unreadable"
9"perfect"
10"silence"
11"flickered"
12"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1499
ratio0.002
matches
0"Gwyn Thomas, Esq."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1085
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Gwyn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Gwyn"
discoveredNames
October1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Soho2
Savile1
Row1
Thomas2
Rory14
Cardiff1
Gwyn17
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Carter"
4"Row"
5"Thomas"
6"Rory"
7"Gwyn"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Soho"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.717
windowScore0.5
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a laugh, though his face rema"
1"sounded like snapping dry tinder"
2"as if searching for one final argument, one piece of legal jargon that could resolve the division between who they used to be and what they had become"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.667
wordCount1499
matches
0"not flinch, but her grip on her glass tightened until her knuckles turned th"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean20.82
std21.62
cv1.038
sampleLengths
094
180
29
368
418
51
615
71
871
914
101
112
128
132
149
1533
1627
176
1812
196
2021
214
2227
2312
245
252
261
2747
286
2915
3020
312
328
334
3421
3524
363
375
3816
3940
404
4172
4214
435
4429
453
4619
4725
488
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"was scarred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was offering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences118
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"sleek, matte-black business"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022893772893772892
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00641025641025641
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.7
std9.03
cv0.711
sampleLengths
022
112
212
313
415
520
616
718
824
922
109
118
126
1315
1419
1520
163
1715
181
1915
201
2116
2228
239
2418
2514
261
272
288
292
309
3120
3213
3321
346
356
3612
376
3821
394
4015
4112
4212
435
442
451
4610
478
4814
496
44.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3135593220338983
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners37
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then in half again, until"
ratio0.012
76.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences81
matches
0"His silver signet ring caught"
1"He favored his right leg,"
2"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
3"She had three more deliveries"
4"He wore a charcoal wool"
5"His leather shoes clicked sharply"
6"He scanned the room, his"
7"He let out a breath"
8"He looked her up and"
9"He looked exactly as she"
10"He placed his leather briefcase"
11"He set a clean coaster"
12"It was softer now, coated"
13"She picked up her glass"
14"Her left sleeve slipped back,"
15"His silver signet ring tapped"
16"He lingered for a second,"
17"He was offering a silent"
18"He watched the carbonation rise."
19"She turned her head fully"
ratio0.358
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He favored his right leg,"
3"Rory Carter sat on the"
4"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
5"She had three more deliveries"
6"The brass bell above the"
7"A man stepped inside, shaking"
8"Droplets scattered across the entryway"
9"He wore a charcoal wool"
10"His leather shoes clicked sharply"
11"He scanned the room, his"
12"The man froze."
13"He let out a breath"
14"Rory kept her gaze on"
15"Gwyn Thomas took three steps"
16"He looked her up and"
17"He looked exactly as she"
18"The soft edges of his"
19"Gwyn gestured to the empty"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He favored his right leg, leaning his weight away from the old knee injury that gave him his trademark hitch."
1"He wore a charcoal wool overcoat that screamed Savile Row, draped over a tailored suit."
2"Silas limped over, his hazel eyes assessing the newcomer with the cool vigilance of a man who spent decades reading rooms."
3"The green neon light outside flickered, casting a brief shadow across Gwyn's face that made him look tired, compromised, and old."
4"Gwyn lingered for a second, his mouth twitching as if searching for one final argument, one piece of legal jargon that could resolve the division between who th…"
5"His leather shoes clicked against the floorboards, a retreating rhythm that faded as the brass bell chimed once more, letting in a gust of cold, wet Soho air be…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.9794%