Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V50WJPGN53462GE0RRBJY

Run Details

Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.081195
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, the heavy metallic thud echoing in the cramped hallway. Rory pulled the door open, her fingers still clamped around the brass knob. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. A tailored charcoal wool coat draped his tall frame, the platinum strands of his slicked-back hair catching the dull yellow glow of the corridor bulb. Underneath a gloved palm, the ivory head of his cane gleamed. He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one amber, one black, brilliant and cold as polished stone. The heavy scent of turmeric and toasted cumin wafting from the downstairs curry house vanished, replaced instantly by his familiar aura: cedarwood, cold winter rain, and the faint, bitter tang of ozone. "You're three months late, Lucien." He didn't wait for an invitation. The tip of his ivory cane tapped the floorboards as he glided past her into the flat. "The lock on the street door is trivial, as always. We need to discuss the Cardiff syndicate." Rory slammed the door, the three deadbolts rattling in their sockets. She turned, her back pressed against the wood, her straight black hair falling over her shoulders. Her left wrist, marked by the small crescent scar of her childhood, pricked with an old, familiar heat. "The Cardiff business ended when you boarded a train to Paris without looking back. Get out of my flat." "Eva's flat," Lucien corrected. He paused in the center of the cramped living room, scanning the stacks of leather-bound grimoires and unrolled scrolls that cluttered every available surface. He peeled off his leather gloves, one slowly drag of a finger at a time. "Your host has terrible taste in literature. And her companion lacks manners." On top of a pile of dusty parchment, Ptolemy, the massive orange tabby cat, let out a low, vibrating growl. He blinked his yellow eyes at the half-demon, his tail flicking in annoyance. Lucien laid his gloves on top of a translation of the *Clavicula Salomonis*. "We have unfinished affairs, Rory." "We have a closed ledger." She crossed her arms, her knuckles turning white. "I paid my debt. My deliveries for Yu-Fei are clean. I don't owe you secrets, and I certainly don't owe you my time." Lucien took two slow steps toward her. In the tiny apartment, the distance melted instantly. The temperature in the room climbed, the ambient heat of his Avaros blood radiating off his chest like a hearth fire. "A ledger is never closed when the ink is still wet. You ran to London. You thought a curry house and three deadbolts would obscure your trail." "I moved. There is a distinction." Rory stood her ground, refusing to retreat into the messy living room. "And my trail was none of your concern the moment you decided I was an acceptable loss in Marseille." A shadow crossed Lucien's pale face, the dark half of his heritage seeming to absorb the yellow light of the paper floor lamp. He raised his cane, placing the polished ivory tip precisely between her flat shoes. "Marseille was a tactical retreat." "It was abandonment." The word hung between them, sharp and jagged. The smell of rain clinging to his coat mixed with the dust of centuries-old paper. Rory stared at the lapels of his charcoal suit. Immaculate, as always. No dust from the Brick Lane stairwell dared cling to him. She hated him for it—for how easily he wore his elegance like armor, while she carried her exhaustion in the dark circles beneath her blue eyes. She stepped around the cane, heading toward the tiny kitchenette. A kettle sat on the two-ring stove. She needed something to occupy her hands before she reached out and ripped his collar. "Why are you here, Luc?" The nickname slipped out before she could catch it, a relic of late nights in his Marseille office when the whiskey ran low and the barriers ran lower. He followed her, his boots silent on the warped linoleum. The kitchen was barely wide enough for one person; with both of them inside, the air grew scarce. "The Cardiff syndicate found Eva's research," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly baritone. "They think she has the key to the Avaros seal. And they know she is your friend." Rory gripped the edge of the laminate counter. "Eva is safe. She's in Oxford." "For now." He stood right behind her. She could feel the heat of his chest against her shoulder blades, though he didn't touch her. "But they are persistent. And they remember the woman who slipped through their fingers in Wales." She spun around, her lower back pressing into the metal lip of the sink. The movement brought her coat-to-chest with him. She had to tilt her chin up to meet his heterochromatic gaze. "Is this your new angle? Playing the protector? The last time you protected me, I spent three days hiding in a shipping container in Bristol." "You survived." "No thanks to your planning." Lucien's hand moved, his bare fingers brushing against the side of her neck. His skin was scorching, a stark contrast to the drafty chill of the flat. Rory flinched but didn't pull away. Her breath caught, a betrayal of the cool exterior she tried so hard to maintain. "I secured your passage," he murmured, his thumb tracing the tight line of her jawline. "I bought your freedom from the Carter estate. Do not lecture me on planning." "My father sold me to settle his own tab." Rory gripped his lapels, her blue eyes flashing. "You just bought the contract. You didn't free me, Lucien. You just changed the name on the deed." His hand stilled. The intensity in his amber eye flared, bright as kindling. "Is that what you believe?" "What else was I supposed to think when you locked me in that townhouse in Chelsea and went to deal with the Marseille cartel?" Her voice remained low, a fierce whisper. "You kept me like a prized hound. Useful for finding the cracks in the foundations, but never allowed at the table." Lucien leaned in, his shadow enveloping her. The cedarwood scent was thick now, suffocating and intoxicating. "A hound does not dictate my terms. A hound does not sleep in my bed." "That was a mistake." "A mistake we repeated for six weeks." He pressed closer, his thighs brushing her jeans. The sheer physical presence of him was a wall she couldn't scale. "Every night, if memory serves." Rory's hands tightened on his lapels, her fingers curling into the fine wool. Her pulse fluttered like a trapped bird against her collarbone. "You left," she whispered. "No note. No warning. Just a ticket to London on the dresser and Silas's address." "They were coming for you," he said, his voice raw. For a fraction of a second, the polished facade of the Marseille fixer cracked, revealing the half-demon beneath—possessive, angry, and desperately controlled. "Your father's creditors do not negotiate. If they had found you with me, they would have used you to break me. I had to clear the board." "I could have helped you." "You would have died." "It was my choice to make!" Rory jerked his lapels, pulling him down slightly so their faces were inches apart. "You don't get to decide who lives and dies for me, Lucien. I spent my whole life under my father's thumb, then Evan's. I didn't escape Cardiff just to become your gilded pet." Lucien's gaze dropped to her lips, then rose back to her eyes. "You are no one's pet, Aurora." Hearing her full name on his tongue sent a shiver down her spine. He reached down, his fingers wrapping around her wrists. His grip was firm but gentle, his thumbs rubbing over the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The warmth of his hands seemed to seep directly into her bones, melting the icy defense she had built over the last three months. "I came back because the threat has evolved," he said, his brow furrowed. "And because I could not endure another month of your silence." "You chose the silence." "I chose your safety. A poor bargain, in hindsight." Ptolemy jumped down from the books with a soft thud, padding over to rub against Lucien's trousers, but the cat's betrayal went ignored. Rory stared at Lucien's mouth. She hated how much she wanted him to lean the extra inch and end the distance. She hated that his touch felt like the only warm thing in this miserable, rain-slicked city. "You expect me to just pack a bag and follow you again?" she asked, her voice losing its sharp edge, softening into something vulnerable. "No." Lucien let go of her wrists, his hands sliding up her arms to cup her shoulders. He leaned his forehead against hers, his breath hot against her skin. "I expect nothing. I am here to offer a partnership. This time, we do it your way." She breathed in his scent, her fingers still loosely holding his coat. "My way?" "No shipping containers. No safe houses. No secrets." Rory let out a dry, breathy laugh. "A fixer with no secrets? That's a contradiction in terms, Luc." "For the rest of the world, yes." He tilted her chin up with his index finger. "For you, the book is open." She looked at him, searching the amber and black of his eyes for the lie. She found only a deep, yawning hunger—and a fear that matched her own. The fear of being known, of being weak for another person. "You're a fool for coming here," she whispered. "Undoubtedly." "The Cardiff people will watch this street." "Let them watch," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low purr. His thumb stroked her lower lip, parting them slightly. "They will see nothing but their own ruin." Rory's grip on his lapels tightened as she pulled him down the remaining distance. His mouth found hers, hard and demanding, a sudden release of the tension that had stretched between them like a wire over the long months apart. Rory met him with equal ferocity, her teeth scraping his lower lip, tasting the cold rain on his skin and the heat building beneath it. She pulled him deeper into the cramped kitchen, her heels hitting the baseboard of the cabinet. Lucien's cane clattered to the linoleum floor, forgotten, the ivory handle sliding beneath the bottom of the cupboard. His hands tangled in her straight black hair, his fingers digging into the scalp to hold her still as he drank her in. Rory's hands slid from his chest to the back of his neck, her fingers curling into the short, slicked-back platinum hair at his nape, pulling him closer until there was no space left between them. The heat of his body burned through her cotton shirt. It felt like standing too close to an open hearth, a dangerous, thrilling warmth that made her limbs heavy. They broke apart for a fraction of a second, both breathing heavily, their chests rising and falling in unison. "You still taste of Cardiff rain," Lucien muttered, his dark eye wild, his amber eye burning. "And you still taste of lies," she whispered back, though her hands didn't let go of his neck. He laughed, a low, rumbling sound that vibrated against her chest. "An honest lie, at least." "There is no such thing." He pressed his lips to her jawline, moving down to the sensitive skin of her throat. Rory tilted her head back, her eyes closing as a shiver ran down her spine. The tip of his tongue found the pulse point at her neck, sending a jolt of pure heat straight to her core. The cramped flat around them seemed to shrink further, the stacks of books and scrolls on the living room table fading into the background. The only things that existed were the smell of rain, the heat of his skin, and the steady, solid weight of him pinning her against the counter. "We can't do this here," she said, her voice breathy, though her fingers were actively pulling at the buttons of his charcoal coat. "We can do this anywhere you want," Lucien replied, his hands sliding down to her hips, lifting her slightly so she sat on the edge of the laminate counter. The cold wood beneath her was a sharp contrast to the heat of his thighs pressing between hers. She looked down at him, her blue eyes bright. "The door is still unlocked." "The deadbolts are thrown," he murmured against her neck. "No, they aren't. I only locked them when you were already inside." Lucien paused, his forehead resting against her collarbone. A slow sigh escaped his lips. "A tactical oversight." "One of many." Rory reached down, her fingers brushing his cheek, feeling the sharp line of his jaw. "Go lock the door, Luc. Truly lock it." He looked up at her, those striking heterochromatic eyes searching hers. There was a vulnerability in his gaze that he only ever showed her, a silent plea to not let this be a fleeting moment of weakness. "If I lock it," he said, his voice dropping to a gravelly whisper, "I am not leaving when the morning comes." Rory's hand slid down to his chest, resting over his heart. Its beat was incredibly fast, a frantic, heavy rhythm that matched her own. "I didn't ask you to leave," she said.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:24:38.679Z" 5/19/2026, 7:24:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stood right [right]"
1"she whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.055
84.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2245
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"loosely"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"precisely"
2"slightly"
3"loosely"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2245
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"fluttered"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count2
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"vibrated"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"could feel"
4"stark"
5"chill"
6"tracing"
7"intensity"
8"whisper"
9"pulse"
10"fluttered"
11"facade"
12"down her spine"
13"warmth"
14"furrowed"
15"silence"
16"tension"
17"vibrated"
18"weight"
19"fleeting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"a shiver ran down her spine"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords2241
ratio0.001
matches
0"Clavicula Salomonis"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1572
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Lucien17
Avaros1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille2
Rory17
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.959
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the only warm thing in this m"
1"felt like standing too close to an open"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2241
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences164
matches
0"hated that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean24.63
std16.18
cv0.657
sampleLengths
026
16
255
332
45
523
617
745
819
955
1033
1113
125
1336
1436
1527
1637
1737
185
193
2023
2149
2232
235
2428
2528
2633
2714
2840
2933
3025
312
325
3348
3429
3535
3613
375
3852
3916
4015
414
4232
4323
4419
4559
465
474
4853
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was scorching"
1"were actively pulling"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one amber, one black, brilliant and cold as polished stone."
1"She hated him for it—for how easily he wore his elegance like armor, while she carried her exhaustion in the dark circles beneath her blue eyes."
2"The kitchen was barely wide enough for one person; with both of them inside, the air grew scarce."
3"For a fraction of a second, the polished facade of the Marseille fixer cracked, revealing the half-demon beneath—possessive, angry, and desperately controlled."
4"She found only a deep, yawning hunger—and a fear that matched her own."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1586
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"massive orange tabby cat,"
1"miserable, rain-slicked city."
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.0308953341740227
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.013240857503152586
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean13.66
std7.23
cv0.529
sampleLengths
013
113
26
325
411
519
632
75
86
917
1017
1111
1216
1318
1419
154
1624
1715
1812
1920
2013
2113
225
2313
2423
257
268
2721
2827
2918
3019
3123
3214
335
343
358
3615
379
383
3911
4026
4110
427
4315
445
4528
4610
4718
4816
4917
40.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.24390243902439024
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences113
matches
0"He tilted his head, his"
1"He didn't wait for an"
2"She turned, her back pressed"
3"Her left wrist, marked by"
4"He paused in the center"
5"He peeled off his leather"
6"He blinked his yellow eyes"
7"She crossed her arms, her"
8"He raised his cane, placing"
9"She hated him for it—for"
10"She stepped around the cane,"
11"She needed something to occupy"
12"He followed her, his boots"
13"He stood right behind her"
14"She could feel the heat"
15"She spun around, her lower"
16"She had to tilt her"
17"His skin was scorching, a"
18"Her breath caught, a betrayal"
19"he murmured, his thumb tracing"
ratio0.451
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences113
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, the"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"A tailored charcoal wool coat"
4"He tilted his head, his"
5"The heavy scent of turmeric"
6"He didn't wait for an"
7"The tip of his ivory"
8"Rory slammed the door, the"
9"She turned, her back pressed"
10"Her left wrist, marked by"
11"He paused in the center"
12"He peeled off his leather"
13"He blinked his yellow eyes"
14"Lucien laid his gloves on"
15"She crossed her arms, her"
16"Lucien took two slow steps"
17"The temperature in the room"
18"Rory stood her ground, refusing"
19"A shadow crossed Lucien's pale"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"His mouth found hers, hard and demanding, a sudden release of the tension that had stretched between them like a wire over the long months apart."
1"Rory met him with equal ferocity, her teeth scraping his lower lip, tasting the cold rain on his skin and the heat building beneath it."
2"It felt like standing too close to an open hearth, a dangerous, thrilling warmth that made her limbs heavy."
3"They broke apart for a fraction of a second, both breathing heavily, their chests rising and falling in unison."
4"He laughed, a low, rumbling sound that vibrated against her chest."
5"The only things that existed were the smell of rain, the heat of his skin, and the steady, solid weight of him pinning her against the counter."
6"Its beat was incredibly fast, a frantic, heavy rhythm that matched her own."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"She crossed, her knuckles turning white"
1"Rory stood, refusing to retreat into the messy living room"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly baritone"
3"he murmured, his thumb tracing the tight line of her jawline"
4"Rory gripped, her blue eyes flashing"
5"He pressed, his thighs brushing her jeans"
6"he said, his voice raw"
7"he said, his brow furrowed"
8"she asked, her voice losing its sharp edge, softening into something vulnerable"
9"Lucien let go, his hands sliding up her arms to cup her shoulders"
10"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low purr"
11"Lucien muttered, his dark eye wild, his amber eye burning"
12"she whispered back, though her hands didn't let go of his neck"
13"he said, his voice dropping to a gravelly whisper,"
40.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"He pressed (press)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien muttered (mutter)"
6"she whispered back (whisper)"
7"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.466
rawRatio0.471
effectiveRatio0.219
74.1670%