Run: 2026-05-19-01KS0V6QJR6MZBFWKWEJVNRE6P

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.063540
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered, casting fractured emerald bars across the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside, the air smelled of stale stout, damp wool, and the faint, sweet trace of Silas’s pipe tobacco. Rory traced a knuckle along the grain of the dark mahogany bar. A slow evening. A few regulars huddled near the back, their murmurs lost beneath the soft, scratches of an old jazz record. Across the counter, Silas wiped down the brass draft fonts. His silver signet ring caught the dim amber sconce light, flashing with every methodical swipe of his cloth. When he shifted his weight, his left knee gave that familiar, quiet click—a souvenir from Prague that dictated his stride. "You're quiet tonight, kid," Silas said, not lifting his gaze from the brass. Rory pulled her sleeves down over her wrists. The left fabric caught slightly on the crescent-shaped scar near her thumb, a jagged little reminder of a childhood tumble she’d never quite forgotten. "Just listening to the rain. It sounds different here than it does in Cardiff." "More soot in the London drops." Silas set the cloth aside and reached for a clean highball glass. "Gives them weight." The heavy oak door of the pub groaned open, letting in a gust of cold, wet wind and the distant hiss of traffic on Wardour Street. A man stepped inside, struggling with a folding umbrella that dripped onto the floorboards. He wore a charcoal-grey cashmere overcoat, the shoulders darkened by the downpour, and trousers pressed with knife-edge precision. Rory froze. The glass she held remained inches from her coaster. The newcomer ran a hand through his damp, neatly parted brown hair, squinting into the gloom of the bar. His eyes adjusted, scanning the old maps and fading black-and-white photographs on the walls before finally settling on the bar. Julian Vance. He had not changed. He still had that same earnest, slightly pinched expression he wore during mock trial championships, the look of a man who calculated the tax on his coffee before ordering it. Julian took three steps toward the bar, his leather oxfords clicking cleanly against the wood. Then, he stopped. His gaze locked onto Rory. He blinked, his mouth parting. "Rory?" Rory did not move. She forced her shoulders to drop, adopting the easy, unbothered posture she had spent the last year perfecting. "Julian. You’re a long way from the Temple." "Good God." Julian took the remaining steps in a hurry, his hand half-extended before he let it drop, unsure of the reception. "It is you. I almost didn't recognize you. The hair." Rory touched the straight, shoulder-length black strands. The last time Julian had seen her, her hair had been a wild, natural brown, usually pinned up in a messy knot during all-night study sessions. "London style. It is easier to manage in the damp." Julian stared, his eyes tracing the contours of her face as if searching for the law student who had shared his bench in Cardiff. He looked at her worn denim jacket, the faint yellow stain of curry sauce on her cuff from her afternoon shift at the Golden Empress, and the small apartment key hanging from a cheap lanyard around her neck. "I heard you were in town," Julian said, his voice dropping to a lower, more intimate register. "Eva said something, months ago, but she wouldn’t tell me where. Or what you were doing." "Eva talks too much." "She worries about you. We all did." Julian pulled out the barstool beside her, hesitated, and then sat down. The expensive wool of his coat smelled of cedar and high-end rain. "When you just vanished after the final exams. Your dad wouldn't say anything either. Brendan just shut his door." Silas limped over, his hazel eyes assessing Julian with the cold precision of a scale. He did not offer a smile. "What can I get you, sir?" Julian glanced up, momentarily cowed by Silas's quiet authority and the broad set of his shoulders. "Oh. Just a gin and tonic, please. Whatever gin you recommend." Silas nodded once, his grey-streaked auburn beard twitching as he turned to the shelf. "You're working here?" Julian asked, turning his attention back to Rory. "I live upstairs," Rory said. "I work down the street, mostly. Silas lets me keep a stool warm." "Upstairs?" Julian looked toward the ceiling, as if he could see through the plaster to the cramped flat where she spent her nights staring at the London skyline. "But Rory, you had the highest marks in our year. The firm in Bristol was practically begging for your signature. Mr. Davies said you were the most natural litigator he’d seen in a decade." "Mr. Davies had a soft spot for anyone who could quote the 1906 Trade Disputes Act from memory." Rory picked up her drink, a simple soda with lime, and took a slow sip. "It is a different kind of trade now." "It’s a waste," Julian said. The words slipped out before he could catch them. He flushed, his hand instantly rising to adjust his silk tie. "I didn't mean it like that. I just mean you were spectacular, Rory. We were supposed to be the new guard." "You are the new guard, Julian. You look the part." Silas set the gin and tonic on the counter. The ice clinked softly against the glass. "That will be eight quid." Julian fumbled with a leather wallet, sliding a ten-pound note across the wood. Silas took it, leaving the change on the counter, before retreating to the far end of the bar to clean a set of silver spoons. His presence remained felt, a silent anchor behind the taps. Julian took a long drink of his gin. "I saw Evan last month." The name hung in the air, heavy and poisonous. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She felt the skin of her left wrist stretch, the crescent scar tingling under her sleeve. "He’s a senior associate now," Julian continued, keeping his eyes on his drink. "At his uncle’s firm. He bought a house in Pontcanna. He asks about you. Sometimes." "Does he?" Rory's voice was flat, devoid of the tremor that used to seize her throat whenever Evan’s name was mentioned in Cardiff. "He looks older," Julian said. He peeked at her sidewise. "He told everyone you had a breakdown. That the pressure of the exams got to you. But I knew that wasn’t right. You didn’t crack under pressure. You thrived on it." "Evidently not." "Why didn't you tell me, Rory?" Julian’s voice cracked slightly, losing its polished court-room cadence. "If things were if you needed to leave, you could have come to my place. We were friends. We spent three years sitting side-by-side. I would have helped you." Rory looked at him, really looked at him. Julian’s face was unblemished by the kind of choices she had made over the last two years. He still believed that the world ran on briefs, protocol, and reasonable discussions. He had not seen the bruises she had spent weeks makeup-covering. He had not seen the way Evan’s hand would tighten around her wrist until the bones grated. Julian had been there, occupying the desk next to hers, yet he had been entirely blind. "You could not have helped me, Julian," Rory said softly. "You were too busy preparing for your pupillage." "That’s not fair." "It’s the truth." She turned her barstool to face him, her blue eyes bright and unyielding under the dim lighting. "You saw what you wanted to see. You saw a smart girl who made your study group look good. You didn't see the rest." Julian flinched. He looked down at his well-manicured hands, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass. "Maybe I was blind. But I cared about you." "I know." "And now?" Julian looked around the shadowy bar, at the old maps of empires that no longer existed, at the silent bartender who watched them like an old hawk. "You’re delivering food? Living in a pub? This isn't you, Rory." "This is exactly me," Rory said. "I’m not hiding anymore, Julian. I’m just living. Under my own steam." "It’s a hard way to live." "I like the rain here," Rory said, her voice dropping to a whisper. "It doesn’t feel like Cardiff." Julian reached out, his hand hovering over hers, but he stopped himself, his fingers curling back into his palm. The distance between them was not just miles of highway between Wales and London; it was a vast, silent valley of years and decisions he could never understand. Silas walked back over, his limp pronounced in the quiet of the pub. He picked up Rory's empty glass. "Rain is picking up out there. The street is flooding near the tube station." Julian looked toward the window, where the neon green reflection was now smeared by heavy torrents of water. He drained his glass, the ice rattling against his teeth. He stood up, buttoning his charcoal coat with slow, deliberate movements. "I have to get back," Julian said. "I have a brief to prepare for tomorrow morning. Commercial dispute." "Knock them dead," Rory said. Julian lingered, his umbrella clutched tightly in his hand. He looked at her one last time, trying to find a trace of the girl who used to laugh at his terrible jokes in the law library. "Goodbye, Rory." "Goodbye, Julian." Rory watched him walk to the door, his oxfords squeaking on the damp floorboards. The door opened, letting in a sharp gust of cold air, and then clicked shut behind him, leaving only the hum of the neon sign and the quiet scratches of the record. Silas set a fresh glass of water in front of her. "He's a clean one." "He was," Rory said, her fingers finding the crescent scar on her wrist. "He still is." She picked up the water, her blue eyes reflecting the green light from the window. Silas did not say anything else. He just picked up his cloth and went back to work. The rain continued to beat against the leaded glass.
created_at"2026-05-19T19:25:34.685Z" 5/19/2026, 7:25:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
98.31% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Julian’s voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
1"Rory said softly [softly]"
2"Julian looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.102
79.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1692
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1692
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"fractured"
2"traced"
3"methodical"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"reminder"
7"gloom"
8"scanning"
9"calculated"
10"tracing"
11"silk"
12"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1691
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1200
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas12
Prague1
Rory19
Wardour1
Street1
Vance1
Julian25
Cardiff2
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Evan2
Wales1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Vance"
5"Julian"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Wardour"
3"Street"
4"Cardiff"
5"Golden"
6"London"
7"Wales"
globalScore0.458
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if searching for the law student who had shared his bench in Cardiff"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1691
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"believed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean28.66
std19.1
cv0.666
sampleLengths
038
182
213
346
421
558
611
739
82
934
1028
111
1230
1332
1443
1562
1633
174
1850
1927
2027
2114
2211
2318
2462
2541
2646
2710
2821
2948
3013
3131
3228
3323
3441
352
3644
3782
3818
393
4044
4126
422
4340
4418
456
4618
4747
4833
4939
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"was mentioned"
1"was unblemished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs195
matches(empty)
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences130
ratio0.015
matches
0"When he shifted his weight, his left knee gave that familiar, quiet click—a souvenir from Prague that dictated his stride."
1"The distance between them was not just miles of highway between Wales and London; it was a vast, silent valley of years and decisions he could never understand."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1216
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"stale stout, damp wool,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.027960526315789474
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012335526315789474
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.01
std8.13
cv0.625
sampleLengths
020
118
212
33
419
510
618
720
813
98
1024
1114
1218
133
1426
1514
1618
172
189
1919
2020
212
224
2330
2415
253
265
275
281
294
3018
318
3222
3310
347
3526
3610
3724
3838
3917
4016
414
4219
4312
4419
4515
466
476
4816
4911
36.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2923076923076923
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners38
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then, he stopped."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences84
matches
0"His silver signet ring caught"
1"He wore a charcoal-grey cashmere"
2"His eyes adjusted, scanning the"
3"He had not changed."
4"He still had that same"
5"His gaze locked onto Rory."
6"He blinked, his mouth parting."
7"She forced her shoulders to"
8"He looked at her worn"
9"He did not offer a"
10"He flushed, his hand instantly"
11"His presence remained felt, a"
12"She felt the skin of"
13"He peeked at her sidewise."
14"He still believed that the"
15"He had not seen the"
16"He had not seen the"
17"She turned her barstool to"
18"He looked down at his"
19"He picked up Rory's empty"
ratio0.298
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Rory traced a knuckle along"
2"A slow evening."
3"His silver signet ring caught"
4"Silas said, not lifting his"
5"Rory pulled her sleeves down"
6"The left fabric caught slightly"
7"Silas set the cloth aside"
8"The heavy oak door of"
9"A man stepped inside, struggling"
10"He wore a charcoal-grey cashmere"
11"The glass she held remained"
12"The newcomer ran a hand"
13"His eyes adjusted, scanning the"
14"He had not changed."
15"He still had that same"
16"Julian took three steps toward"
17"His gaze locked onto Rory."
18"He blinked, his mouth parting."
19"Rory did not move."
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"When he shifted his weight, his left knee gave that familiar, quiet click—a souvenir from Prague that dictated his stride."
1"A man stepped inside, struggling with a folding umbrella that dripped onto the floorboards."
2"He still had that same earnest, slightly pinched expression he wore during mock trial championships, the look of a man who calculated the tax on his coffee befo…"
3"Julian stared, his eyes tracing the contours of her face as if searching for the law student who had shared his bench in Cardiff."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Silas said, not lifting his gaze from the brass"
1"Julian said, his voice dropping to a lower, more intimate register"
2"Julian looked, as if he could see through the plaster to the cramped flat where she spent her nights staring at the London skyline"
3"She turned, her blue eyes bright and unyielding under the dim lighting"
4"Rory said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
5"Rory said, her fingers finding the crescent scar on her wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Julian continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.441
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.034
80.4865%