Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25RG60FZ8TAW83BV72GFFC

Run Details

Duration:
12.0s
Cost:
$0.016956
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign bled through the rain-slicked window of The Raven’s Nest, casting a sickly jade glow over the polished mahogany of the bar. Behind the taps, Silas Blackwood polished a highball glass with slow, rhythmic rotations of his wrist, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light of the gantry. Rory Carter kept her eyes on her pint of stout. The heavy condensation slid down the glass, pooling on the cardboard coaster. London had a way of rubbing the edges off a person, grinding Cardiff’s soft rain into grit and engine fumes, but inside Silas’ bar, the air smelled of stale beer, cloves, and old paper. It felt safe. The heavy oak front door groaned open, letting in a gust of damp November wind and the rumble of Soho traffic. A man stepped inside, shaking water from the collar of a navy wool coat that looked too expensive for this side of town. He paused, scanning the dim room. Rory froze. The hand reaching for her glass stopped, fingers hovering just above the rim. The coat was new, the sharp line of the jaw was harder, and the boyish bounce in his stride had vanished, replaced by a rigid, deliberate posture. But she knew those shoulders. She knew the way his left collarbone sat slightly higher than the right, a souvenir from a stolen moped ride down the steep hills of Penarth when they were sixteen. Evan. He saw her. The recognition didn’t flash across his face with a smile; it settled like a shadow. He walked over, his leather-soled shoes tapping a sharp cadence against the floorboards. He didn’t look like the boy who had left bruised handprints on her wrists in that cramped flat off City Road. He looked like the sort of man who bought properties he never lived in. "Laila," he said. The old fake name slid out of him with slick familiarity. He sat on the stool next to her without asking, leaving one empty seat between them like a buffer zone. Rory wrapped her left hand around her glass, her thumb automatically tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "I go by Rory now. Have for three years." "Rory." He tested the weight of it, his voice deeper than she remembered, stripped of the Welsh lilt that used to soften his roughest edges. "Suits you. Harder." Silas limped over, his hazel eyes shifting from Evan to Rory. He didn't ask questions, but his hand stayed on the bar, inches from Evan’s elbow. "Lagavulin," Evan told the older man, not looking at him. "Neat." Silas poured the scotch, his movements deliberate. He set the glass down with a soft clink, gave Rory a long, assessing look, and retreated to the far end of the bar to wash glasses he had already cleaned twice. "You look different," Rory said, staring straight ahead at the rows of whiskey bottles. "The hair. The coat. You look like your father." "The firm took off." Evan picked up his glass, swirling the amber liquid. "We expanded into Bristol. Then Westminster. I live in Chelsea now." "Chelsea." She let out a dry, breathy laugh that didn't reach her eyes. "You used to swear you’d rather die than cross the bridge into England." "We say a lot of things when we're twenty and broke." He took a sip, winced slightly, then set the glass down exactly in the center of a clean coaster. "I heard you went to London. Eva mentioned it before she stopped taking my calls." "Eva has good instincts." The silence between them stretched, thick and heavy with the weight of things left in cardboard boxes in Cardiff. The rain lashed harder against the front window, the green neon flickering twice before settling back into its dull glow. "I looked for you," Evan said, his voice dropping an octave. "For months. You left the kettle on, Rory. The apartment was freezing when I got back from the yard." "You left me with a fractured rib, Evan." She didn't raise her voice. She didn't have to. The words fell between them like lead weights. "The kettle was the least of your worries." Evan’s jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath his clean-shaven cheek. He didn't look at her wrist, but his eyes flicked down to her hands, which were now clasped tightly in her lap. "I was angry," he whispered. "We were both drowning in that place. My dad was breathing down my neck, your father was calling every Sunday to ask why you weren't finished with your law modules. We were driving each other mad." "No." Rory turned her head, finally looking him dead in the eye. His eyes were the same dark brown, but the frantic, chaotic light that used to live in them had been replaced by a cold, calculating stillness. "You were driving. I was just passenger-side, waiting for the crash." "Look at me," he said, gesturing to his coat, his manicured nails, the gold watch peeking from beneath his cuff. "I changed, Rory. I went to therapy. I took over the business. I don't touch the bottle like I used to." "Good for you." She picked up her stout and took a long drag. The bitterness of the dark beer coated her tongue, familiar and grounding. "I mean it. I hope you don't do it to the next girl." "There isn't a next girl," he said quickly. Too quickly. The facade of the polished Westminster developer cracked, just for a second, revealing the desperate, erratic boy from the Welsh valleys. "I've been looking for you. I ask people. Every time I'm in South London, or Soho, I look at every dark-haired girl on a bicycle." "I do deliveries for a Chinese place in Fitzrovia," she said, wanting to strip away any romantic illusion he had built up in his head. "I carry cardboard boxes of sweet and sour chicken. I live in a flat upstairs that smells like stale lager and frying oil. I'm not some mystery waiting to be solved, Evan. I'm just living." Evan reached out, his hand twitching on the mahogany bar as if he wanted to cover hers, but he stopped himself. He pulled his hand back, sliding it into his coat pocket. "You could have finished the degree. Your dad still talks about it. I ran into him at the rugby back in autumn. He looks old, Rory." The mention of her father sent a sharp, cold spike through her chest. "He knows where I am. He chooses not to write." "Because you ran." "I saved myself." She stood up, her stool scraping against the floorboards. She didn't want to finish the stout. The green light from the window felt suffocating now, staining everything with a sick, artificial hue. "Rory, wait." Evan stood too, his height suddenly towering over her, a reminder of the physical shadow he used to cast over her life. "Please. Just five minutes. Let me buy you dinner. There’s a place around the corner, very quiet—" "I have a shift in twenty minutes," she lied, her voice flat. Silas stopped his polishing. He didn't move from his spot, but his broad shoulders squared, his gaze locking onto Evan with the cold, predatory focus of a man who had spent thirty years watching exits. Evan noticed. He looked at the older bartender, then back at Rory, the realization dawning on him that he was the stranger here. The city he thought he had conquered didn't belong to him. "You're still running," Evan said, his voice laced with a bitter, familiar poison that made her stomach turn. "No," Rory said, pulling her worn denim jacket tight around her chest. "I'm just walking away."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quickly [quickly]"
1"Evan stood too [too]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.976
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.098
72.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"tightly"
2"quickly"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"scanning"
2"tracing"
3"weight"
4"lilt"
5"silence"
6"fractured"
7"flicked"
8"chaotic"
9"calculating"
10"familiar"
11"facade"
12"reminder"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount911
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas4
Blackwood1
Carter1
Cardiff2
November1
Soho1
Penarth1
City1
Road1
Welsh2
Evan12
Rory9
Westminster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Soho"
2"Penarth"
3"City"
4"Road"
5"Welsh"
globalScore0.841
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the sort of man who bought pr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1290
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean32.25
std17.82
cv0.553
sampleLengths
055
159
250
315
462
51
666
73
831
928
1028
1126
1211
1339
1423
1524
1626
1745
184
1939
2030
2133
2232
2341
2449
2541
2638
2756
2860
2958
3023
313
323
3332
3441
3512
3635
3734
3818
3916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"The recognition didn’t flash across his face with a smile; it settled like a shadow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount394
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.025380710659898477
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0025380710659898475
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean14.33
std8.88
cv0.619
sampleLengths
027
128
210
312
434
53
621
723
86
92
1013
1127
125
1330
141
153
1615
1713
1821
1914
203
2111
2220
2319
249
2525
263
2711
2815
2910
301
317
3232
3314
349
3513
3611
3713
3813
3930
4015
414
4219
4320
4411
4519
4613
474
488
498
43.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32222222222222224
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences62
matches
0"It felt safe."
1"He paused, scanning the dim"
2"She knew the way his"
3"He saw her."
4"He walked over, his leather-soled"
5"He didn’t look like the"
6"He looked like the sort"
7"He sat on the stool"
8"He tested the weight of"
9"He didn't ask questions, but"
10"He set the glass down"
11"She let out a dry,"
12"He took a sip, winced"
13"She didn't raise her voice"
14"She didn't have to."
15"He didn't look at her"
16"His eyes were the same"
17"he said, gesturing to his"
18"She picked up her stout"
19"he said quickly"
ratio0.435
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences62
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Rory Carter kept her eyes"
2"The heavy condensation slid down"
3"London had a way of"
4"It felt safe."
5"The heavy oak front door"
6"A man stepped inside, shaking"
7"He paused, scanning the dim"
8"The hand reaching for her"
9"The coat was new, the"
10"She knew the way his"
11"He saw her."
12"The recognition didn’t flash across"
13"He walked over, his leather-soled"
14"He didn’t look like the"
15"He looked like the sort"
16"The old fake name slid"
17"He sat on the stool"
18"Rory wrapped her left hand"
19"He tested the weight of"
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He didn’t look like the boy who had left bruised handprints on her wrists in that cramped flat off City Road."
1"His eyes were the same dark brown, but the frantic, chaotic light that used to live in them had been replaced by a cold, calculating stillness."
2"Evan reached out, his hand twitching on the mahogany bar as if he wanted to cover hers, but he stopped himself."
3"He didn't move from his spot, but his broad shoulders squared, his gaze locking onto Evan with the cold, predatory focus of a man who had spent thirty years wat…"
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Evan told, not looking at him"
1"Evan said, his voice dropping an octave"
2"she lied, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.537
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.098
79.0200%