Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25RG697JSSGVCYBTEX7F1V

Run Details

Duration:
11.6s
Cost:
$0.017073
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain-slicked asphalt reflected the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, casting a sickly emerald glow across the floorboards of the Soho tavern. Rory sat at the far corner of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the condensation on her pint glass. She kept her collar popped, tucking her straight black hair beneath the dark fabric of her coat to ward off the chill. Down the bar, Silas polished a highball glass with slow, rhythmic efficiency, his silver signet ring flashing under the low-hanging pendant lights. The bell above the heavy oak door chimed, admitting a draft of wind and a figure drenched in the London storm. Rory did not look up immediately. She had learned to read arrivals through Silas’ reactions. The old operative’s hands paused on the glass. He didn't tense, but his shoulders squared, hazel eyes narrowing as he tracked the newcomer’s progress through the dim, map-lined room. A shadow fell over the stool beside Rory. "Rory?" The voice triggered an immediate, visceral reaction, a sudden tightening in her chest. She turned her head. Evan stood there. He dripped water onto the sawdust floor, his expensive wool coat darkened by the downpour. He looked older, the boyish softness of his jawline hardened into something sharper, though his eyes still held that familiar, restless intensity. He carried himself with a polished assurance that hadn't existed back in Cardiff, a veneer of success that screamed of high-end offices and hollow victories. Rory mirrored his gaze, her blue eyes yielding nothing. She didn't offer a smile. "Evan." "I thought it was you." Evan slid onto the leather-backed stool, gesturing to Silas for a drink without looking at him. "The hair is different. And you've got this... aura now. Like you’re waiting for a blow." Silas set down a tumbler of Scotch with a thud that echoed off the mahogany. He lingered for a moment, his gaze shifting between Rory’s impassive face and Evan’s oblivious grin, before retreating to the till, his left leg dragging slightly. Rory rested her left wrist on the bar, the small crescent-shaped scar peeking out from beneath her sleeve. "Just living, Evan. People change." "Clearly." Evan reached for his glass, taking a long pull. "London suits you. Or maybe it doesn't. You look thin. Still running deliveries for that cheap takeaway?" "It pays the rent. I don't need much." "You used to have ambitions, Rory. Your father had that barrister’s spot practically carved out for you in Cardiff. We had plans." He leaned in closer, bringing with him the scent of expensive rain-dampened cologne and old, suffocating expectations. "Then you just vanished. No note. No forwarding address. Just left me standing in that flat with half your books gone." Rory’s grip tightened around her pint. The green neon light caught the rim of her glass, fracturing into sharp lines across her knuckles. "I took what was mine." "You took my peace of mind," Evan countered, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "Do you have any idea what it’s like to have the person you love just erase themselves from your life? I spent months looking for you. I asked Eva. I asked your mother." "My mother doesn't know where I am. And Eva knows better than to tell you." Rory turned her head, looking him dead in the eye. "And don't talk about love. Not after the apartment in Roath. Not after the way you locked the doors." Evan flinched, a fleeting crack appearing in his manicured facade before he patched it over with a dismissive wave. "We were young. We grew hot-headed. It was a stressful time, Rory. I was trying to build a future for us." "You were building a cage." "And what is this?" Evan gestured around the dim tavern, at the yellowed maps of continents long gone, the silent patrons clutching their glasses in the corners, the quiet hum of a Soho night. "A dive bar in the middle of nowhere. You’re twenty-five, Rory. You should be in a courtroom, not hiding behind a counter or carrying cardboard boxes through the mud. You threw away everything because you couldn't handle a little pressure." Silas walked past, his boots squeaking on the floorboards as he wiped the taps, his presence a silent, grounding anchor behind the bar. Rory took a slow sip of her drink. The liquid burned, warm and familiar. "I handle pressure just fine now, Evan. I just choose which burdens are worth carrying." "Is that what you call this? Survival?" Evan laughed, a dry, bitter sound. "You look like a ghost." "A ghost can't be locked in a room." The words hung between them, heavy and damp like the atmosphere of the bar. Evan stared into his Scotch, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass, mimicking her earlier movement. The silence stretched, filled only by the muffled hiss of traffic on the wet street outside and the occasional clink of Silas’ glassware. "I got married last spring," Evan said quietly. He didn't look at her. "Her name is Clara. She’s an associate at the firm. My father made partner, so I took over his old caseload." "Congratulations." Rory’s voice lacked any trace of sarcasm. It was flat, empty of the anger that used to consume her when she thought of him. "She doesn't challenge me the way you did," Evan continued, his eyes still fixed on the amber liquid. "She doesn't look at me like she knows exactly what I’m going to say before I say it. It’s... comfortable. But it’s quiet. So incredibly quiet." "Quiet is good. You should try to appreciate it." "I hate it." Evan turned his head, his gaze searching her face, looking for the girl who used to draft mock briefs in the Cardiff library, the girl who used to laugh until her chest ached in the university gardens. "I see you sitting here, and I feel like I'm looking at a stranger who stole my best friend's face. Where did she go, Rory? Where is the girl who wanted to change the world?" Rory looked down at her wrist, at the pale crescent scar. She had gotten it at eight years old, falling off a swing set, believing she could fly if she just jumped high enough. "She realized the world didn't want to be changed," Rory said, her voice barely louder than the hum of the neon sign. "And she decided saving herself was enough." Evan reached out, his hand hovering over hers on the bar, a tentative, desperate gesture. For a second, his fingers twitched as if to touch her sleeve, to bridge the immense, cold chasm of the last three years. Rory pulled her arm back, adjusting her coat, placing her hands firmly in her pockets. Evan’s hand dropped back to the mahogany. He swallowed hard, the corners of his mouth twitching into a sad, defeated line. "You really don't want me here, do you?" "I'm glad you're doing well with the firm, Evan. Truly." Rory stood up, pulling her collar tight around her throat. "But I have a shift starting soon. And you should get back to Clara." Evan stared at his half-empty glass. "I suppose I should." Rory turned away from the bar, her boots clicking against the floorboards as she walked toward the door. Behind the counter, Silas gave her a brief, approving nod, his hand resting near the hidden bookshelf at the back of the room. As she pushed open the heavy oak door, the cool London rain swept inward, kissing her face. She stepped out into the night, the green neon light fading from her shoulders as she disappeared into the crowd, leaving the ghosts of Cardiff behind in the dim warmth of the tavern.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:17.135Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:17 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Evan gestured around [around]"
1"Evan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.811
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.108
88.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count1
8
word"facade"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"comfortable"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"chill"
2"rhythmic"
3"familiar"
4"intensity"
5"echoed"
6"whisper"
7"fleeting"
8"facade"
9"silence"
10"comfortable"
11"firmly"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount847
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Silas5
London2
Rory15
Cardiff3
Scotch2
Evan15
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.615
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.1
std20.24
cv0.611
sampleLengths
086
121
244
38
41
517
665
715
837
941
1023
1127
128
1360
1428
1548
1644
1740
185
1974
2023
2129
2218
238
2454
2534
2625
2744
289
2975
3034
3129
3238
3315
3429
3534
3610
3741
3850
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount494
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.030364372469635626
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012145748987854251
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean15.94
std9.23
cv0.579
sampleLengths
023
119
222
322
421
56
69
78
821
98
101
1113
124
133
1415
1522
1625
179
185
191
2021
2116
2215
2326
2418
255
2610
2717
288
2939
3021
316
3217
335
3415
3533
3625
3719
3819
3921
405
4134
4240
4323
448
456
4615
4713
485
498
51.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.345679012345679
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences57
matches
0"She kept her collar popped,"
1"She had learned to read"
2"He didn't tense, but his"
3"She turned her head."
4"He dripped water onto the"
5"He looked older, the boyish"
6"He carried himself with a"
7"She didn't offer a smile."
8"He lingered for a moment,"
9"He leaned in closer, bringing"
10"He didn't look at her."
11"It was flat, empty of"
12"She had gotten it at"
13"He swallowed hard, the corners"
14"She stepped out into the"
ratio0.263
3.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences57
matches
0"Rory sat at the far"
1"She kept her collar popped,"
2"The bell above the heavy"
3"Rory did not look up"
4"She had learned to read"
5"The old operative’s hands paused"
6"He didn't tense, but his"
7"A shadow fell over the"
8"The voice triggered an immediate,"
9"She turned her head."
10"Evan stood there."
11"He dripped water onto the"
12"He looked older, the boyish"
13"He carried himself with a"
14"Rory mirrored his gaze, her"
15"She didn't offer a smile."
16"Evan slid onto the leather-backed"
17"Silas set down a tumbler"
18"He lingered for a moment,"
19"Rory rested her left wrist"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He carried himself with a polished assurance that hadn't existed back in Cardiff, a veneer of success that screamed of high-end offices and hollow victories."
1"He lingered for a moment, his gaze shifting between Rory’s impassive face and Evan’s oblivious grin, before retreating to the till, his left leg dragging slight…"
2"Evan stared into his Scotch, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass, mimicking her earlier movement."
3"Rory pulled her arm back, adjusting her coat, placing her hands firmly in her pockets."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Evan countered, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
1"Evan continued, his eyes still fixed on the amber liquid"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Evan laughed (laugh)"
1"Evan continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.216
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.108
80.8698%