Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25RV0ATYYBNX47376PWHX5

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.018753
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt turned with a heavy, metallic clank. Aurora pulled the door open, her shoulder already braced to receive a lukewarm takeout order or a stray envelope for the flat upstairs. Instead, the hallway light caught the gleam of slicked-back platinum blond hair. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold of the Brick Lane flat. The scent of rain and expensive French cologne cut through the lingering aroma of turmeric and cardamom rising from the curry house below. He wore a tailored charcoal suit, pristine despite the London drizzle, and his fingers curled around the ivory handle of his cane. "You changed the locks, Rory." His voice, a low drag of velvet and gravel, bypassed her ears and settled straight under her ribs. One amber eye and one black eye swept over her face, cataloging the flour smudge on her cheek, the oversized knitted jumper, and the way her breath hitched. "Three locks, actually." Aurora blocked the doorway, her hand gripping the brass knob until her knuckles turned white. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed with a phantom pulse. "The city got dangerous. Or maybe I just wanted to keep out the garbage." Lucien tilted his head. A faint, razor-thin smile touched his lips, though it failed to reach his mismatched eyes. "And here I thought we parted on terms of mutual, if silent, understanding." "We didn't part, Lucien. You walked out of a burning warehouse in Southwark and forgot to check if I was still breathing." "I knew you were breathing." He took a single step forward, the tip of his cane tapping against the wooden floorboards of the entryway. He didn't push past her, but his height, a commanding five-foot-eleven, crowded her into the narrow hallway. "Your heart rate was ninety-four beats per minute. I could hear it from the curb." "Charming." Aurora didn't budge. "What do you want? I'm in the middle of... not dealing with you." From the living room, Ptolemy the tabby cat let out a loud, demanding meow, as if sensing the sudden spike of adrenaline in the flat. "I need a place to sit, some of that dreadful instant coffee you keep in the pantry, and five minutes of your quick mind," Lucien said. He lifted his left arm slightly. The charcoal fabric of his sleeve was soaked through, sticking to his forearm in a way that suggested something sticky and dark beneath the rain. Aurora’s eyes darted to the sleeve. Her anger flared, hot and familiar, spark-bright against the cold wall she had spent the last three months building. "You're bleeding." "The streets are lively tonight." "Idiot." She stepped back, leaving the door open. "Wipe your boots. If you get blood on Eva's rugs, she'll use your skull as a planter." Lucien slipped inside, closing the door behind him and turning all three deadbolts with the practiced ease of a man who memorised security patterns for a living. He moved with a slight favor to his left side, though he kept his spine perfectly straight, maintaining the illusion of absolute control. The flat on Brick Lane was a labyrinth of paper. Books climbed the walls in precarious towers; ancient scrolls shared counter space with half-empty mugs of tea and scattered printouts. Lucien navigated the chaos like a ghost through a graveyard, eventually sinking onto the worn velvet sofa. He laid his ivory-handled cane across his knees. Aurora marched into the kitchen alcove. She yanked the kettle under the tap, the roar of rushing water filling the silence between them. Her hands shook, just a little, and she hated herself for it. Three months of silence. Three months of convincing herself that the half-demon fixer was just another bad habit she had successfully kicked, like her Cardiff days or the shadow of Evan. "You didn't write," she said over the rising hum of the kettle. She didn't look at him, focusing instead on scooping cheap coffee granules into two mismatched mugs. "We agreed that silence was the safest currency," Lucien replied from the dark of the living room. "You agreed. I was too busy coughing up smoke to argue." She walked back in, carrying the mugs. She set his down on a stack of medieval history journals near his knee, then stood over him, her arms crossed. "Why are you here, Lucien? Truly. You have five safe houses in Mayfair and a clinic on payroll in Soho. You don't need my instant coffee, and you certainly don't need my sympathy." Lucien looked up. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light of the flat, reflecting the streetlamps from the window. "The Mayfair properties are compromised. The Soho doctor is currently stuffed inside a freezer in his own basement." He reached up, his leather-gloved fingers slowly working the buttons of his suit jacket. "And I wanted to see if you still looked at me with that particular brand of disgust." "It's not disgust," Aurora whispered, the truth slipping out before her defenses could catch it. He paused, his hand hovering over his waistcoat. "No?" "It's exhaustion." She sat down on the edge of the coffee table opposite him, her knees almost touching his. The proximity was a physical weight. She could smell the iron of his blood now, mixing with the rain. "Show me." Lucien peeled back the charcoal jacket, then the vest. Beneath, a white linen shirt was ruined, stained a deep, blooming crimson along his ribs. A jagged tear in the fabric revealed three deep, parallel lacerations. The skin around the wounds was blackened, veins spider-webbing outward in bruised purple lines. "Avaros poison," Aurora diagnosed, her voice dropping. Her pre-law degree hadn't taught her this, but three years in London's shadow cabinet had. "Your father's kin?" "They lack creativity," Lucien muttered, his breathing shallower now that he had stopped pretending to be unbroken. "A simple ambush. They wanted the ledger." "Did they get it?" "I am insulted you even ask." He reached into his inner pocket and produced a thin, leather-bound notebook, completely dry, and tossed it onto the pile of scrolls. "But they did manage to clip me. The venom slows my blood. It makes... transition difficult." Aurora leaned forward, her straight black hair falling over her shoulders, shielding her face. She reached out, her fingers hovering just above the blackened skin of his ribs. She could feel the unnatural heat radiating from the wound, the demonic energy fighting his human half. "You need to draw it out," she said. "I need a distraction," Lucien corrected. His hand reached out, catching her left wrist. His touch was burning hot, his leather glove rough against her skin. He didn't pull her closer, but he didn't let go either. His thumb brushed over the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "You always were my best distraction, Rory." "Don't do that," she said, though she didn't pull away. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm. "Don't act like we're some tragic romance. You left." "I protected you." "By making me think you were dead?" Her blue eyes snapped up, locking onto his mismatched pair. The hurt, raw and unedited, spilled over. "I spent a week checking the morgues, Lucien. I called every contact in the low-market. I thought they had dragged you back to the pit. And then I see you two weeks later, buying oysters in Chelsea with some high-court changeling." Lucien’s grip on her wrist tightened, just enough to register the heat of his palm through the leather. "She had the keys to the safehouse. It was business." "Everything is business with you." "Because pleasure gets people killed in our line of work," he hissed, a rare slip of his composure. A low, demonic rasp undertoned his French accent, his black eye shifting entirely dark, the pupil swallowing the iris. "If they knew you were my weakness, they wouldn't have aimed for my ribs. They would have come here. To this flat. To you." The silence returned, but it was no longer cold. It was thick, charged with the sudden, heavy admission hanging between them. Aurora looked down at his hand on her wrist, then up at his mouth, tight with pain and something older, deeper. "You're a fool," she whispered. "Undoubtedly." She leaned in, her cool hands coming up to cup his face, her fingers tracing the sharp line of his jaw. Lucien let out a ragged breath, leaning into her touch as if he had been starving for it in the dark. She leaned down, her lips brushing against his, soft at first, a testing of boundaries, before the heat of him pulled her under.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:28.207Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.089
82.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"truly"
3"slowly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"velvet"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"practiced ease"
6"navigated"
7"silence"
8"weight"
9"could feel"
10"charged"
11"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1440
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1028
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
French2
London2
Ptolemy1
Lucien12
Cardiff1
Evan1
Aurora9
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.916
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing the sudden spike of adrenaline in the flat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1440
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean32.73
std21.19
cv0.648
sampleLengths
032
112
256
35
446
544
632
722
856
917
1025
1157
1227
135
1425
1550
1655
1766
1828
1917
2072
2171
2215
239
2440
2549
2625
2724
284
2944
3045
318
3254
3328
343
3565
3628
375
3861
3921
4021
415
421
4365
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"was ruined"
1"was blackened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was burning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences102
ratio0.01
matches
0"Books climbed the walls in precarious towers; ancient scrolls shared counter space with half-empty mugs of tea and scattered printouts."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1041
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"settled straight under her"
1"faint, razor-thin smile"
2"thin, leather-bound notebook,"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.026897214217098942
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0067243035542747355
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean14.12
std7.88
cv0.558
sampleLengths
09
123
212
311
423
522
65
718
828
918
1012
1114
124
1315
1413
1522
1624
1717
1815
194
2013
2125
2226
236
2425
256
2619
272
285
298
3017
3127
3223
3310
3420
3517
368
376
3817
3912
404
4127
4212
4316
4417
4518
4621
4733
483
4919
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3627450980392157
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners37
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, the hallway light caught"
ratio0.014
33.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences73
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal"
1"His voice, a low drag"
2"He took a single step"
3"He didn't push past her,"
4"He lifted his left arm"
5"Her anger flared, hot and"
6"She stepped back, leaving the"
7"He moved with a slight"
8"He laid his ivory-handled cane"
9"She yanked the kettle under"
10"Her hands shook, just a"
11"she said over the rising"
12"She didn't look at him,"
13"She walked back in, carrying"
14"She set his down on"
15"He reached up, his leather-gloved"
16"He paused, his hand hovering"
17"She sat down on the"
18"She could smell the iron"
19"Her pre-law degree hadn't taught"
ratio0.466
1.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences73
matches
0"The third deadbolt turned with"
1"Aurora pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"The scent of rain and"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"His voice, a low drag"
6"Aurora blocked the doorway, her"
7"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
8"Lucien tilted his head."
9"A faint, razor-thin smile touched"
10"He took a single step"
11"He didn't push past her,"
12"Aurora didn't budge"
13"He lifted his left arm"
14"The charcoal fabric of his"
15"Aurora’s eyes darted to the"
16"Her anger flared, hot and"
17"She stepped back, leaving the"
18"Lucien slipped inside, closing the"
19"He moved with a slight"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"From the living room, Ptolemy the tabby cat let out a loud, demanding meow, as if sensing the sudden spike of adrenaline in the flat."
1"Lucien slipped inside, closing the door behind him and turning all three deadbolts with the practiced ease of a man who memorised security patterns for a living…"
2"Aurora leaned forward, her straight black hair falling over her shoulders, shielding her face."
3"She leaned in, her cool hands coming up to cup his face, her fingers tracing the sharp line of his jaw."
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora whispered, the truth slipping out before her defenses could catch it"
1"She sat down, her knees almost touching his"
2"Aurora diagnosed, her voice dropping"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"Lucien muttered (mutter)"
2"Lucien corrected (correct)"
3"blue eyes snapped up (snap up)"
4"he hissed (hiss)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.489
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.267
79.1459%