Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25RW28E2NRV43F088NNS0F

Run Details

Duration:
10.5s
Cost:
$0.015378
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts scraped back in a descending sequence of metallic clicks. Aurora Carter swung the door open, her hand still resting on the brass knob. The scent of rain and expensive vetiver cologne cut through the lingering aroma of turmeric and cardamom rising from the curry house below. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing of the Brick Lane flat. The amber landing light caught the sharp angles of his face, casting one side in shadow and highlighting the stark difference in his eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a fathomless, ink-pool black. He wore a damp charcoal suit that hugged his shoulders, his platinum hair slicked back. His fingers gripped the ivory handle of his cane. "You did not answer my calls, Rory." "I blocked your number four months ago, Lucien." Rory blocked the doorway, her shoulder pressing against the jamb. "I figured the silence spoke for itself." Lucien looked past her into the cluttered flat. "The warding on your threshold is slipping. I could feel the ley lines fraying from the street. Let me in before someone else notices." "No one else is looking for me." "You underestimate your own value. Or perhaps you simply underestimate my persistence." Lucien stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. Rory braced her hand against the opposite frame, her crescent-shaped wrist scar stark against her pale skin. He stopped mere inches from her palm. The heat radiating off him defied the damp London chill. She could see the faint violet hue beneath his pupils, a telltale sign of his Avarosian blood pumping faster. "This isn't your turf," Rory said, her voice dropping to a gravelly whisper. "You don't get to fix things here." "I am not here to fix the world, *ma petite*. I am here because you left a suitcase at my townhouse and a gaping hole in my information network." Lucien tilted his head, his gaze dropping to her mouth before snapping back to her bright blue eyes. "And because you owe me an explanation that doesn't involve a midnight vanishing act." A low purr rumbled from the shadows behind Rory. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rubbed his striped flanks against Lucien’s leather shoes. "Traitor," Rory muttered to the cat. She stepped aside, her movement sharp, annoyed. "Ten minutes. Then you take your cane and your secrets back to Mayfair." Lucien crossed the threshold with a silent, feline grace that belied his height. He scanned the cramped room, taking in the towers of books, the yellowing scrolls spilling off the coffee table, and the half-empty mug of tea resting on a stack of magical theory texts. He placed his cane against the bookshelf, next to a jar of dried lavender. "Delightfully chaotic," Lucien said, his French accent tracing the edges of the vowels. He picked up a leather-bound journal, flipping through pages dense with Rory's tight, precise handwriting. "Still trying to decode the Leyden manuscript? I told you, the cipher is early Prussian, not Latin." Rory snatched the book from his gloved hands and slammed it onto the table. "I don't need your tutoring. And I certainly don't need your pity wrapped in intellectual superiority." "Is that what you think that was?" Lucien turned, his eyes locking onto hers. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light of the flat. "Pity?" "You kept me on a leash, Lucien. A very comfortable, gold-plated leash, but a leash nonetheless. 'Do this translation, Rory. Find this contact, Rory. Keep quiet in the corner while I deal with the demons who want to skin you alive.'" She stepped into his space, the height difference forcing her to look up. "I left because I was tired of being your pet project." Lucien’s jaw tightened. A faint hiss of steam seemed to escape his breath, a physical manifestation of his demonic heritage rising to the surface. He closed the distance between them, his chest almost brushing hers. "You were never a project." His voice dropped an octave, rich and dangerously soft. "If I wanted a project, I would have hired an apprentice from the high coven. I wanted *you*. Your mind. Your ridiculous, stubborn bravery. Your mouth." Rory’s breath hitched. The memory of their last night in Marseille rushed back—the balcony overlooking the Mediterranean, the taste of red wine and ozone on his lips, and the sudden, terrifying realization that she was falling for a man who traded in souls and secrets. "You lied to me about the syndicate," she whispered, her resolve wavering under his intense gaze. "You knew they were tracking my father." "I protected you from the knowledge because you would have run straight into their custody to save him." Lucien reached out, his thumb brushing the side of her jaw. His leather glove was cool, but the skin beneath it burned. "I made a calculated choice to keep you safe. I would make it again." "That's the difference between us." Rory jerked her head back, breaking the contact, though her skin tingled where he had touched her. "You calculate. I feel." "Then feel this." Lucien grabbed her hand, pulling her back toward him. He didn't use force, but the sheer gravity of his presence pulled her in. His hand slid to the nape of her neck, his fingers tangling in her straight, shoulder-length black hair. Rory didn't pull away this time. The anger that had fueled her for four months flared into something hotter, more volatile. She gripped the lapels of his tailored suit, pulling him down to meet her. Their lips met with a desperate, bruising force. It wasn't a gentle reconciliation; it was a battle of wills. Lucien tasted of rain and sweet tobacco, his tongue sliding against hers with a familiar, demanding hunger. Rory leaned into him, her hands sliding up his chest to wrap around his neck, anchoring herself. The world narrowed to the heat of his body and the rhythmic thud of his heart against her ribs. He groaned, a low, vibration in his throat, and lifted her slightly, pressing her back against the edge of the heavy oak desk. Books slid to the floor, landing with dull thuds on the carpet, but neither of them cared. He kissed his way down her jaw, his breath hot against her neck, biting gently at the column of her throat. Rory gasped, her fingers digging into his shoulders. "You are infuriating," Lucien murmured against her skin. "You run to the grimiest corner of London and think I won't find you." "I wanted to see if you would try," she confessed, her voice shaking as she held him close. Lucien pulled back just enough to look at her, his heterochromatic eyes burning with a mixture of triumph and raw affection. "I would dismantle this entire city brick by brick to find you, Rory. You know this." "That's what scares me." Rory smoothed down his lapels, her hands trembling slightly. "You don't know how to stop." "Then teach me," Lucien said, his forehead resting against hers. "But do not make me search for you again."
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:29.293Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:29 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"stark"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"pumping"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"calculated"
count1
13
word"calculate"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"silence"
2"could feel"
3"chill"
4"pumping"
5"whisper"
6"scanned"
7"chaotic"
8"tracing"
9"comfortable"
10"resolve"
11"wavering"
12"calculated"
13"calculate"
14"familiar"
15"rhythmic"
16"affection"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1176
ratio0.003
matches
0"ma petite"
1"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount796
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien15
Rory13
London1
Avarosian1
French1
Marseille1
Mediterranean1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.558
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1176
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean33.6
std17.34
cv0.516
sampleLengths
011
137
270
37
425
532
67
720
853
920
1061
1121
1226
1360
1445
1530
1628
1765
1835
1940
2045
2123
2254
2326
243
2541
2635
2753
2859
2929
3022
3118
3237
3319
3419
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was falling"
34.36% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences79
ratio0.038
matches
0"The amber landing light caught the sharp angles of his face, casting one side in shadow and highlighting the stark difference in his eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a fathomless, ink-pool black."
1"The memory of their last night in Marseille rushed back—the balcony overlooking the Mediterranean, the taste of red wine and ozone on his lips, and the sudden, terrifying realization that she was falling for a man who traded in souls and secrets."
2"It wasn't a gentle reconciliation; it was a battle of wills."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount803
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0224159402241594
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0062266500622665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.89
std9.22
cv0.619
sampleLengths
011
114
223
312
434
515
69
77
818
97
108
1124
127
1320
1417
157
1610
1719
1813
197
2047
2114
229
2312
246
257
2613
2713
2833
2914
3013
3115
3217
3314
3416
3514
3613
371
3854
3911
403
4121
4211
4314
4426
453
4642
4716
487
4929
54.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.35443037974683544
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences59
matches
0"He wore a damp charcoal"
1"His fingers gripped the ivory"
2"He stopped mere inches from"
3"She could see the faint"
4"She stepped aside, her movement"
5"He scanned the cramped room,"
6"He placed his cane against"
7"He picked up a leather-bound"
8"She stepped into his space,"
9"He closed the distance between"
10"His voice dropped an octave,"
11"she whispered, her resolve wavering"
12"His leather glove was cool,"
13"He didn't use force, but"
14"His hand slid to the"
15"She gripped the lapels of"
16"Their lips met with a"
17"It wasn't a gentle reconciliation;"
18"He groaned, a low, vibration"
19"He kissed his way down"
ratio0.356
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences59
matches
0"Aurora Carter swung the door"
1"The scent of rain and"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"The amber landing light caught"
4"He wore a damp charcoal"
5"His fingers gripped the ivory"
6"Rory blocked the doorway, her"
7"Lucien looked past her into"
8"Lucien stepped forward, not waiting"
9"Rory braced her hand against"
10"He stopped mere inches from"
11"The heat radiating off him"
12"She could see the faint"
13"Rory said, her voice dropping"
14"Lucien tilted his head, his"
15"A low purr rumbled from"
16"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rubbed"
17"Rory muttered to the cat"
18"She stepped aside, her movement"
19"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The amber landing light caught the sharp angles of his face, casting one side in shadow and highlighting the stark difference in his eyes—one a warm, predatory …"
1"He wore a damp charcoal suit that hugged his shoulders, his platinum hair slicked back."
2"Lucien crossed the threshold with a silent, feline grace that belied his height."
3"The memory of their last night in Marseille rushed back—the balcony overlooking the Mediterranean, the taste of red wine and ozone on his lips, and the sudden, …"
4"Rory leaned into him, her hands sliding up his chest to wrap around his neck, anchoring herself."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Rory blocked, her shoulder pressing against the jamb"
1"Lucien stepped, not waiting for an invitation"
2"Rory said, her voice dropping to a gravelly whisper"
3"Lucien said, his French accent tracing the edges of the vowels"
4"Lucien turned, his eyes locking onto hers"
5"She stepped, the height difference forcing her to look up"
6"she whispered, her resolve wavering under his intense gaze"
7"Lucien reached out, his thumb brushing the side of her jaw"
8"she confessed, her voice shaking as she held him close"
9"Rory smoothed, her hands trembling slightly"
10"Lucien said, his forehead resting against hers"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
3"she confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.222
73.0988%