| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1178 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "pumping" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "chaotic" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "comfortable" | | 10 | "resolve" | | 11 | "wavering" | | 12 | "calculated" | | 13 | "calculate" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "affection" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1176 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 796 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | Rory | 13 | | London | 1 | | Avarosian | 1 | | French | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Mediterranean | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 0.558 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 33.6 | | std | 17.34 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | |
| 34.36% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber landing light caught the sharp angles of his face, casting one side in shadow and highlighting the stark difference in his eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a fathomless, ink-pool black." | | 1 | "The memory of their last night in Marseille rushed back—the balcony overlooking the Mediterranean, the taste of red wine and ozone on his lips, and the sudden, terrifying realization that she was falling for a man who traded in souls and secrets." | | 2 | "It wasn't a gentle reconciliation; it was a battle of wills." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 803 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.0224159402241594 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0062266500622665 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 14.89 | | std | 9.22 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 54.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.35443037974683544 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "He wore a damp charcoal" | | 1 | "His fingers gripped the ivory" | | 2 | "He stopped mere inches from" | | 3 | "She could see the faint" | | 4 | "She stepped aside, her movement" | | 5 | "He scanned the cramped room," | | 6 | "He placed his cane against" | | 7 | "He picked up a leather-bound" | | 8 | "She stepped into his space," | | 9 | "He closed the distance between" | | 10 | "His voice dropped an octave," | | 11 | "she whispered, her resolve wavering" | | 12 | "His leather glove was cool," | | 13 | "He didn't use force, but" | | 14 | "His hand slid to the" | | 15 | "She gripped the lapels of" | | 16 | "Their lips met with a" | | 17 | "It wasn't a gentle reconciliation;" | | 18 | "He groaned, a low, vibration" | | 19 | "He kissed his way down" |
| | ratio | 0.356 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter swung the door" | | 1 | "The scent of rain and" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 3 | "The amber landing light caught" | | 4 | "He wore a damp charcoal" | | 5 | "His fingers gripped the ivory" | | 6 | "Rory blocked the doorway, her" | | 7 | "Lucien looked past her into" | | 8 | "Lucien stepped forward, not waiting" | | 9 | "Rory braced her hand against" | | 10 | "He stopped mere inches from" | | 11 | "The heat radiating off him" | | 12 | "She could see the faint" | | 13 | "Rory said, her voice dropping" | | 14 | "Lucien tilted his head, his" | | 15 | "A low purr rumbled from" | | 16 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, rubbed" | | 17 | "Rory muttered to the cat" | | 18 | "She stepped aside, her movement" | | 19 | "Lucien crossed the threshold with" |
| | ratio | 0.983 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber landing light caught the sharp angles of his face, casting one side in shadow and highlighting the stark difference in his eyes—one a warm, predatory …" | | 1 | "He wore a damp charcoal suit that hugged his shoulders, his platinum hair slicked back." | | 2 | "Lucien crossed the threshold with a silent, feline grace that belied his height." | | 3 | "The memory of their last night in Marseille rushed back—the balcony overlooking the Mediterranean, the taste of red wine and ozone on his lips, and the sudden, …" | | 4 | "Rory leaned into him, her hands sliding up his chest to wrap around his neck, anchoring herself." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory blocked, her shoulder pressing against the jamb" | | 1 | "Lucien stepped, not waiting for an invitation" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice dropping to a gravelly whisper" | | 3 | "Lucien said, his French accent tracing the edges of the vowels" | | 4 | "Lucien turned, his eyes locking onto hers" | | 5 | "She stepped, the height difference forcing her to look up" | | 6 | "she whispered, her resolve wavering under his intense gaze" | | 7 | "Lucien reached out, his thumb brushing the side of her jaw" | | 8 | "she confessed, her voice shaking as she held him close" | | 9 | "Rory smoothed, her hands trembling slightly" | | 10 | "Lucien said, his forehead resting against hers" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.194 | | leniency | 0.389 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |