Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25RZ3BMRA6J4BD6NV461G1

Run Details

Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.016512
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts turned with three distinct, heavy clicks. Rory yanked the door of the Brick Lane flat open, a sharp protest hovering on her tongue for whoever dared knock at midnight. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, the yellowed light casting long shadows across his tailored charcoal suit. Rain dripped from the brim of his hat, pooling around the tip of his ivory-handled cane. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black—locked onto hers. "You changed the locks, *chérie*." Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning white. Her crescent-shaped wrist scar stung, a phantom itch triggered by the sudden spike in her pulse. "Three of them. Specifically to keep out silver-tongued fixtures of the underworld. What are you doing here, Lucien?" Lucien stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. He bypassed her with a scent of cedarwood, rain, and the faint, metallic tang of ozone that always clung to him. He shook his wet hat, placing it precisely on the cluttered coat rack beside Eva’s spare keys. "A greeting would suffice. Or perhaps some tea. It is pouring." "You don't get tea." Rory slammed the door, throwing all three deadbolts back into place with unnecessary force. She turned around, crossing her arms over her chest. "You don't get to disappear for three months after... after everything, and then stroll into my sanctuary demanding refreshments." Lucien surveyed the cramped living room. Every surface groaned under the weight of Eva’s research scrolls, leather-bound books, and loose sheets of parchment. On a stack of ancient grimoires, Ptolemy the tabby cat opened one green eye, let out a disdainful hiss at the newcomer, and went back to sleep. "The feline still hates me," Lucien murmured, ran a gloved finger over the spine of a dusty tome, then turned to face her. The slicked-back platinum hair caught the glow of the desk lamp, making him look more ethereal, and more dangerous, than any human had a right to. "And you still wear your anger like armor." "It keeps me safe. Especially from people who use me as bait in a turf war with low-level ghouls." A shadow crossed Lucien's face, his amber eye darkening to match the black one. He took two slow steps toward her, the ivory cane clicking softly against the floorboards. "You know that was never the intention, Aurora. The situation in Southwark degenerated faster than my sources predicted. I pulled you out." "After I had to kick my way through three rotting corpses!" Rory’s voice cracked, the raw emotion of that night bleeding into the quiet flat. She took a step back, her spine hitting the solid wood of the front door. "You left me in the dark. Literally and figuratively. You always do. You whisper just enough secrets to keep me hooked, and then you retreat back into your shadow play." Lucien stopped a mere foot away. The air between them grew hot, charged with the crackle of his demonic lineage. He leaned heavily on his cane, tilting his head. "I went back to Marseille." The confession hung in the cramped space, heavy and unexpected. Rory swallowed hard, her gaze dropping to his lips before snapping back to his mismatched eyes. "Why?" "My father's bloodline does not let go easily," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly register that vibrated in her chest. "They wanted to know who helped me dismantle the Avaros cell in London. They wanted a name. Your name." Rory felt the cold draft from the floorboards seep through her socks. "Did you give it to them?" Lucien leaned closer, the scent of him wrapping around her like a physical touch. He reached out, his leather-gloved fingers hovering just centimeters from her cheek, never quite making contact. "I spent twelve weeks ensuring they forgot you ever existed. I bled for it, Aurora. Do not lecture me on abandonment when every silence I kept was a shield for your beating heart." Her breath hitched. The anger that had sustained her for ninety days began to liquefy, morphing into a painful, tight ache in her throat. She looked at his impeccable suit, noticing now the subtle stiffness in his left shoulder, the slight strain in his posture. He had been fighting. For her. "You could have sent a message," she whispered, her voice losing its sharp edges. "A sign. Anything." "And risk a demon-broker intercepting it? You are clever, *chérie*, but exceptionally naive about the length of my family's reach." Lucien's hand finally dropped, resting on his cane once more. "I could not risk you." "I hate that you make sense," Rory muttered, sliding her back down the door until she was sitting on her heels. She buried her face in her hands, her straight black hair falling forward to veil her face. "I hate that I missed you." The floorboards creaked. Lucien knelt in front of her, a movement so foreign to his usual poised, untouchable demeanor that she looked up. He set his cane aside on the floor. With slow, deliberate movements, he peeled off his leather gloves, tossing them onto a nearby stack of newspapers. He reached out again, bare hands this time. His fingers were warm, tipped with nails that were just a fraction too thick, too sharp to be entirely human. He cradled her jaw, his thumb wiping away a stray tear she hadn't realized had fallen. "Look at me," he commanded softly. Rory looked. Up close, she could see the faint violet veins beneath his pale skin, the legacy of Avaros. She saw the exhaustion etched into the corners of his mouth. "I am a creature of transactions, Aurora," Lucien said, his gaze locked onto her bright blue eyes. "Every alliance, every secret, every breath has a price. But when I am with you, the ledger is empty. I have no leverage. I have no shield. It terrifies me." "Good," Rory breathed, her hands finding his wrists, feeling the rapid, heavy pulse beneath his cuffs. "You should be terrified. I'm just a girl from Cardiff with a delivery job and a mountain of student debt. I shouldn't be the most dangerous thing in your life." "But you are." Lucien leaned in, closing the final inch between them. The kiss was not gentle. It was the culmination of three months of silence, of unspoken fears and bloody skirmishes in dark alleys. He tasted of rain and copper and something entirely wild. Rory tangled her fingers in his platinum hair, pulling him closer, anchoring herself to the one person who could make her feel utterly chaotic and completely safe all at once. She felt his hands shift, his strong arms wrapping around her waist, lifting her effortlessly from the floor. She wrapped her legs around his hips, back pressing against the hard wood of the door as he carried her weight. The three locks rattled slightly against the frame. Lucien pulled back just far enough to breathe, his forehead resting against hers, his amber eye burning with a fierce, possessive light. "Tell me to leave," he muttered against her lips. "Give the order, and I will walk back into the rain. I will not compromise your safety again." Rory tightened her grip on his shoulders, her nails digging into the expensive fabric of his suit. "If you go out that door, Moreau, I'm locking all three deadbolts, and I'm never opening them for you again." She kissed the corner of his jaw, tracing the path down to his neck. "So you'd better stay."
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:32.4Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he commanded softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.061
76.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"softly"
2"utterly"
3"completely"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"ensuring"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"sanctuary"
2"weight"
3"whisper"
4"charged"
5"vibrated"
6"ensuring"
7"silence"
8"etched"
9"unspoken"
10"chaotic"
11"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
76.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1260
ratio0.002
matches
0"chérie"
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount870
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Lucien13
Rory11
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.753
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1260
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean30.73
std17.37
cv0.565
sampleLengths
08
129
244
35
427
518
646
711
846
950
1057
1119
1229
1322
1470
1529
165
1726
181
1942
2018
2130
2233
2351
2417
2535
2644
2749
2844
296
3030
3147
3246
333
349
3563
3647
3722
3827
3917
4038
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was sitting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black—locked onto hers."
97.09% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount877
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.043329532497149374
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013683010262257697
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.65
std8.1
cv0.553
sampleLengths
08
123
26
318
416
510
65
711
816
918
108
1121
1217
1311
1418
159
1619
176
1817
1927
2023
2126
228
2319
2414
2515
2622
2725
2815
2930
306
3114
329
335
3410
3516
361
3723
3819
3912
406
4114
4216
4333
443
4521
4621
474
482
4914
55.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36046511627906974
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences63
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
1"Her crescent-shaped wrist scar stung,"
2"He bypassed her with a"
3"He shook his wet hat,"
4"She turned around, crossing her"
5"He took two slow steps"
6"She took a step back,"
7"He leaned heavily on his"
8"He reached out, his leather-gloved"
9"Her breath hitched."
10"She looked at his impeccable"
11"He had been fighting."
12"she whispered, her voice losing"
13"She buried her face in"
14"He set his cane aside"
15"He reached out again, bare"
16"His fingers were warm, tipped"
17"He cradled her jaw, his"
18"he commanded softly"
19"She saw the exhaustion etched"
ratio0.413
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences63
matches
0"Rory yanked the door of"
1"The words died in her"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"Rain dripped from the brim"
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"Rory gripped the edge of"
6"Her crescent-shaped wrist scar stung,"
7"Lucien stepped forward, not waiting"
8"He bypassed her with a"
9"He shook his wet hat,"
10"Rory slammed the door, throwing"
11"She turned around, crossing her"
12"Lucien surveyed the cramped living"
13"Every surface groaned under the"
14"Lucien murmured, ran a gloved"
15"The slicked-back platinum hair caught"
16"A shadow crossed Lucien's face,"
17"He took two slow steps"
18"Rory’s voice cracked, the raw"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory swallowed hard, her gaze dropping to his lips before snapping back to his mismatched eyes."
1"The anger that had sustained her for ninety days began to liquefy, morphing into a painful, tight ache in her throat."
2"Rory tangled her fingers in his platinum hair, pulling him closer, anchoring herself to the one person who could make her feel utterly chaotic and completely sa…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice losing its sharp edges"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"Rory breathed (breathe)"
4"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.424
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.303
77.9774%