Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25SD29KKN6RJ1ECN2WVF28

Run Details

Duration:
12.5s
Cost:
$0.018810
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Neon green light from the sign outside bled through the grime of the front window, slicing across the scarred mahogany of the bar. The Raven's Nest smelled of stale stout, floor wax, and the damp wool of coats left to dry near the radiator. Behind the taps, Silas Blackwood polished a highball glass with a lint-free cloth, his silver signet ring catching the emerald glow with every slow rotation of his wrist. His left leg, stiff from the damp London autumn, propped against a low stool. Aurora Carter sat three stools down, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She stared into the amber depths of a tepid cider. The shoulder-length black hair she kept tucked behind her ears fell forward, masking her face from the three other patrons scattered in the dark corners of the room. The brass bells above the door chimed. A gust of cold, diesel-scented Soho air swept inside, rustling the yellowed edges of the old maps pinned to the wall. A man stepped through the threshold, shaking water from a heavy wax jacket. He had thick, curly brown hair plastered to his forehead and a wide, boyish face that didn't belong in a place this tired. He scanned the dim interior, eyes passing over the black-and-white photographs of forgotten boxing matches, before locking onto the bar. His breath hitched. He took three fast strides forward, his boots clicking loud on the linoleum. "Rory?" Aurora froze. Her grip tightened around the cider glass. She slowly turned her head, the bright blue of her eyes narrowing as she processed the face. The softness of the cheeks was gone, replaced by a sharp jawline and the faint, permanent creases of someone who spent too much time squinting at computer screens. But the lopsided grin remained identical. "Evan." Evan stopped two feet away, hands hovering near his pockets as if unsure whether to reach out. He settled for gripping the back of the empty barstool next to her. "I thought you were in Cardiff." His voice carried the familiar, rolling Welsh lilt, but it sounded thinner now, stripped of the bravado she remembered. "Your mum said you went to London, but she wouldn't give me an address. Eva didn't either. I’ve been... I’ve been looking, Rory." Silas set the polished highball glass down with a deliberate, heavy clack on the bar top. He didn't look at Evan, but his hazel eyes locked onto Aurora, raising a single, grey-streaked eyebrow in silent inquiry. Aurora offered Silas a tight, almost imperceptible shake of her head. "I work nearby," Aurora said. Her voice lacked the warmth Evan seemed to be begging for. "And I don't go by Rory anymore. It's Aurora." Evan flinched, his hand slipping off the barstool. He pulled it back, shoving both hands into his jacket pockets. "Right. Aurora. Of course." He looked down at his shoes, then back up, a nervous laugh escaping his throat. "You look different. Your hair. You used to hate keeping it short." "It's easier to manage when you're busy." She took a sip of her cider, the liquid cold and sharp against her throat. "What are you doing in Soho, Evan? You always hated the city. Said the air tasted like pennies." "I got a job with a consultancy firm in Bloomsbury," Evan said. He slid onto the stool beside her, though she hadn't invited him. He gestured to Silas. "Just a pint of whatever’s on draft, mate." Silas didn't move immediately. He held Evan’s gaze for a long three seconds, measuring the younger man's posture, the nervous twitch in his left shoulder, the way his eyes darted back to Aurora's hands. Only when Aurora nodded again did Silas turn to draw a pint of bitter. "Bloomsbury," Aurora repeated. "The law degree?" "Corporate compliance." Evan accepted the pint from Silas, offering a hurried nod that Silas ignored. "It pays the bills. It's not the human rights stuff we used to talk about in the Cardiff union building, but... well, the world isn't as simple as we thought at twenty-one, is it?" "Some parts of it are very simple." Evan took a long drink, his throat bobbing. He wiped his mouth with the back of his hand, a habit she used to find endearing. Now, it just looked messy. "You didn't finish your course," Evan said, his tone dropping, sliding into that soft, paternal cadence he used whenever he wanted to handle her. "Brendan was devastated, you know. Your dad still talks about the mock trial tournament you won. He thinks you're wasting yourself here." Aurora’s jaw tightened. She leaned back, creating a deliberate foot of space between their shoulders. "My father hasn't spoken to me since I packed my bags," she said. "And you don't get to use him to make a point." "I'm not trying to make a point!" Evan raised his hands, palms outward. The movement was too quick, too defensive. A couple in the corner booth glanced over. Silas paused in wiping the beer taps, his hand resting near the heavy brass soda siphon. "I just... I miss the girl who used to draft constitutional amendments in her sleep. The girl who laughed so loud the librarians threw us out." "That girl was twenty-one, naive, and trapped." Aurora looked directly into his eyes. The bright blue of her gaze was cold, stripped of the old softness he expected to find. "She didn't know how to say no. She thought keeping draft notes for someone else's arguments was a partnership." Evan’s face flushed a deep, blotchy red. He gripped his pint glass so hard his knuckles turned white. "That's not fair," he whispered. "I loved you, Rory. I wanted a life with you. I bought a ring." "You bought a cage." The words fell between them like lead. The quiet in the bar swelled, filled only by the low hum of the refrigerator behind the counter and the distant hiss of traffic on Wardour Street. Evan stared at his beer. A single bubble rose to the surface and popped. "I made mistakes," he said, his voice barely audible over the hum. "I was young. I got angry because I was terrified of losing you. I thought if we stayed in Cardiff, if we built something solid..." "You defined 'solid' by how much of me you could trim away to fit into your corners." Aurora stood up. She pulled a five-pound note from her pocket and dropped it onto the bar. "I have a shift in twenty minutes." "At a restaurant?" Evan looked up, his eyes wide, flashing with a sudden, ugly spark of the old patronizing arrogance she knew so well. "Your mum said you’re delivering food. For an establishment in Chinatown. Aurora, you have a genius-level IQ. You're operating at five percent of what you're capable of." "I'm operating at exactly the capacity I choose," Aurora said. She zipped her jacket to the throat, the dark fabric hiding the small crescent scar on her wrist. "And for the first time in my life, nobody else is holding the stopwatch." She turned toward the door, her boots clicking against the floorboards. "Aurora, wait." Evan stood, reaching out to grab her elbow. Before his fingers could make contact, Silas' massive hand came down on the bar top with a thunderous boom that vibrated through the glasses. The retired operative leaned forward, his grey-streaked auburn beard bristling, his hazel eyes hard as flint. The silver signet ring gleamed under the emerald neon. "The lady said she has a shift," Silas said. His voice was quiet, but it filled the room, carrying the weight of a man who had commanded far worse rooms than this one. He didn't raise his voice, yet the limp in his leg seemed entirely irrelevant to the sheer physical presence he projected. Evan froze, his hand hovering inches from Aurora’s sleeve. He looked at Silas, then at Aurora, who hadn't even flinched. She didn't look back. She didn't look afraid. Slowly, Evan lowered his hand. The boyishness was entirely gone now, replaced by the hollow, grey exhaustion of a man realizing he was projecting his desires onto a ghost. "I'm sorry," Evan muttered, directed at the floor. Aurora walked to the door. She pushed it open, the brass bells chiming their bright, metallic farewell. The cold air of Soho hit her face, wiping away the smell of slate, old wood, and the suffocating weight of Cardiff. She stepped onto the wet pavement without looking back once.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:49:46.701Z" 5/20/2026, 7:49:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora looked directly [directly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.487
leniency0.974
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.051
89.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"processed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"tracing"
1"depths"
2"scanned"
3"processed"
4"familiar"
5"lilt"
6"eyebrow"
7"warmth"
8"vibrated"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1420
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1009
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas11
Blackwood1
London1
Carter1
Soho2
Welsh1
Evan17
Aurora15
Wardour1
Street1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Wardour"
3"Street"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.658
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed entirely irrelevant to the sheer physical presence he projected"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.704
wordCount1420
matches
0"not the human rights stuff we used to talk about in the Cardiff union building, but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.56
std19.84
cv0.629
sampleLengths
086
154
228
356
416
51
660
71
830
948
1036
1111
1225
1319
1431
1540
1636
1748
186
1949
207
2130
2246
2315
2424
2570
2649
2718
2819
294
3034
3114
3237
3341
3451
3542
3611
372
388
3949
4054
4128
4229
438
4449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was projecting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"cold, diesel-scented Soho"
1"thick, curly brown hair"
2"single, grey-streaked eyebrow"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027446300715990454
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00954653937947494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.52
std7.72
cv0.571
sampleLengths
023
121
228
314
416
510
628
77
821
913
1023
1120
123
1313
141
152
167
1717
1828
196
201
2117
2213
2325
2423
2516
2620
2711
285
2911
309
318
3211
3319
3412
3522
3618
3712
3812
394
408
414
4230
4314
443
453
4615
4734
487
498
41.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3047619047619048
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners32
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"Only when Aurora nodded again"
1"Slowly, Evan lowered his hand."
ratio0.026
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences76
matches
0"His left leg, stiff from"
1"She stared into the amber"
2"He had thick, curly brown"
3"He scanned the dim interior,"
4"His breath hitched."
5"He took three fast strides"
6"Her grip tightened around the"
7"She slowly turned her head,"
8"He settled for gripping the"
9"His voice carried the familiar,"
10"He didn't look at Evan,"
11"Her voice lacked the warmth"
12"He pulled it back, shoving"
13"He looked down at his"
14"She took a sip of"
15"He slid onto the stool"
16"He gestured to Silas."
17"He held Evan’s gaze for"
18"He wiped his mouth with"
19"She leaned back, creating a"
ratio0.421
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"Neon green light from the"
1"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
2"His left leg, stiff from"
3"Aurora Carter sat three stools"
4"She stared into the amber"
5"The shoulder-length black hair she"
6"The brass bells above the"
7"A gust of cold, diesel-scented"
8"A man stepped through the"
9"He had thick, curly brown"
10"He scanned the dim interior,"
11"His breath hitched."
12"He took three fast strides"
13"Her grip tightened around the"
14"She slowly turned her head,"
15"The softness of the cheeks"
16"Evan stopped two feet away,"
17"He settled for gripping the"
18"His voice carried the familiar,"
19"Silas set the polished highball"
ratio0.921
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"Now, it just looked messy."
1"Before his fingers could make"
ratio0.026
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He had thick, curly brown hair plastered to his forehead and a wide, boyish face that didn't belong in a place this tired."
1"The softness of the cheeks was gone, replaced by a sharp jawline and the faint, permanent creases of someone who spent too much time squinting at computer scree…"
2"His voice was quiet, but it filled the room, carrying the weight of a man who had commanded far worse rooms than this one."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice barely audible over the hum"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora repeated (repeat)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"Evan muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.154
87.5209%