Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25TYXRB6A1W8T6JTZX065A

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.017764
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stench of damp soot and ozone hung heavy in the air, clinging to the brickwork of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a puddle of murky water, her boots crunching on the gravel ballast of the disused tracks. She adjusted her grip on her heavy flashlight, sweeping the beam across the cavernous darkness of the platform. The Metropolitan Police tape fluttered in the draft of some distant ventilation shaft, its bright yellow plastic stark against the soot-blackened Victorian masonry. A uniformed officer stood near the edge of the platform, his breath blooming in the chill air. "Quinn." Detective Sergeant Miller emerged from the shadow of a rusting signal box, his trench coat smelling of stale tobacco and cheap coffee. He gestured toward the far end of the platform where the brickwork curved into the tunnel. "Thought you’d still be tucked up in bed. Forensics are still twenty minutes out." Quinn checked her worn leather watch. 3:14 AM. "I don't sleep well when patrol officers start reporting 'impossible anomalies' in deactivated northern line tunnels, Miller." "Local kids," Miller said, shrugging as he shone his own light toward a pile of wooden crates. "They break down here to paint graffiti, drink, swap whatever junk they steal. One of them took a bad fall off the platform edge. Strubbed his head on the rail." Quinn walked to the edge of the platform, her eyes narrowing as she studied the scene. The victim lay fifty feet down the track. A young man, barely out of his teens, sprawl-legged across the iron rails. He wore a heavy canvas jacket, a worn leather satchel twisted beneath his torso. "Simple slip and fall," Miller continued, his voice echoing off the curved ceiling. "He got spooked in the dark, tripped over the sleeper, cracked his skull. Look at the mud on his boots. He came down the ventilation shaft." Quinn dropped down onto the tracks. Her knees popped in the silence. She approached the body, her movements precise, her posture rigid as she kneeled beside the young man. She didn't touch him, not yet. Her flashlight beam traced the contours of his face, then drifted down to his hands. "His hands are clean, Miller." "So? Maybe he wiped them on his jeans." "He fell from a five-foot platform onto soot-covered railway ballast in pitch darkness," Quinn said, gesturing to the thick layer of black grease and dirt coating every surface around them. "If he slipped, his first instinct would be to put his hands out to break his fall. There isn’t a speck of grime on his palms. No gravel embedded in his skin. No scraping." Miller grunted, shifting his weight. "He was holding something, then." "If he was holding something, where is it?" Quinn leaned closer. She reached out, gently turning the young man’s head to the side. A massive hematoma deformed the temple, but the skin wasn't broken by raw iron or gravel. The wound was perfectly circular, a depression about two inches wide, stamped into the bone with neat, edge-pressed force. "That wasn't caused by a flat steel rail," Quinn murmured. "And look at his eyes." The boy's green eyes stared blankly at the ceiling, frozen in a state of absolute, jaw-slackened terror. But it wasn't the expression that caught Quinn's attention—it was the stark lack of petechial hemorrhaging. No broken blood vessels, yet his skin possessed a strange, waxen pallor that didn't match the timeline of a fresh fall. "He died of a heart attack, Miller. Before he hit the ground." "People get scared, Quinn. Dark tunnels, weird noises." "Not this scared." She reached down and pulled the worn leather satchel from beneath the bodyway. "Hey, don't contaminate the personal effects," Miller warned, though he didn't move to stop her. Quinn ignored him, unbuckling the brass clasp of the bag. Inside lay three leather-bound notebooks filled with dense hand-written translations of Sumerian cuneiform, a collection of dried lavender stems, and a small, heavy object wrapped in oilskin. She unwrapped the parcel. Inside sat a small brass compass. The casing was aged, covered in a thick patina of verdigris that stained her thumb green. But it wasn't the wear that held her gaze; it was the face. Instead of cardinal directions, the glass housed a dial etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the glare of her torchlight. The needle didn't point north. It spun lazily, clockwise, then counter-clockwise, before shivering violently and pointing directly into the dark recess of the tunnel behind them. "Cheap prop," Miller muttered, peering over her shoulder. "Some kind of live-action roleplay nonsense. Kids buy these trinkets online." "This isn't plastic, Miller. It’s solid brass, sand-cast, then hand-chased. The weight is wrong too. It’s too heavy for its size." Quinn turned the shadow compass over. On the back, a tiny maker’s mark was stamped into the metal—a symbol of a stylized eye weeping a single drop of ink. The exact same mark she had found etched into the underside of DS Morris's desk three years ago, on the night he vanished from an active crime scene without a trace. A cold prickle of sweat traced her spine. "He wasn't alone," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low ribbon of sound. "We checked the cameras at the station entrance. No one else went down." "Because they didn't use the stairs." Quinn stood up, tucking the compass into her inner pocket. She followed the direction the needle had pointed, walking twenty paces further into the darkness where the tunnel curved out of sight of the platform. The ground here was different. The soot on the ground wasn't uniform. She knelt again, shining her light at the base of the tunnel wall. A perfect circle of clean brickwork, roughly six feet in diameter, stood out against the blackened surroundings. It looked as though someone had scrubbed the soot away with industrial solvent, leaving the red Victorian clay raw and exposed. Except there were no chemical smells. Only the heavy, sweet scent of crushed lilies and old parchment. "What do you see?" Miller called out from the platform, his flashlight beam slicing through the dark toward her. "Salt," Quinn whispered, touching her finger to a fine white powder dusting the base of the clean brick circle. She put it to her tongue. "Genuine, unrefined sea salt." "Quinn, you're losing me. We have a dead kid, a slip-and-fall, and you're tasting the trackbed." She ignored the skepticism in his voice, her mind racing as she connected the pieces. The clean hands, the circular head wound that looked remarkably like the pommel of a heavy walking cane, the salt, the compass pointing into empty space. This train station wasn't just a relic of the transit system. It was a crossroads. "Eva Kowalski," Quinn muttered, recalling the name from the victim’s ID card she’d glimpsed in his wallet. The Oxford credentials. The British Museum connection. "Who?" Miller asked. "Call dispatch," Quinn said, standing up and brushing the salt from her trousers. Her eyes reflected the pale light of her torch, sharp and focused. "Tell them we’re searching for a female associate of the victim. Mid-twenties, red hair, likely carrying similar material. And tell them to look for anyone trying to trade or fence unusual items in Camden tonight." "We don't have cause for that, Quinn. It's an accidental death." Quinn walked back to where the body lay, her boots clicking rhythmically against the iron rails. She stopped right in front of Miller, her sharp jaw set, her brown eyes boring into his. "He didn't fall, Miller. He was running from something that came out of that wall, and whoever killed him took whatever he bought down here." She patted her breast pocket, where the brass compass lay heavy against her ribs. "And I'm going to find out who sold it to him."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"stark"
2"chill"
3"echoing"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"weight"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"perfect"
10"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1316
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount939
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Metropolitan1
Police1
Victorian2
Sergeant1
Miller9
Sumerian1
Morris1
Oxford1
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Victorian"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.648
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the glare of her torchlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1316
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28
std19.35
cv0.691
sampleLengths
023
162
217
353
425
547
616
735
839
950
105
118
1264
1310
1411
1547
1615
1754
1812
198
203
2113
2215
2337
2410
2580
2619
2727
2854
298
3014
3113
3241
3312
3451
3517
3619
3729
3816
3941
4015
4124
423
4360
4411
4533
4650
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was stamped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"But it wasn't the expression that caught Quinn's attention—it was the stark lack of petechial hemorrhaging."
1"But it wasn't the wear that held her gaze; it was the face."
2"On the back, a tiny maker’s mark was stamped into the metal—a symbol of a stylized eye weeping a single drop of ink."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"neat, edge-pressed force."
1"absolute, jaw-slackened terror."
2"dense hand-written translations"
3"lay heavy against her"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023206751054852322
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012658227848101266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean14.46
std8.13
cv0.562
sampleLengths
023
121
218
323
417
523
616
714
86
92
1017
1117
1230
1316
148
1513
1614
1713
1826
196
206
2117
226
2315
245
258
2630
2734
285
295
3011
3112
3216
3319
3410
355
3617
3716
3821
3912
408
413
4213
4315
4410
4527
464
476
4816
4913
73.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners42
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Instead of cardinal directions, the"
1"Only the heavy, sweet scent"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences69
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"He gestured toward the far"
2"He wore a heavy canvas"
3"Her knees popped in the"
4"She approached the body, her"
5"She didn't touch him, not"
6"Her flashlight beam traced the"
7"She reached out, gently turning"
8"She reached down and pulled"
9"She unwrapped the parcel."
10"It spun lazily, clockwise, then"
11"She followed the direction the"
12"She knelt again, shining her"
13"It looked as though someone"
14"She put it to her"
15"She ignored the skepticism in"
16"It was a crossroads."
17"Her eyes reflected the pale"
18"She stopped right in front"
19"She patted her breast pocket,"
ratio0.29
25.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences69
matches
0"The stench of damp soot"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She adjusted her grip on"
3"The Metropolitan Police tape fluttered"
4"A uniformed officer stood near"
5"Detective Sergeant Miller emerged from"
6"He gestured toward the far"
7"Quinn checked her worn leather"
8"Miller said, shrugging as he"
9"Quinn walked to the edge"
10"The victim lay fifty feet"
11"A young man, barely out"
12"He wore a heavy canvas"
13"Miller continued, his voice echoing"
14"Quinn dropped down onto the"
15"Her knees popped in the"
16"She approached the body, her"
17"She didn't touch him, not"
18"Her flashlight beam traced the"
19"Quinn said, gesturing to the"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"But it wasn't the expression that caught Quinn's attention—it was the stark lack of petechial hemorrhaging."
1"No broken blood vessels, yet his skin possessed a strange, waxen pallor that didn't match the timeline of a fresh fall."
2"The casing was aged, covered in a thick patina of verdigris that stained her thumb green."
3"But it wasn't the wear that held her gaze; it was the face."
4"Instead of cardinal directions, the glass housed a dial etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the glare of her torchlight."
5"It looked as though someone had scrubbed the soot away with industrial solvent, leaving the red Victorian clay raw and exposed."
6"The clean hands, the circular head wound that looked remarkably like the pommel of a heavy walking cane, the salt, the compass pointing into empty space."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Detective Sergeant Miller emerged, his trench coat smelling of stale tobacco and cheap coffee"
1"Miller continued, his voice echoing off the curved ceiling"
2"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low ribbon of sound"
3"Miller called out, his flashlight beam slicing through the dark toward her"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Miller continued (continue)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Miller warned (warn)"
3"Miller muttered (mutter)"
4"Miller called out (call out)"
5"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
6"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.389
77.5976%