| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.472 | | leniency | 0.944 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1318 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1318 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fluttered" | | 1 | "stark" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1316 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.80% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 939 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Victorian | 2 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Miller | 9 | | Sumerian | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Victorian" | | 3 | "Sergeant" | | 4 | "Miller" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.648 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the glare of her torchlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1316 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 28 | | std | 19.35 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 80 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 60 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "But it wasn't the expression that caught Quinn's attention—it was the stark lack of petechial hemorrhaging." | | 1 | "But it wasn't the wear that held her gaze; it was the face." | | 2 | "On the back, a tiny maker’s mark was stamped into the metal—a symbol of a stylized eye weeping a single drop of ink." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 948 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "neat, edge-pressed force." | | 1 | "absolute, jaw-slackened terror." | | 2 | "dense hand-written translations" | | 3 | "lay heavy against her" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.023206751054852322 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012658227848101266 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 8.13 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 73.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.46153846153846156 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of cardinal directions, the" | | 1 | "Only the heavy, sweet scent" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 1 | "He gestured toward the far" | | 2 | "He wore a heavy canvas" | | 3 | "Her knees popped in the" | | 4 | "She approached the body, her" | | 5 | "She didn't touch him, not" | | 6 | "Her flashlight beam traced the" | | 7 | "She reached out, gently turning" | | 8 | "She reached down and pulled" | | 9 | "She unwrapped the parcel." | | 10 | "It spun lazily, clockwise, then" | | 11 | "She followed the direction the" | | 12 | "She knelt again, shining her" | | 13 | "It looked as though someone" | | 14 | "She put it to her" | | 15 | "She ignored the skepticism in" | | 16 | "It was a crossroads." | | 17 | "Her eyes reflected the pale" | | 18 | "She stopped right in front" | | 19 | "She patted her breast pocket," |
| | ratio | 0.29 | |
| 25.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The stench of damp soot" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 3 | "The Metropolitan Police tape fluttered" | | 4 | "A uniformed officer stood near" | | 5 | "Detective Sergeant Miller emerged from" | | 6 | "He gestured toward the far" | | 7 | "Quinn checked her worn leather" | | 8 | "Miller said, shrugging as he" | | 9 | "Quinn walked to the edge" | | 10 | "The victim lay fifty feet" | | 11 | "A young man, barely out" | | 12 | "He wore a heavy canvas" | | 13 | "Miller continued, his voice echoing" | | 14 | "Quinn dropped down onto the" | | 15 | "Her knees popped in the" | | 16 | "She approached the body, her" | | 17 | "She didn't touch him, not" | | 18 | "Her flashlight beam traced the" | | 19 | "Quinn said, gesturing to the" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "But it wasn't the expression that caught Quinn's attention—it was the stark lack of petechial hemorrhaging." | | 1 | "No broken blood vessels, yet his skin possessed a strange, waxen pallor that didn't match the timeline of a fresh fall." | | 2 | "The casing was aged, covered in a thick patina of verdigris that stained her thumb green." | | 3 | "But it wasn't the wear that held her gaze; it was the face." | | 4 | "Instead of cardinal directions, the glass housed a dial etched with intricate, swirling sigils that seemed to shift slightly under the glare of her torchlight." | | 5 | "It looked as though someone had scrubbed the soot away with industrial solvent, leaving the red Victorian clay raw and exposed." | | 6 | "The clean hands, the circular head wound that looked remarkably like the pommel of a heavy walking cane, the salt, the compass pointing into empty space." |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Sergeant Miller emerged, his trench coat smelling of stale tobacco and cheap coffee" | | 1 | "Miller continued, his voice echoing off the curved ceiling" | | 2 | "Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low ribbon of sound" | | 3 | "Miller called out, his flashlight beam slicing through the dark toward her" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Miller continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Miller warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Miller muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Miller called out (call out)" | | 5 | "Quinn whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.389 | |