Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25V5J8ZCDN5PVJMANXECDE

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.016830
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in London did not fall so much as it drifted, a heavy, grease-slicked mist that turned the neon glare of Camden High Street into a smear of green and amber. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her damp overcoat, her eyes locked on the broad shoulders thirty yards ahead. She knew those shoulders. She knew the way he carried himself—the slight, protective hitch on his left side, a subconscious shield for the patched-up scar on his forearm. Tomás Herrera was moving fast, his head ducked against the drizzle, the collar of his denim jacket turned up. Harlow checked her left wrist. The worn leather strap of her watch was soaked through, the hands ticking past midnight. She had been tracking Herrera for three weeks, ever since a tipster in Soho linked him to a series of back-alley medical procedures that defied basic biology. Ruptured organs stitched back together with threads that dissolved into ash; shattered bones that fused in hours instead of months. It smelled of the same impossible, sickening wrongness that had hung in the air three years ago, the night DS Morris died in a warehouse by the docks, his chest caved in by a force that left no footprints. Herrera turned abruptly, ducking down a narrow alleyway wedged between a shuttered dry cleaner and a failing kebab shop. Harlow broke into a silent, practiced jog. Her boots clicked against the wet pavement, a sharp, rhythmic counterpoint to the distant rumble of the night bus. She reached the mouth of the alley just in time to see the tail of Herrera’s jacket vanish around a corner, slipping past a chain-link fence that hung open like an invitation. She paused, her sharp jaw tightening. Her hand drifted naturally to the service weapon at her hip, the cold hum of the metal offering its familiar, meager comfort. The alley was dark, smelling of rotten cabbage and wet cardboard. "Keep moving, Tommy," she whispered, her voice a low rasp. She pushed through the gap in the fence, the wire catching on her coat with a sharp scrape. She tracked him by the wet slosh of his footsteps. He wasn't running yet, which meant he didn't know she was there. Or, worse, he knew exactly where she was and was drawing her in. The alley dead-ended at a set of metal double doors that belonged to an abandoned Tube station. Harlow remembered the council notices from months ago; the station had been shuttered since the sixties, a hollow artery beneath the city. But the heavy padlock on the chain was snapped, hanging uselessly like a broken tooth. Herrera was gone, but the heavy iron door was still settling into its frame, a faint draft of warm, stagnant air escaping from the darkness inside. The scent was strange—not the usual damp subterranean rot of the London underground, but something sharper. Copper. Crushed cloves. Burnt tallow. Harlow stepped to the door, her fingers resting on the cold iron. Her military training screamed at her to call for backup, to wait for a sector car, to play it by the book. But the book hadn't saved Morris. The book had filed his death under *unexplained blunt force trauma* and buried the file in a basement archive. She pushed the door open. It swung inward on greased hinges, remarkably silent for its size. A flight of concrete steps descended into the gloom, lit only by a flickering orange glow far below. Harlow slipped inside, letting the door click shut behind her. The darkness swallowed her, thick and suffocating. She kept one hand on the damp brick wall, descending step by step, her breathing shallow and controlled. At the bottom of the stairs, the tunnel opened up into a vaulted chamber. This was the old ticket hall, but it had been stripped of its turnstiles and advertisements. Instead, the space was choked with shadows and a low, vibrating murmur of voices that sounded like bees in a wall. Harlow pressed herself against a tiled pillar, her brown eyes scanning the gloom. A few yards away, a man in a heavy wax coat stood guard beside a rusted iron turnstile. He wasn't looking for police; he was watching the few patrons who drifted down from a secondary entrance. To pass him, each traveler held out a small, pale object. A bone token. Harlow watched as a woman in a silk headscarf dropped a polished, finger-sized knucklebone into the guard's outstretched palm. The guard pocketed it, nodded, and let her pass into the tunnel beyond. Her stomach tightened. This was the Veil Market. She had heard whispers of it in the dark corners of her informants' flats—an underground bazaar that floated through the dead transit lines of the city, moving with the cycle of the moon. It was a myth, she’d told herself. A fairy tale for the gutter-dwellers. Yet here it was, breathing beneath her feet. She looked past the guard. Thirty yards down the tiled corridor, she saw Herrera. He was speaking to a vendor selling dried herbs from a wooden crate, his warm brown eyes anxious, his hand instinctively reaching up to touch the Saint Christopher medallion hanging beneath his shirt. He was exchanges words, gesturing toward his scarred forearm, his posture tense. Harlow had a choice. She could turn back now, return to the surface, and wait for him to emerge. But looking at the sheer scale of the tunnel network, there were likely half a dozen exits leading to different parts of Camden. If she let him go now, he would vanish back into the slipstream of the city. He was her only link to the things that defied explanation, her only lead on the ghost that had killed her partner. She checked her pockets. She had her badge, her cuffs, her weapon. No bone token. She looked back at the guard. He was a big man, broad-necked, with eyes that caught the orange lantern light in a way that didn't seem entirely human. Harlow reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, velvet-lined pouch she carried everywhere. Inside was a sterling silver lighter—a retirement gift to Morris from his father, which she’d recovered from his desk. It wasn’t bone, but it was old, heavy, and valuable. She stepped out from behind the pillar and walked directly toward the turnstile. Her posture was erect, her stride calculated with military precision. She did not look like a woman lost; she looked like a woman who belonged. The guard shifted, his massive bulk blocking the archway. He held out a scarred, calloused hand, his yellowed fingernails tapping against a brass bowl. Harlow didn't hesitate. She drew the silver lighter from her pocket and dropped it into the bowl. It hit the brass with a sharp, heavy ring that seemed to echo too loudly in the vaulted ceiling. The guard squinted down at the lighter. He picked it up with two thick fingers, turning it over. He flicked the wheel. A small, blue flame flared, illuminating his face—his skin was gray, dry as parchment, with deep, unnatural creases around his jaw. "This isn't the coin," the guard rumbled, his voice like grinding stones. "It's silver," Harlow said, her voice steady, pitching it low enough to carry only to him. "And it's older than you are. Take it, or I take my business to the Soho entrance." The guard stared at her, his dark eyes searching her sharp features, his gaze lingering on the quiet authority in her posture. For a tense second, Harlow braced herself to draw her weapon, her fingers twitching near her coat pocket. Then, the guard let out a wet, whistling chuckle. He pocketed the lighter and stepped aside, gesturing toward the dark corridor with a mock bow. "Welcome to the Market, detective," he whispered. The word hung in the air, cold and threatening, but Harlow didn't look back. She stepped past him, her heart hammering against her ribs, and plunged into the strange, flickering light of the subterranean market, her eyes locked on the silhouette of Tomás Herrera as he disappeared into the crowd.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:50:44.557Z" 5/20/2026, 7:50:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"calculated"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"rhythmic"
2"familiar"
3"footsteps"
4"gloom"
5"scanning"
6"silk"
7"stomach"
8"velvet"
9"calculated"
10"echo"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1355
ratio0.003
matches
0"unexplained blunt force trauma"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1303
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London2
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow14
Quinn1
Herrera7
Soho1
Morris3
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"High"
3"Street"
4"Soho"
globalScore0.963
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like bees in a wall"
1"looked like a woman who belonged"
2"ring that seemed to echo too loudly in the vaulted ceiling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.738
wordCount1355
matches
0"not the usual damp subterranean rot of the London underground, but something sharper"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean38.71
std21.72
cv0.561
sampleLengths
052
147
2106
319
458
539
610
753
854
947
1059
1116
1253
1351
1413
1547
163
1732
1854
198
2059
2180
2215
2328
2444
2538
2624
2736
2843
2912
3033
3140
3225
337
3450
86.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences94
matches
0"been shuttered"
1"was snapped"
2"was gone"
3"been stripped"
4"was choked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs209
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was drawing"
2"was still settling"
3"was watching"
4"wasn't looking"
5"was, breathing"
6"was speaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences95
ratio0.084
matches
0"She knew the way he carried himself—the slight, protective hitch on his left side, a subconscious shield for the patched-up scar on his forearm."
1"Ruptured organs stitched back together with threads that dissolved into ash; shattered bones that fused in hours instead of months."
2"Harlow remembered the council notices from months ago; the station had been shuttered since the sixties, a hollow artery beneath the city."
3"The scent was strange—not the usual damp subterranean rot of the London underground, but something sharper."
4"He wasn't looking for police; he was watching the few patrons who drifted down from a secondary entrance."
5"Inside was a sterling silver lighter—a retirement gift to Morris from his father, which she’d recovered from his desk."
6"She did not look like a woman lost; she looked like a woman who belonged."
7"A small, blue flame flared, illuminating his face—his skin was gray, dry as parchment, with deep, unnatural creases around his jaw."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount804
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"heavy, grease-slicked mist"
1"under *unexplained blunt force"
2"polished, finger-sized knucklebone"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.018656716417910446
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007462686567164179
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.26
std8.13
cv0.57
sampleLengths
032
120
24
324
419
55
615
727
820
939
1019
117
1219
1332
146
1522
1611
1710
1818
1910
2012
2113
2217
2322
2415
2526
2616
271
282
292
3012
3122
326
3319
345
3511
3618
3710
387
3918
4014
4116
4221
4313
4418
4518
4611
473
4819
4913
46.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners30
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Instead, the space was choked"
1"Then, the guard let out"
ratio0.022
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences90
matches
0"She knew those shoulders."
1"She knew the way he"
2"She had been tracking Herrera"
3"It smelled of the same"
4"Her boots clicked against the"
5"She reached the mouth of"
6"She paused, her sharp jaw"
7"Her hand drifted naturally to"
8"she whispered, her voice a"
9"She pushed through the gap"
10"She tracked him by the"
11"He wasn't running yet, which"
12"Her military training screamed at"
13"She pushed the door open."
14"It swung inward on greased"
15"She kept one hand on"
16"He wasn't looking for police;"
17"Her stomach tightened."
18"She had heard whispers of"
19"It was a myth, she’d"
ratio0.444
48.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences90
matches
0"The rain in London did"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"She knew those shoulders."
3"She knew the way he"
4"Tomás Herrera was moving fast,"
5"Harlow checked her left wrist."
6"The worn leather strap of"
7"She had been tracking Herrera"
8"It smelled of the same"
9"Herrera turned abruptly, ducking down"
10"Harlow broke into a silent,"
11"Her boots clicked against the"
12"She reached the mouth of"
13"She paused, her sharp jaw"
14"Her hand drifted naturally to"
15"The alley was dark, smelling"
16"she whispered, her voice a"
17"She pushed through the gap"
18"She tracked him by the"
19"He wasn't running yet, which"
ratio0.822
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Or, worse, he knew exactly"
1"To pass him, each traveler"
2"If she let him go"
ratio0.033
49.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The rain in London did not fall so much as it drifted, a heavy, grease-slicked mist that turned the neon glare of Camden High Street into a smear of green and a…"
1"She had been tracking Herrera for three weeks, ever since a tipster in Soho linked him to a series of back-alley medical procedures that defied basic biology."
2"It smelled of the same impossible, sickening wrongness that had hung in the air three years ago, the night DS Morris died in a warehouse by the docks, his chest…"
3"She reached the mouth of the alley just in time to see the tail of Herrera’s jacket vanish around a corner, slipping past a chain-link fence that hung open like…"
4"The alley dead-ended at a set of metal double doors that belonged to an abandoned Tube station."
5"He wasn't looking for police; he was watching the few patrons who drifted down from a secondary entrance."
6"He was a big man, broad-necked, with eyes that caught the orange lantern light in a way that didn't seem entirely human."
7"The guard stared at her, his dark eyes searching her sharp features, his gaze lingering on the quiet authority in her posture."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice a low rasp"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
75.2204%