| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1219 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "enigmatic" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1215 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 920 | | uniqueNames | 22 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Gluttonous | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Rory | 13 | | Fae | 5 | | Through | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Glutton | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Dymas" | | 6 | "Prince" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Nyx" | | 9 | "Glutton" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.793 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a cross between weeping willo" | | 1 | "looked like black soil" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1215 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.81% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 46.73 | | std | 22.68 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 74 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 77 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 36 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was shocking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the portal flickered—a pale, soap-bubble distortion that briefly reflected the ancient oak standing stones of Isolde’s grove before settling into a dull, greasy smudge against the warm amber sky." | | 1 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone was no longer just warm; it pulsed against her collarbone like a tiny, trapped bird, casting a rhythmic red glow across her knuckles." | | 2 | "From somewhere deeper in the grove, a low, rhythmic thrumming vibrated through the soles of Rory's boots—the sound of giant copper vats boiling, or perhaps the heartbeat of the realm itself." | | 3 | "She squeezed her left wrist, her thumb tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there—a grounding habit she had never quite managed to break." | | 4 | "In the distance, rising like a mockery of cathedral spires, were the spires of Prince Belphegor’s palace—towers built of polished bone and white-glazed clay, linked by aqueducts that ran thick with dark, steaming liquids." | | 5 | "The half-Fae was bound by her nature; she couldn't offer a straight map even if she wanted to." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 940 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "spongy, turnip-scented moss" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03297872340425532 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00851063829787234 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 18.13 | | std | 9.03 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 59.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.417910447761194 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of leaves, the branches" | | 1 | "Instinctively, she drew the Fae" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "It tasted of fermentation, of" | | 1 | "She reached instinctively for her" | | 2 | "She moved across the spongy," | | 3 | "They began to walk, following" | | 4 | "She squeezed her left wrist," | | 5 | "They passed a clearing where" | | 6 | "It was an assault of" | | 7 | "It made Rory’s stomach rumble" | | 8 | "It was pulsing faster now," | | 9 | "She felt a sudden, sharp" | | 10 | "She had fled Cardiff, she" | | 11 | "She wasn't going to let" | | 12 | "She stepped off the mossy" |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 78.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The air on the other" | | 1 | "It tasted of fermentation, of" | | 2 | "Rory Carter stepped through the" | | 3 | "The transition was a physical" | | 4 | "She reached instinctively for her" | | 5 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone was" | | 6 | "Rory muttered, her voice sounding" | | 7 | "Nyx took three dimensional form," | | 8 | "The sound was like dry" | | 9 | "a third voice warned" | | 10 | "Isolde Varga glided past them," | | 11 | "She moved across the spongy," | | 12 | "Rory kept her hand on" | | 13 | "The leaf-shaped moonsilver dagger was" | | 14 | "They began to walk, following" | | 15 | "Rory said, squinting" | | 16 | "She squeezed her left wrist," | | 17 | "Nyx said, their form stretching" | | 18 | "The deeper they marched, the" | | 19 | "They passed a clearing where" |
| | ratio | 0.764 | |
| 90.91% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from this distance, the" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It tasted of fermentation, of overripe peaches bruised on damp earth, and a heavy, cloying heat that clung to the skin like grease." | | 1 | "The transition was a physical jolt, a sudden shift from the crisp, winter-chill air of Richmond Park to a suffocating warmth that smelled of a thousand kitchens…" | | 2 | "They began to walk, following a path lined with gargantuan, knobby trees that looked like a cross between weeping willows and gnarled grapevines." | | 3 | "They passed a clearing where massive, crystalline flowers grew from mounds of dark, granulated sugar that looked like black soil." | | 4 | "In the distance, rising like a mockery of cathedral spires, were the spires of Prince Belphegor’s palace—towers built of polished bone and white-glazed clay, li…" | | 5 | "Sprawling vineyards climbed the terraced hillsides, tended by diminutive, multi-limbed figures that moved with frantic, insectoid speed." | | 6 | "It made Rory’s stomach rumble involuntarily, a deep, hollow ache that felt less like hunger and more like a physical ache." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, her voice sounding oddly flat in the dense atmosphere" | | 1 | "Isolde replied, her voice soft, devoid of pity" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "voice warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.417 | | effectiveRatio | 0.417 | |