Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25WEGRJ71Z04XQBC23ANV1

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Duration:
12.9s
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$0.023481
Provider:
Google AI Studio

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"If you are going to break my door down, at least do it in rhythm." Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing of the Brick Lane flat, the tip of his ivory-handled cane resting precisely between two floorboards. A sleek, tailored charcoal suit clung to his frame, pristine despite the grimy East End drizzle that must have dogged his steps. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless, pitiless black—swept over me. "Rory. You look... remarkably alive." "No thanks to your advice." I blocks the doorway, my hand gripping the brass knob until my knuckles turned white. Right over my left wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar from my childhood throbbed, a phantom ache. "Three deadbolts, Lucien. I put three on this door specifically to keep out things like you." "A minor inconvenience for a determined guest." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. The tip of his cane nudged my boot, a gentle but unyielding pressure. I had a choice: stand my ground and risk a physical tangle I wasn't prepared for, or step back. I stepped back, cursing the instinct. Eva’s flat was a claustrophobic maze tonight. Towering stacks of yellowing library books and unrolled parchment scrolls choked the small living space above the curry house. The rich, heavy aroma of cardamom and fried onions drifted up through the floorboards, mingling with the sharp, metallic tang of ozone that always clung to Lucien like expensive cologne. Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby cat, hissed from his perch atop a stack of classical myths, his orange tail puffing to twice its size. "Charming place," Lucien murmured, his French accent rolling over the sarcasm. He navigated the cramped room with a fluid, predatory grace, avoiding a tower of texts on Mesopotamian demonology without looking down. "A bit... academic." "Eva’s a researcher. I’m her temporary lodger. You are an intruder." I slammed the door, the three deadbolts sliding home with a heavy, metallic click-clack. "What do you want, Luc? The last time I saw you, you told me my blood was a liability and left me in a basement in Cardiff." "I secured your exit." "You vanished." "A distinction without a difference." He turned, resting both hands on the ivory pommel of his cane. The amber eye caught the light of a flickering floor lamp, burning gold. "Your Welsh ex-paramour was remarkably persistent. I merely redirected his attention." "By letting him think I died." "A permanent solution to a temporary nuisance." I marched into the narrow kitchen strip, needing distance, needing a barrier. I grabbed a chipped mug, my hands trembling slightly. "Evan was a monster, Lucien. But you? You’re just a businessman who trades in monsters." "And you are a delivery girl for a dim sum parlour who plays with fire she cannot hope to extinguish." He followed me, his presence swallowing the oxygen in the tiny kitchen. He stood too close, the heat radiating off him striking against the drafty chill of the flat. "Do you still work for the Cheung woman? Golden Empress?" "It pays the rent. And it keeps me off the supernatural radar. Mostly." "Clearly not." He reached out, his gloved fingers brushing a stray strand of straight black hair from my temple. I flinched, but I didn't pull away. The touch was hot, almost scalding, a reminder of the Avarosian blood running through his veins. "The local syndicates are asking questions about a mortal girl with Cardiff roots and an unusual immunity to low-level curses. My competitors are curious." "Then tell them I'm dead. You’re the big, bad information broker. Lie." "I only lie when the truth is less profitable." His hand slid down to my jaw, his thumb tracing the line of my throat. My pulse hammered against his palm, a frantic, trapped thing. "They are offering a substantial bounty for Malphora’s descendant." I pulled back, my spine hitting the edge of the laminate counter. "Don't call me that." "It is your name, Rory." "My name is Aurora. My father was an Irish barrister, my mother taught secondary school history. I am human." "A comforting delusion." Lucien’s lips ticked upward into a cold, beautiful smile. He leaned in, trapping me between his arms, the scent of expensive tobacco and burnt sugar wrapping around me. "But we both know why you ran from Cardiff. We both know what happened to Evan’s hands when he tried to strike you that last night. It wasn't human strength that shattered his fingers." "It was self-defence." "It was a kinetic burst of pure, unrefined demonic wrath." His voice dropped to a dark, velvet whisper. "Beautiful. Messy. Terrifying." "Leave, Lucien." "I cannot." "Because of the bounty?" I challenged, my chin lifting. "Are you here to collect?" He leaned down, his breath warm against my ear. "I am here to protect my investment." "I am not your investment." "No?" He lifted his left hand, slowly pulling off his leather glove, finger by finger. Beneath, his palm was etched with a faint, glowing sigil—the mark of a blood pact we had struck in a damp cellar beneath Cardiff Castle, whispered in a language I hadn't understood but my soul had recognized. "You bound your safety to my shadow, Rory. Every time your heart races in fear, my blood sings. It has been a very noisy evening." "I was delivering duck pancakes to a coven in Hackney," I muttered, looking away from the glowing mark. "They didn't want to tip." "And the shadow-stalker waiting for you in the alley behind the restaurant?" My breath hitched. "How did you—" "I killed him." Lucien’s tone was entirely conversational, as if he were discussing the weather we had both agreed not to mention. "He was sloppy. Used French steel, which I found insulting. But he had your scent. He had a lock of your hair in his pocket." My hand instinctively went to my collarbone. A small section of my black hair felt shorter, snipped. I hadn't even felt it. A cold sweat broke out across my back, the reality of the hunt crashing through my anger. "They're getting closer, aren't they?" I whispered. "They are at the gates, Rory." Lucien stepped back, giving me room, though the sudden absence of his heat felt like a physical blow. He tapped his cane against the floor once. "The flat on Brick Lane is no longer safe. The wardings Eva placed on this door are laughable. A basic imp could chew through them in minutes." "She tried her best." "Her best is academic. The real world is... bloodier." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, heavy silver key, tossing it onto the kitchen counter. It slid past my mug, stopping against a dry loaf of bread. "My carriage is downstairs." "Your carriage? What is this, 1890?" "A Mercedes, actually. Black. Armoured." He turned toward the door, his charcoal coat swirling. "Bring the cat. I dislike feline dander, but I dislike your tears more should the local ghouls decide to snack on him." "I'm not going with you, Luc. We're done. We had a deal, you broke it." "I kept you alive." He stopped at the door, his hand on the deadbolt. He didn't look back, but his posture was tense, a coiled spring of half-demon energy. "That was the deal. If you stay here tonight, you will be dead by midnight. And I will have to clean the carpet." "You're an insufferable, arrogant—" The window behind me shattered. A heavy, jagged paving stone tore through the glass, raining sharp shards across the kitchen linoleum. A thick, putrid black smoke began to pour through the broken pane, smelling of sulfur and rotting meat. From the street below, a guttural, multi-voiced roar echoed, shaking the thin walls of the flat. Ptolemy screeched, bolting under the sofa. Lucien didn't even flinch. He slowly turned head, the amber eye gleaming in the darkening room as the smoke began to choke out the light. "As I said," Lucien murmured, drawing the thin, glistening blade from the top of his ivory cane with a soft *shhhk*. "Midnight is coming early."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien’s lips ticked upward [upward]"
1"Lucien stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.656
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.066
81.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count2
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"throbbed"
2"determined"
3"navigated"
4"chill"
5"reminder"
6"tracing"
7"pulse"
8"comforting"
9"shattered"
10"velvet"
11"whisper"
12"etched"
13"echoed"
14"gleaming"
15"glistening"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1346
ratio0.001
matches
0"shhhk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount775
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
East1
End1
Right1
Lucien8
Eva2
French1
Mesopotamian1
Avarosian1
Cardiff1
Castle1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"End"
4"Cardiff"
5"Castle"
globalScore0.984
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1346
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean26.39
std22.24
cv0.843
sampleLengths
015
156
25
352
415
538
679
735
852
94
102
1141
126
137
1436
1559
1613
1766
1812
1943
2016
215
2219
2365
243
2521
262
272
2814
2916
305
3177
3223
3312
346
3547
3639
377
3859
394
4044
416
4236
4315
4452
454
465
4750
486
4925
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"were discussing"
85.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences99
ratio0.02
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless, pitiless black—swept over me."
1"Beneath, his palm was etched with a faint, glowing sigil—the mark of a blood pact we had struck in a damp cellar beneath Cardiff Castle, whispered in a language I hadn't understood but my soul had recognized."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount782
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"small, heavy silver key,"
2"thick, putrid black smoke"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024296675191815855
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0076726342710997444
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.6
std8.18
cv0.602
sampleLengths
015
123
222
311
45
520
616
716
815
913
1019
116
127
1319
1430
1523
1611
1721
183
1925
2027
214
222
2317
2413
2511
266
277
2812
299
3015
3132
3217
3310
3413
3519
367
3716
3824
3912
4024
4110
429
4312
444
455
4619
4712
4819
4934
62.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42424242424242425
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences57
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
1"I blocks the doorway, my"
2"He stepped forward, not waiting"
3"I had a choice: stand"
4"I stepped back, cursing the"
5"He navigated the cramped room"
6"I slammed the door, the"
7"He turned, resting both hands"
8"I marched into the narrow"
9"I grabbed a chipped mug,"
10"He followed me, his presence"
11"He stood too close, the"
12"He reached out, his gloved"
13"I flinched, but I didn't"
14"His hand slid down to"
15"My pulse hammered against his"
16"I pulled back, my spine"
17"He leaned in, trapping me"
18"His voice dropped to a"
19"I challenged, my chin lifting"
ratio0.579
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
1"A sleek, tailored charcoal suit"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
3"I blocks the doorway, my"
4"He stepped forward, not waiting"
5"The tip of his cane"
6"I had a choice: stand"
7"I stepped back, cursing the"
8"Eva’s flat was a claustrophobic"
9"The rich, heavy aroma of"
10"Ptolemy, Eva's fat tabby cat,"
11"Lucien murmured, his French accent"
12"He navigated the cramped room"
13"I slammed the door, the"
14"He turned, resting both hands"
15"The amber eye caught the"
16"I marched into the narrow"
17"I grabbed a chipped mug,"
18"He followed me, his presence"
19"He stood too close, the"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He stepped, not waiting for an invitation"
1"Lucien murmured, his French accent rolling over the sarcasm"
2"He followed, his presence swallowing the oxygen in the tiny kitchen"
3"His hand slid, his thumb tracing the line of my throat"
4"He turned, his charcoal coat swirling"
68.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"I challenged (challenge)"
2"I muttered (mutter)"
3"I whispered (whisper)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.164
76.9150%