Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25X3D8SFKNW2BX1W3XK1NA

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.018623
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain-soaked ferns gave way to a carpet of bluebell-like wildflowers that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent milkiness. The heavy London humidity evaporated, replaced by air that tasted of spun sugar and crushed pine needles. Rory hesitated at the threshold, her boots hovering over the borderline where the dark Richmond mud ended and the silver-veined soil of the Fae Grove began. Her fingers crept to her chest, tapping the thumbnail-sized crimson gem of the Heartstone Pendant. It lay quiet against her collarbone, lacking the heat that usually signaled a tear to Hel, but the skin on the back of her neck prickled all the same. "Step lively, mortal," a voice hissed from the shadows of her own jacket sleeve. "The threshold folds behind us. I do not fancy being pinched in half by a closing hedge." Nyx glided out of Rory’s shadow, their humanoid silhouette stretching upward until they stood over six feet tall. Dark tendrils of living smoke drifted from their shoulders, dissipating into the warm amber light that filtered down from an unseen canopy. "There's no hedge, Nyx," Rory said. "Not one you can see." Two faint, violet points of light flared within the Shade’s featureless face. "But the air here has teeth." Rory took the step. Her boot sank into the velvet moss. Weirdly, the ground yielded like a thick mattress, absorbing the sound of her footstep entirely. Behind her, the mundane rumble of the Richmond Park dual carriageway died instantly. A heavy, ringing silence descended, broken only by the glass-like tinkling of unseen water. Directly ahead, ancient oak tree trunks rose like ribs from the earth, but they weren't wood. The bark shimmered with the pearlescent sheen of abalone shells. Strips of pale silver moss hung from the branches like tattered lace, drifting in a breeze Rory couldn't feel on her skin. "Look at the sky," Rory whispered, her breath hitching. Through the weave of pearlescent branches, the heavens weren't the bruised gray of a London afternoon. A twilight of deep indigo and violet stretched infinitely, dusted with stars that drifted and swirled in slow, lazy currents like ink in water. "Time is a loose thread here," Nyx said, their voice dropping to a low, dry rustle like dead leaves sliding across stone. "An hour of your breathing might cost you a decade in the world you left. Or perhaps you will return before you even departed. The Court of the exiles cares little for clocks." Rory reached down, her fingers brushing the hilt of the leaf-shaped dagger tucked into her belt. The Fae-Forged Blade remained reassuringly cold, its moonsilver surface catching the faint light of the drifting stars above. She pulled it an inch from its sheath, watching the metal ripple with a faint, liquid luminescence that mirrored the surrounding flora. "Isolde is here," Rory said, pushing past a hanging curtain of silver moss. "She has to be." "The Seer does not keep appointments," Nyx murmured, their form widening, spilling across the mossy floor like spilled ink to scout the path ahead. "She simply exists where the probability of a guest is highest." They moved deeper into the grove. The air grew thicker, carrying the heavy, intoxicating scent of overripe peaches and old parchment—a strange, sweet combination that made Rory’s stomach rumble. It reminded her of the tales of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, though there was a sharp, medicinal edge to this fragrance that kept her on guard. With every ten paces, the wildflowers changed color. First milk-white, then a deep, bruised purple, and finally a vibrant crimson that matched the stone around Rory's neck. The petals didn't just grow; they pulsed in a slow, synchronized rhythm, like dozens of tiny hearts beating under the soil. "Do you hear that?" Rory stopped, her hand freezing on a moss-covered boulder. "I hear the friction of magic against the mortal skin," Nyx replied, hovering near a cluster of giant ferns that uncoiled their fronds like waking serpents. "And the hunger of things that watch from the roots." "No, it’s... singing. Or crying." Rory leaned closer to the boulder. It wasn't stone at all, but a massive, calcified skull of some many-horned beast, half-buried in the soil. Inside the hollow eye sockets, tiny, translucent moths with wings like stained glass fluttered in tight circles. The faint vibration of their wings produced a high, harmonic drone that resonated in Rory’s teeth. She reached out, a strange curiosity drawing her fingertips toward the bone. "Touch nothing," Nyx warned, a shadow-tendril snapping out to wrap gently around Rory's wrist, pulling her back. "The things in this place survive by mimicking the harmless. That skull might well decide your hand belongs in its mouth." Rory shivering, pulling her hand back to her chest. "Right. Thanks." The deeper they walked, the more the forest seemed to lean inward, as if the trees were crowding together to peer at the intruders. Rory felt the distinct sensation of eyes on her—not from the branches, but from the very ground beneath her feet. The silver veins in the soil seemed to branch out like capillaries, pulsing with a faint, rhythmic glow whenever her boots pressed down. Then, the trees parted. They emerged into a wide, perfectly circular clearing of white sand that sparkled like crushed diamonds. In the center of the clearing stood a ring of massive, rough-hewn standing stones. They weren't made of rock, but of petrified, ancient oak, black as coal and polished to a mirror shine. The air within the ring shimmered, a faint distortion visible only if Rory squinted. It looked like heat rising from a summer tarmac—the telltale sign of the Veil. "We are at the edge," Nyx whispered, their form shrinking closer to Rory's heels, as if intimidated by the sheer weight of the magic pooling in the clearing. "The boundary between what is, and what can never be." Rory took a slow step onto the white sand. Unlike the moss, the sand was freezing cold, the chill seeping rapidly through the thick soles of her boots. A figure sat on a low, petrified root at the far side of the stone ring. The woman’s silver hair reached her waist, falling in straight, heavy sheets that seemed to absorb the twilight glow from above. She wore a simple, unadorned gown of pale grey that bled seamlessly into the shadows around her. Her eyes, when she raised her head, were a striking, pale lavender—entirely devoid of pupils or irises, yet sharp enough to pin Rory to the spot. Isolde Varga did not rise, but as she shifted her weight, the sand beneath her remained perfectly undisturbed. She left no footprints. "The daughter of Cardiff brings the cold metal of my sisters back to its source," Isolde said, her voice carrying the quality of wind chimes vibrating in a storm. She did not blink. "And she brings a shadow that once wore a scholar's robes." Nyx bowed low in the darkness, their violet eyes flickering. "Seer." Rory took a breath, stepping fully into the circle of standing stones. The air grew instantly thin, making her chest ache as she struggled to draw oxygen. "Isolde. We need to know about the winter solstice. The Wardens say the Veil is shifting." The Half-Fae woman tilted her head, a faint, cryptic smile touching her pale lips. She reached down, picking up a handful of the sparkling white sand, letting it pour through her fingers like water. It didn't fall to the ground; instead, the grains floated upward, joining the swirling current of stars in the violet sky above. "The gate of Dymas opens when the belly is full and the throat is dry," Isolde said, her lavender eyes locking onto Rory's face. "The Feast of the Prince begins, and the lock is made of bone. You have the key around your neck, little bird, but you look for a door that has already ceased to exist."
created_at"2026-05-20T07:51:47.886Z" 5/20/2026, 7:51:47 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1325
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"synchronized"
count1
6
word"fluttered"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"silence"
2"shimmered"
3"stomach"
4"pulsed"
5"synchronized"
6"fluttered"
7"resonated"
8"rhythmic"
9"weight"
10"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1321
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1058
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond2
Fae3
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Nyx7
Rory22
Two1
Shade1
Park1
Through1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas1
Gluttony1
Veil1
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Isolde3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Blade"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Hel"
5"Shade"
6"Park"
globalScore0.46
windowScore0.5
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like heat rising from a summer tar"
1"sheets that seemed to absorb the twilight glow from above"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.757
wordCount1321
matches
0"not from the branches, but from the very ground beneath her feet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.7
std19.13
cv0.536
sampleLengths
034
170
231
340
46
523
653
748
89
940
1055
1156
1217
1335
1456
1548
1613
1736
185
1957
2012
2138
2211
2367
244
2549
2628
2738
2828
2916
3064
3122
3244
3311
3443
3556
3658
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"were crowding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences83
ratio0.072
matches
0"The air grew thicker, carrying the heavy, intoxicating scent of overripe peaches and old parchment—a strange, sweet combination that made Rory’s stomach rumble."
1"The petals didn't just grow; they pulsed in a slow, synchronized rhythm, like dozens of tiny hearts beating under the soil."
2"Rory felt the distinct sensation of eyes on her—not from the branches, but from the very ground beneath her feet."
3"It looked like heat rising from a summer tarmac—the telltale sign of the Veil."
4"Her eyes, when she raised her head, were a striking, pale lavender—entirely devoid of pupils or irises, yet sharp enough to pin Rory to the spot."
5"It didn't fall to the ground; instead, the grains floated upward, joining the swirling current of stars in the violet sky above."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.030726256983240222
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01675977653631285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean15.92
std7.31
cv0.46
sampleLengths
017
117
226
315
429
514
617
718
822
96
1017
116
124
137
1415
1513
1614
1716
1810
1922
209
2116
2224
2322
2433
2516
2618
2722
2813
294
3024
3111
326
3323
3427
358
3619
3721
3813
3926
4010
415
426
4318
4417
4516
4612
4717
4821
499
73.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4457831325301205
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Weirdly, the ground yielded like"
1"Directly ahead, ancient oak tree"
2"Then, the trees parted."
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her fingers crept to her"
1"It lay quiet against her"
2"Her boot sank into the"
3"She pulled it an inch"
4"They moved deeper into the"
5"It reminded her of the"
6"It wasn't stone at all,"
7"She reached out, a strange"
8"They emerged into a wide,"
9"They weren't made of rock,"
10"It looked like heat rising"
11"She wore a simple, unadorned"
12"Her eyes, when she raised"
13"She left no footprints."
14"She did not blink."
15"She reached down, picking up"
16"It didn't fall to the"
ratio0.25
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences68
matches
0"The heavy London humidity evaporated,"
1"Rory hesitated at the threshold,"
2"Her fingers crept to her"
3"It lay quiet against her"
4"a voice hissed from the"
5"Nyx glided out of Rory’s"
6"Rory took the step."
7"Her boot sank into the"
8"A heavy, ringing silence descended,"
9"The bark shimmered with the"
10"Rory whispered, her breath hitching"
11"A twilight of deep indigo"
12"Nyx said, their voice dropping"
13"Rory reached down, her fingers"
14"The Fae-Forged Blade remained reassuringly"
15"She pulled it an inch"
16"Rory said, pushing past a"
17"Nyx murmured, their form widening,"
18"They moved deeper into the"
19"The air grew thicker, carrying"
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Rain-soaked ferns gave way to a carpet of bluebell-like wildflowers that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent milkiness."
1"Dark tendrils of living smoke drifted from their shoulders, dissipating into the warm amber light that filtered down from an unseen canopy."
2"A twilight of deep indigo and violet stretched infinitely, dusted with stars that drifted and swirled in slow, lazy currents like ink in water."
3"She pulled it an inch from its sheath, watching the metal ripple with a faint, liquid luminescence that mirrored the surrounding flora."
4"The air grew thicker, carrying the heavy, intoxicating scent of overripe peaches and old parchment—a strange, sweet combination that made Rory’s stomach rumble."
5"It reminded her of the tales of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, though there was a sharp, medicinal edge to this fragrance that kept her on guard."
6"First milk-white, then a deep, bruised purple, and finally a vibrant crimson that matched the stone around Rory's neck."
7"The faint vibration of their wings produced a high, harmonic drone that resonated in Rory’s teeth."
8"The deeper they walked, the more the forest seemed to lean inward, as if the trees were crowding together to peer at the intruders."
9"They emerged into a wide, perfectly circular clearing of white sand that sparkled like crushed diamonds."
10"The woman’s silver hair reached her waist, falling in straight, heavy sheets that seemed to absorb the twilight glow from above."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory whispered, her breath hitching"
1"Rory stopped, her hand freezing on a moss-covered boulder"
2"Isolde said, her lavender eyes locking onto Rory's face"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"a voice hissed (hiss)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.37
75.9636%