| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "synchronized" | | 6 | "fluttered" | | 7 | "resonated" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1321 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1058 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 22 | | Two | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Through | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.46 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like heat rising from a summer tar" | | 1 | "sheets that seemed to absorb the twilight glow from above" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.757 | | wordCount | 1321 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the branches, but from the very ground beneath her feet" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.7 | | std | 19.13 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 56 | | 36 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thicker, carrying the heavy, intoxicating scent of overripe peaches and old parchment—a strange, sweet combination that made Rory’s stomach rumble." | | 1 | "The petals didn't just grow; they pulsed in a slow, synchronized rhythm, like dozens of tiny hearts beating under the soil." | | 2 | "Rory felt the distinct sensation of eyes on her—not from the branches, but from the very ground beneath her feet." | | 3 | "It looked like heat rising from a summer tarmac—the telltale sign of the Veil." | | 4 | "Her eyes, when she raised her head, were a striking, pale lavender—entirely devoid of pupils or irises, yet sharp enough to pin Rory to the spot." | | 5 | "It didn't fall to the ground; instead, the grains floated upward, joining the swirling current of stars in the violet sky above." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1074 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.030726256983240222 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01675977653631285 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 15.92 | | std | 7.31 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 73.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4457831325301205 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Weirdly, the ground yielded like" | | 1 | "Directly ahead, ancient oak tree" | | 2 | "Then, the trees parted." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers crept to her" | | 1 | "It lay quiet against her" | | 2 | "Her boot sank into the" | | 3 | "She pulled it an inch" | | 4 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "It reminded her of the" | | 6 | "It wasn't stone at all," | | 7 | "She reached out, a strange" | | 8 | "They emerged into a wide," | | 9 | "They weren't made of rock," | | 10 | "It looked like heat rising" | | 11 | "She wore a simple, unadorned" | | 12 | "Her eyes, when she raised" | | 13 | "She left no footprints." | | 14 | "She did not blink." | | 15 | "She reached down, picking up" | | 16 | "It didn't fall to the" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 62.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy London humidity evaporated," | | 1 | "Rory hesitated at the threshold," | | 2 | "Her fingers crept to her" | | 3 | "It lay quiet against her" | | 4 | "a voice hissed from the" | | 5 | "Nyx glided out of Rory’s" | | 6 | "Rory took the step." | | 7 | "Her boot sank into the" | | 8 | "A heavy, ringing silence descended," | | 9 | "The bark shimmered with the" | | 10 | "Rory whispered, her breath hitching" | | 11 | "A twilight of deep indigo" | | 12 | "Nyx said, their voice dropping" | | 13 | "Rory reached down, her fingers" | | 14 | "The Fae-Forged Blade remained reassuringly" | | 15 | "She pulled it an inch" | | 16 | "Rory said, pushing past a" | | 17 | "Nyx murmured, their form widening," | | 18 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The air grew thicker, carrying" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain-soaked ferns gave way to a carpet of bluebell-like wildflowers that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent milkiness." | | 1 | "Dark tendrils of living smoke drifted from their shoulders, dissipating into the warm amber light that filtered down from an unseen canopy." | | 2 | "A twilight of deep indigo and violet stretched infinitely, dusted with stars that drifted and swirled in slow, lazy currents like ink in water." | | 3 | "She pulled it an inch from its sheath, watching the metal ripple with a faint, liquid luminescence that mirrored the surrounding flora." | | 4 | "The air grew thicker, carrying the heavy, intoxicating scent of overripe peaches and old parchment—a strange, sweet combination that made Rory’s stomach rumble." | | 5 | "It reminded her of the tales of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, though there was a sharp, medicinal edge to this fragrance that kept her on guard." | | 6 | "First milk-white, then a deep, bruised purple, and finally a vibrant crimson that matched the stone around Rory's neck." | | 7 | "The faint vibration of their wings produced a high, harmonic drone that resonated in Rory’s teeth." | | 8 | "The deeper they walked, the more the forest seemed to lean inward, as if the trees were crowding together to peer at the intruders." | | 9 | "They emerged into a wide, perfectly circular clearing of white sand that sparkled like crushed diamonds." | | 10 | "The woman’s silver hair reached her waist, falling in straight, heavy sheets that seemed to absorb the twilight glow from above." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, her breath hitching" | | 1 | "Rory stopped, her hand freezing on a moss-covered boulder" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes locking onto Rory's face" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.37 | |