| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1325 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "sentinel" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1323 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1307 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | November | 1 | | July | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "July" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trapped pulse" | | 1 | "looked like large, pale moths" | | 2 | "vacuum that seemed to draw the very air out of Aurora's lungs" | | 3 | "felt like lead, rooted to the soil of t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1323 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 25.44 | | std | 16.64 | | cv | 0.654 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 60 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 56 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 52 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "were swaying" | | 1 | "were stepping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The next, a cloying sweetness flooded her nostrils—clover, crushed mint, and the sharp, metallic tang of ozone." | | 1 | "Not all of them—just a single line of flowers, bending one by one as if an invisible foot were stepping lightly through the bed." | | 2 | "It didn't step out of the darkness; the darkness simply unfolded to reveal it." | | 3 | "The wildflowers beneath its feet didn't bend; they blackened and curled into ash, leaving a trail of soot on the vibrant green." | | 4 | "It didn't just warm her now; it tore at her, pulling her forward toward the center of the circle by the chain." | | 5 | "The words didn't come through her ears; they vibrated in her teeth, sharp and metallic." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1315 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "translucent, revealing wet, gray organs" | | 1 | "inside glass-thin carapaces." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.02737642585551331 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006844106463878327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.81 | | std | 6.33 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 38.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.25892857142857145 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just grey bark and peeling" | | 1 | "Even the wind through the" | | 2 | "Just smooth, pearlescent plates where" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 71.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She ignored the scrape against" | | 1 | "She pressed a thumb against" | | 2 | "It felt like a trapped" | | 3 | "She needed answers about the" | | 4 | "Her boots sank into damp" | | 5 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 6 | "She swung the torch beam" | | 7 | "Her voice sounded flat, stripped" | | 8 | "She kept moving, guided by" | | 9 | "It burnedhotter now, almost scalding" | | 10 | "She took a breath, her" | | 11 | "she muttered, her fingers tightening" | | 12 | "She pressed on, her stride" | | 13 | "They weren't carved, but nature" | | 14 | "She took a step forward," | | 15 | "She looked back." | | 16 | "Her wrist throbbed." | | 17 | "She looked down at the" | | 18 | "She shone the torch down." | | 19 | "Her heel caught on a" |
| | ratio | 0.371 | |
| 50.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora squeezed through the fissure," | | 2 | "She ignored the scrape against" | | 3 | "The hum of the A3" | | 4 | "She pressed a thumb against" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 6 | "It felt like a trapped" | | 7 | "The warmth seeped through her" | | 8 | "She needed answers about the" | | 9 | "The cryptic note left on" | | 10 | "Her boots sank into damp" | | 11 | "Dew soaked through the canvas" | | 12 | "The air changed." | | 13 | "The next, a cloying sweetness" | | 14 | "The temperature plummeted." | | 15 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 16 | "The forest had gone dead" | | 17 | "She swung the torch beam" | | 18 | "The gnarled oaks looked less" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded flat, stripped" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath plumed in the beam of her torch, a thick white ghost that hung stagnant in the frozen air." | | 1 | "Not all of them—just a single line of flowers, bending one by one as if an invisible foot were stepping lightly through the bed." | | 2 | "The links strained against her neck, choking her, dragging her boots through the crushed bluebells." | | 3 | "The pale things on the trees began to flutter their glass wings, a dry, papery storm that filled the clearing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her fingers tightening around the cold metal of her torch" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |