Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25XCAR3VAS36WEHPCAX21S

Run Details

Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.013893
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater channeled down the collar of Harlow Quinn’s stiff trench coat, cold and persistent. The Soho neon blurred in the puddles, fracturing into shards of electric green and crimson. Up ahead, the silhouette of Tomás Herrera darted past the glowing sign of The Raven’s Nest, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. Harlow pressed a hand against the grip of her Glock, the leather strap of her watch biting into her left wrist as she accelerated. Eighteen years on the force taught her the rhythm of a flight; Herrera was running with the desperate, erratic gait of a man who knew exactly what waited for him in the dark. "Stop, Herrera!" Her voice cut through the hiss of tires on wet asphalt. Herrera didn’t flinch. He threaded through a pair of late-night revellers, shoving them into the brick facade of a closed boutique. Harlow vaulted a discarded wooden crate, her boots striking the greasy pavement with military precision. The chase veered left, plunging into the labyrinthine alleys of Camden. Harlow squeezed her eyes against the stinging rain. She had been hunting this disgraced paramedic for three months, ever since a corpse with unnatural surgical sutures vanished from the mortuary. Tommy Herrera held the needle, and she wanted the thread. Herrera slid around a corner, his hand grasping his collar—clutching that silver Saint Christopher medallion he always wore. He vanished down a stairwell. Harlow reached the lip of the concrete descent. The steps led into the belly of an abandoned Tube station, the iron gate pulled half-open and warped by crowbars. A stench drifted from the throat of the tunnel—rust, wet fur, and a sickly sweet aroma of burning copper. Her partner, Morris, had chased a lead into a hole like this three years ago. He came out in a body bag with no blood left in his veins and a coroner’s report that read *heart failure*. Harlow checked the street behind her. Empty. The rain hammered a relentless, hollow beat against the metal dustbins. She flicked safety off her weapon. She slipped through the gap in the iron gate. The darkness of the defunct station swallowed the rain, leaving only the sound of her own breathing and the distant, rhythmic *scritch-scratch* of leather soles on grit. Harlow descended. The damp air grew thick, pressing against her lungs. At the bottom of the escalator shaft, the blackness gave way to a flickering, amber luminescence. Harlow pressed her back against the tiled wall, soot smudging her shoulder. She peered around the curved edge of the platform tunnel. The abandoned tracks had been boarded over with rough timber planks. Beneath the soot-stained arches of the old Camden line stretched a bazaar of the impossible. The Veil Market. Harlow’s hand tightened on her gun. This wasn't a gathering of pickpockets or drug runners. Hundreds of figures moved through the subterranean gloom, lit by sputtering tallow candles and jars of bioluminescent lichen. A man with skin the color of bruised plums shifted a tray of dried, twitching animal parts. Further down, a woman whose eyes caught the light like a cat's argued over a vial of bubbling silver liquid. Herrera stood thirty yards away, bargaining with a towering figure draped in a patchwork coat of crow feathers. He fumbled in his pocket, drawing out a small, pale object—a bone token. He pressed it into the feather-merchant’s palm. Harlow stepped from the shadow of the tunnel, her boots crunching on broken glass. "Herrera." The paramedic stiffened. He turned slowly, raising his hands, though his fingers still twitched near his collar. The olive skin of his face looked grey under the chemical flare of a nearby stall. "Detective Quinn," Herrera said, his voice surprisingly steady amidst the low hum of the market. "You really shouldn't have come down here. This isn't your precinct." "You're under arrest, Tommy. Obstruction, desecration of a corpse, practicing medicine without a license. Take your pick." A couple of nearby shoppers—things wearing heavy hoods that didn't quite hide the elongation of their jaws—stopped to look. Cold sweat pooled between Harlow's shoulder blades. The air felt charged, like the moments before a lightning strike. "You think this is about a license?" Herrera took a slow step backward, his boots hovering near the edge of a deep pit where some dark, viscous fluid churned. "I save lives, Harlow. The lives your system ignores because they don't fit into your little black-and-white reports." "Morris didn't fit into a report either," Harlow said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "But he ended up in a drawer anyway. What did you do to him?" Herrera's warm brown eyes softened, a flash of genuine pity crossing his features. "Nothing. I wasn't there. But if you don't put that gun away, the people who *were* there are going to notice you." The crowd was shifting. The murmured bartering had died down, replaced by a clicking, scraping sound of claws on stone and the rustle of heavy fabrics. Multiple pairs of eyes, reflecting unnatural colors, locked onto Harlow's polished silver badge. "I'm taking you in," Harlow reiterated, aiming the barrel squarely at Herrera's chest. "Walk. Now." Herrera looked past her shoulder, his expression suddenly tightening. "Too late." A heavy step echoed from the darkness of the tracks behind Harlow. A creature, easily seven feet tall with skin like wet limestone and fingers that ended in jagged, calcified points, stepped into the light of the market stall. It sniffed the air, its nostrils flaring as it caught the scent of gun oil and fresh rain. "No authority here, blue-coat," the creature rumbled, its voice like grinding tectonic plates. Harlow didn't lower her weapon. She adjusted her stance, her sharp jaw setting into a hard line. She was outnumbered, outmatched, and standing in the heart of a nightmare she had spent three years trying to deny. "Step back," Harlow warned the giant, though her own heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. Herrera glanced between Harlow and the approaching brute. He reached into his medical kit, his fingers wrapping around a glass cylinder filled with a dense, violet vapor. "I told you, Detective. You don't belong in the dark."
created_at"2026-05-20T07:51:57.023Z" 5/20/2026, 7:51:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1033
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1033
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"churned"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"facade"
2"flicked"
3"rhythmic"
4"gloom"
5"amidst"
6"charged"
7"churned"
8"whisper"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1028
ratio0.004
matches
0"heart failure"
1"scritch-scratch"
2"were"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount903
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow18
Quinn1
Soho1
Tomás1
Herrera12
Raven1
Nest1
Glock1
Camden2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.503
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite hide the elongation of their jaws—stopped to look"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1028
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
96.28% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean33.16
std16.15
cv0.487
sampleLengths
052
157
22
347
451
523
647
737
833
938
1038
1126
123
1370
1438
1515
1633
1726
1817
1937
2047
2130
2235
2339
2415
2511
2657
2713
2837
2917
3037
94.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"been boarded"
1"was outnumbered"
97.44% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was running"
1"was shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences78
ratio0.064
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force taught her the rhythm of a flight; Herrera was running with the desperate, erratic gait of a man who knew exactly what waited for him in the dark."
1"Herrera slid around a corner, his hand grasping his collar—clutching that silver Saint Christopher medallion he always wore."
2"A stench drifted from the throat of the tunnel—rust, wet fur, and a sickly sweet aroma of burning copper."
3"He fumbled in his pocket, drawing out a small, pale object—a bone token."
4"A couple of nearby shoppers—things wearing heavy hoods that didn't quite hide the elongation of their jaws—stopped to look."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount912
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01864035087719298
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009868421052631578
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.18
std6.97
cv0.529
sampleLengths
014
115
223
324
433
52
611
73
818
915
1011
118
1222
1310
1418
155
168
1720
1819
1915
2022
216
221
2311
246
259
2627
272
289
2916
3012
3110
3211
3315
343
356
369
3718
3817
3920
4018
4113
427
4314
441
453
4614
4716
4815
4911
58.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3974358974358974
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners31
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Further down, a woman whose"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences66
matches
0"Her voice cut through the"
1"He threaded through a pair"
2"She had been hunting this"
3"He vanished down a stairwell."
4"Her partner, Morris, had chased"
5"He came out in a"
6"She flicked safety off her"
7"She slipped through the gap"
8"She peered around the curved"
9"He fumbled in his pocket,"
10"He pressed it into the"
11"He turned slowly, raising his"
12"It sniffed the air, its"
13"She adjusted her stance, her"
14"She was outnumbered, outmatched, and"
15"He reached into his medical"
ratio0.242
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rainwater channeled down the collar"
1"The Soho neon blurred in"
2"Harlow pressed a hand against"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"Herrera didn’t flinch."
5"He threaded through a pair"
6"Harlow vaulted a discarded wooden"
7"The chase veered left, plunging"
8"Harlow squeezed her eyes against"
9"She had been hunting this"
10"Tommy Herrera held the needle,"
11"Herrera slid around a corner,"
12"He vanished down a stairwell."
13"Harlow reached the lip of"
14"The steps led into the"
15"A stench drifted from the"
16"Her partner, Morris, had chased"
17"He came out in a"
18"Harlow checked the street behind"
19"The rain hammered a relentless,"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force taught her the rhythm of a flight; Herrera was running with the desperate, erratic gait of a man who knew exactly what waited for hi…"
1"He came out in a body bag with no blood left in his veins and a coroner’s report that read *heart failure*."
2"A couple of nearby shoppers—things wearing heavy hoods that didn't quite hide the elongation of their jaws—stopped to look."
3"A creature, easily seven feet tall with skin like wet limestone and fingers that ended in jagged, calcified points, stepped into the light of the market stall."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.125
79.8715%