Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25YT0SQZ7EQFPX00VTTX1H

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.018528
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The top deadbolt scraped against its brass housing, a grueling, three-part metallic screech that always signaled Eva's sticky lock. Aurora Carter froze, her fingers hovering over her cracked laptop screen. Ptolemy, curled into a dense orange spiral on a stack of seventeenth-century demonology texts, twitched one ear but didn't open his eyes. The middle lock clicked. The bottom one, the heavy iron latch, yielded with a heavy thud. "Eva, if you forgot your keys again, I'm charging you rent in manual labor," Rory muttered, sliding off the mismatched corduroy sofa. She swung the door inward. The scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood, ozone, and the faint, bitter metallic tang that clung to anyone who spent too much time in the deeper channels of the London Underground. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim, curry-scented hallway of the Brick Lane tenement. Rain ran down the gutters of his tailored charcoal overcoat, pooling around his leather oxfords. The ivory handle of his cane caught the weak bulb light of the landing, the carved dragon head gleaming like polished bone. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning the color of skimmed milk. "You're dead," she said. "An exaggeration propagated by those who owe me money." His voice rolled out, smooth as oiled silk, the Marseilles lilt dragging over the vowels. He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a fathomless, light-swallowing black. "You changed your hair." "You died in Brussels, Lucien." "And yet, here I am, dripping on your linoleum." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation, his cane tapping once against the threshold. Rory didn't budge. She braced her shoulder against the frame, blocking the narrow entryway. The heat radiating off him defied the November chill, a reminder of the half-blood lineage he usually kept tucked beneath his Savile Row exterior. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic, erratic rhythm that pissed her off. "Three months," she said, her voice dropping into a dangerous, quiet register. "No calls. No messages through Silas. Just a bloody crime scene in a canal-side warehouse and a silver cufflink left in a pool of dried blood." Lucien’s gaze flicked down to her left wrist, where the small, crescent-shaped childhood scar stood out white against her pale skin. He reached out, a gloved finger hovering just millimeters above the mark before he caught himself and dropped his hand. "The cufflink was a plant," he said, his amber eye narrowing slightly. "A clumsy one at that. I expected better from you, Rory. You always had an eye for detail." "I had an eye for a funeral shroud. I almost bought one." She stepped back, more out of a sudden, suffocating need for air than any gesture of welcome. Lucien slipped past her, the scent of him immediately invading the cramped flat. He scanned the room, taking in the chaotic towers of grimoires, the discarded takeout containers from the Golden Empress, and Ptolemy, who finally opened one eye, hissed softly at the demonic signature in the air, and went back to sleep. "Charming," Lucien murmured, resting both hands on the ivory crook of his cane. "Still living out of cardboard boxes and old paper." "It's Eva's place." Rory slammed the door, throwing all three deadbolts with deliberate, violent jerks. "And don't change the subject. Why are you here?" "I needed a place where the local syndicates wouldn't think to look." He shed his damp overcoat, draping it over a stack of leather-bound folios with a negligence that made Rory’s jaw clench. Beneath it, his charcoal suit sat immaculate, conforming to the broad line of his shoulders. "The Avaros clan has placed a rather hefty bounty on my head. Apparently, my father's relatives possess a very poor sense of humor regarding missing relics." "So you drag the target straight to my doorstep." "To the one person in London who doesn't have a price." Lucien took a slow step toward her, the space between them shrinking until she had to tilt her chin up to maintain eye contact. "Or did you sell my secrets while I was gone, *ma petite*?" The French epithet stung, a sharp needle of familiarity that pierced through her anger. The last time he had called her that, they had been pressed against the brickwork of an alleyway in Soho, breath mingling in the winter air, his hands hot against her waist before everything went sideways. Before the lies, the disappearing acts, and the sudden, violent rupture that sent him back across the Channel. "I should have," Rory whispered, her blue eyes flashing. "I could have bought my own restaurant with the bounty money. I could have gone back to Cardiff." "You hate Cardiff." "I hate you more right now." Lucien’s mouth twitched, a faint, fleeting ghost of a smirk that vanished as quickly as it appeared. He reached out, his bare hand—uncovered now, pale and elegant—stopping just short of her jaw. The heat radiating from his palm made her skin prickle. "You don't," he said softly. "Don't tell me what I feel, Lucien. You don't get that right anymore." Rory grabbed his wrist, intending to fling his hand away, but the moment her fingers wrapped around his skin, the sheer warmth of him anchored her. He didn't pull back. Instead, his thumb swept over the inside of her wrist, brushing the crescent scar. The contact was electric, a sudden, heavy current that settled deep in her chest. "I had to go dark, Rory," he said, his voice losing its playful edge, dropping into a low, gravelly register. "If they knew you were associated with me, if they had even a suspicion of what you mean to me, they wouldn't have just planted a cufflink. They would have sent your head to Silas in a cardboard box." "I can take care of myself." "Against humans, yes. Against third-tier demons from the ash plains? No." Lucien leaned in, his breath warm against her temple. "You are clever, Malphora, but you are still terrifyingly fragile." "Don't call me that," she breathed, though she didn't let go of his wrist. Her grip tightened, her nails digging slightly into his skin. "You left me to think you were dead. For twelve weeks. Do you have any idea what that does to a person?" "I have a very good idea." Lucien’s other hand came up, his fingers gently threading through her straight, shoulder-length black hair, tilting her face up. His heterochromatic eyes searched hers, looking for the cracks in her resolve. "It kept me awake in every damp basement from Paris to Brussels. The thought of you sitting in this miserable, drafty flat, cursing my name." "I was cursing your tailoring, actually," she lied, her voice cracking slightly. "Liar." He leaned down, closing the remaining distance between them. The kiss was hungry, a desperate alignment of teeth and lips that had been deferred for far too long. Rory let out a sharp, ragged breath against his mouth, her hands shifting from his wrist to clamp onto the lapels of his suit, pulling him closer until the hard line of his cane pressed between their thighs. Lucien groaned, a low, vibration in his chest, his hands anchoring her hips against his. The half-demon heat in his blood flared, transferring to her, turning the drafty flat stiflingly hot. He tasted of rain and those expensive, clove-scented cigarettes he only smoked when he was anxious. She dragged him deeper into the room, blindly navigating the maze of books. Her heel caught on a stack of encyclopedias, sent them cascading to the floor with a heavy, sliding crash, but neither of them broke the contact. Lucien backed her up until the edge of the kitchen counter bit into her lower back. He parted her lips with his tongue, demanding, possessive, marking his territory in a way that should have angered her, but only fueled the long-buried ache in her stomach. When he finally pulled back, his forehead rested against hers, both of them breathing in short, shallow gasps. His amber eye looked almost gold in the shadows, glowing with an unholy intensity. "You're still a bastard," Rory whispered, her fingers clinging to his shoulders. "And you are still far too forgiving," Lucien replied, his lips brushing her cheek, tracing a path down to the sensitive skin of her neck.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:52:43.813Z" 5/20/2026, 7:52:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.513
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
67.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1398
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"quickly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1398
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"navigating"
count1
14
word"cascading"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"silk"
2"lilt"
3"chill"
4"reminder"
5"flicked"
6"scanned"
7"chaotic"
8"sense of"
9"fleeting"
10"warmth"
11"electric"
12"resolve"
13"navigating"
14"cascading"
15"stomach"
16"intensity"
17"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"was anxious"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1394
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma petite"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1004
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Carter1
London1
Underground1
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseilles1
Rory9
November1
Savile1
Row1
Lucien11
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy2
French1
Soho1
Channel1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"November"
5"Lucien"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Golden"
4"Soho"
5"Channel"
globalScore0.952
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1394
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.3
std19.14
cv0.632
sampleLengths
019
133
216
322
45
530
650
715
84
948
105
1124
1252
1338
1441
1530
1629
1753
1822
1924
2074
219
2247
2368
2427
253
266
2742
285
2939
3032
3159
326
3330
3446
3562
3612
371
389
3957
4047
4139
4245
4332
4412
4525
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"been pressed"
1"been deferred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"The scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood, ozone, and the faint, bitter metallic tang that clung to anyone who spent too much time in the deeper channels of the London Underground."
1"He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a fathomless, light-swallowing black."
2"He reached out, his bare hand—uncovered now, pale and elegant—stopping just short of her jaw."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"faint, bitter metallic tang"
1"dim, curry-scented hallway"
2"small, crescent-shaped childhood"
3"expensive, clove-scented cigarettes"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03434739941118744
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.016683022571148183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean16.8
std9.14
cv0.544
sampleLengths
019
111
222
34
412
522
65
730
813
915
1022
1115
124
1324
1420
154
165
1724
183
1911
2024
2114
2212
2326
2421
2520
2612
2718
2829
2913
3040
3113
329
3315
349
3533
3615
3726
389
3935
4012
4114
4236
4318
449
4518
463
476
4817
4915
59.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3855421686746988
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners32
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Instead, his thumb swept over"
ratio0.016
57.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences64
matches
0"She swung the door inward."
1"His voice rolled out, smooth"
2"He tilted his head, his"
3"He stepped forward, not waiting"
4"She braced her shoulder against"
5"Her heart hammered against her"
6"she said, her voice dropping"
7"He reached out, a gloved"
8"he said, his amber eye"
9"She stepped back, more out"
10"He scanned the room, taking"
11"He shed his damp overcoat,"
12"He reached out, his bare"
13"he said softly"
14"He didn't pull back."
15"he said, his voice losing"
16"she breathed, though she didn't"
17"Her grip tightened, her nails"
18"His heterochromatic eyes searched hers,"
19"she lied, her voice cracking"
ratio0.406
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences64
matches
0"The top deadbolt scraped against"
1"Aurora Carter froze, her fingers"
2"Ptolemy, curled into a dense"
3"The middle lock clicked."
4"The bottom one, the heavy"
5"Rory muttered, sliding off the"
6"She swung the door inward."
7"The scent hit her first—expensive"
8"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
9"Rain ran down the gutters"
10"The ivory handle of his"
11"Rory gripped the edge of"
12"His voice rolled out, smooth"
13"He tilted his head, his"
14"He stepped forward, not waiting"
15"Rory didn't budge."
16"She braced her shoulder against"
17"The heat radiating off him"
18"Her heart hammered against her"
19"she said, her voice dropping"
ratio0.938
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Before the lies, the disappearing"
ratio0.016
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The scent hit her first—expensive sandalwood, ozone, and the faint, bitter metallic tang that clung to anyone who spent too much time in the deeper channels of …"
1"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic, erratic rhythm that pissed her off."
2"Before the lies, the disappearing acts, and the sudden, violent rupture that sent him back across the Channel."
3"The kiss was hungry, a desperate alignment of teeth and lips that had been deferred for far too long."
4"Rory let out a sharp, ragged breath against his mouth, her hands shifting from his wrist to clamp onto the lapels of his suit, pulling him closer until the hard…"
5"He parted her lips with his tongue, demanding, possessive, marking his territory in a way that should have angered her, but only fueled the long-buried ache in …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, her voice dropping into a dangerous, quiet register"
1"he said, his amber eye narrowing slightly"
2"Rory whispered, her blue eyes flashing"
3"Lucien leaned in, his breath warm against her temple"
4"she lied, her voice cracking slightly"
5"Rory whispered, her fingers clinging to his shoulders"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"she lied (lie)"
5"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.308
76.2940%