Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25YT3PRNPFCFKCWX1TSAWR

Run Details

Duration:
9.9s
Cost:
$0.015904
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A damp London mist clung to the gnarled oaks of Richmond Park, but the moment Aurora Carter stepped through the gap in the ancient, unhewn standing stones, the chill evaporated. The air turned thick, sweet with the scent of crushed sugar and overripe plums. The amber sky stretched overhead, vast and warm. "Step lively, mortal," Nyx’s voice drifted from a patch of violet shadow clinging to a massive, twisting grapevine. "The threshold likes to chew on heels left behind." Aurora dragged her boots forward, the soles sinking into soil that felt like warm flour. She checked her left wrist, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar before dropping to the silver chain resting against her collarbone. The crimson gemstone of the Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her skin, hot and rhythmic, like a tiny trapped bird. "This isn't Richmond anymore," Aurora said. Beside her, Isolde Varga glided over the amethyst-colored grass. Her silver hair trailed down to her waist, shimmering under the amber glow of a sun that seemed to hang everywhere and nowhere at once. Her bare feet left no impressions on the delicate, star-shaped wildflowers that carpeted the ground. "The gate has swung wide, and the table is set," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon where rolling hills swelled like rising dough. "We walk the gardens of the Prince who never starves, where the harvest is eternal and the hunger is never filled." "Dymas," Aurora muttered. She gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade sheathed at her hip. The leaf-shaped dagger pulsed with its own steady, frigid counter-tempo to the hot throb of the pendant. The moonsilver felt like a splinter of ice against her thumb, the only cold thing in this stifling, decadent realm. They walked deeper into the orchards. The trees here grew in spiraling patterns, their trunks braided together like plaited loaves of sweetbread. Heavy, teardrop-shaped fruits hung from the branches, their skins translucent and glowing with an inner golden light. A slow, rhythmic dripping sound echoed through the grove. Aurora tilted her head back. Thick, viscous sap—dark as molasses and smelling of burnt cinnamon—dribbled from the nodes of the branches, pooling in hollowed-out stone basins resting at the roots. "Do not touch," Nyx warned. Their humanoid silhouette lengthened, stretching from tree trunk to tree trunk as they kept pace, their faintly glowing violet eyes shifting within the darkness of their form. "The Dymasian fruits demand a heavy price for a single bite. A year of your memories for a taste of the golden pear. Your finest talent for a sip of the vintage." "I don't have many memories I'd mind losing," Aurora said, though she kept her hands shoved deep into her pockets. "But I'll stick to my own rations." "An empty belly is a shielding wall," Isolde said. She reached out, her fingers hovering just a hair's breadth from a cluster of heavy, ruby-tinted grapes. "But walls crumble when the feast goes on for centuries." The path narrowed, winding downward into a sunken valley where the air grew even heavier, thick with the yeast-scent of baking bread and the sharp tang of fermenting wine. The silence of the place was immense, broken only by the persistent, wet dripping of the sap and the faint, far-off sound of laughter—or weeping. It was impossible to tell the difference. Aurora's boot kicked something hard in the grass. She knelt, brushing aside the violet petals. A silver goblet lay half-buried in the soil, its rim crusted with dried, black residue. Just next to it, partially overgrown by creeping vines with little white flowers like teeth, was a human jawbone. The teeth were perfectly preserved, capped in gold. She recoiled, her heart hammering against her ribs. "A chef who failed to please the Prince's palate, perhaps," Nyx whispered, their shadow form pooling around Aurora’s boots like cold ink. "Or a guest who forgot how to stop. Belphegor’s domain is vast, and his larders are always hungry." "Why did the portal bring us here?" Aurora asked, rising and wiping her palms on her jeans. "The Veil shouldn't have torn this deep. Not before the winter solstice." "The boundaries are thin, frayed like an old winter coat," Isolde said, her gaze drifting toward a massive stone structure rising in the distance. The building resembled a cathedral, but its spires were formed from spiraling columns of white salt and dark, sparkling basalt that looked like charred bone. Vast steam-vents exhaled pale plumes into the amber sky, carrying the rich, dizzying scent of roasted meats and caramelized sugar. "The hunger of the mortal world reaches down, and the excess of Hel rises to meet it," Isolde continued. "The knot is untying, Aurora. Look to your chest." Aurora looked down. The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just pulsing; it was radiating a fierce, crimson light that bled through her shirt. It grew warmer by the second, almost painful against her throat. "We're close to a major rift," Aurora said. "The heart of the kitchen," Nyx agreed. Their form shifted, climbing high up a braided trunk to peer toward the salt-cathedral. "The Prince’s servants are active. I see the shimmer of the ward-lines from here. They block the path to the central hearth." "Can you slip through them?" Aurora asked, looking up at the shadow. "Wards of Gluttony are sticky, mortal. They bind the shadow as easily as the flesh. A fly in amber is still a fly." Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver metal caught the amber light, refracting it into a pale, ghostly lavender that seemed to repel the heavy, sweet scent of the air around them. "Isolde said this cuts through magical barriers," Aurora said, balancing the weight of the dagger. "Let's see if the Fae Courts know how to carve up a kitchen." "The blade knows the path," Isolde murmured, her voice fading to a whisper as she stared at the salt spires. "But remember, child of Wales. In the hall of the glutton, every bite you take of their world allows their world to take a bite of you." They pressed on, descending the final slope toward the cathedral of salt. The ground beneath their feet grew damp with trickling streams of clear, sparkling liquid that tasted of elderflower and salt when a drop splashed onto Aurora’s lip. She spat it out immediately, her tongue tingling with a sudden, wild craving for more. A low, vibrating hum resonated through the earth, shaking the fruit from the branches. The search had begun.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:52:43.9Z" 5/20/2026, 7:52:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1088
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1088
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulsed"
4"throb"
5"echoed"
6"silence"
7"structure"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1085
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount774
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora15
Carter1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Isolde6
Varga1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Nyx4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Varga"
5"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.531
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like warm flour"
1"sun that seemed to hang everywhere and nowhere at once"
2"felt like a splinter of ice against her"
3"looked like charred bone"
4"lavender that seemed to repel the heavy, sweet scent of the air around them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1085
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean33.91
std17.05
cv0.503
sampleLengths
044
18
227
355
46
549
648
73
849
948
1030
1164
1227
1336
1461
1557
168
1740
1829
1924
2045
2128
2234
238
2443
2512
2623
2732
2828
2947
3054
3118
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"were formed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was radiating"
20.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences70
ratio0.043
matches
0"Thick, viscous sap—dark as molasses and smelling of burnt cinnamon—dribbled from the nodes of the branches, pooling in hollowed-out stone basins resting at the roots."
1"The silence of the place was immense, broken only by the persistent, wet dripping of the sap and the faint, far-off sound of laughter—or weeping."
2"The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just pulsing; it was radiating a fierce, crimson light that bled through her shirt."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount792
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"delicate, star-shaped wildflowers"
1"own steady, frigid counter-"
2"Heavy, teardrop-shaped fruits"
3"heavy, ruby-tinted grapes."
4"faint, far-off sound"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03535353535353535
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008838383838383838
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean15.5
std7.53
cv0.486
sampleLengths
030
114
28
318
49
515
621
719
86
99
1025
1115
1227
1321
143
1512
1617
1720
186
1916
2017
219
225
2325
245
2527
2632
2720
287
299
3017
3110
3229
3325
347
358
367
3715
3819
398
408
4122
4218
4317
4412
4524
4625
4720
4819
499
54.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38571428571428573
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners27
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Just next to it, partially"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences51
matches
0"She checked her left wrist,"
1"Her silver hair trailed down"
2"Her bare feet left no"
3"She gripped the hilt of"
4"They walked deeper into the"
5"Their humanoid silhouette lengthened, stretching"
6"She reached out, her fingers"
7"It was impossible to tell"
8"She knelt, brushing aside the"
9"She recoiled, her heart hammering"
10"It grew warmer by the"
11"Their form shifted, climbing high"
12"They pressed on, descending the"
13"She spat it out immediately,"
ratio0.275
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences51
matches
0"A damp London mist clung"
1"The air turned thick, sweet"
2"The amber sky stretched overhead,"
3"Nyx’s voice drifted from a"
4"Aurora dragged her boots forward,"
5"She checked her left wrist,"
6"The crimson gemstone of the"
7"Her silver hair trailed down"
8"Her bare feet left no"
9"Isolde said, her pale lavender"
10"She gripped the hilt of"
11"The leaf-shaped dagger pulsed with"
12"The moonsilver felt like a"
13"They walked deeper into the"
14"The trees here grew in"
15"A slow, rhythmic dripping sound"
16"Aurora tilted her head back."
17"Their humanoid silhouette lengthened, stretching"
18"Aurora said, though she kept"
19"She reached out, her fingers"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She checked her left wrist, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar before dropping to the silver chain resting against her collarbone."
1"Her silver hair trailed down to her waist, shimmering under the amber glow of a sun that seemed to hang everywhere and nowhere at once."
2"Her bare feet left no impressions on the delicate, star-shaped wildflowers that carpeted the ground."
3"The building resembled a cathedral, but its spires were formed from spiraling columns of white salt and dark, sparkling basalt that looked like charred bone."
4"The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just pulsing; it was radiating a fierce, crimson light that bled through her shirt."
5"The moonsilver metal caught the amber light, refracting it into a pale, ghostly lavender that seemed to repel the heavy, sweet scent of the air around them."
6"The ground beneath their feet grew damp with trickling streams of clear, sparkling liquid that tasted of elderflower and salt when a drop splashed onto Aurora’s…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their shadow form pooling around Aurora’s boots like cold ink"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde continued (continue)"
4"Nyx agreed (agree)"
5"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
73.1963%