| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1088 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1088 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "resonated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1085 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 774 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.531 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like warm flour" | | 1 | "sun that seemed to hang everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "felt like a splinter of ice against her" | | 3 | "looked like charred bone" | | 4 | "lavender that seemed to repel the heavy, sweet scent of the air around them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1085 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 33.91 | | std | 17.05 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 18 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | | |
| 20.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Thick, viscous sap—dark as molasses and smelling of burnt cinnamon—dribbled from the nodes of the branches, pooling in hollowed-out stone basins resting at the roots." | | 1 | "The silence of the place was immense, broken only by the persistent, wet dripping of the sap and the faint, far-off sound of laughter—or weeping." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just pulsing; it was radiating a fierce, crimson light that bled through her shirt." |
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| 70.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 792 | | adjectiveStacks | 5 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "delicate, star-shaped wildflowers" | | 1 | "own steady, frigid counter-" | | 2 | "Heavy, teardrop-shaped fruits" | | 3 | "heavy, ruby-tinted grapes." | | 4 | "faint, far-off sound" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03535353535353535 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008838383838383838 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 15.5 | | std | 7.53 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 54.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.38571428571428573 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Just next to it, partially" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her left wrist," | | 1 | "Her silver hair trailed down" | | 2 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 3 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 4 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 5 | "Their humanoid silhouette lengthened, stretching" | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "It was impossible to tell" | | 8 | "She knelt, brushing aside the" | | 9 | "She recoiled, her heart hammering" | | 10 | "It grew warmer by the" | | 11 | "Their form shifted, climbing high" | | 12 | "They pressed on, descending the" | | 13 | "She spat it out immediately," |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 9.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "A damp London mist clung" | | 1 | "The air turned thick, sweet" | | 2 | "The amber sky stretched overhead," | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice drifted from a" | | 4 | "Aurora dragged her boots forward," | | 5 | "She checked her left wrist," | | 6 | "The crimson gemstone of the" | | 7 | "Her silver hair trailed down" | | 8 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 9 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 10 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 11 | "The leaf-shaped dagger pulsed with" | | 12 | "The moonsilver felt like a" | | 13 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 14 | "The trees here grew in" | | 15 | "A slow, rhythmic dripping sound" | | 16 | "Aurora tilted her head back." | | 17 | "Their humanoid silhouette lengthened, stretching" | | 18 | "Aurora said, though she kept" | | 19 | "She reached out, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her left wrist, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar before dropping to the silver chain resting against her collarbone." | | 1 | "Her silver hair trailed down to her waist, shimmering under the amber glow of a sun that seemed to hang everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 2 | "Her bare feet left no impressions on the delicate, star-shaped wildflowers that carpeted the ground." | | 3 | "The building resembled a cathedral, but its spires were formed from spiraling columns of white salt and dark, sparkling basalt that looked like charred bone." | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant was no longer just pulsing; it was radiating a fierce, crimson light that bled through her shirt." | | 5 | "The moonsilver metal caught the amber light, refracting it into a pale, ghostly lavender that seemed to repel the heavy, sweet scent of the air around them." | | 6 | "The ground beneath their feet grew damp with trickling streams of clear, sparkling liquid that tasted of elderflower and salt when a drop splashed onto Aurora’s…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their shadow form pooling around Aurora’s boots like cold ink" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 4 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |