Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25ZAXT8FXN3667Y3BW1ZXH

Run Details

Duration:
11.9s
Cost:
$0.017424
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain-slicked asphalt outside reflected the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, throwing emerald ripples across the dark Soho pavement. Inside, the air smelled of stale stout, floor wax, and the faint, sweet trace of clove cigarettes. Behind the mahogany counter, Silas Blackwood polished a highball glass with slow, rhythmic swiping, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light of the back bar. His left leg propped against a wooden crate, easing the strain on his bad knee. Rory Carter sat in the corner booth, her back to the timber-panelling. She turned her pint glass of Guinness, watching the creamy head dissolve into the dark body of the stout. A damp draft squeezed through the windowpane behind her, chilling the back of her neck. The brass bell above the heavy oak door chimed. A man stepped into the warmth, shaking water from the collar of a tailored charcoal overcoat. He wore his hair long on top, swept back with expensive pomade, though a few dark strands fell damply over his forehead. He scanned the half-empty tavern with a practiced, restless gaze. Rory froze. The glass slipped a millimetre in her grip, cold condensation smearing her palm. "Evan," she breathed. The man turned his head at the sound, his eyes narrowing. The sharp, aristocratic lines of his face softened, then tightened in disbelief. He took two steps forward, his leather-soled shoes clicking sharp against the floorboards, free of the old, dragging slouch she remembered from Cardiff. He looked as if he had been disassembled and rebuilt by a high-end surgeon. "Laila?" He used the middle name she had discarded the night she boarded the coach to London. "My god. It is you." He glided to the booth, not waiting for an invitation before sliding onto the opposite leather bench. The scent of sandalwood and expensive wool pushed aside the bar's familiar musk. "Rory," she corrected, her voice flat, devoid of the wobble that used to betray her when he stood too close. "Nobody here calls me Laila." Evan let out a soft, breathy laugh, shaking his head. He laid his hands flat on the scarred wood of the table. His nails were manicured, clean, purged of the charcoal stains from the days when he pretended to be an artist. "Rory, then. It’s been three years. More?" "Four." She tucked her left hand into the pocket of her oversized denim jacket, her thumb scraping against the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "You look... different." "The city suits me." He gestured vaguely to his coat, to the gold watch peeking from beneath his stiff white cuff. "I ended up in wealth management. Mayfair. It turns out the skills required to sell bad paintings are remarkably transferable to selling high-yield bonds." "Conning people, you mean." Evan smiled, a thin, polished expression that didn’t reach his eyes. "We call it restructuring expectations. But look at you. Still in denim. Still... hiding in corners." Silas limped past the table, his hazel eyes lingering on Evan for a fraction of a second too long. He set a fresh coaster down. "Need anything else, Rory?" Silas asked, his voice a low, gravelly rumble. "I’m fine, Si. Thanks." Evan waited until the older man retreated to the bar before leaning in, lowering his voice. "A friend of yours? He looks like he smuggles small arms in his spare time." "He’s my landlord," Rory said. "He’s reliable. A concept you might find foreign." "Ouch." Evan pressed a hand to his chest, though his smirk remained intact. "Still got the Cardiff bite, I see. I deserve that, of course. I’m not pretending I was easy to live with back then. We were young, broke, furious at the world." "You weren't furious at the world, Evan. You were furious at me because your father stopped paying your rent." The smirk faltered, just for a second. A muscle twitched in his jaw, the old, familiar sign of a storm brewing, but he suppressed it with a terrifyingly smooth efficiency. The anger didn't explode anymore; it was vaulted, locked away behind a facade of liquid assets and tailored suits. "We both did things we regret," Evan said, his tone dripping with a rehearsed, therapeutic gentleness. "I went to therapy. I did the work. I realised how much of my anxiety I projected onto you. I actually tried to find you, about eighteen months ago. To apologise properly." Rory took a slow sip of her stout. It tasted bitter, like copper. "I changed my number. And my address." "So I gathered." He tapped his fingers on the table. "You left a lot of things behind. Your parents still ask about you. Your dad called me last Christmas. He sounded... old, Rory. He doesn't understand why you ran away to deliver takeaways in London when you have a law degree waiting for you." "I don't have a law degree. I dropped out." "Exactly. A waste." "It wasn't a waste, it was a choice." She leaned forward, the blue of her eyes hardening. "My choice. The first one I made without your permission, or my father’s." Evan sighed, a heavy, patronising sound that made her skin itch. "This is what I mean. The defensiveness. You’re still living in the defensive crouch, Rory. Look around. You’re sitting in a dingy pub in Soho, drinking alone on a Tuesday night. Is this the grand freedom you fled to London for?" The words stung because they hovered too close to the doubts she fought off every morning at dawn. The small flat above Silas’ bar, the greasy smell of the Golden Empress on her clothes, the constant, scraping anxiety of making rent. "I like it here," she said, her voice steady. "It’s quiet. Nobody demands to know where I’ve been if I’m ten minutes late." Evan looked down at his polished fingernails. "I was worried about you. You always had a tendency to drift." "You weren't worried. You were angry because you lost your audience." "That’s unfair." "It’s accurate." Rory watched him, searching for any trace of the boy who used to sit on the radiator in their damp Welsh flat, reciting poetry and drinking cheap gin until his fingers shook. That boy had been cruel, but he had been real. This man felt like a waxwork, constructed to survive a boardroom. "Who bought you that coat, Evan? Did the firm provide the personality too?" He pulled his hands back, tucking them into his pockets. The warmth completely drained from his face, leaving only the cold efficiency of his new life. "People grow up, Rory. They stop romanticising poverty. They stop pretending that suffering makes them interesting. I wanted a life that didn't involve counting pennies for the electric meter. I got it." "At what price?" "A much lower one than staying in that flat with you, watching you stare at the walls," he snapped. The silence that followed was sharp, cutting through the low hum of the bar's refrigerator. Silas stopped wiping the taps. The air in the booth felt thin. Rory looked at the man across from her, realizing with a sudden, dull ache that the ghost she had been running from for four years didn't exist anymore. He had traded his demons for a portfolio and a dry-cleaned coat. The monster had become a stranger. "I'm glad you got your money, Evan," she said softly. Evan stood up, buttoning his coat with swift, precise movements. He adjusted his collar, looking down at her one last time. For a brief second, his eyes softened with a genuine, heavy regret, a glimpse of the boy from Cardiff before the gold watch and the Mayfair address swallowed him whole. "You should call your mother," he said. He turned and walked toward the door. The brass bell chimed, and the Soho rain swallowed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.095
92.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1304
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"chilling"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"facade"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"chilling"
2"warmth"
3"scanned"
4"familiar"
5"facade"
6"constructed"
7"electric"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"d in disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount840
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Silas4
Blackwood1
Carter1
Guinness1
Cardiff2
London1
Evan9
Rory6
Welsh1
Mayfair1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Guinness"
6"Evan"
7"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.964
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a waxwork, constructed to sur"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1304
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean27.74
std18.97
cv0.684
sampleLengths
079
146
29
348
415
53
660
722
830
925
1042
117
1227
1345
144
1527
1625
1712
184
1931
2013
2144
2219
2349
2448
2520
2654
279
283
2930
3052
3141
3223
3319
3411
352
3668
3726
3832
393
4019
4127
4246
4310
4451
457
4617
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"been disassembled"
1"were manicured"
2"was vaulted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"The anger didn't explode anymore; it was vaulted, locked away behind a facade of liquid assets and tailored suits."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount705
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02553191489361702
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005673758865248227
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean14.17
std8.51
cv0.6
sampleLengths
020
117
227
315
412
519
615
79
816
922
1010
112
1213
133
1411
1512
1623
1714
1817
195
2017
2113
2220
235
2410
2512
2620
277
2824
293
3021
3124
324
3311
3416
3519
366
3712
384
3916
4015
415
428
4313
4431
4519
467
4723
4819
4916
50.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.33695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences61
matches
0"His left leg propped against"
1"She turned her pint glass"
2"He wore his hair long"
3"He scanned the half-empty tavern"
4"He took two steps forward,"
5"He looked as if he"
6"He used the middle name"
7"He glided to the booth,"
8"she corrected, her voice flat,"
9"He laid his hands flat"
10"His nails were manicured, clean,"
11"She tucked her left hand"
12"He gestured vaguely to his"
13"He set a fresh coaster"
14"It tasted bitter, like copper."
15"He tapped his fingers on"
16"She leaned forward, the blue"
17"she said, her voice steady"
18"He pulled his hands back,"
19"He had traded his demons"
ratio0.377
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences61
matches
0"His left leg propped against"
1"Rory Carter sat in the"
2"She turned her pint glass"
3"A damp draft squeezed through"
4"The brass bell above the"
5"A man stepped into the"
6"He wore his hair long"
7"He scanned the half-empty tavern"
8"The glass slipped a millimetre"
9"The man turned his head"
10"The sharp, aristocratic lines of"
11"He took two steps forward,"
12"He looked as if he"
13"He used the middle name"
14"He glided to the booth,"
15"The scent of sandalwood and"
16"she corrected, her voice flat,"
17"Evan let out a soft,"
18"He laid his hands flat"
19"His nails were manicured, clean,"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He looked as if he had been disassembled and rebuilt by a high-end surgeon."
1"Evan sighed, a heavy, patronising sound that made her skin itch."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice a low, gravelly rumble"
1"Evan pressed, though his smirk remained intact"
2"Evan said, his tone dripping with a rehearsed, therapeutic gentleness"
3"she said, her voice steady"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
2"Evan pressed (press)"
3"he snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.19
79.3600%