Run: 2026-05-20-01KS25ZZJFE9KC2DJRJ0A0FAY1

Run Details

Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.015748
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the rusted iron ladder and onto the tracks of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Dark water dripped from the vaulted ceiling, striking the concrete below with the rhythmic cadence of a failing heart. She adjusted her grip on her heavy flashlight, sweeping the beam across the damp platform. The air tasted of copper, ozone, and old rot. A yellow line of police tape fluttered against a soot-stained pillar, marking the boundary of a space that did not exist on any official map of the London Underground. Ten feet away, Sergeant Miller knelt beside a heap of discarded clothing, his forensic kit open on the gravel. He looked up, his face pale under the harsh glare of his work lamp. "Glad you made it, Quinn. The transport guys almost got lost finding the access hatch. This place isn't on the standard surveyors' plans." "It has other names." Quinn stepped closer, her boots crunching on broken glass. She tapped her left wrist, checking the worn leather watch. 3:14 AM. The train lines above had gone silent hours ago, yet a low, thrumming vibration pulsed through the soles of her feet. "What do we have?" "Classic territorial dispute gone wrong," Miller said, pointing a gloved finger at a scattering of shattered crates, spilled vials of colored liquid, and torn parchment. "Squatters or black-market smugglers. We found a dozen empty purses and these." He held up a plastic evidence bag containing several carved, polished fragments of skeletal material. "Carved ivory tokens. Looks like some kind of illegal gambling den or high-end fencing ring. One of them got greedy, pulled a knife, and cleared the room." Quinn took the bag, squinting at the smooth bone. Her fingers traced the clean, geometric serrations along the edges. These weren't ivory. The marrow cavity was too narrow, the density too light. A bone token. The entrance fee for a crowd that didn't use sterling. She dropped the bag back into Miller’s palm and let her flashlight beam wander over the wider platform. "Where’s the blood, Miller?" "Well, the victim probably stumbled away, or his associates dragged him off to avoid police attention. There's a smear near the tunnel mouth." Quinn walked to the edge of the platform and jumped down onto the ballast. The damp heat of the tunnel engulfed her. She crouched, shining her light on the wooden sleepers. A single, dark drop of congealed fluid clung to the side of a rail. It didn't look like blood. It had an oily, iridescent sheen, like gasoline on puddle water, shifting from purple to deep gold in the beam of her torch. "The victim didn't walk away," Quinn said. "And nobody dragged him." "We've got shoe prints heading toward the northern exit," Miller called out, his voice echoing hollowly off the tiles. "Heavy work boots. At least three different sets. It’s a simple robbery-homicide, Harlow. We package the physical evidence, run the bone carving for prints, and let the gang unit handle the Camden angle." Quinn ignored him, her gaze locking onto a small, metallic glint wedged between two rotted timber ties. She slipped on a latex glove and reached into the gap. Her fingers closed around a heavy, circular object. She pulled it into the light. It was a small brass compass, its casing thick with a crust of green verdigris. The face lacked cardinal directions; instead, the glass covered a series of delicate, overlapping silver sigils etched directly into the metal. The needle inside didn't point north. It spun in slow, erratic circles, shivering every time the low vibration hummed through the tunnel. A Veil Compass. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a dull ache opening in her chest. The last time she had seen a device like this, it had been tucked into the coat pocket of DS Morris, three years ago, on the night the Thames ran black and Morris vanished from a locked warehouse. "Put that in the bag, Quinn," Miller said, stepping down onto the tracks behind her. "We'll let the lab guys run the serial numbers." "There are no serial numbers on this." Quinn turned the brass casing in her hand. The back of the compass bore a fresh scratch, a deep gouge that missed a tiny, hand-carved initials stamp near the hinge: *E.K.* The red-haired girl. The Oxford researcher who always seemed to be three steps ahead of the Metropolitan Police’s filing system. Eva Kowalski. "Look at the dust on the sleepers," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a hard whisper. She shone her torch across the ground. "There's a thick layer of soot from the ventilation shafts. If three men dragged a bleeding body through here, the drag marks would have swept the ballast clean. The dust is undisturbed." "They could have carried him," Miller insisted, though he stepped closer, his brow furrowing as he looked at the pristine grey dust. "All three of them? Bearing a dead weight without dragging a heel, slipping, or dropping a single personal item?" Quinn pointed her light at the brick wall of the tunnel. "And look at the splatter pattern on the masonry. It’s too high. A knife wound to the femoral or thoracic cavity sprays outward and downward. This is six feet up, and it’s concentrated in a perfect circle." Miller stared at the wall. The dark, iridescent residue formed a halo on the soot-blackened brick, radiating outward from a central point of nothingness. "Someone used a firearm," Miller muttered, though his tone lacked conviction. "A modified shotgun, maybe. High-velocity impact." "There are no lead pellets in the brickwork," Quinn said. "No copper jackets. No smell of cordite. Just this." She touched her gloved index finger to the center of the dark ring. The residue was cold—unnaturally so, like dry ice. When she pulled her hand back, the drop didn't stick to her glove; it evaporated into a thin wispy vapor that smelled of dry autumn leaves and ozone. She stood up, her sharp jaw tightening as she looked down the pitch-black stretch of the tunnel. The air ahead didn't just feel cold; it felt thin, like the peak of a mountain. "We need to clear the platform," Quinn said. "Harlow, the coroner hasn't even arrived to verify the lack of a body," Miller said, reaching for his radio. "We can't just abandon a crime scene because the ballistics are strange." "This isn't a crime scene, Miller. It's an exit." Quinn slipped the brass compass into her inner pocket, her leather watch ticking loudly against the silence of the deep earth. She knew the signs now. The market had been here, beneath the streets of Camden, trading in things that shouldn't exist, and someone had broken the rules. A shadow moved at the edge of her flashlight's reach, deeper in the tunnel. It wasn't the shape of a person. It was too fluid, too wide, crawling along the ceiling with a sickening, silent speed. Quinn drew her Glock, her thumb flicking the safety off with a sharp click. "Get back to the ladder, Miller. Now."
created_at"2026-05-20T07:53:22.261Z" 5/20/2026, 7:53:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"fluttered"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"furrowing"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"fluttered"
2"standard"
3"pulsed"
4"shattered"
5"traced"
6"echoing"
7"glint"
8"etched"
9"whisper"
10"furrowing"
11"pristine"
12"weight"
13"perfect"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
78.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1180
ratio0.001
matches
0"E.K."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount831
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
Tube1
Camden2
London1
Underground1
Sergeant1
Miller9
Veil1
Compass1
Morris2
Thames1
Oxford1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski1
Glock1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
7"Police"
8"Kowalski"
places
0"London"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.718
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1180
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean33.71
std21.45
cv0.636
sampleLengths
063
129
233
323
446
54
679
745
818
94
1023
1173
1211
1352
1436
1564
163
1751
1824
1938
2022
2155
2222
2367
2424
2517
2668
2733
288
2931
309
3148
3236
3314
347
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"been tucked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
1.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences81
ratio0.049
matches
0"The face lacked cardinal directions; instead, the glass covered a series of delicate, overlapping silver sigils etched directly into the metal."
1"The residue was cold—unnaturally so, like dry ice."
2"When she pulled her hand back, the drop didn't stick to her glove; it evaporated into a thin wispy vapor that smelled of dry autumn leaves and ozone."
3"The air ahead didn't just feel cold; it felt thin, like the peak of a mountain."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"delicate, overlapping silver sigils"
1"tiny, hand-carved initials"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.019115890083632018
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005973715651135006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean14.57
std8.51
cv0.584
sampleLengths
020
119
215
39
429
519
614
723
813
910
102
1121
124
1325
1427
1527
169
1710
183
1910
203
2110
2218
234
2423
2514
268
279
2814
295
3023
317
324
3319
3433
3517
3611
378
386
3915
4021
416
4216
433
4413
4538
4615
479
4815
4923
65.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.43209876543209874
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences62
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"He looked up, his face"
2"She tapped her left wrist,"
3"He held up a plastic"
4"Her fingers traced the clean,"
5"She dropped the bag back"
6"She crouched, shining her light"
7"It didn't look like blood."
8"It had an oily, iridescent"
9"She slipped on a latex"
10"Her fingers closed around a"
11"She pulled it into the"
12"It was a small brass"
13"It spun in slow, erratic"
14"Her heart hammered against her"
15"She shone her torch across"
16"She touched her gloved index"
17"She stood up, her sharp"
18"She knew the signs now."
19"It wasn't the shape of"
ratio0.339
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"She adjusted her grip on"
2"The air tasted of copper,"
3"A yellow line of police"
4"He looked up, his face"
5"Quinn stepped closer, her boots"
6"She tapped her left wrist,"
7"The train lines above had"
8"Miller said, pointing a gloved"
9"He held up a plastic"
10"Quinn took the bag, squinting"
11"Her fingers traced the clean,"
12"These weren't ivory."
13"The marrow cavity was too"
14"A bone token."
15"The entrance fee for a"
16"She dropped the bag back"
17"Quinn walked to the edge"
18"The damp heat of the"
19"She crouched, shining her light"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A yellow line of police tape fluttered against a soot-stained pillar, marking the boundary of a space that did not exist on any official map of the London Under…"
1"The back of the compass bore a fresh scratch, a deep gouge that missed a tiny, hand-carved initials stamp near the hinge: *E.K.*"
2"When she pulled her hand back, the drop didn't stick to her glove; it evaporated into a thin wispy vapor that smelled of dry autumn leaves and ozone."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn stepped, her boots crunching on broken glass"
1"Miller called out, his voice echoing hollowly off the tiles"
2"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a hard whisper"
3"Miller muttered, though his tone lacked conviction"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Miller called out (call out)"
1"Miller insisted (insist)"
2"Miller muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.207
75.0588%