Run: 2026-05-20-01KS260R7BP8Y0F1ER2XBGBSDX

Run Details

Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.017164
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Cold, thick air pressed against Aurora’s chest as she stepped through the shimmering, distorted seam in the Richmond Park oak grove. The transition tasted like copper and old sugar. Beside her, Nyx glided forward, their humanoid silhouette of living shadow pooling across the ground, stretching and shrinking as if the light source in this place couldn't decide where to cast its rays. They stood at the edge of Dymas. A warm amber sky hung low over a landscape that defied every law of nature Aurora knew. Towering, twisted structures that looked like a cross between gothic cathedral spires and calcified rib cages rose in the distance, dripping with heavy, translucent vines. Golden leaves the size of carriage wheels drifted down from branches that curved like grasping fingers. The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, covered in a plush, violet moss that hissed softly whenever she pressed her weight into it. "Keep your fingers close to the hilt, Carter," Nyx whispered, their voice a dry breeze rustling through dead winter leaves. "This realm seeks to fill every empty space inside you. Do not let it choose what to feed you." Aurora gripped the leather-wrapped hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, her thumb tracing the chilling moonsilver pommel. The weapon felt like a block of ice against her hip, a stark contrast to the thick, cloying heat radiating from the amber sky. Against her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a heat that matched the sluggish rhythm of her own heart. The portal behind them had already vanished into a faint, oily shimmer in the air. A breeze swept through the valley, carrying the pungent scent of roasting meat, fermented plums, and crushed cardamom. It was intoxicating. Aurora's stomach grumbled, a sharp, demanding pang that made her mouth water instantly. "I'm not hungry," she muttered, adjusting her grip on her dagger. "I had a sandwich before we left London." "The physical body remembers hunger even when the mind denies it," Nyx said, their violet eyes glowing brighter against the charcoal darkness of their face. "Dymas amplifies the memory of every lack. Look there." Nyx gestured with a shadowy arm toward a grove of low-slung trees bordering a winding path of crushed white stone. Large, bulbous fruit hung from the branches, shaped like droplets of melted wax. Curving glass pipes grew out of the tree trunks, dripping a thick, golden syrup into stone bowls carved directly into the bedrock. As they drew closer, Aurora heard a low, rhythmic hum, like a collective sigh of satisfaction, vibrating through the earth. A small creature, resembling a badger but covered in iridescent, scaled armor, waddled toward one of the stone bowls. It dipped its snout into the golden syrup, lapping greedily. Within seconds, the creature’s body began to swell. Its scales stretched, cracking open to reveal soft, pale flesh beneath. Still, it kept drinking, its tiny limbs kicking in weak pleasure until it rolled onto its side, bloated and immobile, yet still twitching its nose toward the bowl. Aurora recoiled, her stomach turning. "The Prince of Gluttony does not starve his guests," Nyx remarked, stepping effortlessly over a creeping vine that writhed toward their shadow. "He simply waits for them to break their own limits." "Let's move," Aurora said, her voice tight. "The sooner we find the rift point, the sooner we get back to a place where gravity and appetite make sense." They followed the crushed stone path as it wound deeper into the valley. The sense of scale in Dymas was dizzying. Giant trellises made of blackened bone arched over the path, supporting gargantuan grapevines. The grapes themselves were the size of pumpkins, glowing with an internal violet light that pulsed out of sync with the sky. Down in the ravines to their left, rivers of dark, viscous liquid flowed sluggishly, releasing bubbles that popped with the sound of snapping bone, releasing small puffs of cinnamon-scented steam. "The air is heavy," Aurora said, wiping a bead of sweat from her forehead. "It feels like trying to breathe warm honey." "The atmosphere is saturated with the essence of harvest," Nyx explained, lingering near the shadow of a colossal bone trellis. "Every breath you take here carries particles of things meant to be consumed. Your lungs are digesting this air, Carter." She took shallower breaths, focusing on the cool, grounding presence of the Fae blade at her side. She slipped her fingers into her pocket, touching the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The old mark from her childhood was a reminder of reality, of sharp edges and cold truths. It helped clear the sweet, foggy haze creeping into her mind. The path opened up into a wide plaza made of polished, amber-colored marble. In the center, a monumental fountain sputtered. Instead of water, a continuous stream of dark chocolate cascaded down tiered basins shaped like gaping mouths. Surrounding the fountain were several small, stone banquet tables, piled high with pastries that did not rot, meats that still sizzled, and crystal decanters filled with ruby-red liquids that swirled on their own. "There is no one here," Aurora whispered, her eyes darting between the empty tables and the towering spires flanking the plaza. "Where are the helbound souls?" "Preparing the next feast," Nyx said, their form stretching thin as they surveyed the high walls. "Or perhaps they are the feast. Prince Belphegor’s kitchen is vast, and the ingredients are highly adaptable." A sudden, sharp tug in her chest made Aurora gasp. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt flared, burning hot against her skin. She pulled it out by its silver chain. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem was glowing fiercely, casting a bloody light across her fingers. "We’re close to a portal," Aurora said, her pulse quickening. "The pendant is practically boiling." "The barrier is thin here," Nyx agreed, gliding toward the far side of the plaza where the amber marble gave way to a sheer cliff face. "The solstice approaches on Earth. The Veil weakens, and the hunger of this place reaches outward, looking for fresh soil to root in." Below the cliff, a massive orchard stretched for miles under the warm amber sky. The trees here were different—their bark resembled stretched pale skin, and their branches creaked with a sound like weeping. Instead of fruit, small, glowing crystals hung from the tips, casting a cold, artificial light over the dark soil below. "Look," Aurora pointed toward a massive fissure in the center of the orchard. The air above the fissure was warping, bending the light of the amber sky into a jagged, shimmering tear. Through the distortion, she didn't see the orchards of Dymas, but rather the dark, rain-slicked trunks of Richmond Park. She could see the faint glow of London's city lights in the far distance, muted by the persistent drizzle of an English winter. "The rift," Nyx murmured. "It's widening." As they watched, a thick, pale root from one of the skin-barked trees slid over the edge of the fissure, disappearing into the tear. On the other side, in the mortal world, the root burst from the mud of Richmond Park, instantly sprouting tiny, ravenous tendrils that began burrowing into the damp earth, seeking sustenance from a world that wasn't ready for it. "It's feeding on the park," Aurora said, her hand tight on her moonsilver blade. "We have to sever it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.519
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"chilling"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"pang"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"marble"
count2
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tracing"
2"chilling"
3"stark"
4"throbbed"
5"stomach"
6"pang"
7"rhythmic"
8"sense of"
9"pulsed"
10"reminder"
11"marble"
12"crystal"
13"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1009
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Richmond3
Park3
Nyx9
Dymas3
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae2
London1
English1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Dymas"
3"London"
globalScore0.856
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and old sugar"
1"looked like a cross between gothic cathed"
2"felt like a block of ice against her hi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1234
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean42.55
std24.54
cv0.577
sampleLengths
062
17
281
339
482
534
619
734
875
976
105
1132
1228
1386
1422
1540
1660
1770
1826
1933
2044
2115
2249
2353
2413
2561
266
2763
2819
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was glowing"
1"was warping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences77
ratio0.013
matches
0"The trees here were different—their bark resembled stretched pale skin, and their branches creaked with a sound like weeping."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1020
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"polished, amber-colored marble."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.022549019607843137
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008823529411764706
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean16.03
std7.53
cv0.47
sampleLengths
021
18
233
37
417
525
616
723
820
919
1019
1124
1224
1315
1418
153
1613
1711
188
1925
209
2120
2213
2322
2420
2519
2610
278
2811
2928
305
3122
3210
337
3421
3513
368
3713
3822
3930
4014
418
4220
4320
4417
4515
4617
4711
4813
497
79.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5064935064935064
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Instead of water, a continuous"
1"Instead of fruit, small, glowing"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences63
matches
0"They stood at the edge"
1"It was intoxicating."
2"she muttered, adjusting her grip"
3"It dipped its snout into"
4"Its scales stretched, cracking open"
5"They followed the crushed stone"
6"She took shallower breaths, focusing"
7"She slipped her fingers into"
8"It helped clear the sweet,"
9"She pulled it out by"
10"She could see the faint"
ratio0.175
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences63
matches
0"The transition tasted like copper"
1"They stood at the edge"
2"A warm amber sky hung"
3"The ground beneath her boots"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice a"
5"Aurora gripped the leather-wrapped hilt"
6"The weapon felt like a"
7"The portal behind them had"
8"A breeze swept through the"
9"It was intoxicating."
10"Aurora's stomach grumbled, a sharp,"
11"she muttered, adjusting her grip"
12"Nyx said, their violet eyes"
13"Nyx gestured with a shadowy"
14"A small creature, resembling a"
15"It dipped its snout into"
16"Its scales stretched, cracking open"
17"Aurora recoiled, her stomach turning."
18"Nyx remarked, stepping effortlessly over"
19"Aurora said, her voice tight"
ratio0.683
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx glided forward, their humanoid silhouette of living shadow pooling across the ground, stretching and shrinking as if the light source in this pl…"
1"A warm amber sky hung low over a landscape that defied every law of nature Aurora knew."
2"Towering, twisted structures that looked like a cross between gothic cathedral spires and calcified rib cages rose in the distance, dripping with heavy, translu…"
3"The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, covered in a plush, violet moss that hissed softly whenever she pressed her weight into it."
4"Against her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a heat that matched the sluggish rhythm of her own heart."
5"Aurora's stomach grumbled, a sharp, demanding pang that made her mouth water instantly."
6"Down in the ravines to their left, rivers of dark, viscous liquid flowed sluggishly, releasing bubbles that popped with the sound of snapping bone, releasing sm…"
7"Surrounding the fountain were several small, stone banquet tables, piled high with pastries that did not rot, meats that still sizzled, and crystal decanters fi…"
8"On the other side, in the mortal world, the root burst from the mud of Richmond Park, instantly sprouting tiny, ravenous tendrils that began burrowing into the …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice a dry breeze rustling through dead winter leaves"
1"Aurora said, her voice tight"
2"Nyx said, their form stretching thin as they surveyed the high walls"
3"Aurora said, her pulse quickening"
4"Aurora said, her hand tight on her moonsilver blade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx explained (explain)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx agreed (agree)"
5"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.444
80.4285%