| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.519 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "chilling" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "pang" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1009 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Nyx | 9 | | Dymas | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | London | 1 | | English | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.856 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like copper and old sugar" | | 1 | "looked like a cross between gothic cathed" | | 2 | "felt like a block of ice against her hi" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 42.55 | | std | 24.54 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 86 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 70 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "was warping" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here were different—their bark resembled stretched pale skin, and their branches creaked with a sound like weeping." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1020 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "polished, amber-colored marble." |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.022549019607843137 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008823529411764706 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 16.03 | | std | 7.53 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 79.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5064935064935064 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of water, a continuous" | | 1 | "Instead of fruit, small, glowing" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood at the edge" | | 1 | "It was intoxicating." | | 2 | "she muttered, adjusting her grip" | | 3 | "It dipped its snout into" | | 4 | "Its scales stretched, cracking open" | | 5 | "They followed the crushed stone" | | 6 | "She took shallower breaths, focusing" | | 7 | "She slipped her fingers into" | | 8 | "It helped clear the sweet," | | 9 | "She pulled it out by" | | 10 | "She could see the faint" |
| | ratio | 0.175 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition tasted like copper" | | 1 | "They stood at the edge" | | 2 | "A warm amber sky hung" | | 3 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora gripped the leather-wrapped hilt" | | 6 | "The weapon felt like a" | | 7 | "The portal behind them had" | | 8 | "A breeze swept through the" | | 9 | "It was intoxicating." | | 10 | "Aurora's stomach grumbled, a sharp," | | 11 | "she muttered, adjusting her grip" | | 12 | "Nyx said, their violet eyes" | | 13 | "Nyx gestured with a shadowy" | | 14 | "A small creature, resembling a" | | 15 | "It dipped its snout into" | | 16 | "Its scales stretched, cracking open" | | 17 | "Aurora recoiled, her stomach turning." | | 18 | "Nyx remarked, stepping effortlessly over" | | 19 | "Aurora said, her voice tight" |
| | ratio | 0.683 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx glided forward, their humanoid silhouette of living shadow pooling across the ground, stretching and shrinking as if the light source in this pl…" | | 1 | "A warm amber sky hung low over a landscape that defied every law of nature Aurora knew." | | 2 | "Towering, twisted structures that looked like a cross between gothic cathedral spires and calcified rib cages rose in the distance, dripping with heavy, translu…" | | 3 | "The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, covered in a plush, violet moss that hissed softly whenever she pressed her weight into it." | | 4 | "Against her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a heat that matched the sluggish rhythm of her own heart." | | 5 | "Aurora's stomach grumbled, a sharp, demanding pang that made her mouth water instantly." | | 6 | "Down in the ravines to their left, rivers of dark, viscous liquid flowed sluggishly, releasing bubbles that popped with the sound of snapping bone, releasing sm…" | | 7 | "Surrounding the fountain were several small, stone banquet tables, piled high with pastries that did not rot, meats that still sizzled, and crystal decanters fi…" | | 8 | "On the other side, in the mortal world, the root burst from the mud of Richmond Park, instantly sprouting tiny, ravenous tendrils that began burrowing into the …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a dry breeze rustling through dead winter leaves" | | 1 | "Aurora said, her voice tight" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their form stretching thin as they surveyed the high walls" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her pulse quickening" | | 4 | "Aurora said, her hand tight on her moonsilver blade" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx explained (explain)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |