| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "crystal" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "absolutely" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "constructed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "mechanical" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "magnetic" | | 18 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1272 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1012 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae-forged | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Earth" | | 7 | "Dymas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "murmur that seemed to carry too far in the dense, heavy air" | | 1 | "looked like liquid gold" | | 2 | "looked like polished ivory bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.786 | | wordCount | 1272 | | matches | | 0 | "not as orange, but as a deep, terrifying void of starry night" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 41.03 | | std | 17.59 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 67 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 42 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1029 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, honey-colored shadows" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "Huge, sapphire-colored bees," | | 3 | "massive, trumpet-shaped flowers" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.024295432458697766 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008746355685131196 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 90.02% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 17.42 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.375 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4657534246575342 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She gestured toward a sprawling" | | 1 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 2 | "She parted the thick, heavy" | | 3 | "He didn't look up, even" | | 4 | "He merely mumbled a string" | | 5 | "She let the branches snap" | | 6 | "She pressed her hand over" | | 7 | "They stepped through the archway." | | 8 | "She took a deep breath," |
| | ratio | 0.155 | |
| 89.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 1 | "The silver chain of the" | | 2 | "The Shade’s humanoid silhouette seemed" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her voice dropping" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "The scent of caramelized sugar," | | 6 | "Aurora reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice resembling" | | 8 | "Aurora pulled her hand back," | | 9 | "She gestured toward a sprawling" | | 10 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 11 | "The ground beneath Aurora's boots" | | 12 | "Aurora admitted, though a cold" | | 13 | "Nyx said, their shadow-form stretching" | | 14 | "Aurora froze, her hand gripping" | | 15 | "The blade hummed with a" | | 16 | "She parted the thick, heavy" | | 17 | "A figure sat embedded in" | | 18 | "The man's hands were stained" | | 19 | "He didn't look up, even" |
| | ratio | 0.741 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "To emphasize the Shade's words," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her collarbone, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a slow, rhythmic heat that flared every time s…" | | 1 | "Behind them both, Isolde Varga moved without sound, her silver hair trailing down to her waist, leaving absolutely no footprints on the glittering dust of the p…" | | 2 | "Giant, violet plums the size of melons hung from gnarled, golden-barked trees, their skins glistening with a dew that looked like liquid gold." | | 3 | "Strange, translucent vines snaked up the trunks, pulsing with a pale blue sap that hummed with a low, vibrational frequency." | | 4 | "With every step, a faint hiss escaped the earth, releasing puffs of vanilla-scented steam that swirled around her ankles before dissolving into the amber air." | | 5 | "Enormous, hollow gourds served as natural reservoirs, filled to the brim with bubbling, multi-colored liquids that fermented under the twin suns of the realm." | | 6 | "Huge, sapphire-colored bees, each the size of a fist, drifted lazily between massive, trumpet-shaped flowers that exhaled clouds of cinnamon spice." | | 7 | "He merely mumbled a string of incoherent words, his fingers digging into the soft flesh of the pear, shoving another handful into his mouth with mechanical, joy…" | | 8 | "The crimson stone of her pendant flared hotter, a sudden surge of heat that made her wince." | | 9 | "Atop it lay a feast that had long since rotted, covered in a crawling carpet of iridescent green beetles that clicked their mandibles in unison." | | 10 | "Aurora approached the table, her boots crunching on the discarded bones that littered the ground." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde warned, her voice dropping to a hushed, melodic purr" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |