Run: 2026-05-20-01KS261XRQDX0VF57CCXJFDJMD

Run Details

Duration:
12.1s
Cost:
$0.017574
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sliced through the yellow glow of the streetlights, stinging Harlow Quinn’s eyes as she sprinted down the pavement. Water pooled in the collars of her trench coat, heavy and cold. Ahead of her, a figure clad in a dark, saturated jacket cut through the Soho crowd, shoving tourists aside. Tomás Herrera. Harlow pressed a hand to her belt, her fingers grazing the cold steel of her handcuffs. Her leather watch clicked against her brass belt buckle, the ticking lost to the roar of London traffic. She ignored the ache in her knees, a souvenir from eighteen years on the force, and pushed her pace. Tommy glanced over his shoulder, his olive skin slick with rain, his warm brown eyes wide with panic. The scar along his left forearm, visible where his sleeve had hitched up, flashed white under the neon glare of a nearby theater marquee. A Saint Christopher medallion bounced wildly against his chest, catching the light like a dying beacon. "Stop, Metropolitan Police!" Her voice cut through the hiss of the downpour. Tommy didn't stall. He veered left, darting down an alleyway that smelled of damp cardboard and rancid cooking oil. Harlow rounded the corner, her boots sliding on the greasy cobblestones. She recovered her footing with military precision, her eyes locked on the bouncing silver medallion ahead. The alley dead-ended into a brick wall, but Tommy didn't slow. He plunged down a concrete stairwell leading into the bowels of the earth, the entrance marked only by a rusted metal gate and the faint, low-frequency hum of subterranean machinery. Harlow skidded to the top of the stairs. A faded sign above the archway read *Camden Town*, but the entrance had been boarded up for decades. The gap in the wood was freshly splintered, the padlock snapped off and hanging limp. A heavy, metallic odor wafted up from the darkness—copper, wet earth, and something sweet, like rotting lilies. This was the threshold. Harlow knew the rumors that whispered through the precinct's darkest corners, the same legends her late partner Morris had started investigating before he vanished into a body bag with dried froth on his lips. Her hand hovered over her holster. Stepping down there meant leaving the jurisdiction of the Crown. It meant entering the blind spots on the map. She took a breath, tasted the grit of the underground, and plunged into the dark. The stairs descended deeper than any standard subway line. The walls transition from tiled concrete to raw, weeping bedrock. Harlow moved in silence, her footsteps muffled by the thick layer of soot on the ground. The hum grew louder, vibrating in her teeth, accompanied now by a low murmur of voices, like a hundred radios tuned to static. At the bottom of the steps, the tunnel opened. Harlow stopped, her breath catching in her throat. An abandoned Tube station had been hollowed out, transformed into a cavernous labyrinth of stalls and flickering gas lamps. This was the Veil Market. Smoke of violet and crimson hues drifted through the air, carrying the scent of burning cinnamon and sulfur. Structures made of scrap metal and ancient timber lined the tracks, draped in heavy tapestries. Crowds shuffled through the narrow lanes, but they didn't look like any Londoners Harlow had ever policed. A man in a tailored wool coat turned his head, revealing eyes that lacked pupils, entirely solid gold. Beside him, a woman haggled over a cage of twitching, iridescent lizards, her fingers lingering in a way that suggested too many joints. Harlow lowered her head, pulling her wet collar up to her sharp jawline. She had to find Tommy before she drew the attention of things she couldn't lock in a cell. "Looking for passage, sweetheart?" A withered vendor with skin like parched parchment leaned over a counter piled with dried roots and jars of thick, milky fluid. He tapped a fingernail—long, yellow, and split down the middle—against a wooden sign. *Entry: One Bone.* "Just passing through," Harlow said, her voice tight. The vendor’s eyes flicked to her coat, detecting the faint outline of her badge. He hissed, a sound like a wet sponge on a hot griddle, and pulled his shutters closed. Harlow pushed past, her eyes scanning the crowd. She spotted the dark jacket fifty yards away, moving toward the deeper recesses of the platform where the old tracks vanished into pitch blackness. She shoved through a group of tall figures wrapped in tattered grey cloaks that smelled of river mud. Tommy was heading toward a specific stall, his hand dipping into his pocket. He pulled out a small, pale object—a finger bone, polished smooth—and dropped it into the palm of a massive, armored gatekeeper sitting on a crate. The giant nudged a iron bar aside, allowing Tommy to slip into the darkened tunnel beyond. "Herrera!" Harlow yelled, abandoning all pretense of stealth. The crowd parted at her shout, several faces turning toward her with sudden, hostile interest. Harlow ignored them, sprinting toward the gateway. The massive gatekeeper rose, his shoulders blocking the entire width of the tunnel entrance. He held out a massive, scarred hand, his yellowed teeth bared in a silent demand. Harlow didn't have a bone token. She reached into her pocket, grabbed her silver police whistle, and jammed it into the gatekeeper's palm. "Crown authority," Harlow said, her voice dropping an octave, carrying the cold steel of her eighteen years on the street. "Move, or I write this entire place up for code violations. Fire hazards, unlicensed sales, take your pick." The giant stared at the silver whistle, then up at Harlow’s fierce, unwavering stare. He grunted, a sound that shook the dust from the ceiling arches, and stepped back. Harlow bolted past him into the gloom of the active railway tunnel. The air here was freezing. Water dripped from the vaulted ceiling, splashing into the stagnant pools between the wooden railway ties. The only light came from distant, glowing mushrooms clinging to the brickwork, casting a sickly green pallor over the wet tracks. "You shouldn't have followed me, Quinn." Tommy's voice echoed off the damp bricks, hollow and distorted. He stood twenty paces ahead, his back against a rusted maintenance door. His hands were raised, palms out, but he wasn't surrendering. He looked exhausted, his curly dark hair plastered to his forehead, his breath blooming in pale clouds. Harlow kept her hands near her sides, her boots squelching in the mud. "You're a long way from the ambulance service, Tommy. Helping unlicensed criminals. Stealing medical supplies from the NHS." "I was saving lives," Tommy said, his voice cracking. "People the hospitals turn away because they don't have a pulse, or because their blood runs blue. They die in the dark, Quinn. I couldn't just watch." "You violated the law. You violated your oath." "The law doesn't cover this!" Tommy gestured to the glowing cavern behind them, his Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly. "Morris knew that. He tried to bridge the gap, and look what happened to him." Harlow froze, her military posture hardening. The mention of her partner’s name was a physical blow. "What do you know about Morris?" "He was looking for the same things you are," Tommy said, stepping closer, his face sympathetic. "But he didn't have a guide. He stumbled into a nest of things that don't value human life. If you arrest me, you lose the only connection you have to the truth of what killed him." Harlow’s hand gripped her handcuffs. The metal felt ice-cold against her palm. The sounds of the underground market hummed in the distance, a reminder of the unnatural world that swirled just beneath the surface of her neat, orderly city. "You're coming back with me," Harlow said, though her voice lacked its earlier certainty. "We do this by the book." "There is no book down here," Tommy said. With a sudden, fluid motion, he twisted the handle of the maintenance door behind him and lunged through, the heavy iron door slamming shut with a deafening clang that echoed through the dark tunnels.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:54:25.948Z" 5/20/2026, 7:54:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1351
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"standard"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"flicked"
5"scanning"
6"unwavering"
7"gloom"
8"echoed"
9"pulse"
10"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"e with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1346
ratio0.004
matches
0"Camden Town"
1"Entry: One Bone."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1164
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow21
Quinn1
Soho1
Herrera1
London1
Saint2
Christopher2
Tommy11
Morris1
Crown1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Londoners1
One1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tommy"
6"Morris"
7"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.598
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1346
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.64
std19.3
cv0.674
sampleLengths
050
12
253
358
43
59
619
768
841
955
1025
1115
1258
139
148
1557
1658
1731
184
1935
203
218
2231
2332
2456
2516
268
2751
2823
2938
3029
3112
3242
336
3449
3513
3618
3736
388
3934
4016
416
4252
4339
4420
458
4634
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"been boarded"
1"been hollowed"
2"were raised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was heading"
1"wasn't surrendering"
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"A heavy, metallic odor wafted up from the darkness—copper, wet earth, and something sweet, like rotting lilies."
1"He tapped a fingernail—long, yellow, and split down the middle—against a wooden sign."
2"He pulled out a small, pale object—a finger bone, polished smooth—and dropped it into the palm of a massive, armored gatekeeper sitting on a crate."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.015358361774744027
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007679180887372013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.17
std7.1
cv0.501
sampleLengths
019
112
219
32
416
518
619
718
824
916
103
119
123
1316
1411
1516
1611
1730
188
1918
2015
2117
224
2334
246
2510
269
2715
289
2910
3016
3123
329
338
3419
355
3618
3715
3817
3918
4023
4113
4218
434
4422
4513
463
478
4814
4917
61.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3894736842105263
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her leather watch clicked against"
1"She ignored the ache in"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"He veered left, darting down"
4"She recovered her footing with"
5"He plunged down a concrete"
6"Her hand hovered over her"
7"It meant entering the blind"
8"She took a breath, tasted"
9"She had to find Tommy"
10"He tapped a fingernail—long, yellow,"
11"He hissed, a sound like"
12"She spotted the dark jacket"
13"She shoved through a group"
14"He pulled out a small,"
15"He held out a massive,"
16"She reached into her pocket,"
17"He grunted, a sound that"
18"He stood twenty paces ahead,"
19"His hands were raised, palms"
ratio0.256
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences82
matches
0"Rain sliced through the yellow"
1"Water pooled in the collars"
2"Harlow pressed a hand to"
3"Her leather watch clicked against"
4"She ignored the ache in"
5"Tommy glanced over his shoulder,"
6"The scar along his left"
7"A Saint Christopher medallion bounced"
8"Her voice cut through the"
9"Tommy didn't stall."
10"He veered left, darting down"
11"Harlow rounded the corner, her"
12"She recovered her footing with"
13"The alley dead-ended into a"
14"He plunged down a concrete"
15"Harlow skidded to the top"
16"A faded sign above the"
17"The gap in the wood"
18"A heavy, metallic odor wafted"
19"This was the threshold."
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Harlow knew the rumors that whispered through the precinct's darkest corners, the same legends her late partner Morris had started investigating before he vanis…"
1"A man in a tailored wool coat turned his head, revealing eyes that lacked pupils, entirely solid gold."
2"Beside him, a woman haggled over a cage of twitching, iridescent lizards, her fingers lingering in a way that suggested too many joints."
3"Tommy was heading toward a specific stall, his hand dipping into his pocket."
4"The sounds of the underground market hummed in the distance, a reminder of the unnatural world that swirled just beneath the surface of her neat, orderly city."
5"With a sudden, fluid motion, he twisted the handle of the maintenance door behind him and lunged through, the heavy iron door slamming shut with a deafening cla…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice tight"
1"Tommy said, his voice cracking"
2"Harlow said, though her voice lacked its earlier certainty"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.105
79.3846%