| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 964 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 964 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "crystallized" | | 8 | "mosaic" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "unravel" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 961 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 795 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Steam | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Steam" |
| | globalScore | 0.682 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the density of the air" | | 1 | "estate that seemed to have no beginning and no end" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 961 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 41.78 | | std | 21.24 | | cv | 0.508 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 25 |
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| 82.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were textured" | | 2 | "are opened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 54 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory reached down, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a grounding, nervous tic she had never quite shaken." | | 1 | "The trees didn't possess bark; their trunks were textured like braided dark chocolate, weeping thick, amber sap that crystallized into glittering amber gems on the ground." | | 2 | "Heavy, bulbous fruits hung from the branches—some shaped like fluted glass jars holding swirling blue liquid, others resembling swollen, velvety figs that slowly exhaled puffs of fragrant cinnamon-scented dust whenever a breeze stirred the air." | | 3 | "Fountains didn't spray water; they cascaded with shimmering, iridescent liquids—some thick and creamy like condensed milk, others sparkling and clear, catching the amber light in a dazzling array of rainbows." | | 4 | "Some moved with too many joints; others had horns of polished obsidian curved back over their hair." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 806 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "ice-cold against her" | | 2 | "fragrant cinnamon-scented dust" | | 3 | "sharp, clear-headed reality" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02357320099255583 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007444168734491315 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 54 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 54 | | mean | 17.8 | | std | 8.31 | | cv | 0.467 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 85.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5370370370370371 | | totalSentences | 54 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the sounds began to" | | 1 | "Everywhere she looked, figures were" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "They stood tall at her" | | 2 | "It was a reassuring weight." | | 3 | "They stood at the edge" | | 4 | "It wasn't the quiet of" | | 5 | "She felt the cold assurance" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 62.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of caramelized honey" | | 1 | "She stepped through the shimmering" | | 2 | "The cool, damp air of" | | 3 | "The Shade’s voice was like" | | 4 | "They stood tall at her" | | 5 | "The faint, violet glow of" | | 6 | "Rory reached down, her fingers" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem, usually" | | 8 | "Rory said, the name tasting" | | 9 | "The Gluttony realm." | | 10 | "Nyx whispered, their form softening," | | 11 | "Rory admitted, though she kept" | | 12 | "The moonsilver dagger, a parting" | | 13 | "It was a reassuring weight." | | 14 | "They stood at the edge" | | 15 | "The trees didn't possess bark;" | | 16 | "Rory took a step forward," | | 17 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 18 | "The leaves on the chocolate-trunked" | | 19 | "Nyx cautioned, their smoky arm" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through the shimmering tear in the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt less like dirt and more like crushed velvet." | | 1 | "They stood tall at her flank, a shifting silhouette of ink-black smoke that bled into the amber light of this new sky." | | 2 | "Rory reached down, her fingers brushing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a grounding, nervous tic she had never quite shaken." | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem, usually dormant, was thrumming like a trapped bird, radiating a heat that bordered on uncomfortable." | | 4 | "The trees didn't possess bark; their trunks were textured like braided dark chocolate, weeping thick, amber sap that crystallized into glittering amber gems on …" | | 5 | "Below them lay a sprawling estate that seemed to have no beginning and no end." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, the name tasting foreign and heavy on her tongue" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |