Run: 2026-05-20-01KS26232WWD06M304SMDCPBZ7

Run Details

Duration:
12.6s
Cost:
$0.018333
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cobblestones of Soho, reflecting the distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest in trembling emerald puddles. Inside, the air smelled of stale stout, orange peel, and the damp wool of coats drying near the radiators. Rory squeezed a lemon wedge into her soda water, watching the yellow pulp rise and fall. Behind the bar, Silas polished a highball glass, his silver signet ring tapping a slow, rhythmic beat against the crystal. The slight scrape of his left leg on the floorboards tracked his movement down to the taps. The heavy oak door groaned open, letting in a gust of raw November air and the distant hiss of London traffic. Rory didn't turn. She listened to the wet footsteps squeaking across the linoleum, heading toward the empty stool beside her. "Rory?" The voice cracked through the low hum of the jazz speaker overhead. It was a Cardiff voice, softened around the edges by years away, but still holding that melodic lilt she had spent thirty months trying to scrub from her own throat. She turned her head. Evan stood there, the collar of his wax jacket turned up, dark curls plastered to his forehead by the storm. He looked smaller than she remembered. The broad shoulders that used to crowd her out of her own flat seemed pinched now, drawn inward against the cold. Only his eyes remained the same—that sharp, assessing green that always made her feel like she was standing under a faulty streetlamp. "You're in London." Evan slid onto the stool, his hands flat on the polished mahogany. His knuckles were red from the wind. "Eva said you were here, but she wouldn't tell me where. I’ve been looking for you, Laila." "Don't call me that." Rory set her glass down with a sharp click. "It’s Rory. It’s always been Rory." Silas paused in his wiping, his hazel eyes locking onto Evan from beneath his grey-streaked brows. He didn't move away, but his presence behind the bar became a physical weight, a quiet promise of iron. Evan noticed. He glanced at Silas, then back to Rory, a thin, patronising smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. "New friends. New name. You've been busy." "Two years is a long time." Rory kept her voice level, drawing on the calm she had learned in this very room, watching Silas disarm angry drunks with nothing but a steady gaze. "What are you doing in Soho, Evan?" "I had a meeting in Bloomsbury. A consultancy firm." He gestured to his leather briefcase, spotless despite the deluge outside. "They’re offering me junior partner by spring. I thought... well, I hoped I might run into you if I stayed near the West End. You always liked the theatres." "I liked the cheap tickets on Tuesdays." Rory looked at his hands. He was wearing a gold watch now. Not the silver one his father gave him, but something heavy and expensive. "You look different. You've done well for yourself." "I had to clean up my act," Evan said, leaning in. His breath smelled of expensive peppermint and damp wool. "After you left... Cardiff got very quiet. Your father wouldn’t even look at me in the chambers. I realized I had to change. I'm a different man now, Rory. Truly." "Are you?" "I don't drink the spirits anymore. Only wine with dinner. I’ve got a flat in Richmond. Garden terrace. Quiet neighbors." He reached out, his fingers twitching toward her wrist, where her sleeve had slid up to reveal the small crescent-shaped scar. Rory pulled her hand back, wrapping it around her cold glass. "Sounds peaceful." "It could be." Evan's voice dropped, dropping the polished, corporate cadence. For a split second, the boy from the Welsh valleys peeked through—the one who used to write terrible poetry on the backs of coaster wrappers in university pubs. "I still have your copy of *The Law of Contract*. The one with all your coffee stains on the cover. I couldn't throw it out." "You should have," Rory said. "I failed that module anyway." "Because you walked out of the exam." "Because I didn't want to spend the rest of my life arguing over other people’s ruined promises." Silas stepped forward, setting a clean coaster in front of Evan. "Can I get you something, sir?" The 'sir' was polite, but Silas' voice had the dry, scraping texture of gravel. He stood with his weight shifted off his weak knee, his posture perfectly erect, looking down at the younger man with the detached curiosity of a taxidermist examining a specimen. "A sparkling water, please," Evan said, his tone shifting into the polite, deferential register he used for senior partners and landlords. Silas nodded once and shuffled away, his limp barely noticeable if you didn't know what to look for. "He's protective," Evan murmured, watching Silas. "Is he...?" "He's my landlord," Rory said. "He lets me live upstairs. He lets me be." Evan flinched at the emphasis on the last word. He stared at his reflection in the dark varnish of the bar. "You think I didn't let you be? I wanted the best for you, Rory. You were brilliant. You could have been a barrister. Now you're... what? Eva said you're delivering food for some takeaway down in Chinatown?" "Golden Empress," Rory said, a small, genuine smile touching her lips. "The duck is excellent. And the tips are decent." "It’s a waste." "It’s quiet." Rory turned her stool to face him fully, her bright blue eyes steady. "I don't have to argue. I don't have to defend myself before I've even said good morning. I carry a box, I drop it off, I get paid. Then I come home here, and I read what I want, and nobody asks me to explain myself." Evan looked down at his own polished brogues, dark with rain. "I made mistakes. I know that. The shouting... I was under so much pressure with the pupillage. But I wanted us to build something." "You wanted to build a cage and call it a home," Rory said. Her voice didn't shake. The old panic—the familiar tightening in her chest that used to make her flee to the bathroom just to breathe—didn't come. There was only a profound, hollow exhaustion. "We were twenty-two, Evan. We were children who didn't know how to carry our own anger, so we threw it at each other." "I never hated you." "I know." Rory watched Silas set the sparkling water down. "That was the scariest part. You thought you loved me while you were breaking my things." Evan took a slow sip of the water. The ice clinked against the glass, a sharp, fragile sound in the quiet bar. A couple in the corner booth laughed, the sound warm and distant. "You've gone cold," Evan whispered. "You used to be so loud. You used to fight back." "I learned how to win," Rory said. "By leaving the room." Evan stared at her for a long moment, searching her face for the girl who used to cry in the library stacks, the girl who would apologize for the weather if it ruined his weekend plans. He found nothing but the cool, still surface of a deep well. He reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a leather wallet, sliding a twenty-pound note onto the counter. He didn't touch his water again. "If you ever want to see Cardiff again," he said, his voice barely audible over the jazz. "My parents still ask about you. They don't understand." "Tell them I'm learning the city," Rory said. Evan picked up his briefcase. He stood there for three seconds, his lips parted as if he had one more argument to present, one more motion to file. But the courtroom was empty, and the judge had already retired. He turned and walked out, his shoes squeaking on the wood, the green neon light catching his shoulder before the heavy door shut behind him. Rory watched the door rattle in its frame. Silas swiped the twenty-pound note off the bar, folding it with his right hand, the silver signet ring gleaming under the low hanging pendants. He didn't ask if she was alright. He just took her empty soda glass and began to refill it.
created_at"2026-05-20T07:54:31.393Z" 5/20/2026, 7:54:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"truly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"profound"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"crystal"
2"footsteps"
3"lilt"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"profound"
7"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1383
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Law of Contract"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount894
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
November1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan15
Rory16
Welsh1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Welsh"
globalScore0.605
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed pinched now, drawn inward against the cold"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.723
wordCount1383
matches
0"Not the silver one his father gave him, but something heavy"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.07
std21.44
cv0.713
sampleLengths
092
121
220
31
442
54
669
739
819
935
1028
1140
1249
1340
1450
152
1641
1713
1864
1910
207
2117
2217
2344
2421
2518
268
2714
2858
2920
303
3161
3235
3368
344
3526
3634
3716
3811
3948
4025
4126
428
4364
448
4543
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was standing"
1"was wearing"
55.39% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences98
ratio0.031
matches
0"Only his eyes remained the same—that sharp, assessing green that always made her feel like she was standing under a faulty streetlamp."
1"For a split second, the boy from the Welsh valleys peeked through—the one who used to write terrible poetry on the backs of coaster wrappers in university pubs."
2"The old panic—the familiar tightening in her chest that used to make her flee to the bathroom just to breathe—didn't come."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount692
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"stale stout, orange peel,"
1"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02167630057803468
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001445086705202312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean14.11
std9.25
cv0.655
sampleLengths
020
119
216
320
417
521
63
717
81
912
1030
114
1220
136
1421
1522
1615
177
1817
1913
206
2116
2219
232
2419
257
2633
277
2820
2929
3012
317
3213
338
3411
359
3630
372
3841
3911
402
4111
4228
4325
445
455
467
4717
4811
496
57.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3979591836734694
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners39
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Only his eyes remained the"
ratio0.016
78.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences62
matches
0"She listened to the wet"
1"It was a Cardiff voice,"
2"She turned her head."
3"He looked smaller than she"
4"His knuckles were red from"
5"He didn't move away, but"
6"He glanced at Silas, then"
7"He gestured to his leather"
8"He was wearing a gold"
9"His breath smelled of expensive"
10"He reached out, his fingers"
11"He stood with his weight"
12"He stared at his reflection"
13"Her voice didn't shake."
14"He found nothing but the"
15"He reached into his breast"
16"He didn't touch his water"
17"he said, his voice barely"
18"He stood there for three"
19"He turned and walked out,"
ratio0.355
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of"
1"Rory squeezed a lemon wedge"
2"The slight scrape of his"
3"The heavy oak door groaned"
4"Rory didn't turn."
5"She listened to the wet"
6"The voice cracked through the"
7"It was a Cardiff voice,"
8"She turned her head."
9"Evan stood there, the collar"
10"He looked smaller than she"
11"The broad shoulders that used"
12"Evan slid onto the stool,"
13"His knuckles were red from"
14"Rory set her glass down"
15"Silas paused in his wiping,"
16"He didn't move away, but"
17"He glanced at Silas, then"
18"Rory kept her voice level,"
19"He gestured to his leather"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The broad shoulders that used to crowd her out of her own flat seemed pinched now, drawn inward against the cold."
1"Evan stared at her for a long moment, searching her face for the girl who used to cry in the library stacks, the girl who would apologize for the weather if it …"
2"He turned and walked out, his shoes squeaking on the wood, the green neon light catching his shoulder before the heavy door shut behind him."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Evan slid, his hands flat on the polished mahogany"
1"he said, his voice barely audible over the jazz"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Evan murmured (murmur)"
1"Evan whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.458
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.083
83.5595%