Run: 2026-05-22-01KS85Y8NJ2H53H4Z87W2R1YNJ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.065247
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic clack. Rory pulled the door inward, the hinges groaning against the damp London air. Lucien Moreau occupied the narrow hallway. His tailored charcoal suit absorbed the dim light from the flickering bulb overhead. He leaned his weight on the ivory-handled cane, the platinum blond hair slicked back in severe precision. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her face. Ptolemy wound between Rory’s ankles, purring hard enough to rattle the floorboards. "Eva is in Prague." Rory kept her grip tight on the brass doorknob. "I am not here for Eva." Lucien’s French accent clipped the edges of his words. He shifted his weight, the silver tip of his cane clicking against the worn linoleum. Rory stepped back, leaving the threshold open. She gestured toward the cramped interior of the flat. "Watch the stacks. Eva left her research notes everywhere." Lucien crossed the threshold. The scent of bergamot and ozone followed him, cutting through the permanent aroma of turmeric and cumin drifting up from the curry house below. He navigated the narrow path between towering piles of leather-bound books and scattered parchment scrolls. Rory shoved the door shut and threw the three deadbolts back into place. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stretched taut against her skin. "You have exactly five minutes before I call Silas and have him toss you into the Thames." Rory leaned against the kitchenette counter, knocking a stack of mail onto the floor. She left it there. Lucien traced the spine of a crumbling grimoire with a gloved finger. "Silas lacks the reach to touch me, and you know it." "I know you bleed when cut." He withdrew his hand from the book and turned to face her. The amber eye caught the weak light filtering through the grime-caked window. "We parted on poor terms, Aurora. I concede that. But I did not come to rehash old grievances." "Then state your business and leave." "I require a translator for a localized dialect. Old Welsh. Specifically, the variations used in the Cardiff valleys during the late nineteenth century." Rory let out a sharp breath, uncrossing her arms to pick up a chipped mug from the drying rack. "You want me to translate a document. You bypassed three different university professors and a coven of hedgewitches to knock on my door at ten at night." "The document is sensitive. The academics ask too many questions, and the hedgewitches demand favors I am unwilling to grant." Lucien closed the distance between them, stopping just outside her personal space. The toe of his polished oxford shoe bumped the edge of the rug. "You possess the linguistic background. Your father is a barrister in Cardiff. You grew up surrounded by the dialect." "My father is a barrister, not an antiquarian. I dropped out of Pre-Law, Lucien. I deliver noodles for a living." Rory set the mug down with a sharp clatter. "Find someone else." "There is no one else." Ptolemy leaped onto the counter, knocking a tin of tea leaves onto the floor. The lid popped off, scattering loose black leaves across the scuffed tiles. Rory crouched to gather the mess. Lucien knelt beside her. His gloved hand covered hers, stopping her frantic sweeping of the tea leaves. The leather was cool against her skin. "Let go of my hand." Rory kept her gaze fixed on the scattered leaves. "You are trembling." "I am angry." She yanked her hand free and stood up, brushing the tea dust from her jeans. "You vanished for six months. You left a note on my pillow that read 'Forget me', and then you disappeared into the underworld. You do not get to walk into my friend's flat and demand my help." Lucien rose to his full height. He towered over her in the confined space, the ceiling sloping down just inches above his head. He rested both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. "The note was a necessity." His voice dropped an octave, the smooth cadence fracturing. "Evan’s associates were tracking your movements. My proximity to you painted a target on your back. Leaving was the only viable method to ensure your survival." Rory froze. The hum of the refrigerator filled the silence. She stared at the knot of his silk tie. "You left to protect me." "I left because my presence endangered you." "You did not give me a choice." Rory stepped into his space, tilting her head up to meet his mismatched gaze. "You made the decision for me. You decided I was too fragile to handle the reality of your life, so you discarded me." "I did not discard you." Lucien’s jaw tightened. A muscle feathered in his cheek. He released his grip on the cane and raised his hand, his bare fingertips hovering an inch from her cheekbone. "Every day of the past six months has been an exercise in restraint. I monitored your employment at the Golden Empress. I watched you move into the flat above Silas’s bar. I ensured Evan’s crew lost your trail." "You watched me." Rory’s breath hitched. She leaned a fraction of an inch closer to his hovering hand. "You stalked me." "I protected you from a distance." His thumb grazed her jawline. The touch sent a jolt of heat straight down her spine. "When Evan’s enforcers realized you were no longer my weakness, they abandoned the hunt. The threat is neutralized." "So you came back." "I came back." Rory closed her eyes for a brief second, absorbing the warmth of his skin against hers. The scent of bergamot wrapped around her, drowning out the curry and the damp paper of Eva’s research. She opened her eyes and focused on the black pupil of his left eye. "The document," Rory kept her voice steady, though her pulse hammered against her ribs. "Where is it?" Lucien reached into the inner pocket of his charcoal jacket. He withdrew a folded piece of heavy vellum, sealed with cracking black wax. He held it out to her. Rory took the vellum. The wax felt rough against her thumb. She broke the seal and unfolded the document. The ink was faded, the script a tight, archaic scrawl. "It is a ledger," Lucien stated. "Detailing shipments through the Cardiff docks. I need to know the exact dates and the nature of the cargo." "The syntax is localized." Rory scanned the first few lines, her mind translating the archaic Welsh phrases. "They used colloquialisms to mask the true nature of the goods. 'Iron sheep' refers to something else." "Can you decipher it?" "Yes." Rory folded the vellum and tucked it into the back pocket of her jeans. "But it will take time. The ink is degraded, and the dialect shifts depending on the author's specific valley of origin." "I require the translation by tomorrow evening." Rory laughed, a short, harsh sound. "You want me to decode a century-old smuggler's ledger in twenty-four hours, while I am supposed to be covering a double shift at the restaurant." "I will compensate you for the lost wages." Lucien stepped back, retrieving his cane from the floor. "Name your price." "I do not want your money." Rory crossed the kitchen, putting the counter between them once more. She picked up the chipped mug and turned on the tap, filling it with cold water. "I want the truth. The whole truth. No more notes on pillows, no more vanishing acts to protect me from my own life." Lucien watched her drink. The amber eye darkened. "The underworld is not a place for humans, Aurora. The truth is a heavy burden. It corrupts." "I survived Evan. I survived Pre-Law. I think I can handle your truth." Rory set the mug in the sink. "If we are doing this, we do it on my terms. You sit at that table, you answer my questions about the context of the ledger, and you do not lie to me." Lucien pulled out a rickety wooden chair from the small dining table. He brushed a stack of index cards off the seat and sat down, resting his cane against the edge of the table. "Ask your questions." Rory pulled a stool from beneath the counter and sat opposite him. She retrieved the vellum from her pocket and smoothed it flat on the scarred wood of the table. Ptolemy jumped onto her lap, settling into a tight ball. "The first entry mentions a 'copper hound' arriving on the tide," Rory pointed to the faded script. "What does a copper hound signify in your circles?" "A weapon forged in Avaros." Lucien leaned forward, his shoulder brushing hers. "Smuggled through mortal ports to bypass the demonic border wards." Rory traced the line of ink with her fingernail. "The author notes the hound was 'lame in the left hind leg'. Does that mean the weapon was defective, or damaged in transit?" "Damaged. Avarosian steel warps when exposed to salt water." Rory grabbed a pen from a nearby cup and jotted down the translation in the margin. The scratch of the nib filled the quiet flat. Lucien’s presence radiated heat, pressing against her side. She kept her eyes on the parchment, refusing to look at the sharp line of his jaw or the way his charcoal sleeve stretched across his forearm. "Next entry," Rory tapped the paper. "Three 'silver birds' exchanged for a 'blind weaver'." "Information brokers," Lucien murmured, his breath stirring the loose strands of black hair falling over her shoulder. "Trading surveillance drones for a seer." Rory wrote the words down. Her hand cramped. She flexed her fingers, the crescent scar pulling tight. Lucien’s hand moved across the table. His fingers covered hers, stilling the pen. "You are pushing too hard." He lifted her hand, turning her wrist to examine the scar. "Take a break." "I have a deadline." Rory pulled her hand back, picking up the pen again. "You said tomorrow evening." "I will grant you an extension." "I do not need an extension." Rory kept her gaze locked on the vellum. "I need you to explain the 'blind weaver'. Is the seer bound to the broker, or is it a temporary contract?" "Temporary." Lucien withdrew his hand, folding his arms across his chest. "The seer provides three visions, then the contract dissolves." Rory nodded, writing the details in precise block letters. The cramped flat felt smaller with every passing minute. The air grew thick, charged with the unsaid words hanging between them. She finished the line and set the pen down. "That is all I can decipher tonight. The lighting is poor, and my eyes are straining." Lucien stood up. He picked up his cane and adjusted his cuffs. "I will return tomorrow at dusk." Rory remained seated, her hand resting on Ptolemy’s tabby fur. "Bring better light. And do not knock. I will leave the bottom deadbolt unlocked."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.73
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.027
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1831
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1831
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"ensure"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"navigated"
2"traced"
3"ensure"
4"silence"
5"silk"
6"down her spine"
7"warmth"
8"pulse"
9"scanned"
10"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1831
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
1.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1043
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Moreau1
Rory31
Lucien19
French1
Ptolemy4
Eva1
Welsh1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.014
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1831
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean27.33
std15.99
cv0.585
sampleLengths
023
147
212
313
430
525
643
737
835
923
106
1142
126
1323
1446
1564
1632
175
1826
1930
2014
213
2255
2334
2440
2524
267
2744
2872
2921
3040
314
323
3348
3417
3529
3629
3725
3834
394
4036
417
4231
4320
4456
4525
4653
4734
483
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was faded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences148
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.012416427889207259
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean12.37
std7.33
cv0.592
sampleLengths
010
113
26
313
417
511
612
713
815
915
107
119
129
134
1424
1515
1613
1711
1813
1931
204
2112
2211
236
2412
2512
2618
276
2823
2919
3027
3132
3213
3319
3429
353
365
3714
3812
396
404
4113
427
4314
443
4518
4637
476
4817
4911
46.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3108108108108108
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences99
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit absorbed"
1"He leaned his weight on"
2"He shifted his weight, the"
3"She gestured toward the cramped"
4"He navigated the narrow path"
5"She turned to face him,"
6"She left it there."
7"He withdrew his hand from"
8"His gloved hand covered hers,"
9"She yanked her hand free"
10"He towered over her in"
11"He rested both hands on"
12"His voice dropped an octave,"
13"She stared at the knot"
14"He released his grip on"
15"She leaned a fraction of"
16"His thumb grazed her jawline"
17"She opened her eyes and"
18"He withdrew a folded piece"
19"He held it out to"
ratio0.313
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences99
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door inward,"
2"Lucien Moreau occupied the narrow"
3"His tailored charcoal suit absorbed"
4"He leaned his weight on"
5"Ptolemy wound between Rory’s ankles,"
6"Rory kept her grip tight"
7"Lucien’s French accent clipped the"
8"He shifted his weight, the"
9"Rory stepped back, leaving the"
10"She gestured toward the cramped"
11"Lucien crossed the threshold."
12"The scent of bergamot and"
13"He navigated the narrow path"
14"Rory shoved the door shut"
15"She turned to face him,"
16"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
17"Rory leaned against the kitchenette"
18"She left it there."
19"Lucien traced the spine of"
ratio0.99
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
50.93% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"His voice dropped, the smooth cadence fracturing"
1"Rory kept, though her pulse hammered against her ribs"
2"Rory scanned, her mind translating the archaic Welsh phrases"
3"Lucien leaned, his shoulder brushing hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien stated (state)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.054
81.7320%