Run: 2026-05-22-01KS860X3AJZRDTS3XBAR4Z9PD

Run Details

Duration:
2m 23s
Cost:
$0.061483
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The top deadbolt clicked. Rory twisted the middle lock, then wrenched the bottom one free. She hauled the heavy wooden door open, ready to yell at Eva for forgetting her keys again. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau filled the cramped hallway. Rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit. He leaned his weight onto his ivory-handled cane, the hidden blade clicking faintly against the floorboards. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a single strand out of place despite the storm outside. You changed the locks. His gaze flicked to the three deadbolts. Eva did. Rory tightened her grip on the brass handle. The small crescent scar on her left wrist stretched taut. She values her privacy. Three locks will not keep out what is coming up the stairs, Aurora. It is Rory. And nothing is coming up the stairs except the smell of burnt garlic. She moved to slam the door. His gloved hand shot out, catching the wood. The leather creaked. Please. The single word hung in the damp air. Lucien never begged. He negotiated. He brokered. He commanded. Rory stared at his hand, then up to his face. The amber eye burned with a feverish heat, while the black one remained a void. She stepped back and pulled the door wide. He crossed the threshold, bringing the scent of ozone and expensive cologne into the flat. He paused in the entryway, taking in the stacks of grimoires, the unrolled parchment scrolls, and the teetering towers of research notes covering every available surface. Your friend has a hoarding problem. He stepped over a pile of translated Sumerian texts. She has a research obsession. Keep your voice down. Rory shut the door and threw the deadbolts back into place. The metallic snaps echoed in the small space. Why are you here, Lucien? We agreed. We agreed to stay out of each other's way. He turned, his coat brushing a stack of textbooks. Circumstances changed. A tabby cat leaped from the top of a bookshelf. Ptolemy landed silently on the kitchen counter, his green eyes locking onto the half-demon. The cat let out a low, vibrating growl. Your beast dislikes me. Lucien unbuttoned his jacket. He is a rescue. He dislikes everyone. Rory crossed her arms, putting the kitchen island between them. You have five minutes. I have a shift at the Golden Empress in an hour, and Yu-Fei docks my pay if I am late. Lucien rested his hands on the head of his cane. You deliver noodles to avoid the underworld, yet you spend your evenings in a flat that smells of dark magic and old dust. I am helping Eva. It is not my life. Is it not? He took a step forward. The floorboards groaned under his weight. You ran from Cardiff. You ran from Evan. You ran from me. You build walls out of curry houses and deadbolts and pretend you are safe. I am safe. Her voice dropped to a harsh whisper. She dug her fingernails into her palms. I do not have to look over my shoulder. I do not have to wonder if the man in my bed is going to bleed out on my sheets because a rival syndicate put a price on his head. Lucien’s jaw tightened. A muscle feathered in his cheek. I told you to leave London. I told you to go back to Wales. And I told you to go to hell. The silence stretched, heavy and cloying. Ptolemy stopped growling and began to wash a paw, indifferent to the tension. Lucien closed the distance between them. He stopped at the edge of the counter, close enough for her to feel the heat radiating from his skin. The ambient magic of his demon blood always made the air around him feel charged, like the moment before a lightning strike. Evan is in London. Rory’s breath hitched. She pressed her palms flat against the cool Formica counter to stop her hands from shaking. Evan is in prison. He made parole. Three weeks ago. Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering an inch from her arm. He did not touch her. He has been asking questions in the East End. Looking for a girl with black hair and a quick temper. I can handle myself. You are a human who delivers food on a bicycle. His voice softened, losing its usual aristocratic edge. You are brilliant, Rory. You outsmarted a room full of pre-law barristers. But Evan is not a debate opponent. He is a brute with a grudge and nothing to lose. She looked away, focusing on a cracked teacup sitting near the sink. Her throat tightened, the phantom pressure of Evan’s thumbs pressing against her windpipe. She blinked the memory away, forcing her posture to straighten. Why do you care? She snapped her gaze back to him. You made it very clear six months ago that my problems were a liability to your business. My business is information. Your business is lying. She leveled her chin. You pushed me away because you thought you were protecting me. You played the cold, untouchable fixer. You broke my heart to save my life, and you did not even give me the courtesy of a real goodbye. Lucien’s knuckles turned white where he gripped the ivory handle of his cane. A goodbye would have made you stay. It would have made me fight for us. He let out a breath that sounded like a curse. He moved around the counter. Rory did not retreat. She stood her ground as he invaded her space, the toes of his polished oxfords bumping against her scuffed boots. He raised a hand, his leather glove brushing a stray lock of straight black hair behind her ear. The touch sent a jolt of electricity straight down her spine. His amber eye tracked the movement of her throat as she swallowed. I am a monster, Rory. His thumb traced the line of her jaw. My father rules a realm of ash and torment. My blood is poison. You deserve a quiet life. A human life. I never asked for quiet. She leaned into his touch, just a fraction, before catching herself. She grabbed his wrist, her fingers wrapping around the fine wool of his suit sleeve. I asked for you. His breath caught. He dropped his hand from her face, but she kept her grip on his wrist. The pulse beneath his skin beat in a rapid, uneven rhythm. If I stay, I need to know the truth. She released his wrist and stepped back, creating a sliver of space between them. The cold air rushed in to fill the gap. No more vanishing in the middle of the night. No more cryptic warnings. If we are doing this, you do not get to make decisions for me. The underworld will tear you apart. Let them try. She grabbed her damp jacket from the hook by the door. Eva has wards on this flat. I have three deadbolts. And I have you. Lucien stared at her, the black eye seemingly absorbing the dim light of the kitchen. He tilted his head, a faint smirk touching the corner of his mouth. You are entirely unreasonable. I am a barrister's daughter. It is in my blood. Rory turned toward the hallway, her hand resting on the brass doorknob. Now, are you going to stand there looking like a brooding aristocrat, or are you going to help me find Evan before he finds me? Lucien adjusted his cuffs, the ivory cane tapping a sharp rhythm against the floor. I already know where he is. Then lead the way, Frenchman.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"echoed"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"tension"
6"charged"
7"down her spine"
8"traced"
9"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1284
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1284
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Aurora1
Rory11
Sumerian1
Lucien11
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff1
Evan6
London2
Wales1
Formica1
East1
End1
Frenchman1
You16
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Sumerian"
4"Lucien"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Evan"
7"You"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Wales"
4"East"
5"End"
globalScore0.877
windowScore0.5
96.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a curse"
1"the black eye seemingly absorbing the dim l"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1284
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.2
std15.35
cv0.586
sampleLengths
032
16
249
311
424
513
622
712
817
933
1041
1115
1235
1320
1432
158
1641
1733
189
1940
2056
2123
228
2319
2448
254
2623
2742
284
2948
3035
3128
324
3346
3420
358
3639
3741
3834
3935
4029
4159
426
4328
4428
454
4647
4720
485
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs230
matches
0"were protecting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences152
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1287
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"No more cryptic warnings."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.020202020202020204
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003108003108003108
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean8.45
std5.45
cv0.646
sampleLengths
04
111
217
36
46
59
616
718
84
97
102
118
1210
134
1413
153
1613
176
188
193
201
218
223
232
242
252
2610
2715
288
2915
3026
316
329
335
344
3511
368
375
382
399
409
412
4210
4314
448
454
464
474
483
4910
38.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.21052631578947367
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners32
22.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"Then lead the way, Frenchman."
ratio0.007
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences145
matches
0"She hauled the heavy wooden"
1"He leaned his weight onto"
2"His platinum blond hair was"
3"You changed the locks."
4"His gaze flicked to the"
5"She values her privacy."
6"It is Rory."
7"She moved to slam the"
8"His gloved hand shot out,"
9"She stepped back and pulled"
10"He crossed the threshold, bringing"
11"He paused in the entryway,"
12"Your friend has a hoarding"
13"He stepped over a pile"
14"She has a research obsession."
15"We agreed to stay out"
16"He turned, his coat brushing"
17"Your beast dislikes me."
18"He is a rescue."
19"He dislikes everyone."
ratio0.579
22.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount127
totalSentences145
matches
0"The top deadbolt clicked."
1"Rory twisted the middle lock,"
2"She hauled the heavy wooden"
3"The words died in her"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the cramped"
5"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
6"He leaned his weight onto"
7"His platinum blond hair was"
8"You changed the locks."
9"His gaze flicked to the"
10"Rory tightened her grip on"
11"The small crescent scar on"
12"She values her privacy."
13"It is Rory."
14"She moved to slam the"
15"His gloved hand shot out,"
16"The leather creaked."
17"The single word hung in"
18"Lucien never begged."
19"Rory stared at his hand,"
ratio0.876
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences145
matches
0"If I stay, I need"
1"If we are doing this,"
2"Now, are you going to"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7797%