| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.459 | | leniency | 0.919 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "fragmented" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "navigated" | | 13 | "charm" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1303 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Rory | 21 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.448 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like cold glass" | | 1 | "as if begging for the water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 31.02 | | std | 19.22 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 106 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1004 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.01693227091633466 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00298804780876494 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 5.19 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 54.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3728813559322034 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 1 | "Their humanoid silhouette of living" | | 2 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 3 | "She left no indentations in" | | 4 | "It dripped onto the ferns" | | 5 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 6 | "She brushed them away, leaving" | | 7 | "It felt warm." | | 8 | "They followed the narrow path." | | 9 | "She wiped her palm on" | | 10 | "Her breath plumed in white" | | 11 | "She unclasped the Heartstone pendant," | | 12 | "She stared into the upward-flowing" | | 13 | "She drew the slender, leaf-shaped" |
| | ratio | 0.144 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmering distortion of the" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the gap" | | 2 | "Static electricity snapped against the" | | 3 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 4 | "Richmond Park vanished." | | 5 | "The damp chill of a" | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 7 | "The blooms turned their faces" | | 8 | "Petals unfurled with soft, wet" | | 9 | "Vines the thickness of a" | | 10 | "Nyx drifted past her." | | 11 | "Their humanoid silhouette of living" | | 12 | "Nyx's voice rustled, a whisper" | | 13 | "Isolde glided over the threshold." | | 14 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 15 | "She left no indentations in" | | 16 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 17 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 18 | "The Fae-forged blade resting against" | | 19 | "Isolde tilted her head, listening" |
| | ratio | 0.969 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.27% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The light pulsed in time with a low, subsonic vibration that rattled Rory's teeth." | | 1 | "Statues of faceless figures knelt around the perimeter, their hands outstretched as if begging for the water." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted down beside her, their form flickering as the water cast shifting reflections." |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's voice rustled, a whisper carried on a breeze that stirred no leaves" | | 1 | "Rory took, her hand hovering near the moonsilver dagger" | | 2 | "Isolde knelt, her fingers hovering an inch above a blooming blue lotus" | | 3 | "Isolde descended, her bare feet making no sound" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |