Run: 2026-05-22-01KS865VDT9BZCAVX0FD3W3VF0

Run Details

Duration:
2m 47s
Cost:
$0.078820
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil tore with a sound like ripping silk. Rory shoved her shoulder through the rift, stumbling as the atmospheric pressure dropped. The chill of the London night vanished, replaced by an oppressive heat that coated her tongue in the taste of copper and overripe plums. She caught her balance on a root the thickness of a car tire. The bark felt like warm, scaled leather beneath her palms. Nyx glided through the tear. The shade’s form rippled, shifting from a wisp of smoke into a solid, towering silhouette. Glowing violet eyes scanned the perimeter. The rift snapped shut, sealing them in. Rory looked up. A bruised, warm amber sky stretched overhead, devoid of a sun or clouds. The light emanated from everywhere and nowhere, casting long, strange shadows that stretched toward them. Her fingers brushed the silver chain at her collar. The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum, pulsing with a rhythmic warmth that matched her own heartbeat. "We crossed." Nyx’s form shifted, a dry breeze rustling the massive leaves above as the shade's voice carried on the wind. "The Boundary is sealed." Rory unclasped her hand from the pendant and rested it on the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver felt like dry ice through the leather sheath. "Which way to the vineyards?" Nyx pointed a shadowy, elongated finger toward a valley sloping downward. "The scent of rot and sugar flows from the basin." They descended into the alien orchard. Trees with trunks like twisted, muscular limbs towered fifty feet high. Their leaves were a deep, bruised purple, and fruits the size of human heads hung heavy on the branches. Thick, golden sap dripped from the stems, pooling on the mossy ground with a hiss. Rory sidestepped a puddle of the sap. The moss beneath her boots squelched, retracting from her weight. "Don't touch the sap." Nyx drifted an inch above the ground, their shadow stretching across the pulsing moss. "It digests." Rory pulled her hands closer to her chest. She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb. "Prince Belphegor’s domain." Rory lowered her voice, scanning the dense canopy. "Everything here is designed to be consumed." "Or to consume." A low, vibrating hum echoed through the trunks. The sound vibrated in Rory’s teeth. She paused, tilting her head to listen. The hum resolved into a chorus of wet tearing noises, punctuated by the clinking of heavy metal against stone. "A feast." "A perpetual one." Nyx’s violet eyes narrowed, the glow dimming as they drew deeper into the shadows cast by the massive trunks. "The helbound souls contracted from Earth prepare the meals. The Dymasian elite partake." Rory pushed through a curtain of hanging vines. The leaves brushed her jacket, leaving a dusting of sparkling pollen. She brushed it off, watching the specks dissolve into her fabric. The orchard gave way to a sprawling garden of impossible geometry. Hedges of thorny, crimson roses formed labyrinthine walls. Fountains carved from black obsidian spat streams of dark, violet liquid into wide basins. The air grew heavier, thick with the aroma of roasting meats, exotic spices, and a cloying floral perfume that made Rory’s eyes water. She blinked away the sting and focused on the path. The cobblestones beneath her feet were polished smooth, worn down by centuries of foot traffic. "Look at the stones." Rory pointed to the ground. Nyx drifted lower, examining the deep, parallel grooves carved into the rock. "Claw marks. Whatever walks this path does not wear shoes." Rory stepped over a groove wide enough to fit her entire forearm. "How big are the Dymasian lords?" "Large enough to require a banquet hall the size of a cathedral." They followed the worn path deeper into the garden. The hedges grew taller, blocking out the ambient amber light and plunging the corridor into a dusky twilight. Bioluminescent fungi sprouted from the base of the thorny walls, casting a pale, sickly green glow over the cobblestones. The thorns on the hedges were the length of carving knives, glistening with a clear, viscous fluid. Rory leaned in to inspect a cluster of crimson petals. The flower snapped shut like a jaw, missing her nose by an inch. She jerked back, her heart hammering against her ribs. "The flora is carnivorous." Rory wiped a bead of sweat from her forehead. "Everything in Dymas hungers." Nyx glided past the snapping blossom, unbothered by the thorns. "The plants, the beasts, the lords. It is the sin that defines the realm." Rory drew the Fae blade. The slender, leaf-shaped dagger slid from its sheath with a chime. The moonsilver caught the green fungal light, glowing with a chilled luminescence. The chill of the metal seeped into her palm, grounding her against the heat of the realm. "Keep it drawn." Nyx’s form blurred at the edges, merging with the shadows of the hedges. "The wards here are old. The blade will cut through the illusions." Rory nodded, keeping the dagger angled toward the ground. She swept her gaze across the top of the hedges. Movement flickered in the periphery of her vision. A massive, multi-jointed limb, pale and glistening, retracted behind the crimson leaves. She tightened her grip on the hilt. "We aren't alone in the maze." "The gardeners tend to the flora." Nyx materialized beside a fountain, watching the violet liquid cascade into the basin. "And the flora tends to the gardeners. It is a cycle of gluttony." The path opened into a vast, circular clearing. At the center stood an ancient, crumbling amphitheater carved from pale, porous stone. The architecture was brutal and sweeping, with arches that soared into the amber sky. Giant stone faces, their mouths stretched wide in silent, agonizing screams, formed the pillars supporting the vaulted roof. Rory approached the edge of the amphitheater. The Heartstone pendant flared with intense heat against her skin, the crimson gemstone glowing brightly through her shirt. She pressed her hand over the pendant, wincing at the temperature. "There’s a rift nearby. A big one." Nyx solidified completely, their shadowy boots touching the cobblestones. They walked to the edge of the clearing, leaving no footprints in the dust. "Not a rift. A gateway. A permanent tear in the Veil, anchored to this structure." Rory stepped down into the amphitheater. The air inside was cooler, carrying the metallic tang of old blood and the dusty scent of undisturbed centuries. Rows of petrified wood benches descended toward a central dais. The petrified wood benches were carved with scenes of grotesque indulgence. Figures with too many limbs gorged on unrecognizable beasts, their faces twisted in ecstatic agony. Rory ran her fingers over a carving of a towering, horned figure pouring wine from a skull. The stone was smooth, polished by the touch of countless worshippers. On the dais sat a massive table carved from a single piece of dark, polished bone. Platters of tarnished silver and gold littered the surface, piled high with the desiccated remains of ancient feasts. Flies the size of sparrows buzzed around the rotting meat. Rory walked down the steps, her boots echoing in the cavernous space. She reached the dais and inspected the table. The bone was etched with intricate, swirling runes that pulsed with an amber light. "This isn't just a dining hall." Rory traced the edge of the bone table with her free hand. "It’s an altar." Nyx drifted down to join her, hovering just above the floor. "The lords of Dymas do not distinguish between worship and consumption. To eat is to pray. To feast is to commune." Rory looked up at the vaulted ceiling. The stone faces stared down at them, their carved eyes empty and judging. A low rumble shook the floorboards beneath the dust. The amphitheater groaned, the sound of grinding stone echoing through the arches. "Something is waking up." Rory raised the Fae blade. The moonsilver flared, casting sharp, cold shadows across the bone table. Heavy, wet footsteps echoed from the darkness beyond the far archway. The sound of tearing meat and cracking bone grew louder, accompanied by a low, guttural breathing that rattled the tarnished platters on the table. Rory shifted her stance, planting her feet on the stone. She kept her eyes on the archway, the cold hilt of the dagger a stark contrast to the burning heat of the Heartstone against her chest. A massive, shadow-draped hand with elongated, obsidian claws gripped the edge of the archway. The stone cracked under the pressure, sending a shower of pale dust onto the steps.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"oppressive"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
11
word"glistening"
count2
12
word"chilled"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"structure"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count2
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"intricate"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count1
19
word"traced"
count1
20
word"footsteps"
count1
21
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"chill"
2"oppressive"
3"scanned"
4"rhythmic"
5"warmth"
6"weight"
7"scanning"
8"echoed"
9"vibrated"
10"resolved"
11"glistening"
12"chilled"
13"flickered"
14"structure"
15"echoing"
16"etched"
17"intricate"
18"pulsed"
19"traced"
20"footsteps"
21"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1431
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1223
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
London1
Heartstone3
Rory23
Fae-forged1
Nyx11
Fae3
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.56
windowScore0.667
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like warm, scaled leather beneath"
1"felt like dry ice through the leather s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1431
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"runes that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.06
std14.05
cv0.501
sampleLengths
050
123
226
37
431
526
625
730
85
921
1051
1117
1220
1321
1418
153
1640
172
1835
1930
2056
2125
229
2322
2418
2512
2646
2749
2813
2928
3045
3128
3239
337
346
3532
3653
3725
3818
3938
4035
4154
4244
4334
4421
4532
4641
4720
4835
4936
98.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"were carved"
1"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences120
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1227
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
2"massive, shadow-draped hand"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.013039934800325998
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0024449877750611247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean11.93
std4.95
cv0.415
sampleLengths
013
113
224
313
410
55
615
76
87
93
1013
1115
129
1317
1421
154
1620
1710
185
1911
2010
216
2211
2319
2415
257
2610
2718
282
298
3013
3111
327
333
348
356
367
3719
382
3922
4013
418
4211
4311
4411
458
4614
4723
4810
4915
53.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences101
matches
0"She caught her balance on"
1"Her fingers brushed the silver"
2"They descended into the alien"
3"Their leaves were a deep,"
4"She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
5"She paused, tilting her head"
6"She brushed it off, watching"
7"She blinked away the sting"
8"They followed the worn path"
9"She jerked back, her heart"
10"She swept her gaze across"
11"She tightened her grip on"
12"She pressed her hand over"
13"They walked to the edge"
14"She reached the dais and"
15"She kept her eyes on"
ratio0.158
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences101
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"Rory shoved her shoulder through"
2"The chill of the London"
3"She caught her balance on"
4"The bark felt like warm,"
5"Nyx glided through the tear."
6"The shade’s form rippled, shifting"
7"The rift snapped shut, sealing"
8"Rory looked up."
9"A bruised, warm amber sky"
10"The light emanated from everywhere"
11"Her fingers brushed the silver"
12"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
13"Nyx’s form shifted, a dry"
14"Rory unclasped her hand from"
15"The moonsilver felt like dry"
16"Nyx pointed a shadowy, elongated"
17"They descended into the alien"
18"Trees with trunks like twisted,"
19"Their leaves were a deep,"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The light emanated from everywhere and nowhere, casting long, strange shadows that stretched toward them."
1"The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum, pulsing with a rhythmic warmth that matched her own heartbeat."
2"The air grew heavier, thick with the aroma of roasting meats, exotic spices, and a cloying floral perfume that made Rory’s eyes water."
3"The sound of tearing meat and cracking bone grew louder, accompanied by a low, guttural breathing that rattled the tarnished platters on the table."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0377%