Run: 2026-05-22-01KS866E2TZ9S75MYRG0WH81GA

Run Details

Duration:
2m 26s
Cost:
$0.064852
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed aside a heavy branch of hawthorn and stepped between the ancient oak standing stones. The ambient hum of London traffic vanished. A thick, ringing silence swallowed the night. She blinked against the drop in air pressure. Her ears popped. She pulled the silver chain from beneath her denim jacket. The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem throbbed against her skin, radiating a steady, rhythmic heat. It pointed her deeper into the clearing. Moonlight filtered through the canopy, illuminating the Fae Grove. Pale wildflowers carpeted the forest floor, their petals wide open despite the midnight hour. White bluebells and ghost-orchids swayed in a wind Aurora could not feel. She checked her wristwatch. The second hand twitched, ticked backward three spaces, and stopped dead. She pulled out her phone. The screen displayed zero bars. She tapped the glass, refreshing the connection. The signal remained empty. She dialed Silas. The phone pressed against her ear. A steady, rhythmic clicking filled the speaker. It matched the pulse of the Heartstone. She hung up. She dialed Eva. The ringing tone stretched, warping into a low, drawn-out groan before the call dropped. A twig snapped behind the nearest oak trunk. Aurora pivoted. She kept her weight balanced on the balls of her feet. Her bright blue eyes scanned the deep shadows between the trees. Nothing moved. She rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A nervous habit. She forced her hand down to her side. The crimson gem against her chest flared with a sharper heat. A Hel portal was close. The unknown benefactor who mailed the artifact warned her about the cold spots, but this felt like a fever. She took another step forward. The soil beneath her boots felt spongy, like walking on a lung. She knelt and touched the dirt. The ground yielded to her fingertips, warm and damp. A faint scent of copper and crushed mint rose from the soil. The Fae realm bled into the physical world here, warping the natural order. Time moved differently in the grove. An hour inside could mean minutes or days outside. She needed to find the portal and leave before the sun rose in the real world. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her shoes. It rattled her teeth. The wildflowers nearest to her feet began to close their petals, shrinking away from the centre of the grove. Aurora adjusted her grip on her phone. She opened the voice memo app and hit record, holding the microphone near her mouth. I am inside the Richmond grove. The time dilation is active. My watch stopped. The pendant is burning. If I do not check in by three in the morning, send Silas. Tell him to bring the iron crowbar. She stopped the recording. The playback button glowed on the screen. She pressed it. Her own voice echoed from the tiny speaker, but the words were wrong. I am inside the dirt. The time is dead. My heart stopped. The earth is hungry. If I do not wake up, send the crows. Tell them to dig. Aurora crushed the phone in her hand. The screen cracked under her thumb. She shoved the device into her pocket. The hum grew louder. It shifted pitch, mimicking the cadence of human breathing. Inhale. Exhale. The sound originated from the canopy above. She tilted her head back. The oak branches wove together in a dense lattice. Moonlight caught the edge of something pale wedged in the fork of the highest bough. It looked like a shed skin, translucent and shimmering. A drop of thick, viscous fluid struck the toe of her boot. Aurora stepped back. The fluid sizzled against the leather, eating through the material with a sharp hiss. She kicked the boot off and hopped backward, landing in a patch of crushed ferns. The pendant seared her skin. She gasped and grabbed the silver chain, pulling the gem away from her chest. The crimson stone glowed with a blinding inner light, casting long, warped shadows across the tree trunks. The shadows did not match the trees. The silhouettes stretching across the bark possessed too many joints. Long, spindly limbs bent at angles that defied anatomy. The shadows twitched in unison, shifting closer to her position. Aurora backed toward the standing stones. Her bare left foot sank into the damp earth. The soil felt warm. It pulsed in time with the Heartstone. She reached the boundary line marked by the ancient oaks. The air pressure pushed against her, a physical wall of resistance. She shoved her shoulder into the invisible barrier. It felt like pressing against a mattress. She pushed harder. The barrier rippled, showing a distorted reflection of her own face. Her bright blue eyes looked back at her, but the reflection blinked out of sync. The reflection smiled, revealing teeth that were too sharp. Aurora stumbled backward, breaking contact with the invisible wall. A voice drifted from the centre of the grove. It carried the exact timbre of Evan, her ex-boyfriend. You always run away, Rory. Aurora froze. Her jaw clenched. Evan was in London. He could not cross the boundary into a Fae-touched realm. The magic would reject his mundane blood. You left your things at the flat. You left me. The voice lacked inflection. It sounded like a recording played through a blown speaker. The cadence was flat, mechanical. I found your new keys. I found your new friends. Aurora turned back to the clearing. The shadows on the trees detached themselves from the bark. They peeled away from the wood, becoming three-dimensional voids that absorbed the moonlight. They glided over the wildflowers, leaving trails of blackened, withered stems in their wake. The wildflowers nearest to the voids turned black and crumbled into ash. The year-round bloom of the grove died in seconds, leaving barren patches of scorched earth. The temperature plummeted. Frost crept over the roots of the ancient oaks, cracking the bark with sharp pops. She gripped the Heartstone. The heat blistered her palm. She kept her fingers locked around the silver chain. Come back to the centre. The Evan-voice distorted, dropping three octaves into a guttural vibration that shook the leaves from the branches. The voids circled her, keeping a ten-foot distance. They lacked faces, but the air rippled where their eyes should be. The smell of ozone and rotting meat flooded the grove. A wet, heavy footstep sounded on the spongy soil behind her. The sound was followed by the distinct click of a joint popping into place. Aurora held her breath. The heat of the pendant spread up her arm, burning her veins. The entity standing behind her exhaled, sending a wave of freezing air over her neck.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1126
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"jaw clenched"
count1
10
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throbbed"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"scanned"
6"vibrated"
7"echoed"
8"pulsed"
9"jaw clenched"
10"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences138
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1126
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1126
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London2
Heartstone4
Fae3
Grove1
Aurora11
Silas2
Eva1
Hel1
Richmond1
Evan3
Rory1
Fae-touched1
Evan-voice1
You3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Evan-voice"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"Richmond"
4"Fae-touched"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a fever"
1"looked like a shed skin, translucent and"
2"felt like pressing against a mattress"
3"sounded like a recording played through a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1126
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean25.02
std13.34
cv0.533
sampleLengths
041
137
235
315
421
523
620
78
824
92
1021
1135
1217
1371
1433
1522
1638
1714
1813
1929
2020
2122
2238
2312
2432
2536
267
2729
2826
2936
3047
3118
325
3326
3410
3519
3610
3743
3845
3918
405
4117
4230
4325
4431
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"was followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs199
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences138
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1135
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.018502202643171806
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001762114537444934
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean8.16
std4.14
cv0.508
sampleLengths
016
17
27
38
43
510
67
713
87
99
1014
1112
124
1311
145
155
167
174
183
196
207
217
223
233
2414
258
262
2711
2811
292
3010
313
328
3311
345
3519
365
3712
386
399
4012
4113
426
439
4416
4510
464
4719
487
4915
42.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.18115942028985507
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences133
matches
0"She blinked against the drop"
1"Her ears popped."
2"She pulled the silver chain"
3"It pointed her deeper into"
4"She checked her wristwatch."
5"She pulled out her phone."
6"She tapped the glass, refreshing"
7"She dialed Silas."
8"It matched the pulse of"
9"She hung up."
10"She dialed Eva."
11"She kept her weight balanced"
12"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
13"She rubbed the small crescent-shaped"
14"She forced her hand down"
15"She took another step forward."
16"She knelt and touched the"
17"She needed to find the"
18"It rattled her teeth."
19"She opened the voice memo"
ratio0.406
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences133
matches
0"Aurora pushed aside a heavy"
1"The ambient hum of London"
2"A thick, ringing silence swallowed"
3"She blinked against the drop"
4"Her ears popped."
5"She pulled the silver chain"
6"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
7"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem throbbed"
8"It pointed her deeper into"
9"Moonlight filtered through the canopy,"
10"She checked her wristwatch."
11"The second hand twitched, ticked"
12"She pulled out her phone."
13"The screen displayed zero bars."
14"She tapped the glass, refreshing"
15"The signal remained empty."
16"She dialed Silas."
17"The phone pressed against her"
18"A steady, rhythmic clicking filled"
19"It matched the pulse of"
ratio0.94
75.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"If I do not check"
1"If I do not wake"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"They peeled away from the wood, becoming three-dimensional voids that absorbed the moonlight."
1"The Evan-voice distorted, dropping three octaves into a guttural vibration that shook the leaves from the branches."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.2276%