Run: 2026-05-22-01KS869YMFS0A2DM0VAMKBTW7X

Run Details

Duration:
2m 22s
Cost:
$0.060665
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow stepped over the shattered turnstile. The abandoned Camden Tube station smelled of ozone, crushed thyme, and copper. Police tape sliced through the gloom, fluttering in the draft from the tunnel. Beyond the barriers, the Veil Market lay in ruins. Overturned wooden stalls spilled glass vials and tarnished silver across the platform. Eva Kowalski crouched beside a crumpled figure near the edge of the tracks. Her worn leather satchel rested on a clean patch of concrete. She pushed her round glasses up her nose and tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear. "You took your time, Detective." Harlow checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. "Traffic on Camden High Street. The uniformed boys had a hard time securing the perimeter. They dislike the dark." "They dislike the bone tokens required to get past the threshold." Eva pointed a torch at the victim's chest. "Meet Julian Thorne. Known purveyor of banned alchemical substances. Or, he was until two hours ago." Harlow approached, her boots crunching on spilled salt and broken glass. She maintained a rigid posture, scanning the cavernous space with military precision. The victim lay on his back. His expensive wool coat was shredded across the torso. Three deep, parallel gouges tore through the fabric and the flesh beneath. "Three strikes." Eva shone the beam directly into the wounds. "No defensive marks on his forearms. The sheer force crushed his ribs. I found traces of brimstone and coarse black fur near the ticket booth. A Barghest caught him smuggling unregistered potions and tore him apart." Harlow knelt. The damp chill of the platform seeped through her trousers. She leaned close to the lacerations. The edges of the torn flesh were blackened, curling inward. "Barghests tear. They do not cauterize." "Supernatural beasts carry hellfire in their jaws." "Hellfire leaves a sulfur residue. This smells like burnt hair and aluminium." Harlow stood and swept her gaze across the platform. "Where is the blood?" Eva blinked, her freckled complexion pale in the harsh light of the torch. "What?" "Three deep strikes to the chest. The subclavian artery is severed. There should be arterial spray across the tiles, the stalls, the tracks. There is less than a pint of blood on his coat." "The beast drank it." "Barghests eat the heart and leave the rest to rot. They do not drink blood like vampires." Harlow stepped back, her sharp jaw tightening. She stared at the parallel gouges. "The spacing is two inches apart. Uniform. A beast's claws spread when they strike. The angle of entry is straight down, perpendicular to the floor." Eva shifted her weight, tucking another strand of hair behind her ear. "Thorne was running. The beast leaped from the tunnel." "If he was running, the strikes would be angled. If he was standing still, he would have seen a massive hound leaping at him and raised his arms. He has no defensive wounds. He did not see it coming, or he knew the attacker." Harlow crouched again, examining the victim's hands. The fingertips on his right hand were blistered. "He was holding something hot." "An alchemical flare?" Eva dug into her satchel, pulling out a small brass object encased in verdigris. The face was etched with protective sigils. "I found this in his pocket. A Veil Compass. The needle is stuck." Harlow took the compass. The brass felt cold as river water. The needle, usually attuned to supernatural rifts, pointed straight toward the far wall of the station, ignoring the body. "It is broken. The impact shattered the internal lodestone." "Shade artisans do not build fragile tools." Harlow walked toward the tiled wall, keeping her eyes on the needle. It did not waver. She traced the compass trajectory to a section of faded advertisements for holiday resorts. "The needle points to a rift." "There are no active rifts in the market. The moon is waning." "There was one here." Harlow stopped in front of a cracked white tile. She ran her fingers over the grout. A faint, shimmering distortion rippled in the air, like heat rising off tarmac. "A micro-rift. Someone forced it open." Eva joined her, shining the torch on the tile. "A Barghest will not fit through a micro-rift. You can barely fit a hand." "Correct." Harlow turned back to the body, reconstructing the geometry of the scene in her mind. The distance from the wall to the corpse was four feet. "Thorne was not attacked by a beast. He was murdered by a person standing right here." "A person with claws?" "A person with a modified bone token." Harlow walked back to the corpse and pried open his stiffened right hand. A charred fragment of carved bone lay in his palm. "He was holding a token. The killer stood at the wall, opened a micro-rift, and thrust their hand through. They held a weapon on the other side." Eva frowned, adjusting her glasses. "A weapon that makes parallel cuts?" "A garden rake. Or a modified pitchfork. Something mundane, coated in aluminium powder to create the scorch marks and mask the scent." Harlow dropped the bone fragment into an evidence bag. "The killer used the rift to strike Thorne from behind, bypassing his line of sight. The lack of blood means the weapon was hollow, or the killer attached a suction tube to it. They drained him through the portal." "That requires immense precision. The Veil Market moves every full moon. The killer had to know the spatial coordinates of this station to anchor a rift from the outside." "Thorne was a creature of habit. He always set up his stall by the old ticket booth." Harlow snapped the evidence bag shut. "The killer did not just know the market. They knew Thorne's schedule. They knew he would be standing in this spot at this time." Eva looked at the uniform spacing of the stalls, the scattered vials, the shadows stretching across the tracks. "If it was a targeted hit, why make it look like a Barghest attack?" "To keep the Metropolitan Police looking for a monster." Harlow tapped the face of her watch. "Monsters do not have bank accounts. Monsters do not leave fingerprints. Monsters do not inherit Thorne's alchemical supply chain." "You believe a rival dealer did this." "Someone wanted his territory and knew the occult lore well enough to stage a supernatural mauling." Harlow handed the Veil Compass back to Eva. "Log the compass into evidence. I want the tech boys to pull the residual energy signature from the brass casing." "The shades who craft these wipe the metal clean." "They wipe the magic clean. They do not wipe the sweat and skin cells from the human who held it." Harlow turned toward the tunnel exit, her boots echoing against the vaulted ceiling. "Get the forensics team down here. Tell them to dust the tiles around the micro-rift. Our killer anchored the portal against the wall. They had to brace themselves to push the weapon through." Eva packed the compass into her satchel and hoisted it over her shoulder. "What about the bone token in his hand?" "It is Thorne's entry pass. The killer did not have one, which is why they used the rift to get inside the market threshold without triggering the wards." Harlow paused at the shattered turnstile, glancing back at the dim platform. "Check the security cameras on Camden High Street. Look for anyone carrying a large, hollow tube or a garden tool at two in the morning." "A garden tool in central London." Eva offered a tight smile. "That will narrow it down." "Start with the occult shops in Soho. Find out who bought aluminium powder and hollow steel tubing in the last week."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
49.06% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Harlow stepped back [back]"
1"Harlow crouched again [again]"
2"Harlow turned back [back]"
3"Harlow walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.642
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.151
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"shattered"
count3
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"chill"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"traced"
7"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
95.70% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount1
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0.011
matches
0"\"Monsters do not have bank accounts. Monsters do not leave fingerprints. Monsters do not inherit Thorne's alchemical supply chain.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1289
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount526
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.42
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Veil2
Market1
Kowalski1
Harlow18
Eva12
Compass1
persons
0"Market"
1"Kowalski"
2"Harlow"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1289
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.85
std19.96
cv0.743
sampleLengths
052
144
25
310
419
535
650
746
828
96
107
1125
1213
131
1434
154
1655
1712
189
1964
2037
2130
229
2343
2412
2539
269
2714
2843
294
3057
315
326
3370
3429
3547
3618
3714
3835
397
4044
419
4266
4313
448
4565
4616
4721
78.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences53
matches
0"was shredded"
1"were blackened"
2"were blistered"
3"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences89
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount526
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.015209125475285171
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0038022813688212928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean14.48
std9.6
cv0.663
sampleLengths
06
112
213
39
412
513
611
720
85
910
1019
1119
1216
1311
1412
156
169
1712
1810
1936
202
2110
226
2310
246
257
2621
274
2813
291
3034
314
3224
336
3425
3512
369
3751
388
395
4017
417
4213
434
447
4519
469
4719
484
4914
63.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42696629213483145
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences52
matches
0"Her worn leather satchel rested"
1"She pushed her round glasses"
2"She maintained a rigid posture,"
3"His expensive wool coat was"
4"She leaned close to the"
5"She stared at the parallel"
6"It did not waver."
7"She traced the compass trajectory"
8"She ran her fingers over"
ratio0.173
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences52
matches
0"Harlow stepped over the shattered"
1"The abandoned Camden Tube station"
2"Police tape sliced through the"
3"Eva Kowalski crouched beside a"
4"Her worn leather satchel rested"
5"She pushed her round glasses"
6"Harlow checked the worn leather"
7"Eva pointed a torch at"
8"Harlow approached, her boots crunching"
9"She maintained a rigid posture,"
10"The victim lay on his"
11"His expensive wool coat was"
12"Eva shone the beam directly"
13"The damp chill of the"
14"She leaned close to the"
15"The edges of the torn"
16"Harlow stood and swept her"
17"Eva blinked, her freckled complexion"
18"Harlow stepped back, her sharp"
19"She stared at the parallel"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Harlow stepped back, her sharp jaw tightening"
1"Harlow turned, her boots echoing against the vaulted ceiling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.038
80.1056%