Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86APG4XE99HAWC2DZSTV1T

Run Details

Duration:
2m 23s
Cost:
$0.064460
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow descended the broken escalator into the Camden underground. The air tasted of ozone and rotting copper. She flipped the carved bone token between her knuckles. The shadow blocking the ticket barrier dissolved, granting her passage into the Veil Market. Stalls constructed from scavenged Tube car doors and rotting canvas lined the platform. Enchanted lanterns cast a green glow over the merchandise. Jars of pickled eyes, bundles of smoking herbs, and rusted cages holding chittering things filled the space. Uniformed officers held a perimeter near the northbound tunnel. They kept their hands on their batons, eyes darting at the cloaked vendors. Harlow ducked under the yellow police tape. Her boots crunched on broken tiles. A man lay sprawled against a stall selling banned alchemical powders. His ribcage caved inward, forming a brutal concavity. Harlow crouched. She tapped the face of the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two in the morning. The market shifted locations on the full moon, which meant the killer had less than four hours before the entire station vanished to a new borough. She studied the floor. A thick layer of grey dust coated the concrete. The dust around the victim remained pristine. No scuffs. No drag marks. No footprints leading to or from the corpse. Eva Kowalski stepped over a pile of shattered glass vials. She adjusted her round glasses and tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear. Her worn leather satchel clunked against her hip, heavy with reference books from the British Museum archives. "Local enforcement thinks a rogue troll got him." Eva dropped to one knee, her freckled face inches from the ruined chest. "Blunt force trauma. Massive internal hemorrhaging. Fits the profile." Harlow traced the edge of the crushed sternum with a gloved finger. The bone splintered inward, but the skin remained unbroken. "Trolls leave footprints the size of dinner plates." Harlow gestured to the undisturbed dust. "And they eat the face. This jaw is intact." "A gravity hex, then." Eva pulled a charcoal pencil from her pocket and sketched the angle of the depressed ribs in a small notebook. "Someone dropped a localized singularity on his chest. The museum archives have three recorded cases in the last century. Leaves the surrounding area untouched." Harlow stood. She swept her gaze across the stall behind the body. Glass vials of volatile alchemical salts sat stacked in a fragile pyramid on a wobbly wooden shelf. The shelf leaned a few degrees to the left. "A gravity hex powerful enough to snap a sternum would shatter every glass container within a ten-foot radius." Harlow pointed at the intact vials. "Those salts are highly reactive. A localized singularity would have blown this entire platform into the Thames." Eva chewed her lower lip. She flipped a page in her notebook. "What about a phantom strike? An ethereal entity phasing through the physical plane to deliver a kinetic blow." "Phantoms do not break bones. They stop hearts." Harlow knelt again. She leaned closer to the right hand. The fingers were curled into a rigid death grip. "Help me with his arm." Eva grabbed the wrist. They pried the stiffened fingers apart. A small brass object tumbled onto the concrete. Harlow picked it up. Verdigris patina flaked off the casing under her thumb. Protective sigils were etched deep into the metal face. A Veil Compass. "He was looking for a rift." Eva leaned over the shoulder, her breath warm against the detective. "Shadow compasses point to the nearest supernatural portal. The vendors use them to track the shift before the full moon." Harlow held the compass flat in her palm. The needle spun in a slow circle before snapping to a fixed position. It pointed straight at the tiled wall behind the alchemy stall. Harlow walked to the wall. The white ceramic tiles were cracked and stained with decades of grime. She ran her hand over the surface. The air temperature dropped ten degrees. Frost bloomed across the grout lines in a jagged circle. The cold seeped into her bones, mirroring the chill of the warehouse where they found Morris three years ago. Harlow clenched her sharp jaw and pushed the memory down. "The dust on the floor is undisturbed because the killer never walked on it." Harlow tapped the frozen tiles. Eva joined her, green eyes wide behind round lenses. "He opened a portal." "Not him." Harlow shook her head. She looked back at the body, then at the wall, calculating the distance and the trajectory. "The victim was holding the compass. He was tracking a rift. He found it right here." Harlow mimed holding the compass, stepping toward the wall. She stopped where the victim would have stood. "He opened the portal." Harlow kept her eyes on the frost. "But the person on the other side did not want to be found. The killer stepped halfway through the rift, grabbed the victim, and pulled him in." Eva frowned. "But the body is here. On the platform." "The killer pulled him in, but the victim braced his feet against the threshold." Harlow pointed to the pristine dust right at the edge of the frost line. "Look at the toe caps of his boots. Spotless. He planted his heels on the platform and leaned back. The killer could not drag him through." Harlow returned to the corpse. She pressed her hands against the air above the caved chest. "So the killer let go." Eva murmured. "No." Harlow tightened her grip on her flashlight. "The killer realized the victim would alert the market guards. The killer stepped back into the rift and sealed it while the victim was still halfway through." Eva gasped. "The portal snapped shut. It crushed his chest." "Cut him clean in half if he was further in, but he was only chest-deep." Harlow wiped the frost from her gloves. "The immense pressure of the collapsing dimensional threshold caved his ribs inward. The kinetic shockwave was absorbed by his body, which is why the alchemy vials did not shatter. The killer never set foot on this platform." Harlow checked her watch again. "Bag the compass." Harlow handed the brass instrument to Eva. "Dust it for latent prints and check the sigils. I want to know which artisan forged it." Eva dropped the compass into an evidence bag and sealed it. She shoved the bag into her satchel. "The Shade artisans stamp their maker mark on the inner casing. I can cross-reference it with the registry when we get back to the surface." "Do it." Harlow turned back to the frozen circle on the wall. She pulled a heavy-duty flashlight from her belt and clicked it on. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating the jagged frost line. "The rift left a residual scar. The ambient energy is still bleeding through." Harlow pressed her palm against the frozen tiles. A faint, rhythmic pulsing vibrated through her glove. A heartbeat. "Evie." Harlow kept her hand pressed to the wall. "Get the forensics team to scrape the frost. I want a spectral analysis of the ice." Eva nodded, pulling a pair of tweezers and a glass vial from her satchel. She stepped up to the wall and began chipping away at the frozen grout. Harlow watched the needle of the compass inside the bag twitch against the plastic. The market rumbled above them, the distant sound of a midnight train vibrating through the concrete. Harlow kept her hand on the wall, feeling the pulse grow stronger.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow knelt again [again]"
1"Harlow turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.914
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.114
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"constructed"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"spectral"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"constructed"
1"pristine"
2"shattered"
3"traced"
4"etched"
5"chill"
6"calculating"
7"gloom"
8"rhythmic"
9"vibrated"
10"spectral"
11"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount812
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.33
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Veil2
Market1
Tube1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Harlow27
Eva13
Compass1
Morris1
persons
0"Market"
1"Kowalski"
2"Museum"
3"Harlow"
4"Eva"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Veil"
2"British"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1251
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
90.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean29.09
std13.53
cv0.465
sampleLengths
040
139
222
313
419
545
633
744
830
921
1023
1148
1238
1341
1430
1532
1610
178
1825
1937
2032
2140
2229
2319
2413
2538
2617
2738
2810
2954
3016
317
3235
3310
3459
355
3627
3743
3848
3918
4025
4128
4242
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"were curled"
1"were etched"
2"were cracked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount813
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wide behind round lenses."
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.00984009840098401
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012300123001230013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.48
std6.72
cv0.585
sampleLengths
09
18
29
314
413
59
617
79
813
97
106
1111
128
132
1413
154
1626
174
189
197
202
213
228
2310
2417
2517
2621
279
2812
299
3014
319
3224
3324
342
3510
3617
379
3824
3917
405
417
4218
4311
447
459
465
474
486
498
57.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3669724770642202
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences83
matches
0"She flipped the carved bone"
1"They kept their hands on"
2"Her boots crunched on broken"
3"His ribcage caved inward, forming"
4"She tapped the face of"
5"She studied the floor."
6"She adjusted her round glasses"
7"Her worn leather satchel clunked"
8"She swept her gaze across"
9"She flipped a page in"
10"She leaned closer to the"
11"They pried the stiffened fingers"
12"It pointed straight at the"
13"She ran her hand over"
14"She looked back at the"
15"She stopped where the victim"
16"She pressed her hands against"
17"She shoved the bag into"
18"She pulled a heavy-duty flashlight"
19"She stepped up to the"
ratio0.241
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences83
matches
0"Harlow descended the broken escalator"
1"The air tasted of ozone"
2"She flipped the carved bone"
3"The shadow blocking the ticket"
4"Stalls constructed from scavenged Tube"
5"Jars of pickled eyes, bundles"
6"They kept their hands on"
7"Harlow ducked under the yellow"
8"Her boots crunched on broken"
9"A man lay sprawled against"
10"His ribcage caved inward, forming"
11"She tapped the face of"
12"The market shifted locations on"
13"She studied the floor."
14"A thick layer of grey"
15"The dust around the victim"
16"Eva Kowalski stepped over a"
17"She adjusted her round glasses"
18"Her worn leather satchel clunked"
19"Eva dropped to one knee,"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The market shifted locations on the full moon, which meant the killer had less than four hours before the entire station vanished to a new borough."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva leaned, her breath warm against the detective"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
82.0867%