Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86GR1RJT52578V4VBHF0N0

Run Details

Duration:
2m 20s
Cost:
$0.064305
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn pumped her arms, boots striking the wet tarmac in a militaristic rhythm. Ahead, the suspect darted through a maze of parked cars. His hood slipped, revealing a flash of pale neck before he yanked it back up. Harlow checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two in the morning. The neon glow of Soho bled into the darker, narrower alleys of Camden. "Stop right there." Harlow projected her voice over the downpour. The suspect vaulted a puddle and scrambled up a rusted fire escape. Harlow matched his pace, taking the stairs two at a time. Her tightly cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. Water dripped from her sharp jaw. She reached the landing and kicked the metal grate. The rust flaked off under her heel. "Metropolitan Police. You have nowhere to go." He threw a glass bottle over his shoulder. Harlow ducked. Shards exploded against the brickwork. She pushed off the wall and lunged, her fingers grazing the hem of his jacket. He twisted free and dropped onto the adjacent roof. "Give it up. Tommy is not going to bail you out." Harlow yelled across the gap. The suspect scrambled to his feet and kept running. Harlow leaped. She hit the tar paper roof, rolled, and sprang up. Her boots found traction. She closed the distance. The suspect slipped on a wet skylight and crashed onto a lower balcony. Harlow peered over the edge. He scrambled down a drainpipe and vanished into the subterranean entrance of an abandoned Tube station. The faded sign above read Camden Deep. She tapped her earpiece. "Control, this is Quinn. Suspect is descending into the old Camden Underground. Send backup to the surface entrance." Static hissed in her ear. "Control, do you copy." More static. The storm scrambled the signal. Harlow unholstered her flashlight and clicked it on. The beam pierced the gloom of the stairwell. She descended. The handrail felt slick with condensation. Every step echoed down the shaft, multiplying into a chorus of phantom footsteps. The air grew thick and smelled of ozone and damp earth. Tiles cracked under her boots. Graffiti faded into older, stranger symbols etched into the brickwork. The temperature dropped ten degrees. Frost gathered on the handrails. A rat scurried across the tracks, its eyes reflecting the flashlight beam with a red glare before it vanished into a drainage pipe. Footsteps echoed from the platform below. Harlow kept her weapon drawn, sweeping the beam across the rusted tracks. The suspect stood at the far end of the platform, facing a heavy iron gate. "You are out of road." Harlow stepped out from the stairwell, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceiling. The suspect ignored her. He dug into his pocket and pulled out a small, pale object. Harlow closed the distance, her boots crunching on broken glass. "Drop the weapon and turn around." He held up the object. A carved bone token. A figure stepped from the shadows beside the gate. Tall, draped in a heavy coat. The figure extended a gloved hand. "Step away from the gate." Harlow aimed her flashlight at the stranger. The stranger did not flinch. The bone token changed hands. The iron gate groaned, swinging inward without a sound. A sickly green light spilled from the tunnel beyond, illuminating the pale face of the suspect as he slipped inside. Harlow sprinted down the platform. The stranger slammed the gate shut. A heavy padlock clicked into place. Harlow skidded to a halt. She grabbed the iron bars. Cold metal bit into her palms. She shined her light through the gaps. The tunnel stretched into a sprawling cavern. Stalls lined the walls, draped in velvet and illuminated by floating glass orbs. People in heavy cloaks bartered over glowing vials and rusted artifacts. A merchant with scales instead of skin argued over the price of a caged raven. Banned alchemical substances piled high on wooden tables. The Veil Market. "Open this gate." Harlow kept her tone flat. The stranger turned. A scarred face caught the beam of her flashlight. "You lack the toll, Detective." The gatekeeper rasped the words. Harlow tightened her grip on her sidearm. "I have a warrant. Open it, or I will shoot the lock off." The gatekeeper chuckled. "Lead bounces off the wards. You know this place. You lost your partner to the things that crawl out of here." Harlow stopped breathing for a second. DS Morris. The unexplained circumstances. The blood on the pavement three years ago. Her thumb brushed the safety of her Glock. "I am not asking again." Harlow leveled her weapon at the padlock. "Shoot it. See what comes back at you." The gatekeeper crossed his arms. "Your boy is already far inside. Tomás Herrera patches up the worst of them in the back tents. You want him, you pay the toll." Harlow lowered the gun a fraction. She patted her pockets. No bone token. She had no idea how to get one, or what the market demanded for entry. "Let me through." Harlow kept her voice level. "The Market moves every full moon. Tonight is the night. You miss this, you wait four weeks. Your suspect will be gone by dawn." Harlow stared at the glowing cavern. The green light cast long, twisted shadows across the platform. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. Magic. Dark, unregulated magic. She looked at her watch. Two-fifteen. Backup was blind to her location. The storm masked any noise. "What do you want." Harlow shifted her weight. The gatekeeper stepped closer to the bars. "A memory. A happy one. Plucked straight from your head. That gets you a temporary pass." Harlow clenched her jaw. "I am a police officer. I do not deal in parlor tricks." "Then stay on your side of the gate." The gatekeeper turned his back. Harlow watched the suspect weave through the crowded stalls. He bumped into a cloaked figure carrying a cage of shrieking birds. The figure cursed in a language Harlow did not recognize. The suspect kept his head down and hurried to a tent where a man with olive skin and short curly dark brown hair was wrapping a bandage around a massive, furred arm. Tomás Herrera. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted against his chest. The suspect handed Tomás a package. Tomás nodded and pointed toward a hidden back room behind a stack of crates. If she let him go, the clique would cover their tracks. The people who killed Morris would slip away again. Harlow holstered her weapon. She stepped up to the bars. "Take it." Harlow forced the words out. The gatekeeper turned back. He reached through the iron bars with a bare, grey hand. His cold fingers pressed against the temple of Harlow. A sharp pain spiked behind her eyes. The memory of her tenth birthday, her father teaching her to ride a bicycle, dissolved into white mist. The warmth of the sun faded, leaving a hollow ache in her chest. Her knees buckled for a fraction of a second. The gatekeeper withdrew his hand. He held a small, glowing orb. He crushed it, and the padlock on the gate snapped open. "Welcome to the Veil Market, Detective." The gatekeeper stepped aside. "Keep your hand on your wallet and your eyes on the ground." Harlow pushed the iron gate open. The sickly green light washed over her face. She stepped over the threshold, her boots hitting the dirt floor of the underground market. The air tasted of copper and burnt sugar. She drew her weapon again and moved into the crowd.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The gatekeeper stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
96.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"echoed"
2"footsteps"
3"etched"
4"echoing"
5"velvet"
6"vibrated"
7"weight"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences134
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1047
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow30
Quinn1
Soho1
Camden2
Tube1
Deep1
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Glock1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.067
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1273
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.95
std16.04
cv0.731
sampleLengths
045
127
210
312
442
57
68
731
816
99
1033
1128
1222
135
144
157
1637
1759
186
1927
2018
2116
2216
239
2421
2512
2639
275
2812
2923
3057
318
3212
3310
3420
3524
3627
3712
3838
3928
408
4124
4230
4317
448
4523
4616
4713
4893
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was wrapping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1050
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.009523809523809525
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0038095238095238095
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean8.78
std5.09
cv0.579
sampleLengths
05
115
210
315
410
54
613
710
812
911
109
116
129
137
147
158
162
175
1815
199
2016
219
222
2310
244
254
2613
275
2816
297
304
3118
325
334
342
355
368
378
382
396
4013
4111
425
4310
445
455
4623
476
4812
4915
51.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3448275862068966
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners50
26.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"Dark, unregulated magic."
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences126
matches
0"His hood slipped, revealing a"
1"Her tightly cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
2"She reached the landing and"
3"He threw a glass bottle"
4"She pushed off the wall"
5"He twisted free and dropped"
6"She hit the tar paper"
7"Her boots found traction."
8"She closed the distance."
9"He scrambled down a drainpipe"
10"She tapped her earpiece."
11"He dug into his pocket"
12"He held up the object."
13"She grabbed the iron bars."
14"She shined her light through"
15"Her thumb brushed the safety"
16"She patted her pockets."
17"She had no idea how"
18"She looked at her watch."
19"He bumped into a cloaked"
ratio0.222
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences126
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pumped her"
2"His hood slipped, revealing a"
3"Harlow checked the worn leather"
4"The neon glow of Soho"
5"Harlow projected her voice over"
6"The suspect vaulted a puddle"
7"Harlow matched his pace, taking"
8"Her tightly cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
9"Water dripped from her sharp"
10"She reached the landing and"
11"The rust flaked off under"
12"He threw a glass bottle"
13"Shards exploded against the brickwork."
14"She pushed off the wall"
15"He twisted free and dropped"
16"Harlow yelled across the gap"
17"The suspect scrambled to his"
18"She hit the tar paper"
19"Her boots found traction."
ratio0.937
39.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"If she let him go,"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow stepped out, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceiling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.042
leniency0.083
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.083
85.2499%