Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86M2HV15R70YJP826824NS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 58s
Cost:
$0.075130
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed, casting a sickly emerald glow through the rain-streaked windows of The Raven's Nest. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany bar, a damp cloth moving in slow circles over the scarred wood. He paused, shifting his weight off his left leg. The old knee injury from Prague flared whenever the London damp seeped into the floorboards, a dull ache that radiated up to his hip. He grabbed a dry towel and rubbed the joint, his hazel eyes scanning the empty room. The walls were lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs, silent witnesses to a life he had left behind. The heavy oak door groaned open. A gust of wet wind scattered the cardboard coasters on the counter and brought the smell of wet asphalt and exhaust fumes into the sanctuary of the pub. Silas looked up. The man standing in the doorway shook the rain from his trench coat. He was thin, his shoulders hunched beneath the wet fabric, his hair stark white. Silas dropped the cloth. The newcomer limped forward, favouring his right side, and collapsed onto a leather stool. He placed a trembling hand on the bar. The skin was translucent, mapping blue veins and dark liver spots. Silas reached under the counter and pulled out a dusty bottle of Lagavulin. He wiped the neck with his thumb, poured two fingers into a heavy crystal tumbler, and slid it across the polished wood. The amber liquid caught the low light from the pendant lamps above. The man wrapped his shaking fingers around the glass. He stared at the drink. You kept the place exactly the same. Arthur's voice was a dry rasp, like sandpaper on stone. Silas leaned against the back counter, crossing his arms. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light. The maps are new. Silas nodded toward the far wall, where faded cartography of Eastern Europe hung in black frames. The photos are the same. Arthur lifted the glass and swallowed the scotch in one gulp. He slammed the tumbler down. The sharp crack echoed in the empty room. Pour another. Silas filled the glass. He poured a measure for himself and took a slow sip. The peat and smoke burned his throat. I heard you were dead. Arthur let out a hollow laugh that dissolved into a wet cough. He pulled a handkerchief from his pocket and pressed it to his mouth. When he pulled it away, faint speckles of blood stained the white cotton. The Directorate found it convenient to list me as KIA after the Vienna station collapsed. Arthur folded the handkerchief and tucked it away. It kept the assassins off my back for three years. Until they found you. Until my own nervous system betrayed me. Arthur held up his shaking hands. The tremors rattled the ice in his glass. Parkinson's. The doctors gave me six months. The Directorate gave me a pension and a quiet house in Sussex. Silas traced the rim of his own glass. He remembered Arthur Vance from the days when they ran operations out of a cramped flat in Berlin. Ten years ago, Arthur had been the heaviest hitter in MI6, a man who viewed collateral damage as a simple arithmetic equation. He had snapped a man's neck in a Prague alleyway without breaking his stride or raising his pulse. He had been the one to give the order that left Silas with a shattered knee, three dead colleagues, and a compromised network of informants. Why are you here, Arthur? The old man looked around the dimly lit room. His eyes lingered on the black-and-white photographs of old informants and dead agents. I wanted to see the ghost I created. Silas tightened his grip on his glass. The knuckles of his right hand turned white. You gave the order to burn the safehouse. Silas kept his voice level, stripping it of any emotion. You knew my team was inside. I knew the leak was inside. Arthur met his gaze. The hazel eyes of the younger man held no forgiveness, only a cold, hard assessment. I made a tactical decision. You killed three good operatives. I saved the network. Footsteps on the creaking stairs interrupted them. Rory Carter emerged from the narrow hallway behind the bar, a stack of flattened cardboard boxes tucked under her arm. Her straight shoulder-length black hair was tied back in a messy knot, stray strands clinging to her damp forehead. She wore a faded denim jacket over a grey t-shirt, the collar turned up against the draft. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stood out against her pale skin as she adjusted her grip on the boxes. She moved with the quick, efficient grace of someone used to navigating tight city streets and busy restaurant kitchens. She stopped, her bright blue eyes flicking from Silas to the trembling old man at the bar. Am I interrupting? Silas uncrossed his arms and picked up his damp cloth. Just catching up with an old colleague. Silas wiped a dry spot on the mahogany. Headed to the restaurant? Yu-Fei needs the delivery boxes by six. Rory shifted the cardboard, the edges digging into her ribs. She looked at Arthur, her expression unreadable. You need anything before I go, Si? We are fine, Rory. Drive safe in the rain. Rory nodded. She walked past them, the scent of rain and cheap vanilla perfume lingering in her wake. The front door opened and closed, swallowing the sound of the buzzing neon sign for a brief second. Arthur watched her go. You play house with the locals now. A delivery girl and a pub. Arthur tapped his empty glass against the wood. This is what you traded the Service for. I traded the Service for my life. Silas wiped down the spot where Rory had stood. Something you forgot how to live. Arthur traced the rim of his empty glass. The tremor in his hand made the crystal sing a low, vibrating note against the mahogany. Do you sleep, Silas? Silas stopped wiping. He looked at the old maps on the wall. The borders of countries that no longer existed. I sleep fine. Liar. Arthur leaned forward, his voice dropping to a harsh whisper. You wake up smelling the smoke. You hear the timber cracking. You see their faces in the dark. Silas threw the damp cloth into the sink. It landed with a wet thud. Get out. Arthur did not move. He reached into the inner pocket of his trench coat. Silas dropped his hand below the bar, his fingers brushing the cold steel of the Remington taped beneath the counter. Arthur pulled out a thick manila envelope and dropped it on the bar. It landed heavy and flat. I did not come here to fight. I came to give you this. Silas kept his hand on the gun. He stared at the envelope. The paper was stained with water and age. What is it? The real file on Prague. Arthur tapped the envelope with a shaking index finger. The unredacted transcripts. The orders that came down from the Director himself. Silas brought his hand back up to the counter. He did not touch the envelope. Why bring it to me now? Because I am dying. And because the man who gave the order to burn your team is sitting in the Deputy Director chair at Vauxhall Cross. He is about to be promoted to Chief. The ice in Silas's glass melted, cracking loud in the quiet room. You want me to kill him. I want you to know the truth. Arthur pushed the envelope an inch closer. What you do with it is your business. I have no fight left in me. Silas looked at the man who had been his mentor, his friend, and his executioner. The sharp, dangerous agent was gone, replaced by a hollow shell waiting for the earth to claim him. The silence in the room stretched, thick and suffocating as the damp London air. Silas picked up the envelope. It felt heavier than it looked. You should go back to Sussex. Arthur slid off the stool. His right leg buckled, and he caught himself on the edge of the bar. He straightened his coat and turned toward the door. Watch your back, Silas. The Service never really lets you go. Arthur walked out into the rain. The heavy oak door clicked shut behind him. Silas stood alone in the dim light. He looked down at the envelope in his hand, the silver signet ring gleaming against the brown paper. He slid it into his jacket pocket and picked up the damp cloth. He began to wipe the bar, moving in slow circles, waiting for the ice in his glass to melt.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1474
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1474
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"efficient"
count1
11
word"navigating"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanning"
2"sanctuary"
3"stark"
4"crystal"
5"echoed"
6"traced"
7"pulse"
8"shattered"
9"footsteps"
10"efficient"
11"navigating"
12"unreadable"
13"whisper"
14"silence"
15"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences156
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1474
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount1474
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Arthur"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Prague3
London2
Lagavulin1
Eastern1
Europe1
Directorate2
Vienna1
Sussex2
Arthur20
Vance1
Berlin1
Silas26
Carter1
Si1
Rory5
Service3
Remington1
Director2
Deputy1
Vauxhall1
Cross1
Chief1
You11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Directorate"
3"Arthur"
4"Vance"
5"Silas"
6"Carter"
7"Rory"
8"Remington"
9"You"
places
0"Prague"
1"London"
2"Eastern"
3"Europe"
4"Vienna"
5"Sussex"
6"Berlin"
7"Director"
8"Deputy"
9"Vauxhall"
10"Chief"
globalScore0.618
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences118
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1474
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean23.03
std21.45
cv0.931
sampleLengths
0107
134
230
34
433
547
614
717
821
925
1024
112
1222
135
1438
1533
164
1740
1891
195
2022
218
2215
2324
2430
255
264
27104
2817
293
3010
3119
3231
339
3436
354
3629
3722
3824
394
4020
413
4229
4314
442
4534
4618
4713
4820
493
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences156
matches
0"were lined"
1"was tied"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs248
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1482
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.008771929824561403
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0033738191632928477
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.45
std5.51
cv0.584
sampleLengths
021
118
29
324
416
519
66
728
83
913
1014
114
1214
138
1411
1513
1622
1712
189
195
207
2110
229
2312
244
2516
265
2711
285
298
302
314
3211
337
345
3512
3613
3713
3815
398
4010
414
427
436
448
451
466
4712
488
4918
41.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.21794871794871795
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners34
22.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Just catching up with an"
ratio0.007
71.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences151
matches
0"He paused, shifting his weight"
1"He grabbed a dry towel"
2"He was thin, his shoulders"
3"He placed a trembling hand"
4"He wiped the neck with"
5"He stared at the drink."
6"You kept the place exactly"
7"He slammed the tumbler down."
8"He poured a measure for"
9"I heard you were dead."
10"He pulled a handkerchief from"
11"It kept the assassins off"
12"He remembered Arthur Vance from"
13"He had snapped a man's"
14"He had been the one"
15"His eyes lingered on the"
16"I wanted to see the"
17"You gave the order to"
18"You knew my team was"
19"I knew the leak was"
ratio0.371
12.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences151
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
2"He paused, shifting his weight"
3"The old knee injury from"
4"He grabbed a dry towel"
5"The walls were lined with"
6"The heavy oak door groaned"
7"A gust of wet wind"
8"Silas looked up."
9"The man standing in the"
10"He was thin, his shoulders"
11"Silas dropped the cloth."
12"The newcomer limped forward, favouring"
13"He placed a trembling hand"
14"The skin was translucent, mapping"
15"Silas reached under the counter"
16"He wiped the neck with"
17"The amber liquid caught the"
18"The man wrapped his shaking"
19"He stared at the drink."
ratio0.894
33.11% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"Because I am dying."
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The old knee injury from Prague flared whenever the London damp seeped into the floorboards, a dull ache that radiated up to his hip."
1"Ten years ago, Arthur had been the heaviest hitter in MI6, a man who viewed collateral damage as a simple arithmetic equation."
2"Silas looked at the man who had been his mentor, his friend, and his executioner."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.6906%