Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86NWQ695VRJKMK8XW28AM0

Run Details

Duration:
2m 43s
Cost:
$0.070182
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slid the third deadbolt back. The heavy wooden door swung inward, revealing the dim hallway. Lucien stood on the welcome mat. His charcoal suit absorbed the weak light from the stairwell. Platinum blond hair swept back from his forehead. The amber and black eyes locked onto her bright blue ones. Rory squeezed the brass handle. Her knuckles turned white. "You have three seconds to explain why you are at Eva's door, Lucien." "May I come in, Rory?" He leaned his weight onto the ivory handle of his cane. "No." "The curry house downstairs is venting garlic and cumin into the corridor. I would prefer not to smell like a vindaloo." Rory stepped back and pulled the door wider. He stepped over the threshold. The cramped flat offered little space. Stacks of books and loose parchment scrolls covered the dining table and spilled onto the sofa. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sat atop a pile of research notes. The tabby puffed its tail and hissed at the half-demon. Lucien tapped his cane against the floorboards. "Your friend's pet possesses excellent instincts." "He smells the brimstone on you." Rory shut the door and threw the deadbolts back into place. One. Two. Three. "Speak. Why are you here?" "I brought you something." Lucien reached into his inner jacket pocket. Rory flinched. Her left hand flew up, the small crescent scar on her wrist catching the overhead light. Lucien froze. He withdrew his hand, pinching a thick manila envelope between his index and middle finger. "It is paper, Rory. Not a weapon." "You lied to me the last time we stood in a room together." "I omitted a detail regarding my father's realm." "You omitted that you were a fixer for the very demons I was running from." Lucien placed the envelope on a clear patch of the kitchen counter. "Evan was a human abuser. My clients operate under strict underworld contracts. They do not care about a Pre-Law dropout from Cardiff." "I don't care about your semantics." "You care about the contents of that envelope." Rory stared at the manila folder. The curry house ventilation system rattled beneath the floorboards, sending a faint vibration through her shoes. "Open it." Lucien unbuttoned his suit jacket and lowered himself onto the single wooden chair at the desk. The joints creaked under his frame. Rory walked to the counter. She flipped the envelope open. Glossy photographs spilled out. Evan. Her ex-boyfriend. He sat in a pub, laughing with a man bearing a distinct Avaros realm tattoo on his neck. "He found you." Lucien kept his voice flat, his mismatched eyes tracking her every micro-expression. "Or rather, he found your father's barrister firm in Cardiff and asked the wrong questions. The demons he approached for a tracking spell work for me." Rory swept the photos back into the envelope. Her chest tightened. The air in the flat grew thick. "I handled it." "Handled it how?" "They gave him false coordinates. He is currently searching for you in a very damp basement in Belfast." "You played with him." "I protected you." "I didn't ask for your protection." Rory threw the envelope onto the counter. "I asked for honesty. Six months ago, you stood in my kitchen, drank my cheap tea, and let me believe you were just an import-export consultant." "My profession is complicated." "Your profession is dangerous." Lucien stood up. The chair scraped against the linoleum. He closed the distance between them, stopping a foot away. The scent of sandalwood and ozone overpowered the lingering garlic from the hallway. "Danger is a matter of perspective." He looked down at her. "You fled a man who bruised your skin and broke your confidence. I deal with creatures who break souls. Yet you look at me as if I am the monster." Rory held her ground. She tilted her chin up. "You used my trauma to get close to me. You needed a human anchor in London, and I was vulnerable." "I needed an anchor." Lucien raised a gloved hand. He stopped an inch from her cheek. The leather creaked. "I stayed because you challenged me. You possess a brilliant mind, Rory. You see through the glamour and the lies." "I saw through yours too late." "Did you?" His hand dropped to his side. "You pushed me away the moment you discovered my lineage. You packed your bags, moved into Eva's fortress of deadbolts, and blocked my number." "I needed space to breathe without looking over my shoulder." "You needed to punish me for my bloodline." Ptolemy jumped off the desk and darted into the bedroom. The silence in the flat stretched, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator. Rory crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her wrist pressed against her elbow. "Why come back now? If Evan is in Belfast, the threat is gone. You could have mailed the photos." "The threat is never gone." Lucien turned his gaze to the window, where the neon sign of the curry house blinked red through the glass. "Evan is a symptom. The Avaros factions are expanding their reach into East London. They are looking for half-breeds who refuse to pay the blood tithe." "You." "Me." He faced her again. "They know I have a weakness. They know I spent three months sleeping in your bed." Rory's breath hitched. The memory of his skin against hers, the heat of his demonic side, flooded her senses. She clenched her jaw. "I am not your weakness, Lucien." "You are my only vulnerability." He stepped closer. His amber eye flared with a faint, inner light. "If they take you, I will burn this city to ash to get you back." "Stop." Rory held up a hand. "No grand declarations. No underworld theatrics. We are not doing this." "We are doing this because they are already watching the flat." Rory dropped her hand. She glanced at the window. The blinds were drawn, but a sliver of neon light cut through the gap. "How many?" "Two on the roof. Three in the alley." "And you walked right through the front door." "I wanted them to see me enter." Lucien gripped the ivory handle of his cane. The hidden blade clicked, extending an inch from the tip. "I want them to know exactly who they are stealing from." Rory walked to the kitchen drawer. She pulled out a heavy iron cleaver she used for chopping bones at the Golden Empress. The metal gleamed under the fluorescent bulb. "I am not a damsel, Lucien." "I know." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "That is why I brought the back door key." He tossed a brass key onto the counter. It clattered against the manila envelope. "The alley is a choke point." Rory evaluated the layout in her head. "If they breach the fire escape, we trap them in the stairwell." "I will take the roof." Lucien adjusted his cuffs. "You secure the perimeter." "We do this together." Rory gripped the cleaver. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his mismatched ones. "No more secrets. No more running off to play the martyr." Lucien nodded. The amber and black eyes softened for a fraction of a second. "Together."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.563
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1202
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1202
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
12.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount617
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
One1
Avaros1
Lucien13
Ptolemy2
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.122
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1202
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean18.49
std12.5
cv0.676
sampleLengths
016
16
229
39
413
516
61
721
88
948
1013
1125
1211
1318
1424
1513
168
1715
1834
196
208
2122
2224
2335
2441
2518
263
273
2818
294
303
3139
324
334
3432
3541
3629
3739
386
3932
4010
418
4224
4333
4451
451
4621
4723
486
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount618
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.011326860841423949
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016181229773462784
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean9.46
std6.23
cv0.658
sampleLengths
06
110
26
310
48
511
65
74
813
916
101
1121
128
135
146
1516
1611
1710
187
196
2017
211
221
231
245
2511
262
2716
282
2915
307
3113
328
3315
3412
3522
366
378
386
3916
4018
416
425
435
444
451
462
4718
4815
4926
46.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2992125984251969
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences73
matches
0"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
1"Her knuckles turned white."
2"He leaned his weight onto"
3"He stepped over the threshold."
4"Her left hand flew up,"
5"He withdrew his hand, pinching"
6"She flipped the envelope open."
7"He sat in a pub,"
8"Her chest tightened."
9"He closed the distance between"
10"He looked down at her"
11"She tilted her chin up."
12"He stopped an inch from"
13"His hand dropped to his"
14"He faced her again"
15"She clenched her jaw."
16"He stepped closer"
17"His amber eye flared with"
18"She glanced at the window."
19"She pulled out a heavy"
ratio0.315
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rory slid the third deadbolt"
1"The heavy wooden door swung"
2"Lucien stood on the welcome"
3"His charcoal suit absorbed the"
4"Platinum blond hair swept back"
5"The amber and black eyes"
6"Rory squeezed the brass handle."
7"Her knuckles turned white."
8"He leaned his weight onto"
9"Rory stepped back and pulled"
10"He stepped over the threshold."
11"The cramped flat offered little"
12"Stacks of books and loose"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sat"
14"The tabby puffed its tail"
15"Lucien tapped his cane against"
16"Rory shut the door and"
17"Lucien reached into his inner"
18"Her left hand flew up,"
19"He withdrew his hand, pinching"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien kept, his mismatched eyes tracking her every micro-expression"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4285%