Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86P74MTE795RAA8YCY80TE

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Duration:
2m 9s
Cost:
$0.055977
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell of cumin and roasted coriander seeped through the floorboards of the Brick Lane flat, a constant, heavy reminder of the curry house operating directly below. Rory sat cross-legged on the faded Persian rug, trying to make sense of the chaotic spread of research notes and ancient scrolls Eva had left behind. Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat, batted lazily at a dangling ribbon bookmark before settling into a patch of weak afternoon sunlight. Then came the knock. Three sharp, measured raps that cut through the quiet hum of the flat. Rory frowned, setting down a crumbling piece of parchment. Eva was in Edinburgh for the week, and nobody else knew Rory was housesitting. She pushed herself up from the floor, brushing a stray lock of straight black hair out of her eyes, and walked to the front door. She slid back the first deadbolt, then the second, and finally the third, the metal clacking loudly in the narrow hallway. She pulled the door open and the breath vanished from her lungs. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor, looking entirely out of place against the peeling floral wallpaper. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his shoulders with devastating precision, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand out of place. His weight rested lightly on the ivory-handled cane he always carried. But it was his eyes that pinned her to the spot. One amber, one pitch black. The heterochromia used to fascinate her, back when they were tangled up in something she still refused to name. Back before the messy, bitter end. "Hello, Rory," he said. His voice was a smooth baritone, carrying the faint, elegant lilt of his Marseille upbringing. "Lucien." She gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning white. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" "No." He did not move, but his gaze dropped to her hand on the door. "It is raining, ma cherie." She glanced past him. A miserable London drizzle was indeed blowing through the open window at the end of the hall, dampening the shoulders of his immaculate suit. She cursed silently, stepping back and pulling the door wider. He stepped inside, bringing with him the scent of ozone, expensive cologne, and the faint, metallic tang of the supernatural underworld he navigated so effortlessly. The flat was cramped, every available surface buried under Eva's books and loose papers, but Lucien moved through the clutter with a predator's grace. He paused to let Ptolemy sniff his polished oxfords, then lowered himself onto the only clear space on the velvet sofa. Rory closed the door, throwing the three deadbolts back into place with loud, deliberate clicks. She turned to face him, crossing her arms. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stretched taut with the movement. "You have exactly two minutes," she said, keeping her voice cool and level. "Then I am throwing you out, cane and all." Lucien rested his hands on the curved ivory head of his cane. A faint smile touched his lips, though it did not reach his mismatched eyes. "Always the barrister's daughter. Quick to establish the rules of engagement." "I dropped out of pre-law, remember? I don't care about rules. I care about my peace and quiet, which you are currently disrupting." She kept her bright blue eyes fixed on his face, refusing to let him see how fast her heart was beating. "I missed you," he said. The words hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. Rory stared at him, waiting for the punchline, the pivot to business, the request for a favor. Lucien was a fixer, an information broker. He did not do sentiment. He dealt in secrets and leverage, trading favors in the shadowed corners of London. "Don't," she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "Don't do that. Not after how we left things." "How we left things was a mistake," he replied, his tone maddeningly calm. He stood up, the cane clicking softly against the floorboards. He closed the distance between them, stopping just a foot away. The heat radiating from his half-demon blood was palpable, a stark contrast to the chill of the drafty flat. "I was a fool, Rory. I let the business get in the way. I let my nature get in the way." She looked up at him. He was five foot eleven, just tall enough to make her tilt her head back. "Your nature is exactly what you are, Lucien. You are a creature of Avaros. You calculate, you broker, you survive. I am just a delivery girl for the Golden Empress who got in over her head." "You are the most brilliant, infuriating woman in this entire miserable city," he murmured. He reached out, his fingers hovering just inches from her arm. "And you are selling yourself short to protect yourself from me." Rory's heart hammered against her ribs. She wanted to step back, to put the small kitchen island between them, but her feet felt rooted to the floor. Slowly, deliberately, he lowered his hand and gently wrapped his fingers around her left wrist. His thumb brushed over the small, crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident. The touch was impossibly tender, a stark contrast to the lethal, thin blade she knew was hidden inside the shaft of his cane. "I didn't come here to ask for a favor," he said softly, his amber eye catching the dim light of the flat. "I came here because I found the man who hurt you. Evan." The name struck her like a physical blow. The abusive ex she had fled from Cardiff, the ghost that had haunted her move to London, the reason she had sought refuge with Eva in the first place. She stared at Lucien, her breath catching in her throat. "Where is he?" she breathed. "Dealt with," Lucien said, his voice hardening for a fraction of a second before softening again. "He will never look for you again. He will never come near London again. I made sure of it." Tears pricked the corners of her eyes, but she blinked them away furiously. She was cool-headed. She was the one who thought her way out of corners. She did not cry. "You didn't have to do that." "I wanted to," he said. He stepped closer, eliminating the last inch of space between them. His free hand came up to cup her jaw, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone. "I should have done it the moment you told me what he did. I should have been the man you needed, instead of the monster I was afraid of becoming." Rory leaned into his touch, just a fraction, betraying the facade she worked so hard to maintain. The scent of him, the warmth of his skin, the quiet intensity in his mismatched eyes—it all conspired to break down the walls she had spent months building. She thought of her father, the Irish barrister who had taught her to argue her case, and her mother, the Welsh teacher who had taught her to recognize when a lesson was learned. She had learned her lesson with Lucien. She had learned that it was terrifying to love someone who lived in the shadows. But looking at him now, feeling the steady, reassuring heat of his hand against her skin, she realized the terror of losing him was far worse. "You are an idiot, Lucien Moreau," she whispered, her voice trembling slightly. "I have been called worse," he replied, a genuine smile finally breaking across his face, transforming his sharp features. He leaned in, his forehead resting gently against hers. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Tell me to walk out that door and you will never see me again." She closed her eyes, listening to the steady rhythm of his breathing, feeling the solid reality of him after so many months of painful absence. Outside, the London rain continued to fall, washing the grime from the streets of Brick Lane, but inside the cramped, book-filled flat, the air was entirely still. "Lock the deadbolts," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
66.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count2
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"lightly"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
5"gently"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"disrupting"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"stark"
count2
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"calculate"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"facade"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"sense of"
2"chaotic"
3"measured"
4"weight"
5"lilt"
6"navigated"
7"predator"
8"velvet"
9"disrupting"
10"whisper"
11"palpable"
12"stark"
13"chill"
14"calculate"
15"tracing"
16"facade"
17"warmth"
18"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1356
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1073
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Persian1
Eva4
Edinburgh1
Rory7
Moreau1
Marseille1
London4
Lucien7
Ptolemy2
Cardiff1
Tears1
Irish1
Welsh1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Tears"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Edinburgh"
3"Marseille"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1356
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"learned that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean38.74
std26.32
cv0.679
sampleLengths
074
117
269
312
495
519
617
74
81
919
1038
1170
1236
1322
1437
1544
165
1752
1819
1974
2056
2136
2277
2334
2447
255
2635
2737
2863
29100
3026
3112
3247
3352
345
87.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"were tangled"
1"was cramped"
2"was hidden"
3"was learned"
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was housesitting"
1"was indeed blowing"
2"was beating"
3"was terrifying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences94
ratio0.011
matches
0"The scent of him, the warmth of his skin, the quiet intensity in his mismatched eyes—it all conspired to break down the walls she had spent months building."
86.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.041628122109158186
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01942645698427382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean14.43
std8.3
cv0.575
sampleLengths
027
126
221
34
413
59
614
725
821
912
1017
1126
1211
1311
145
1519
166
174
1815
1912
205
214
221
2314
245
254
2624
2710
2825
2924
3021
3115
328
3313
3413
359
3612
3714
3811
3944
405
419
4217
437
445
4514
4610
479
4813
4910
45.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.35106382978723405
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners33
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then came the knock."
1"Slowly, deliberately, he lowered his"
ratio0.027
0.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences73
matches
0"She pushed herself up from"
1"She slid back the first"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"His weight rested lightly on"
5"His voice was a smooth"
6"She gripped the edge of"
7"He did not move, but"
8"She glanced past him."
9"She cursed silently, stepping back"
10"He stepped inside, bringing with"
11"He paused to let Ptolemy"
12"She turned to face him,"
13"she said, keeping her voice"
14"She kept her bright blue"
15"He did not do sentiment."
16"He dealt in secrets and"
17"she said, her voice dropping"
18"he replied, his tone maddeningly"
19"He stood up, the cane"
ratio0.548
7.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences73
matches
0"The smell of cumin and"
1"Rory sat cross-legged on the"
2"Ptolemy, the resident tabby cat,"
3"Rory frowned, setting down a"
4"Eva was in Edinburgh for"
5"She pushed herself up from"
6"She slid back the first"
7"She pulled the door open"
8"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
9"He wore a tailored charcoal"
10"His weight rested lightly on"
11"The heterochromia used to fascinate"
12"Back before the messy, bitter"
13"His voice was a smooth"
14"She gripped the edge of"
15"He did not move, but"
16"She glanced past him."
17"A miserable London drizzle was"
18"She cursed silently, stepping back"
19"He stepped inside, bringing with"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his shoulders with devastating precision, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand out of place."
1"But it was his eyes that pinned her to the spot."
2"His voice was a smooth baritone, carrying the faint, elegant lilt of his Marseille upbringing."
3"She thought of her father, the Irish barrister who had taught her to argue her case, and her mother, the Welsh teacher who had taught her to recognize when a le…"
4"She closed her eyes, listening to the steady rhythm of his breathing, feeling the solid reality of him after so many months of painful absence."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She gripped, her knuckles turning white"
1"she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
2"he replied, his tone maddeningly calm"
3"he said softly, his amber eye catching the dim light of the flat"
4"she whispered, her voice trembling slightly"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.433
leniency0.867
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.2
76.2193%