Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86Q097Y9Q945ZZ0CWZ60A6

Run Details

Duration:
2m 38s
Cost:
$0.068680
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest buzzed, casting a sickly emerald glow across the wet pavement outside. Rory dragged a damp cloth over the mahogany counter. The bar smelled of spilled stout and lemon polish. Rain lashed against the front window, blurring the Soho streetlights into smeared halos. The heavy oak door groaned open. A gust of damp wind swept through the room, rattling the black-and-white photographs pinned to the wood-paneled walls. Rory looked up. A man stood in the doorway, shaking water from a charcoal cashmere overcoat. He folded a black umbrella and leaned it against the brass stand. His hair was styled with precise, expensive gel. A silk tie peeked out from beneath a tailored charcoal suit. Rory stopped wiping the counter. The cloth slipped from her fingers and hit the floor. The man turned. His eyes locked onto hers. Rory. Liam. He walked toward the bar. His footsteps clicked against the hardwood floor, a sharp, measured rhythm. He stopped at the nearest stool and placed a leather briefcase on the seat beside him. Rory picked up the cloth. She tossed it into the sink and grabbed a clean glass. Pint of bitter? Maker's Mark. Neat. Rory reached for the bourbon bottle on the top shelf. Her fingers brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She poured the amber liquid and slid the glass across the polished wood. Liam wrapped his hands around the glass. He stared at the liquid. Five years. Six. Rory tossed the rag into the sink. Since the graduation bash at the Union. Liam took a sip. He set the glass down and traced the rim with his thumb. You disappeared. Everyone thought you went back to Ireland. Cardiff is in Wales, Liam. And no. I moved to London. Delivery girl? He gestured to the Golden Empress logo embroidered on her black polo shirt. Part-time. I manage the books for a few local businesses too. Rory leaned her elbows on the bar. You look like you own the bank that holds their mortgages. Liam adjusted his cuffs. The silver cufflinks caught the dim light. Corporate restructuring. Mergers and acquisitions. I made partner at Davies and Hughes last month. Davies and Hughes. The firm that defended the chemical plant in the Taff Valley spill. We provide legal counsel, Rory. We don't judge the clients. You used to chain yourself to the gates of those plants. Liam picked up his drink and drained half of it. The sound of his heavy signet ring struck the crystal. Idealism doesn't pay off a Kensington townhouse. Neither does selling out your soul, but I guess the mortgage covers the therapy. A muscle feathered in Liam’s jaw. He looked past her, staring at the old map of the British Empire hanging behind the taps. I didn't come in here to fight. You walked into my bar. In Soho. On a Tuesday night. Out of all the pubs in London. I saw the name on the sign. The Raven's Nest. I remembered you talking about a place like this. A hideout. This is Silas's place. I just live upstairs and pour the drinks when he's busy in the back. The hidden bookshelf door behind the bar remained shut. The muffled hum of voices failed to carry through the thick oak. Liam traced the condensation on his glass. His shoulders slumped, breaking the rigid posture he had maintained since walking in. Evan got married. Rory froze. The rag in her hand went still. She kept her eyes fixed on the brass tap handles. To a solicitor from his firm. They bought a place in Pontcanna. Why are you telling me this? He asked about you. At the engagement party. He wanted to know if I had heard from you. If you were still fragile. Rory slammed the rag onto the counter. The sharp crack echoed in the empty bar. I am not fragile. I am pouring bourbon in a basement in Soho while you wear a suit that costs more than my annual rent. You ran away, Rory. I survived. Liam met her gaze. The rigid set of his shoulders faltered. Dark circles shadowed his eyes. The skin around his mouth was tight, drawn pale under the harsh neon light filtering through the window. I stayed. His voice dropped to a rasp. I stayed in Cardiff. I took the job at Davies and Hughes. I defended the people who made your life a living hell, thinking I could change the system from the inside. And? The system changed me. He reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a silver flask. He unscrewed the cap and poured a heavy measure into his glass, topping up the bourbon. I draft contracts that evict single mothers. I find loopholes that let executives walk away with golden parachutes while their workers lose their pensions. I do it every day. And every night, I go back to an empty flat in Kensington and stare at the ceiling. Rory watched his hands. They trembled as he screwed the cap back onto the flask. You wanted to be a barrister like your dad. Rory kept her eyes on the brass tap handles. You wanted to stand in the Old Bailey and defend the innocent. My dad died of a stroke at fifty-five, Rory. He died with a plaque on his wall and a mountain of debt. I chose the mountain of money. He downed the rest of the drink. He placed the empty glass on the counter and pushed it toward her. Pour me another. Rory took the glass. She wiped the rim with her cloth and filled it again. She set it down in front of him. Drink up, Liam. It’s getting late. Are you kicking me out? I'm closing the bar. Silas will be out of his meeting soon, and he doesn't like stragglers. Liam wrapped his fingers around the fresh glass. He didn't drink. He just held it, letting the warmth of his skin fog the crystal. Do you ever think about going back? To Cardiff? To the way things were. Before Evan. Before the firm. Before we figured out that the world doesn't care about our grand plans. Rory looked at the old photographs on the wall. Faces of soldiers, spies, and ghosts from Silas’s past stared back at her. The way things were is a ghost story, Liam. You can't go back to a place that doesn't exist anymore. I miss the girl who used to argue with me about tort law until three in the morning. I miss the friend who dragged me to the Brecon Beacons in the freezing rain just to prove a point about endurance. She grew up. She moved to London. Liam nodded. He picked up his briefcase from the stool. The leather creaked in the quiet room. I have a flight to New York in the morning. Another merger. Another hostile takeover. Have a safe flight. He stood up. He buttoned his cashmere coat, hiding the silk tie and the tailored suit. He looked at her one last time, his brown eyes dull and hollow. Goodbye, Rory. Take care of yourself, Liam. He turned and walked toward the door. His footsteps clicked against the hardwood, heavy and measured. He grabbed his black umbrella from the brass stand. He pushed the heavy oak door open, and the damp wind swept back into the room. The door clicked shut behind him. Rory picked up his empty glass. She carried it to the sink and turned on the tap. The water ran over her hands, washing away the smell of expensive bourbon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silk"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"measured"
count2
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"crystal"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"footsteps"
2"measured"
3"traced"
4"crystal"
5"echoed"
6"trembled"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences168
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1276
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions85
wordCount1276
uniqueNames31
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho3
Mark1
Union1
Ireland1
Wales1
Liam14
London3
Golden1
Empress1
Davies3
Hughes3
Taff1
Valley1
Rory19
Kensington2
British1
Empire1
Tuesday1
Silas3
Pontcanna1
Cardiff3
Old1
Bailey1
Evan2
Brecon1
Beacons1
New1
York1
You8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Mark"
3"Liam"
4"Davies"
5"Hughes"
6"Rory"
7"Empire"
8"Silas"
9"Old"
10"Bailey"
11"Evan"
12"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Union"
2"Ireland"
3"Wales"
4"London"
5"Golden"
6"Taff"
7"Valley"
8"Kensington"
9"Pontcanna"
10"Cardiff"
11"Brecon"
12"New"
13"York"
globalScore0.755
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1276
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"out that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean16.79
std12.13
cv0.722
sampleLengths
050
124
23
344
415
58
61
71
832
916
103
113
1234
1312
142
1515
1616
179
1811
1915
2029
2111
2214
2315
2410
2511
2620
277
2814
2923
307
3118
3221
3318
3421
3520
363
3719
3812
396
4023
4115
4225
434
442
4534
4640
471
484
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences168
matches
0"was styled"
1"got married"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs220
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences168
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1282
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.0109204368174727
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00078003120124805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean7.6
std4.69
cv0.618
sampleLengths
019
19
29
313
46
518
63
713
812
98
1011
115
1210
133
145
151
161
175
1811
1916
205
2111
223
232
241
2510
2611
2713
287
295
302
311
327
337
344
3512
362
377
385
392
404
412
4213
431
4410
457
4611
474
487
492
39.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.30952380952380953
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences146
matches
0"He folded a black umbrella"
1"His hair was styled with"
2"His eyes locked onto hers."
3"He walked toward the bar."
4"His footsteps clicked against the"
5"He stopped at the nearest"
6"She tossed it into the"
7"Her fingers brushed the small"
8"She poured the amber liquid"
9"He stared at the liquid."
10"He set the glass down"
11"I moved to London."
12"He gestured to the Golden"
13"I manage the books for"
14"You look like you own"
15"I made partner at Davies"
16"We provide legal counsel, Rory."
17"We don't judge the clients."
18"You used to chain yourself"
19"He looked past her, staring"
ratio0.486
21.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences146
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory dragged a damp cloth"
2"The bar smelled of spilled"
3"Rain lashed against the front"
4"The heavy oak door groaned"
5"A gust of damp wind"
6"Rory looked up."
7"A man stood in the"
8"He folded a black umbrella"
9"His hair was styled with"
10"A silk tie peeked out"
11"Rory stopped wiping the counter."
12"The cloth slipped from her"
13"The man turned."
14"His eyes locked onto hers."
15"He walked toward the bar."
16"His footsteps clicked against the"
17"He stopped at the nearest"
18"Rory picked up the cloth."
19"She tossed it into the"
ratio0.877
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences146
matches
0"To a solicitor from his"
1"If you were still fragile."
2"To the way things were."
3"Before the firm."
4"Before we figured out that"
ratio0.034
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"You look like you own the bank that holds their mortgages."
1"I defended the people who made your life a living hell, thinking I could change the system from the inside."
2"I find loopholes that let executives walk away with golden parachutes while their workers lose their pensions."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5312%