Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86SNZYC67ETPR03NSRFBY6

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.050415
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair out of her eyes and stepped through the dense brambles at the edge of Richmond Park. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their bark twisted into grotesque faces by the moonlight. She crossed the boundary. The air changed. Frost bit at her cheeks, yet the ground beneath her boots squelched with the moisture of year-round wildflowers. She pressed the phone to her ear. "Eva, I'm inside the grove." Static hissed through the speaker. A sharp pop followed. "Rory? You're breaking up. The signal out here is garbage." "I'm at the stones. The pendant is reacting." Rory pulled the silver chain from beneath her jacket. The deep crimson gemstone, no larger than her thumbnail, cast a faint inner glow against her collarbone. It pulsed with a steady, rhythmic warmth. "It's pulling me toward the center." "Come back to the flat. Silas is closing up. We can look for the portal tomorrow." "It won't wait. The warmth is increasing." Rory walked deeper into the clearing. The wildflowers brushed against her jeans. Bluebells and foxgloves thrived in the dead of winter, their petals bruised black in the shadows. She swept her phone flashlight across the grass. The beam caught nothing but swaying stems. The scent of crushed petals hung heavy in the air, cloying and overly sweet, masking an underlying odor of damp earth. A twig snapped behind her. Rory spun around. The oak stones stood silent. "Did you hear that?" "Hear what?" Eva's voice warped, dropping an octave before speeding up to a chipmunk pitch. "Rory, your voice is doing the weird echo thing again." "Something stepped on a branch." "It's a park. Foxes are everywhere." "Foxes don't wear boots." Rory crouched and examined the mud near the nearest standing stone. A deep, elongated depression marred the soil. It lacked the distinct tread of a trainer or a hiking boot. The impression looked like a smear of heavy, dragging weight. She traced the edge of the mark with her fingertip. The soil was freezing, yet the groove radiated a faint, residual heat. She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Her pulse hammered against the skin. "Eva, what time is it?" "Quarter past midnight. Why?" Rory checked her wristwatch. The second hand ticked backward. The digital display blinked 03:47. "My watch is broken." "Get out of there, Rory. Time moves funny in that pocket. You know the stories." "I need to find the epicenter. The pendant is my compass." The crimson gem flared. Heat seared through Rory's shirt. She gasped and dropped the phone to her side, gripping the pendant. The silver chain bit into her neck. The warmth shifted from a steady pulse to a frantic, erratic throb. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The wildflowers stopped swaying. The wind died. Absolute silence clamped down on the grove. The sudden absence of noise pressed against her eardrums, creating a physical pressure. Then, the whispering started. It drifted from the spaces between the oak stones. A wet, clicking sound accompanied the hushed syllables. Rory swept her flashlight toward the nearest gap. The beam illuminated empty air. The light caught dust motes dancing in the still atmosphere. She shifted the light to the left. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of an oak. It slid across the grass, moving against the angle of the moonlight. "Eva." "Still here. Still garbage signal. Are you coming back?" "There's something in the grove with me." "Call the police." "They can't enter the boundary. You know that." Rory backed away from the sliding shadow. Her heel caught on a thick vine. She stumbled, catching herself against the rough bark of a standing stone. The wood felt soft, yielding like bruised fruit beneath her palm. She snatched her hand back. A thick, dark sap coated her fingers. It smelled of copper and rotting meat. She wiped her hand on her jeans, leaving a dark streak across the denim. The clicking grew louder. It echoed from the right. Then directly above her. Rory aimed the flashlight into the canopy. The beam pierced the dark leaves. Nothing hung from the branches. The leaves themselves were wrong. They were translucent, veined with a pulsing, sickly green fluid. She lowered the light. The shadow on the grass had multiplied. Three distinct pools of darkness stretched across the wildflowers, all converging on her position. They possessed no physical source. No branches blocked the moonlight to cast them. The pendant burned against her skin. Rory unclasped the silver chain and held the gemstone out. The deep crimson light flared, illuminating a ten-foot radius. The shadows recoiled. They rippled, their edges fraying like smoke in a draft. "Eva, the pendant is burning hot. It's a Hel portal. It has to be." "Rory, you've been gone for three days." Rory froze. The phone screen displayed a missed call list. Dozens of them. All from Eva. All timestamped over the last seventy-two hours. "I just walked in. It's been ten minutes." "I'm calling Silas. We're coming to the park boundary. Do not move." The line went dead. Rory stared at the black screen. The clicking surrounded her. It grew into a chorus of wet snaps and guttural exhales. The shadows crept closer, inching over the bluebells. The flowers wilted instantly where the darkness touched them, turning to gray ash that drifted upward against gravity. She backed into the center of the stone circle. The oak trunks groaned. The bark shifted, the grotesque faces twisting into wide, silent screams. The wood splintered, revealing dark, hollow cavities beneath the surface. A cold breath brushed the nape of her neck. The temperature plummeted, turning her exhales into thick white plumes. Rory tightened her grip on the Heartstone. The crimson glow illuminated a pale, elongated hand reaching over her shoulder. The fingers possessed too many joints, bending backward at sharp angles. The skin was the color of curdled milk, stretched tight over prominent bones. She spun around, raising the flashlight. The beam hit a face devoid of features, save for a vertical slit where a mouth should be. The slit peeled open, revealing rows of needle-thin, translucent teeth. The creature stood a full head taller than her, its limbs folded in unnatural, mantis-like poses. The creature tilted its head. It mimicked Eva's voice, replicating the warped, static-laced pitch from the phone call. "Get out of there, Rory."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1072
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"warmth"
4"echo"
5"weight"
6"traced"
7"pulse"
8"throb"
9"vibrated"
10"silence"
11"dancing"
12"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1072
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount876
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory14
Eva3
Heartstone1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.701
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a smear of heavy, dragging we"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1072
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean19.85
std18.43
cv0.928
sampleLengths
066
17
25
39
410
547
616
77
864
95
108
114
1225
135
146
154
1662
1715
185
194
2014
214
2215
2311
2440
2537
264
2740
2829
291
309
317
323
338
3470
3513
3633
3738
3825
3913
4014
417
4223
438
4412
454
4647
4734
4819
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences129
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"tight over prominent bones."
1"needle-thin, translucent teeth."
2"warped, static-laced pitch"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01925254813137033
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004530011325028313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.31
std4.32
cv0.52
sampleLengths
025
116
24
33
418
57
65
75
84
910
1017
1117
127
136
1416
157
166
176
1816
198
207
2121
225
233
245
254
2615
2710
285
296
304
3111
327
3312
3410
3510
3612
379
386
395
404
414
425
435
444
4515
4611
474
485
4912
36.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.24031007751937986
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners31
97.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then, the whispering started."
1"Then directly above her."
2"All timestamped over the last"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences103
matches
0"She crossed the boundary."
1"She pressed the phone to"
2"It pulsed with a steady,"
3"She swept her phone flashlight"
4"It lacked the distinct tread"
5"She traced the edge of"
6"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
7"Her pulse hammered against the"
8"She gasped and dropped the"
9"It drifted from the spaces"
10"She shifted the light to"
11"It slid across the grass,"
12"Her heel caught on a"
13"She stumbled, catching herself against"
14"She snatched her hand back."
15"It smelled of copper and"
16"She wiped her hand on"
17"It echoed from the right."
18"They were translucent, veined with"
19"She lowered the light."
ratio0.252
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences103
matches
0"Rory pushed a strand of"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She crossed the boundary."
3"The air changed."
4"She pressed the phone to"
5"Static hissed through the speaker."
6"A sharp pop followed."
7"Rory pulled the silver chain"
8"The deep crimson gemstone, no"
9"It pulsed with a steady,"
10"Rory walked deeper into the"
11"The wildflowers brushed against her"
12"Bluebells and foxgloves thrived in"
13"She swept her phone flashlight"
14"The beam caught nothing but"
15"The scent of crushed petals"
16"A twig snapped behind her."
17"Rory spun around."
18"The oak stones stood silent."
19"Eva's voice warped, dropping an"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The flowers wilted instantly where the darkness touched them, turning to gray ash that drifted upward against gravity."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0199%