Run: 2026-05-22-01KS86X5251XWSGZWJKM0037SJ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 26s
Cost:
$0.070722
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The top brass deadbolt clacked. Rory twisted the middle lock, then the bottom one. She gripped the handle and pulled the heavy wooden door inward, bracing against the draught from the stairwell. Lucien stood on the frayed welcome mat. Rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit, pooling in the intricate weave of the fabric. He leaned his weight on the ivory handle of his cane, his posture immaculate despite the bleak weather. His amber eye caught the dim hallway light, glowing like a polished coin. The black one remained a void, absorbing the shadows of the corridor. "You are difficult to track, Aurora." "Rory. And I am not hiding." She kept her grip tight against the wood. "What do you want, Lucien?" "To come inside. The curry house downstairs is giving me a headache, and the rain is ruining my shoes." She stepped back and opened the door wider. He crossed the threshold. The floorboards groaned under his weight. Ptolemy trotted out from beneath a stack of Evelyn Waugh novels and rubbed his orange flank against his wet trousers. "Even the cat likes you." "Animals possess excellent judgment." Lucien shook the water from his slicked-back platinum hair. Droplets hit the floorboards. He surveyed the cramped living room. Every available surface held books, loose scrolls, and chaotic research notes. A teetering stack of encyclopaedias rested on the edge of the rug. "Your friend has a peculiar definition of interior design." "Eva is away. I am just feeding Ptolemy." Rory closed the door and threw the three deadbolts back into place. The metallic thuds echoed in the small space. "You have two minutes before I kick you out." "Generous as always." He limped toward the small kitchenette, the concealed blade in his cane clicking against the peeling linoleum. He stopped at the counter and picked up a crumbling parchment, careful not to knock over a jar of loose pens. "Put that down." He rolled the parchment between his gloved fingers. "Sumerian warding spells. Eva is branching out." "Put it down, Lucien." He placed the scroll next to the toaster. He turned to face her, resting both hands on the ivory knob of his cane. The silence in the flat stretched, filled only by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant thump of the curry house bass below. Rory walked to the sink and filled the kettle. She set it on the base and pressed the switch. The blue light flickered on. "You left without a word." "I had urgent business in Marseille." "For three months." "Avarosian politics require a delicate touch." She crossed her arms. The sleeve of her jumper rode up, exposing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. His gaze dropped to the pale mark, lingering for a fraction of a second before rising to her bright blue eyes. "You could have sent a text." "My phone was confiscated by a rather disgruntled duke." "You are a fixer. Fix things." She leaned against the counter, putting distance between them. "You do not just vanish when things get complicated." "Things were not complicated, Rory. They were dangerous." "I can handle danger." "You fled Cardiff to escape a man who threw a glass at your head. You do not need my brand of danger added to your plate." The kettle clicked off. Steam curled into the cool air of the flat, fogging the bottom edge of the window. Rory grabbed two mugs from the drying rack and dropped a tea bag into each. Her hands shook, rattling the ceramic against the Formica counter. She forced her fingers to steady, pressing her palms flat against the surface. "I did not ask for your protection." "You never do." He stepped closer. The scent of petrichor and expensive sandalwood cologne cut through the smell of old paper and damp wool. He reached out and covered her shaking hand with his gloved one. The leather was cold from the rain, yet his grip held steady. She pulled her hand back and picked up the kettle. She poured the boiling water over the tea bags. Dark liquid bloomed in the mugs. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He withdrew his hand and adjusted his grip on his cane. The amber eye darkened. "Evan is back in London." The spoon clattered against the side of the mug. Rory stared at the swirling tea leaves. The noise from the street outside faded into a dull roar in her ears. "How do you know?" "He attempted to pawn a silver watch at a fence in Camden. The fence owes me a favour." "He has no reason to come back." "He has every reason. His new girlfriend left him, and his bank accounts are frozen. He is desperate, and he knows you are in the city." She gripped the edge of the counter. The Formica dug into her palms, grounding her in the physical space of the kitchen. "I can handle him." "He is staying at a hostel in King's Cross. He has been asking around the Golden Empress." "Yu-Fei would not tell him anything." "Evan is not asking with manners. He broke the window of the delivery van yesterday." Rory closed her eyes. The image of the shattered glass flashed behind her eyelids, sharp and jagged. She opened them and looked at the Frenchman. His jaw was set, the muscles ticking beneath his pale skin. "So you came to play the knight in shining armour." "I came to offer you a solution." "Which involves you." "Which involves me." He tapped the cane against the floor. "You stay here. I will deal with Evan." "By dealing with him, you mean killing him." "I mean ending the issue for good." "I am not letting you murder my ex-boyfriend, Lucien. I am a pre-law student. Or I was." "You are a delivery girl who lives above a pub and house-sits for a witch. The law does not apply to your current postcode." "It applies to me." She picked up her mug and took a sip. The tea scalded her tongue. She swallowed the burn. "I will talk to him." "He will not listen." "He will listen to the police." "The police will not protect you from a man who knows the supernatural underworld." "He does not know about the underworld." "He knows about me." Lucien stepped into her personal space. The heat radiating from his body chased away the chill of the damp flat. "And he knows I left you." She looked up at him. The heterochromatic eyes held a storm of unspoken regrets. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then back to her eyes. His thumb brushed the edge of her jaw. The touch lacked pressure, a stark contrast to the rigid posture of his shoulders. "I left you to keep you safe." "You left me because you are a coward." His hand stilled. The muscle in his jaw jumped. He dropped his hand and took a step back, creating a chasm of cold air between them. "Drink your tea, Rory. We leave in ten minutes." "I am not going anywhere with you." "You are." He turned toward the door, his wet shoes squeaking on the linoleum. "Ptolemy needs feeding, and Evan needs a lesson in manners. I suggest you put on a coat." "Lucien." He paused with his hand on the brass doorknob. He did not look back. "If you hurt him, I will never speak to you again." "If I do not hurt him, he will hurt you." He twisted the knob. The top lock clicked open. "Ten minutes."
created_at"2026-05-22T16:04:44.755Z" 5/22/2026, 4:04:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1262
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"intricate"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"intricate"
1"weight"
2"chaotic"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"flickered"
6"pawn"
7"shattered"
8"chill"
9"unspoken"
10"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1262
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount758
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Evelyn1
Waugh1
Formica2
Frenchman1
Rory6
Lucien3
persons
0"Evelyn"
1"Waugh"
2"Formica"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Frenchman"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1262
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs92
mean13.72
std12.49
cv0.91
sampleLengths
032
142
225
36
46
58
65
719
88
930
105
114
1242
139
148
1520
169
173
1838
193
208
217
224
2347
2424
255
266
273
286
2941
306
319
326
339
349
358
364
3726
3858
397
403
4145
4225
435
4415
455
4630
474
4818
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences138
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.011857707509881422
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013175230566534915
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.14
std5.34
cv0.584
sampleLengths
05
19
218
37
417
518
613
712
86
96
108
115
1219
138
144
156
1620
175
184
199
204
216
2211
2312
249
258
2612
278
289
293
3017
3121
323
338
347
354
368
3715
3824
399
4010
415
425
436
443
456
464
4716
4821
496
41.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2971014492753623
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences75
matches
0"She gripped the handle and"
1"He leaned his weight on"
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"She kept her grip tight"
4"She stepped back and opened"
5"He crossed the threshold."
6"He surveyed the cramped living"
7"He limped toward the small"
8"He stopped at the counter"
9"He rolled the parchment between"
10"He placed the scroll next"
11"He turned to face her,"
12"She set it on the"
13"She crossed her arms."
14"His gaze dropped to the"
15"She leaned against the counter,"
16"Her hands shook, rattling the"
17"She forced her fingers to"
18"He stepped closer."
19"He reached out and covered"
ratio0.507
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences75
matches
0"The top brass deadbolt clacked."
1"Rory twisted the middle lock,"
2"She gripped the handle and"
3"Lucien stood on the frayed"
4"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
5"He leaned his weight on"
6"His amber eye caught the"
7"The black one remained a"
8"She kept her grip tight"
9"She stepped back and opened"
10"He crossed the threshold."
11"The floorboards groaned under his"
12"Ptolemy trotted out from beneath"
13"Lucien shook the water from"
14"Droplets hit the floorboards."
15"He surveyed the cramped living"
16"Every available surface held books,"
17"A teetering stack of encyclopaedias"
18"Rory closed the door and"
19"The metallic thuds echoed in"
ratio0.987
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7031%