Run: 2026-05-22-01KS874PG0GQDB6TSBTNKC3DKQ

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2m 13s
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$0.076945
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Alibaba

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic clack. Rory pulled the door inward. Lucien stood on the welcome mat. His tailored charcoal suit absorbed the dim hallway light. He leaned his weight on his ivory-handled cane. "You changed your locks," he said. "I upgraded them." Rory kept her body wedged in the frame. "You have three seconds to state your business before I shut this in your face." "Three seconds is hardly enough time to explain a blood feud." He stepped forward. The toe of his polished Oxford shoe crossed the threshold. Rory shoved her palm against his chest. The wool of his jacket felt coarse against her skin. He did not budge. "Move, Rory." "Give me one reason." "Because the men in the stairwell carry suppressed weapons and lack my refined manners." She glanced past his shoulder. The hallway remained empty, but the faint scent of cordite drifted up the shaft. She stepped back and pulled him inside. She engaged the three deadbolts. The lock tumbled with a loud click-clack. Lucien brushed past her. His cologne, a sharp blend of cedar and crushed ozone, invaded the cramped space. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, puffed his tail and bolted under the sofa. "Charming place," Lucien said. He navigated the narrow path between towering stacks of leather-bound books and scattered parchment scrolls. The floorboards creaked beneath his weight. The rich aroma of chicken tikka masala from the curry house below seeped through the gaps in the wood. "Your friend Eva possesses a fascinating hoarding disorder." "She is a researcher. Keep your hands off her notes." He stopped by the small kitchenette. He rested his cane against the counter. The silver tip scratched the faded linoleum. He unbuttoned his jacket with slow, deliberate movements. Rory crossed her arms. "You tracked mud onto the rug." "That is not mud." He turned. A dark crimson stain bloomed across the crisp new white cotton dress shirt beneath his jacket. "You are bleeding." "An astute observation." He pressed a silk handkerchief to his side. The white fabric soaked through in seconds. "I require your first aid kit. And a glass of your cheapest whisky." "I do not drink." "Then I will drink it for you." Rory walked to the cramped bathroom. She grabbed the red plastic box from under the porcelain sink. Her bright blue eyes caught her reflection in the spotted mirror. Her skin lacked its usual warmth, highlighting the dark shadows beneath her eyes. She splashed cold water on her face, dried her hands on a frayed towel, and walked back out. Lucien sat on the velvet armchair. He had discarded his jacket. His platinum blond hair remained perfectly slicked back, not a single strand out of place despite the injury. She dropped the kit on the coffee table. "Strip." "Buy me a drink first." "Shut up and take the shirt off, Lucien." He unfastened the remaining buttons. He peeled the ruined cotton away from his skin. The wound sat just below his ribs. A clean entry hole. No exit. Rory snapped on a pair of latex gloves. She poured antiseptic onto a gauze pad. "This will sting." "I am half-demon, Rory. My pain tolerance is exceptional." She pressed the soaked gauze directly into the bullet hole. The sharp scent of iodine filled the narrow space between them. Lucien hissed. His jaw locked, the muscles feathering beneath his skin. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one pitch black, locked onto hers. His hand shot out and grabbed her left wrist. His thumb brushed over the small crescent-shaped scar on her skin. The heat radiating from his palm seeped through the latex glove. "Let go," she said. "You still flinch when I touch you." "I flinch because you are tracking dirt and blood into my safe house." "Is that what we are calling it now? A safe house?" His grip tightened just a fraction. "Last month, you called it a mistake." "Last month, you lied to me about the Moreau syndicate's involvement in the dockyard fires." "I omitted details to protect you." "You manipulated me." She twisted her arm and broke his hold. She resumed cleaning the wound. "Hold this." He pressed his own hand against the gauze. "You left without a word. You packed your bags in the middle of the night and vanished to this curry-scented flat above a chip shop." "Brick Lane. And I left because I refuse to be collateral damage in your underworld wars. I fled Cardiff to escape an abusive ex, not to become a mobster's pet." "I never treated you like a pet." His voice dropped an octave. The smooth French lilt in his accent thickened. "I treated you like a queen." "A queen in a gilded cage is still a prisoner." She taped the bandage down. "Done. Now get out." "I cannot leave." "Watch me throw you out." "Rory." He reached into his trouser pocket. He pulled out a heavy gold object and tossed it onto the coffee table. It landed with a dull thud next to the first aid kit. Rory stared at it. Her breath hitched. It was a signet ring. A thick gold band with a black onyx stone, engraved with a snarling wolf. Evan’s ring. "Where did you get that?" she whispered. "Your ex-boyfriend is in London." Lucien leaned forward, resting his elbows on his knees. "He arrived this morning. He questioned the local riff-raff about a Welsh girl with black hair and bright blue eyes." "He would not dare." "He dared. He brought three friends. They are currently tearing apart your flat above Silas's bar." Rory grabbed her coat from the hook. "I need to call Eva." "Eva is in Edinburgh." Lucien stood up. He grabbed his cane and shrugged his jacket back on, wincing as the fabric pulled at his stitches. "And Silas is unconscious in his own cellar." "We have to go to the police." "The police cannot stop a man who deals in blood magic." Lucien stepped into her personal space. He reached up and tucked a loose strand of straight black hair behind her ear. His touch was feather-light, contrasting with the violence in his eyes. "Evan made a deal with a warlock in Marseille. He traded his soul for a tracking hex." Rory swatted his hand away. "Why are you telling me this? You are an information broker. You sell secrets, you do not give them away for free." "He placed a bounty on your head. Fifty thousand pounds." "And you want to collect it." "I want to kill him before someone else does." Lucien turned his head toward the front door. A heavy thud echoed through the flat. The wood of the door splintered inward. Ptolemy yowled from under the sofa. Lucien drew the thin blade from his ivory-handled cane with a sharp metallic ring. He stepped in front of Rory, shielding her from the entryway. The door crashed open. Two men in tactical gear stepped into the flat, raising their submachine guns. "Get behind the kitchen counter," Lucien said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His grip tightened just [just]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.036
95.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"fascinating"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"navigated"
2"fascinating"
3"silk"
4"porcelain"
5"warmth"
6"velvet"
7"lilt"
8"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1175
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount725
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Oxford1
Eva1
French1
Lucien11
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.741
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1175
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean18.36
std14.09
cv0.768
sampleLengths
015
123
26
326
411
534
62
74
814
938
1030
1152
1210
1328
1410
154
1618
173
1831
194
207
2159
2229
239
245
258
2627
2718
289
2921
3054
314
327
3313
3424
3515
366
3718
3833
3930
4026
4119
423
435
4433
4526
462
477
4834
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount731
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"crisp new white cotton"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.015047879616963064
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0027359781121751026
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean8.97
std5.1
cv0.569
sampleLengths
010
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26
39
48
56
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715
811
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1010
117
1210
134
142
154
1614
175
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197
205
217
224
2314
2412
254
2615
276
2819
298
3010
316
327
337
348
354
366
374
382
3916
403
4111
427
4313
444
457
466
4711
4811
4913
43.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.31297709923664124
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences82
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit absorbed"
1"He leaned his weight on"
2"He stepped forward."
3"He did not budge."
4"She glanced past his shoulder."
5"She stepped back and pulled"
6"She engaged the three deadbolts."
7"His cologne, a sharp blend"
8"He navigated the narrow path"
9"He stopped by the small"
10"He rested his cane against"
11"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
12"He pressed a silk handkerchief"
13"She grabbed the red plastic"
14"Her bright blue eyes caught"
15"Her skin lacked its usual"
16"She splashed cold water on"
17"He had discarded his jacket."
18"His platinum blond hair remained"
19"She dropped the kit on"
ratio0.524
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences82
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door inward."
2"Lucien stood on the welcome"
3"His tailored charcoal suit absorbed"
4"He leaned his weight on"
5"Rory kept her body wedged"
6"He stepped forward."
7"The toe of his polished"
8"Rory shoved her palm against"
9"The wool of his jacket"
10"He did not budge."
11"She glanced past his shoulder."
12"The hallway remained empty, but"
13"She stepped back and pulled"
14"She engaged the three deadbolts."
15"The lock tumbled with a"
16"Lucien brushed past her."
17"His cologne, a sharp blend"
18"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, puffed"
19"He navigated the narrow path"
ratio0.988
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.071
82.0368%