Run: 2026-05-22-01KS876R0SW9BNH7P1AK0Q2VAM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.055973
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed against the midnight sky, their bark twisted into agonizing spirals. Rory ducked beneath the lowest branch and stepped across the boundary into the Grove. The air shifted. The distant rumble of London traffic and the faint hum of aircraft vanished, replaced by a pressurized vacuum. Moonlight filtered through the dense canopy, illuminating patches of wildflowers. Bluebells and foxgloves bloomed in thick clusters, their petals vibrant and wet with dew despite the winter chill. She pulled her mobile from her jacket pocket. The screen displayed zero bars. The battery indicator, full when she left her flat above Silas's bar, now showed a sliver of red. "Come on, Eva. You meant midnight." Rory tapped the glass. The digital clock read 00:01. She blinked. The digits scrambled and settled on 23:45. She looked up. The moon hung directly overhead, casting sharp shadows. A second later, the shadows stretched long across the grass, the moon dipping toward the horizon in a single, violent lurch. Time moved differently inside the Grove. The local legends spoke of minutes turning into days, but experiencing the temporal slip made her stomach tighten. She shoved the phone away and clicked on her torch. The white beam cut through the dark, sweeping over the carpet of flowers. "Eva?" Silence answered. Not the quiet of an empty park, but a heavy, deadened void. No owls called. No wind rustled the leaves. Rory adjusted her grip on the torch. Her left thumb brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. A grounding habit. She walked deeper into the clearing, her boots sinking into the soft, damp earth. Eva had left a voicemail three hours ago. Frantic whispers, a demand to meet at the Richmond grove, then a dead line. Rory pressed play on the saved message, holding the phone to her ear. Eva's voice crackled through the speaker, breathless and high. "Rory, the stones. They are singing. Do not let the roots touch you. Just come to the grove." A wet tearing sound followed on the recording, then static. Rory stopped walking. The silence of the clearing pressed against her eardrums. A twig snapped behind her. Rory spun, bringing the torch up. The beam illuminated the trunk of a massive oak. The bark was scarred and weeping a thick, amber sap. Nothing moved in the shadows. "Very funny, Ev." The shadows between the roots remained still. She lowered the torch. The silver chain around her neck shifted. The Heartstone pendant rested against her collarbone. A faint warmth seeped from the deep crimson gemstone. She pinched the thumbnail-sized artifact. The heat pulsed in a steady rhythm. One beat. Two beats. The warmth indicated a Hel portal. Rory scanned the tree line. The folklore warned of thin veils between realms, but a portal meant something had already crossed over. A low scrape echoed from the left. Rory pivoted. The light caught a patch of crushed bluebells. The stems were flattened, oozing a dark, foul-smelling liquid. "Who is there?" The air grew frigid. The scent of rotting meat and ozone washed over her. The wildflowers at the edge of the clearing shivered, their petals curling inward. Rory stepped backward, keeping her back to the central standing stone. Her mind raced, calculating distances and exit routes. The boundary stones were twenty paces east. A soft hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The ground felt spongy, yielding too much under her weight. "Eva, if this is a prank, I am leaving." A giggle drifted from the canopy above. The pitch was too high, grating against her teeth. It sounded like Eva, but stretched and distorted, like a tape playing at the wrong speed. Rory aimed the torch into the branches. The light failed to pierce the dense foliage. "Come down here." The pendant burned. Rory gasped and dropped the gem. It swung against her chest, emitting a faint inner glow that cast a bloody hue over her jacket. The heat seared her skin. A Hel portal was close. Too close. Something dropped from the trees. It landed ten feet away with a heavy, wet thud. Rory swept the light over the ground. A mass of tangled roots and dark soil shifted. It rose, unfolding into a vaguely humanoid shape. Mud and decaying leaves clung to its limbs. It lacked a face, presenting only a smooth expanse of pale, polished wood where features should be. She backed away. Her heel struck a stone. The creature tilted its head. The wood split open with a sound like tearing canvas, revealing a hollow cavity filled with glowing white spores. Eva's stolen voice echoed from the hollow chest. "Rory. You came." "Tell me where she is." Rory kept her voice level, her thumb rubbing her wrist scar. The creature took a step forward. The wildflowers beneath its feet withered, turning to black ash in seconds. The pendant flared, the crimson light illuminating the thick fog rolling off the creature's shoulders. "She is in the roots. She is in the dark." Rory tightened her grip on the torch. The beam flickered, the batteries draining in the unnatural cold. "Stay back." The entity raised an arm. The joints popped, elongating. The fingers stretched into sharp, wooden spikes that dripped with the same amber sap weeping from the trees. "We are all in the dark, Rory." The torch died, plunging the grove into complete blackness, save for the bloody pulse of the Heartstone against her chest. The spores in the creature's chest flared brighter. The white light cast long, twisting shadows across the grass. The entity lunged, its wooden spikes slicing through the air. Rory threw herself to the right. The spikes buried themselves into the ancient oak standing stone with a sharp crack. Splinters rained down on her shoulders. She scrambled to her feet, her boots slipping on the crushed, decaying flowers. The Heartstone swung wildly, its chain biting into the back of her neck. "You cannot run from the soil." The sound vibrated in Rory's teeth, a chorus of a dozen different pitches layering over Eva's stolen tone. It ripped its arm from the stone. The wood groaned. The entity turned its faceless head toward her, tracking the crimson glow of the pendant. Rory backed toward the eastern boundary. Ten paces. The air grew thicker, resisting her movements like deep water. The pendant seared her collarbone, the heat blistering her skin. She ignored the pain, keeping her eyes locked on the pale wooden silhouette. "Give her back." The creature dropped to all fours. Its limbs bent at impossible angles, joints snapping and reforming to accommodate the new posture. It scuttled forward, closing the distance in rapid, jerky movements. "She is part of the Grove now." Rory reached the edge of the clearing. The ancient oak boundary stones stood just a few feet away. The air shimmered between them, marking the threshold back to Richmond Park. The creature leaped.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"lurch"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"calculating"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count2
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"chill"
2"lurch"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"pulsed"
7"scanned"
8"echoed"
9"raced"
10"calculating"
11"vibrated"
12"weight"
13"flickered"
14"pulse"
15"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1154
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1068
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove2
London1
Silas1
Richmond2
Heartstone3
Hel2
Eva5
Rory18
Park1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Grove"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.657
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like Eva, but stretched and distor"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.867
wordCount1154
matches
0"Not the quiet of an empty park, but a heavy, deadened void"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean23.55
std17.9
cv0.76
sampleLengths
079
131
256
347
41
522
657
713
827
910
1012
115
1230
133
1434
1544
167
1719
183
1953
2020
219
2232
2315
243
2539
2615
2749
288
2932
303
3116
3233
3310
3417
352
3627
377
3820
3928
4052
4124
4225
4341
443
4531
467
4730
483
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"was scarred"
1"were flattened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1071
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"high, grating against her"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.021475256769374416
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004668534080298786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean8.68
std4.89
cv0.563
sampleLengths
016
114
23
318
410
518
68
75
818
910
105
112
127
133
148
1521
166
1718
1810
1913
201
212
2212
233
245
257
2611
273
2814
298
3014
3113
329
3318
3410
353
369
375
386
399
4010
415
423
437
444
457
467
479
485
497
34.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.23308270676691728
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences114
matches
0"She pulled her mobile from"
1"She looked up."
2"She shoved the phone away"
3"Her left thumb brushed the"
4"She walked deeper into the"
5"She lowered the torch."
6"She pinched the thumbnail-sized artifact."
7"Her mind raced, calculating distances"
8"It sounded like Eva, but"
9"It swung against her chest,"
10"It landed ten feet away"
11"It rose, unfolding into a"
12"It lacked a face, presenting"
13"She backed away."
14"Her heel struck a stone."
15"She scrambled to her feet,"
16"It ripped its arm from"
17"She ignored the pain, keeping"
18"Its limbs bent at impossible"
19"It scuttled forward, closing the"
ratio0.175
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences114
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Rory ducked beneath the lowest"
2"The air shifted."
3"The distant rumble of London"
4"Moonlight filtered through the dense"
5"Bluebells and foxgloves bloomed in"
6"She pulled her mobile from"
7"The screen displayed zero bars."
8"The battery indicator, full when"
9"Rory tapped the glass"
10"The digital clock read 00:01."
11"The digits scrambled and settled"
12"She looked up."
13"The moon hung directly overhead,"
14"A second later, the shadows"
15"Time moved differently inside the"
16"The local legends spoke of"
17"She shoved the phone away"
18"The white beam cut through"
19"Rory adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It swung against her chest, emitting a faint inner glow that cast a bloody hue over her jacket."
1"The fingers stretched into sharp, wooden spikes that dripped with the same amber sap weeping from the trees."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory kept, her thumb rubbing her wrist scar"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.9056%