Run: 2026-05-22-01KS876X3PNHPJHWMDZ6JR7Q05

Run Details

Duration:
2m 13s
Cost:
$0.062610
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the cracked pavement of Camden High Street. Detective Harlow Quinn pumped her arms, her boots striking the flooded asphalt in a relentless, measured cadence. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police forged her stride into a weapon. She closed the distance on the hooded figure darting ahead of her. The suspect vaulted a stack of rotting wooden pallets. Quinn cleared the obstacle without breaking rhythm. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair clung to her scalp, water streaming down her sharp jaw. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two in the morning. The streets belonged to the ghosts and the guilty. "Metropolitan Police. Halt." The figure glanced back. A pale face flashed beneath the hood. He sped up, his trainers splashing through deep puddles. Quinn pushed off her back foot, eating up the metres between them. She had tailed this man from the distinctive green neon sign of the Raven's Nest in Soho all the way up to Camden. He thought the rain would wash his trail clean. He miscalculated. The suspect hooked a sharp left into a narrow, trash-strewn alley. Puddles shattered under his soles, spraying dirty water across the brickwork. A stray cat hissed from atop an overflowing bin as they blew past. Quinn rounded the corner. Brick walls boxed them in. A rusted iron gate blocked the dead end. The suspect scrambled up the chain-link, his fingers hooking the metal diamonds. "Get down from there." The man reached the top and threw his leg over. Quinn lunged. Her fingers grazed the damp fabric of his jacket. He kicked out. His heel connected with her shoulder. The impact spun her, but she absorbed the blow, planted her feet, and grabbed his ankle. He twisted, tearing his jacket. The fabric ripped. He tumbled down the other side of the gate, hitting the concrete with a heavy thud. Quinn scaled the gate. Her muscles burned. She dropped to the other side, landing in a crouch. The suspect scrambled to his feet and bolted toward a set of cracked concrete stairs leading down into the earth. A faded sign above the entrance read Camden Deep Level. Abandoned for decades. "Stop right there." He disappeared into the subterranean dark. Quinn drew her baton. The steel snapped open with a sharp clack. She descended the stairs. The ambient noise of the city faded, replaced by the steady drip of water and the hollow echo of her own footsteps. The temperature dropped with every step. Condensation beaded on the rusted handrails. Quinn wiped the moisture from her brow, leaving a streak of grime across her skin. The air grew thick, smelling of wet dust, ozone, and copper. At the bottom of the stairs, a single flickering fluorescent tube cast long, twitching shadows across the tiled walls. Old posters peeled away from the damp brick. The suspect's wet footprints smeared the grime on the floor, leading deeper into the abandoned Tube station. Quinn followed the trail. Her breathing slowed. She regulated her heart rate, falling back on her military precision. Every shadow concealed a threat. Every echo masked a footstep. The tunnel opened into a massive, vaulted platform. Rusted tracks vanished into the black maw of the tunnel ahead. The suspect stood at the far end of the platform, facing a heavy, reinforced steel door. A towering man with skin like scarred leather stood guard beside the door. He held a heavy iron crowbar resting on his shoulder. Quinn pressed her back against a tiled pillar. She watched from the gloom. The suspect reached into his pocket. He pulled out a small, yellowed object and held it up. The guard leaned in. The flickering light caught the porous texture of the item. A bone token. Carved with intricate, jagged runes. The guard grunted. He stepped aside and hauled the heavy steel door open. A wave of heat and noise spilled out from the corridor beyond. Quinn caught the scent of burning sage, sulphur, and roasting meat. Strange, luminescent vapours curled out from the gap, casting unnatural violet and green hues across the platform tiles. Voices chattered in a dozen languages, some of them clicking and guttural, others whispering in a cadence that made Quinn's teeth ache. The Veil Market. Quinn tightened her grip on her baton. The underground black market moved every full moon. Tonight, the moon hung fat and bright behind the London smog. The market sold banned alchemical substances, enchanted trinkets, and secrets that could topple governments. The suspect stepped through the doorway. "Wait." The voice echoed off the vaulted ceiling. The suspect froze. The guard turned his massive head, his eyes locking onto the pillar where Quinn hid. Quinn stepped out of the shadows. She kept her posture rigid, her shoulders squared. "You are trespassing, Detective." The suspect's voice carried across the empty platform. He stood in the threshold, the unnatural light painting half his face in sickly purple. "You are under arrest for the theft of restricted materials and the assault of a police officer." The guard shifted his grip on the crowbar. The metal scraped against his leather jacket. "She has no token," the guard rumbled. His voice sounded like grinding stones. "Let her try to take me," the suspect said. He took a step backward, melting into the throng of the market. "You know what happens to uninvited guests in the Market, Quinn. They do not leave." Quinn stared at the closing gap of the steel door. The heavy iron hinges groaned. Three years ago, she had stood in a similar subterranean dampness. DS Morris had walked ahead of her into a dark corridor. The case had involved whispers of the occult, rumours of a black market dealing in impossibilities. Morris never walked out. The official report called it a structural collapse. Quinn knew the truth. The bruises on his crushed chest formed the shape of a massive, clawed hand. She rubbed the worn leather of her watch strap. The ticking grounded her. The steel door began to swing shut. The violet light narrowed to a thin sliver. "Last chance, Harlow," the suspect called out from the depths. "Go back to your nick." Quinn holstered her baton. She unclipped the retention strap on her service weapon and drew her Glock. She checked the chamber. A brass casing gleamed in the dim light. She marched across the platform. Her boots struck the tiles in a steady, unyielding rhythm. The guard raised his crowbar, stepping into her path. "No token. No entry." Quinn stopped two paces from the giant. She looked up into his scarred face. Her brown eyes did not waver. "Move." The guard sneered. He swung the crowbar in a wide, lazy arc to block her. Quinn ducked under the iron bar. She drove the palm of her hand into his solar plexus. The air rushed from his lungs in a sharp wheeze. Before he could double over, she swept her leg behind his knee and pushed his shoulder. The giant crashed onto the tiled floor. The crowbar clattered away into the dark. Quinn stepped over his groaning form. She reached the steel door and shoved it open with her shoulder. The heat of the Veil Market washed over her. Stalls piled high with glowing glass vials, rusted cages holding shifting shadows, and tables draped in velvet crowded the expansive underground cavern. Merchants hawked wares in hushed, urgent tones. A woman with silver hair weighed a pile of iridescent scales on a brass balance. A creature wrapped in heavy bandages examined a row of glass syringes filled with bubbling black liquid. Hundreds of faces turned toward the entrance. Eyes with slit pupils, faces obscured by porcelain masks, and beings that defied anatomy all stared at the lone detective in the soaked trench coat. The suspect pushed through the crowd, heading toward a stall draped in crimson silk. Quinn stepped fully into the cavern. The heavy steel door swung shut behind her, sealing with a resonant, final boom.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1331
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1331
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"maw"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"streaming"
2"shattered"
3"echo"
4"footsteps"
5"maw"
6"gloom"
7"intricate"
8"echoed"
9"depths"
10"velvet"
11"porcelain"
12"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences138
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1331
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
62.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1261
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden3
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Metropolitan1
Police1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Deep1
Level1
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
London1
Morris2
Glock1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Raven"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Metropolitan"
4"Soho"
5"Deep"
6"London"
globalScore0.628
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like grinding stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1331
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean24.2
std19.78
cv0.818
sampleLengths
050
19
245
33
420
546
635
729
84
910
1036
1124
1217
1333
143
156
1676
1744
1828
1935
2023
2113
2217
2322
2413
2563
263
2740
286
291
3025
3114
3227
3317
3415
3513
3636
3715
3868
3913
4015
4115
4229
4315
449
454
4620
471
4815
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"narrow, trash-strewn alley."
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.009486166007905139
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0023715415019762848
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.05
std4.96
cv0.547
sampleLengths
09
117
212
312
49
57
615
710
84
99
103
114
127
139
1412
1523
169
172
1811
1911
2013
214
225
238
2412
254
2610
272
289
293
306
3116
325
333
3416
354
363
3710
3820
3910
403
413
426
434
448
454
4622
476
486
4915
41.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2789115646258503
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences136
matches
0"She closed the distance on"
1"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"He sped up, his trainers"
4"She had tailed this man"
5"He thought the rain would"
6"Her fingers grazed the damp"
7"He kicked out."
8"His heel connected with her"
9"He twisted, tearing his jacket."
10"He tumbled down the other"
11"Her muscles burned."
12"She dropped to the other"
13"He disappeared into the subterranean"
14"She descended the stairs."
15"Her breathing slowed."
16"She regulated her heart rate,"
17"He held a heavy iron"
18"She watched from the gloom."
19"He pulled out a small,"
ratio0.257
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences136
matches
0"Rain lashed the cracked pavement"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pumped her"
2"She closed the distance on"
3"The suspect vaulted a stack"
4"Quinn cleared the obstacle without"
5"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
6"She checked the worn leather"
7"The streets belonged to the"
8"The figure glanced back."
9"A pale face flashed beneath"
10"He sped up, his trainers"
11"Quinn pushed off her back"
12"She had tailed this man"
13"He thought the rain would"
14"The suspect hooked a sharp"
15"Puddles shattered under his soles,"
16"A stray cat hissed from"
17"Quinn rounded the corner."
18"Brick walls boxed them in."
19"A rusted iron gate blocked"
ratio0.926
36.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"Before he could double over,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Voices chattered in a dozen languages, some of them clicking and guttural, others whispering in a cadence that made Quinn's teeth ache."
1"The market sold banned alchemical substances, enchanted trinkets, and secrets that could topple governments."
2"Eyes with slit pupils, faces obscured by porcelain masks, and beings that defied anatomy all stared at the lone detective in the soaked trench coat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0699%