Run: 2026-05-22-01KS877JZT4AWFYWPJPHY4KQ2T

Run Details

Duration:
3m 6s
Cost:
$0.091008
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed, casting sickly shadows across the damp pavement of Soho. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the scent of stale stout and lemon polish. Silas Blackwood dragged a linen cloth over the mahogany counter. His silver signet ring clinked against the wood in a steady rhythm. Old maps and black-and-white photographs plastered the walls, their edges curling in the damp heat of the pub like the peeling skin of a forgotten fruit. The heavy oak door groaned open. A man stepped out of the rain and into the dim light. Water dripped from the brim of his fedora, pooling on the scuffed floorboards. He wore a trench coat that had seen better decades, the collar turned up against a chill that had passed months ago. Silas stopped wiping the counter. The stranger lifted his head. Deep lines carved through the pallor of his cheeks, and his eyes held the dull, flat glare of a dead television screen. A jagged scar cut through his left eyebrow, pulling the skin taut. Arthur. Silas tossed the linen cloth onto the bar. Arthur approached the counter. His gait was uneven, favoring his right side, a stark contrast to the predatory stride he possessed ten years ago. He pulled out a stool and collapsed onto it. "Whisky. Neat." Silas reached for the top shelf. He poured a generous measure of amber liquid into a heavy crystal tumbler and slid it across the polished wood. Arthur wrapped both hands around the glass. His knuckles shone white. He brought the rim to his lips and drained half the glass in one swallow. "Ten years, Si." Silas leaned against the back counter and crossed his arms. "Eleven. Prague was eleven years ago." Arthur stared at the remaining whisky. He swirled the liquid, watching the legs form and slide down the crystal. "I lost track. Time bleeds together when you spend it in windowless rooms." Silas shifted his weight, his left leg protesting with a familiar, dull ache. "You chose the windowless rooms. I chose the pub." Arthur let out a hollow bark of a laugh. He gestured around the room, taking in the vintage maps and the dusty bottles. "A pub. The great Silas Blackwood, reduced to pouring pints for tourists and soaking up the spilled gin." Silas kept his voice level and his posture relaxed. "I pour what they ask for. And I listen. It pays the rent." Arthur traced the condensation on the side of his glass. "You used to wear Savile Row suits. You drank twenty-year-old single malts and orchestrated coups from the back of a Mayfair townhouse. Now you wear an apron and smell like bleach." Silas looked down at his plain black shirt and the faded denim covering his legs. "The suits were armor. The whisky was a bribe. This is reality." Arthur finished his drink and pushed the empty glass forward. Silas grabbed the bottle and refilled it. "They told me you died. After the botched extraction. The official file said you bled out in an alleyway behind the opera house." Silas capped the bottle and set it back on the shelf. "The official file needed a corpse to close the dossier. A ghost is much harder to track." Arthur picked up his glass but did not drink. He traced the rim with a trembling index finger. "I spent three years looking for you. I tore through the Underworld. I bribed border guards in Vienna, beat information out of smugglers in Berlin. I ruined my marriage and my liver chasing a phantom." Silas uncrossed his arms and rested his hands on the bar. The silver signet ring caught the dim light. "You should have let the phantom stay dead." Silas tapped his left knee. "The man you were looking for died in that alleyway. The knee gave out. The nerve broke. I crawled into the sewers and washed out into the Thames." Arthur dragged a hand down his face, his fingers catching on the rough stubble along his jawline. "Life. You call this life? Hiding in the shadows of a city that forgot you? I watched you command rooms full of ministers. I watched you bend ambassadors to your will with a single whisper. Now you wipe up vomit and change kegs." Silas picked up a stray peanut shell and crushed it between his thumb and forefinger. "I prefer the vomit. It is honest. Ministers and ambassadors lie with better vocabulary." Arthur slammed his palm against the mahogany. The crystal glass jumped. "Bullshit. You were the Spymaster. You did not break. You walked away. You left me to clean up the mess while you limped off to play publican in Soho." The neon sign outside flickered, plunging the bar into momentary darkness before buzzing back to life. Silas leaned forward, closing the distance between them. "I left you with a choice. You could have walked away too. You had the ticket. You had the exit strategy." Arthur dropped his gaze to the bar top. His shoulders slumped, the sudden deflation making him look ten years older. "I believed in the Firm. I believed the mission mattered. I thought if I followed the rules, the sacrifices would mean something." Silas picked up a coaster and placed it near Arthur's elbow. "And what do you believe now?" Arthur stared at the black-and-white photograph of a young Silas shaking hands with a foreign dignitary. "I believe we were fools. I believe the men we were in Prague died on that tarmac, and the things that crawled back to London were hollow shells carrying their briefcases." Silas followed his gaze to the photograph. "The shells kept the pension. The men kept only the nightmares." Arthur reached into the pocket of his damp trench coat. He pulled out a crumpled manila envelope and dropped it between them. "I believe the Firm sold us out to the highest bidder. I believe the botched extraction in Prague was a setup. They needed a scapegoat, and they needed a martyr. You gave them the martyr." Silas stared at the envelope. The paper was stained with coffee rings and smeared ink. "Why bring this to me?" Arthur took a sip of his second drink. "Because they are coming for the rest of us. They are tying up loose ends. I am a loose end. And whoever helped you fake your death is a loose end." Silas picked up the linen cloth and resumed wiping the counter, moving in measured circles. "You brought this to my doorstep. You led them to the one place I built for myself." Arthur's voice cracked. He reached across the bar and grabbed Silas's wrist. His grip was weak, his skin cold and clammy. "I had nowhere else to go. Si, they killed Elena. They made it look like a car accident, but I saw the brake lines. They cut them." Silas froze. The cloth slipped from his fingers and landed on the wet wood. "Elena was a civilian." Silas pried Arthur's fingers off his wrist. "She was my wife." Arthur buried his face in his free hand. His chest heaved with dry, ragged sobs. "She was the only good thing I had left, and they crushed her in a twisted pile of metal on the M4." Silas walked around the counter. He dragged his left leg, the limp more pronounced on the hard floorboards. He stopped beside Arthur's stool and placed a heavy hand on the man's shaking shoulder. "Drink your whisky, Arthur." Silas squeezed the damp wool of the trench coat. "Open the envelope."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count3
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"eyebrow"
2"stark"
3"crystal"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"traced"
7"whisper"
8"flickered"
9"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1269
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount722
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.32
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Blackwood1
Arthur19
Silas24
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Arthur"
2"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1269
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean17.15
std12.81
cv0.747
sampleLengths
082
16
247
35
439
51
68
733
82
926
1026
113
1210
136
1419
1513
1613
179
1823
1918
209
2113
2210
2331
2415
2512
2610
277
2823
2911
3017
3118
3235
3319
348
355
3628
3717
3843
3915
4014
4111
4229
4316
448
4521
4620
4722
4811
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences101
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount726
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.005509641873278237
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0013774104683195593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.56
std8.21
cv0.654
sampleLengths
017
117
210
312
426
56
612
713
822
95
105
1122
1212
131
148
154
1620
179
182
196
2020
217
224
2315
243
2510
266
276
2813
2913
3013
319
329
3314
3418
359
3613
3710
3831
3915
4012
4110
427
4323
4411
4517
469
479
4835
4911
49.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.24752475247524752
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences67
matches
0"His silver signet ring clinked"
1"He wore a trench coat"
2"His gait was uneven, favoring"
3"He pulled out a stool"
4"He poured a generous measure"
5"His knuckles shone white."
6"He brought the rim to"
7"He swirled the liquid, watching"
8"He gestured around the room,"
9"He traced the rim with"
10"His shoulders slumped, the sudden"
11"He pulled out a crumpled"
12"He reached across the bar"
13"His grip was weak, his"
14"His chest heaved with dry,"
15"He dragged his left leg,"
16"He stopped beside Arthur's stool"
ratio0.254
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Silas Blackwood dragged a linen"
2"His silver signet ring clinked"
3"The heavy oak door groaned"
4"A man stepped out of"
5"Water dripped from the brim"
6"He wore a trench coat"
7"Silas stopped wiping the counter."
8"The stranger lifted his head."
9"A jagged scar cut through"
10"Silas tossed the linen cloth"
11"Arthur approached the counter."
12"His gait was uneven, favoring"
13"He pulled out a stool"
14"Silas reached for the top"
15"He poured a generous measure"
16"Arthur wrapped both hands around"
17"His knuckles shone white."
18"He brought the rim to"
19"Silas leaned against the back"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5929%