Run: 2026-05-22-01KS879JZ1CGYXT1T4H75XRM5C

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.050505
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Branches whipped against Rory’s leather jacket as she navigated the dense underbrush of Richmond Park. The ancient oak standing stones emerged from the gloom, their twisted bark pale and skeletal in the moonlight. A thick carpet of night-blooming wildflowers crushed beneath her boots, releasing a cloying, sweet perfume that masked the damp rot of the forest floor. She pulled her phone from her pocket and tapped Eva’s contact. The harsh screen illumination highlighted the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Rory? It’s three in the morning." Eva’s voice crackled through the speaker, thick with sleep and confusion. "I’m at the boundary. The stones are right in front of me." "Turn around. Go back to Silas’s bar. You don't know what the time dilation will do to you tonight." Rory rubbed the deep crimson gemstone resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant pulsed with a rhythmic, unnatural heat. A faint inner glow bled through her cotton shirt, painting her skin in shades of blood. "The pendant is practically vibrating. It’s leading me inside." "Rory, listen to me. Evan is still out there looking for you, and those woods aren't normal. Just come home." "I'll be quick. Ten minutes. If I'm not back, call Silas." "Ten minutes in the Grove could be ten days out here! Rory?" The line went dead. Rory pulled the phone away from her ear. The signal bars vanished, replaced by a stark No Service notification. She shoved the device back into her pocket and stepped past the threshold of the oak stones. The transition felt like stepping through a wall of cold water. A physical resistance pushed against her chest before giving way. The air pressure plummeted. A heavy, suffocating silence swallowed the distant hum of London traffic. The wildflowers here grew waist-high, their petals shifting in hues of violet and sickly green despite the lack of sunlight. Rory clicked on her heavy metal flashlight. The beam cut through the thick, swirling mist clinging to the ground. She swept the light across the clearing. Empty. Just the towering oaks and the endless sea of unnatural flora. She checked her wristwatch. The second hand ticked backward, sweeping counterclockwise in a smooth, continuous motion. The digital display flickered, the numbers scrambling into alien symbols before the screen went completely black. A twig snapped behind her. Rory spun around, sweeping the flashlight beam over the path she just walked. Nothing but swaying ferns and deep shadows. "Hello?" Her voice sounded flat, absorbed instantly by the dense fog. Silence answered. She adjusted her grip on the flashlight and ventured deeper into the pocket realm. The silver chain of the pendant dug into her skin. The crimson gem throbbed in time with her heartbeat, radiating a heat that bordered on painful. Sweat beaded at her hairline despite the cool night air. A low, rhythmic scraping echoed from the tree line to her left. Like fingernails dragging across rough bark. The noise vibrated through the soles of her boots, a deep, resonant frequency that rattled her teeth. Rory halted. She killed the flashlight, plunging herself into the dim, ambient moonlight filtering through the canopy. Her eyes adjusted to the gloom. The shadows between the massive oak trunks stretched and contorted, defying the angle of the moon. A scrape echoed, followed by another. The sound moved. It circled her, staying just beyond the edge of her vision. She pivoted slowly, tracking the noise. Her boots sank into the soft, loamy earth, the soil squelching with an unnatural wetness. The scent of the wildflowers soured, turning into the sharp tang of ozone and copper. "Who's there?" Rory kept her voice steady, projecting from her chest. The scraping stopped. A soft giggle drifted from the canopy above. It sounded exactly like Eva. "Ten minutes, Rory," the voice whispered from the branches. Rory’s jaw tightened. She reached up and gripped the Heartstone. The gemstone seared her palm. A Hel portal was close. The lore she’d pieced together from Silas’s rambling stories warned of the things that crawled out of those rifts. Mimics. Scavengers. Things that wore the voices of the desperate. "You're not Eva." "Turn around. Go back to Silas's bar," the voice mimicked perfectly, adopting the exact cadence and sleepy rasp of her friend's earlier phone call. Rory backed toward the center of the clearing, putting distance between herself and the encroaching tree line. She thumbed the heavy butt of her flashlight, ready to use it as a blunt instrument. Her bright blue eyes darted between the ancient oaks, mapping out the gaps in the standing stones. A pale, elongated shadow detached itself from the trunk of the nearest oak. It lacked distinct features, a towering silhouette of shifting gray mist that absorbed the moonlight. The mist around its base curled and writhed, leaving a trail of dead, blackened grass in its wake. The pendant flared. Bright crimson light spilled from the gem, casting long, stark shadows across the wildflowers. The entity recoiled, emitting a sound like tearing metal. Rory didn't run. Running triggered the chase instinct. She planted her feet, her breathing shallow and controlled. "Stay back." The shadow rippled. Two hollow voids opened where a face should be, fixating on the glowing pendant at her throat. More movement caught her peripheral vision. To her right, another shadow peeled away from the standing stones. Then a third from the dense ferns behind her. The scraping resumed, multiplying into a deafening chorus of claws on bark. The air grew freezing cold, frost crystallizing on the petals of the waist-high flowers. Her breath plumed in the sudden chill. The entity in front of her stretched a limb, a spindly appendage ending in too many joints, reaching toward the crimson light. "Rory?" Eva's voice echoed again, this time coming from the hollow void of the creature's face, laced with genuine terror. "Help me."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the voice mimicked perfectly [perfectly]"
1"Eva's voice echoed again [again]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.267
84.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount976
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount976
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"stark"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count3
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"gloom"
2"pulsed"
3"rhythmic"
4"stark"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
7"throbbed"
8"echoed"
9"vibrated"
10"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords976
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount866
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Richmond1
Park1
Eva4
Heartstone2
Service1
London1
Silence1
Hel1
Silas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silence"
3"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.923
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like stepping through a wall of co"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.8
std15.48
cv0.65
sampleLengths
057
124
217
312
419
535
69
720
811
912
1040
1156
1238
1332
145
1520
1611
172
1850
1935
2039
2120
2236
2311
243
2513
269
2749
283
2924
3050
3146
3217
339
3417
352
3620
3726
3833
3922
4022
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences93
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02413793103448276
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008045977011494253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean10.49
std5.71
cv0.544
sampleLengths
015
118
224
311
413
517
612
719
810
99
1016
119
1220
1311
1412
154
168
1711
1817
1911
2010
214
2211
2320
247
2512
267
271
2811
294
3012
3116
325
3313
347
3511
362
3714
3810
3916
4010
4112
426
4317
442
4515
466
4716
486
493
49.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3225806451612903
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"Just the towering oaks and"
1"More movement caught her peripheral"
2"Then a third from the"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences79
matches
0"She pulled her phone from"
1"She shoved the device back"
2"She swept the light across"
3"She checked her wristwatch."
4"Her voice sounded flat, absorbed"
5"She adjusted her grip on"
6"She killed the flashlight, plunging"
7"Her eyes adjusted to the"
8"It circled her, staying just"
9"She pivoted slowly, tracking the"
10"Her boots sank into the"
11"It sounded exactly like Eva."
12"She reached up and gripped"
13"She thumbed the heavy butt"
14"Her bright blue eyes darted"
15"It lacked distinct features, a"
16"She planted her feet, her"
17"Her breath plumed in the"
ratio0.228
4.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences79
matches
0"Branches whipped against Rory’s leather"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"A thick carpet of night-blooming"
3"She pulled her phone from"
4"The harsh screen illumination highlighted"
5"Eva’s voice crackled through the"
6"Rory rubbed the deep crimson"
7"The Heartstone pendant pulsed with"
8"A faint inner glow bled"
9"The line went dead."
10"Rory pulled the phone away"
11"The signal bars vanished, replaced"
12"She shoved the device back"
13"The transition felt like stepping"
14"A physical resistance pushed against"
15"The air pressure plummeted."
16"A heavy, suffocating silence swallowed"
17"The wildflowers here grew waist-high,"
18"Rory clicked on her heavy"
19"The beam cut through the"
ratio0.911
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"To her right, another shadow"
ratio0.013
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A thick carpet of night-blooming wildflowers crushed beneath her boots, releasing a cloying, sweet perfume that masked the damp rot of the forest floor."
1"The crimson gem throbbed in time with her heartbeat, radiating a heat that bordered on painful."
2"It lacked distinct features, a towering silhouette of shifting gray mist that absorbed the moonlight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
85.8677%