Run: 2026-05-22-01KS87A9DE39GBZ115VAX0K2QB

Run Details

Duration:
2m 16s
Cost:
$0.067227
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape and stepped onto the cracked tiles of the abandoned Camden Tube station. The air hung thick with the smell of stagnant water, rusted iron, and the sharp metallic tang of fresh blood. She flicked on her torch, sweeping the beam across the vaulted ceiling where Victorian advertisements peeled away in damp strips. A distant Northern line train rumbled through the earth, vibrating up through the soles of her boots and rattling the loose tiles. This was the Veil Market, a ghost town of black magic and illicit trades that only woke up under a full moon. Tonight, the moon was hidden behind London smog, and the market was a crime scene. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two fourteen in the morning. Eighteen years on the Metropolitan Police gave her a strict internal clock, and right now, every second felt wasted. She rubbed the glass face of the watch, her thumb tracing the deep scratch over the number four. Detective Constable Miller stood by a collapsed wooden stall at the far end of the platform. He held a digital tablet, his high-vis jacket glowing harsh in the gloom. Beside him sat Eva Kowalski on a rusted iron bench. Eva clutched her worn leather satchel full of books to her chest. She tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear, her green eyes wide behind round glasses. Harlow approached the stall, her boots crunching on shattered glass and scattered bone tokens. Miller looked up from his screen. "Glad you could make it, Guv. Forensics is still processing the perimeter, but the initial sweep is done." Harlow stopped at the edge of the blood pool. "Give me the summary." Miller tapped the screen. "Victim is an unnamed male, mid-fifties. Looks like a vendor. Throat slashed, wallet missing, and his lockbox is smashed open. Standard robbery gone wrong. The market scavengers saw an easy mark when the crowd thinned out." Harlow crouched, keeping her knees clear of the crimson puddle. She pulled a pair of latex gloves from her coat pocket and snapped them on. The victim lay on his back, arms splayed. She leaned close to the neck wound. The cut was clean, severing the carotid artery with a single, fluid motion. She shifted her gaze to the victim's hands. The fingernails were clean. No skin cells, no fabric fibers. "A standard robbery," Harlow kept her voice flat. "Victims of a standard robbery fight back. They throw their hands up to protect their throat. They scratch their attacker." Miller shifted his weight. "He could have been taken from behind. A quick grab in the dark." Harlow pointed a gloved finger at the floor, tracing the air above the crimson arc. "Look at the blood spatter. It arcs in a perfect geometric semicircle. Arterial spray follows the rhythm of the heartbeat, but it also obeys gravity and physics. This arc is too uniform. It was directed." Eva stood up, her boots scuffing the dusty tiles. She walked over, stopping just short of the police tape. "It is a collection ward. The killer did not just slit his throat. They used the blood to draw a conduit." Miller sighed and rubbed the bridge of his nose. "With respect, Miss Kowalski, this is a homicide investigation, not a history lecture. We deal in fingerprints and CCTV, not fairy tales." Eva adjusted her round glasses. "The British Museum restricted archives deal in history, Constable. And history tells us that when you find a body in a subterranean supernatural market with geometric blood patterns, you are looking at a ritual extraction." Harlow ignored Miller and scanned the rest of the stall. Shelves lined with jars of dried herbs, tarnished silver amulets, and stacks of parchment lay toppled. Among the debris, a small brass object caught the beam of her torch. She reached out and picked it up. It was a Veil Compass. The casing held a thick patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with intricate protective sigils. Crafted by a Shade artisan, these tools usually pointed toward the nearest supernatural rift. The needle spun in a blur, forming a solid brass circle. A faint hum resonated from the casing, vibrating against her palm. "The compass is broken," Miller stepped closer. "Dropped during the struggle." Harlow turned the compass over in her palm. The back was ice cold, frost forming on the metal despite the damp warmth of the Tube station. She brought it closer to the victim's chest. The spinning needle snapped to a halt, locking onto a point directly over the victim's sternum. "It is not broken," Harlow held the compass out for Miller to see. "It is recalibrating. The needle points to supernatural energy. It is pointing at the corpse." Miller frowned. "The victim was a mage?" Eva stepped closer, her freckled complexion pale in the torchlight. "Not a mage. A vessel. Look at the lockbox." Harlow directed her torch at the smashed wooden box on the floor. The iron hinges were not broken. They were melted, fused together by intense, localized heat. The wood around the lock was charred black, but the rest of the box remained untouched. Miller leaned in, squinting at the charred wood. "Thermite. Local gangs use it to crack commercial safes." "Alchemical fire," Eva corrected. "It burns at three times the temperature of thermite and leaves no ash. The killer did not smash the box to steal the contents. They burned the lock to release whatever was trapped inside." Harlow stood up, her sharp jaw tightening. She looked at the clean cut on the victim's throat, the geometric blood spatter, the melted lockbox, and the compass pointing at the dead man's chest. The pieces clicked into place, forming a picture that made her stomach turn. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris died on a case just like this. Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins she had spent thirty-six months working to decipher. She flexed her left hand, the leather watch strap creaking in the quiet station. "The victim was not a vendor," Harlow spoke, her voice echoing against the tiled walls. "He was a warden. He was guarding the lockbox." Miller crossed his arms. "Guarding it from whom?" "From the person who hired him," Harlow pointed to the victim's boots. "Look at the soles. No dirt. No grime from the tracks. He did not walk into the Veil Market tonight. He was brought here." She walked back to the chalk outline and knelt again, examining the victim's coat. The fabric around the left breast pocket was singed. She reached inside and pulled out a small, melted piece of bone. It was an entry token for the market, but it was fractured down the middle. "You need a bone token to enter the Veil Market," Harlow held up the fractured piece. "But you only need one token per person. The killer snapped this in half after they crossed the threshold. They wanted to ensure the victim could not leave." Miller uncrossed his arms, his skepticism wavering. "So the killer brought him here, forced him to open the box, and then killed him?" "No," Harlow shook her head. "The killer could not open the box. The alchemical fire was triggered from the inside. The victim opened it himself." Eva gasped, her hand flying to her mouth. "A soul trap. The lockbox was a soul trap." Harlow nodded, her eyes locked on the frozen needle of the Veil Compass. "The killer needed a specific spirit. They brought the warden, forced him to release the entity, and then used his blood to anchor it to his physical body. The killer did not steal a physical object from this stall." She slipped the Veil Compass into her evidence bag and sealed it shut. "They stole the victim's body," Harlow looked up at Miller. "The man on the floor is just a hollow shell. The killer walked out of here wearing the warden's flesh, and the entity from the box is driving it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1343
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"standard"
count3
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"fractured"
count2
15
word"ensure"
count1
16
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"tracing"
2"gloom"
3"shattered"
4"standard"
5"weight"
6"perfect"
7"scanned"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"resonated"
11"warmth"
12"stomach"
13"echoing"
14"fractured"
15"ensure"
16"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1343
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount844
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Camden1
Tube2
Victorian1
Northern1
Veil4
Market1
London1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Constable1
Miller13
Eva7
Kowalski1
Compass3
Shade1
Harlow17
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Police"
2"Constable"
3"Miller"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Compass"
7"Harlow"
8"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.493
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1343
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean35.34
std22.1
cv0.625
sampleLengths
0119
152
270
314
424
513
640
753
818
928
1017
1150
1240
1331
1440
1539
1643
1722
1811
1950
2028
217
2219
2343
2417
2538
2686
2724
288
2936
3050
3144
3223
3325
3417
3552
3613
3739
82.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"was hidden"
1"was etched"
2"was charred"
3"was singed"
4"was fractured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences102
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wide behind round glasses."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.01182033096926714
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035460992907801418
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.17
std7.75
cv0.588
sampleLengths
020
120
220
322
422
515
610
75
819
918
1016
1113
1210
1312
1419
1514
166
1718
189
194
204
2136
2210
2315
248
257
2613
278
284
296
308
3120
324
3313
3415
3535
369
3710
3821
399
4022
415
4235
4310
4416
4513
467
475
4817
4914
59.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3627450980392157
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences75
matches
0"She flicked on her torch,"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"She rubbed the glass face"
3"He held a digital tablet,"
4"She tucked a stray curl"
5"She pulled a pair of"
6"She leaned close to the"
7"She shifted her gaze to"
8"She walked over, stopping just"
9"She reached out and picked"
10"It was a Veil Compass."
11"She brought it closer to"
12"They were melted, fused together"
13"She looked at the clean"
14"She flexed her left hand,"
15"She walked back to the"
16"She reached inside and pulled"
17"It was an entry token"
18"She slipped the Veil Compass"
ratio0.253
13.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences75
matches
0"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She flicked on her torch,"
3"A distant Northern line train"
4"This was the Veil Market,"
5"Tonight, the moon was hidden"
6"She checked the worn leather"
7"She rubbed the glass face"
8"Detective Constable Miller stood by"
9"He held a digital tablet,"
10"Eva clutched her worn leather"
11"She tucked a stray curl"
12"Harlow approached the stall, her"
13"Miller looked up from his"
14"Harlow stopped at the edge"
15"Miller tapped the screen."
16"Harlow crouched, keeping her knees"
17"She pulled a pair of"
18"The victim lay on his"
19"She leaned close to the"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pieces clicked into place, forming a picture that made her stomach turn."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow spoke, her voice echoing against the tiled walls"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva corrected (correct)"
1"Harlow spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.121
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.121
82.2479%