| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "lilt" | | 4 | "sanctuary" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "calculating" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "navigated" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "without second thought" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "without a second thought" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 114 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1397 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien, she said." | | 1 | "Aurora, he replied." | | 2 | "She is at the university library, Rory said, closing the door and throwing the three deadbolts back into place out of pu…" | | 3 | "I do not need Eva, Lucien said, straightening up." | | 4 | "I am off the clock, she said, turning toward the tiny kitchenette to put distance between them." | | 5 | "Because you vanished, he said quietly." | | 6 | "I did not vanish, she whispered." | | 7 | "You hid from me, he corrected." | | 8 | "You flinch when I move too fast, Lucien murmured, his voice thick with an emotion he rarely showed." | | 9 | "Your world is dangerous, she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts." | | 10 | "You are the most brilliant, quick-thinking woman I have ever met, Lucien said fiercely." | | 11 | "It was not logical, she confessed, the words slipping out before she could stop them." | | 12 | "Ma cherie, he breathed, the French endearment slipping out in a rough whisper." |
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| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1395 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Eva | 5 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Evan | 2 | | Empress | 1 | | Avaros | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | French | 1 | | You | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Avaros" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1397 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "survive that kind" | | 1 | "proving that I" |
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| 93.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 46.57 | | std | 22.23 | | cv | 0.477 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 95 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 67 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 75 | | 25 | 67 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 69 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was buried" | | 2 | "was terrified" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 243 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 841 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.027348394768133173 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01070154577883472 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 12.25 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.535 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 37.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2631578947368421 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 29.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the breath vanished from" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the wooden door" | | 1 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 2 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 3 | "He leaned his weight on" | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes locked" | | 5 | "Her voice was steady, a" | | 6 | "His voice was a low," | | 7 | "He did not ask if" | | 8 | "He simply stepped over the" | | 9 | "She is at the university" | | 10 | "I am just feeding Ptolemy." | | 11 | "He reached down with his" | | 12 | "She remembered those hands mapping" | | 13 | "She crossed her arms, tucking" | | 14 | "I do not need Eva," | | 15 | "I need you." | | 16 | "He had only broken her" | | 17 | "I am off the clock," | | 18 | "He used her nickname." | | 19 | "She stopped at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.549 | |
| 35.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory slid the final brass" | | 1 | "The air in the cramped" | | 2 | "She pulled the wooden door" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 4 | "He looked exactly as he" | | 5 | "The tailored charcoal suit fit" | | 6 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 7 | "He leaned his weight on" | | 8 | "Rory gripped the edge of" | | 9 | "Her bright blue eyes locked" | | 10 | "The heterochromia always made it" | | 11 | "Lucien, she said." | | 12 | "Her voice was steady, a" | | 13 | "Aurora, he replied." | | 14 | "His voice was a low," | | 15 | "He did not ask if" | | 16 | "He simply stepped over the" | | 17 | "Rory stepped back, giving him" | | 18 | "Eva's one-bedroom sanctuary was a" | | 19 | "Every available surface was buried" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "As if summoned, the tabby" | | 1 | "If you need Eva, you" | | 2 | "If this is about a" | | 3 | "Because you vanished, he said" | | 4 | "Because you packed your things" | | 5 | "Because I have spent six" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 90.34% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice was a low, smooth baritone, carrying the faint, melodic lilt of his Marseille upbringing." | | 1 | "As if summoned, the tabby cat wound his way through the forest of stacked grimoires, let out a demanding trill, and rubbed his cheek against Lucien's polished o…" | | 2 | "She heard the rhythmic tap of his cane moving across the linoleum, closing the distance." | | 3 | "He brought his free hand up, his knuckles lightly grazing her cheek, tucking a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear." | | 4 | "She found only a raw, desperate honesty that mirrored the ache in her own chest." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |