Run: 2026-05-22-01KS87ENSZEY8FPYVFC21ZKX35

Run Details

Duration:
1m 57s
Cost:
$0.055125
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the tree line dropped ten degrees the moment Aurora stepped past the ancient oak standing stones. She pulled her denim jacket tighter across her chest. The silver chain of her Heartstone pendant rested cold against her collarbone, a stark contrast to the sudden, biting chill. She checked her phone. The signal bars vanished, replaced by a stark No Service icon. "Come on, Eva. Pick up." The screen displayed a spinning wheel. Aurora tapped the glass with her thumb, leaving a smudge over the glowing display. "You have got to be kidding me. I had three bars at the bus stop." She shoved the phone into her pocket and clicked on her torch. The stark white beam cut through the low-hanging mist, illuminating patches of wildflowers. Bluebells, foxgloves, and blooming heather grew in thick, unnatural clusters despite the bitter November wind sweeping across Richmond Park. Aurora crouched and brushed her fingers over a cluster of blue petals. They felt like wet tissue paper, slimy and cold. A sharp pulse of heat flared against her sternum. She gasped and grabbed the deep crimson gemstone. It glowed with a faint inner light, the stone searing her skin through her cotton shirt. "Right. A Hel portal. Just what I needed tonight." She stood and swept the torch beam across the clearing. The ancient oaks twisted upward, their bark groaning in a wind she could not feel. The standing stones formed a perfect, unbroken circle, their surfaces etched with grooves that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye. Moss clung to the northern faces, glowing with a faint, bioluminescent green that pulsed in time with her own heartbeat. Silence pressed against her eardrums. Richmond Park sat in the middle of London, yet the distant hum of the A308 was gone. No owls called from the canopy. No rustling foxes scurried through the underbrush. Just the heavy, suffocating quiet of a sealed vault. Aurora rubbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she had never managed to break. "Just find the epicenter, map the coordinates, and get out." She took a step forward. The soil gave way with a soft, wet squelch, sinking an inch beneath her boots. A twig snapped behind her. Aurora spun around. The torch beam sliced through the empty space between two massive oak trunks, highlighting nothing but swirling fog. "Hello?" The mist absorbed her voice. "Silas, if you followed me, I swear I will pour your best whiskey down the drain." The wind picked up, carrying the distinct scent of copper and rotting apples. It brushed past her cheek, carrying a whisper of static. Aurora lowered the torch. The shadows cast by the standing stones stretched across the wildflowers, long and distorted. One of the shadows twitched. She blinked. The shadow snapped back to its proper angle, aligning with the jagged edge of the stone. "Get a grip, Carter. You are running on four hours of sleep and cheap coffee." She turned back to the center of the grove. The pendant pulsed again, harder this time. The heat radiated through her shirt, turning from a warm prickle to a distinct burn. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots, rattling her teeth. Aurora checked her watch. The second hand spun backward in a frantic blur, the minute hand ticking counter-clockwise. "Time dilation. Brilliant." She pulled out her phone again. The screen lit up with a dozen missed calls from Eva. The timestamps read three hours from now. "Eva?" Static hissed through the speaker, loud and grating. "Rory?" Eva's voice crackled, thin and distorted, as if speaking through a submerged radio. "Where are you? You have been gone for days." "I just got here. I am standing in the grove." "Get out of there. The news... they found another body near Richmond. It looks like the others. The skin is..." The line went dead. "Eva. Eva, talk to me." Aurora tapped the screen. Dead black glass reflected her wide blue eyes and the pale oval of her face. A soft crunch echoed from the edge of the clearing. The sound of a heavy boot crushing dry leaves, though the ground was covered only in soft, damp petals. Aurora killed the torch. Darkness swallowed the grove, save for the crimson glow of the pendant leaking through her fingers and the pale moonlight filtering through the twisted branches above. She held her breath. Footsteps. Slow, deliberate, and heavy. They circled the perimeter of the standing stones, keeping just beyond the tree line. Aurora backed against the rough bark of the nearest oak. The wood felt warm. It pulsed with a slow, rhythmic heartbeat against her spine. She jerked away, stumbling forward into the wildflowers. The footsteps stopped. "Who is there?" A voice drifted from the mist. It was her own voice, mimicking her cadence, her slight Welsh lilt, and her pitch. "Who is there?" Aurora clamped a hand over her mouth, her heart hammering against her ribs. "Silas, if you followed me, I swear I will pour your best whiskey down the drain," the voice repeated from the darkness, flat and devoid of any human emotion. She slid her delivery knife from her belt. The cheap metal felt useless against the crushing weight of the silence. Her thumb rested on the release catch, her muscles coiled tight. The crimson light flared, illuminating a patch of wildflowers ten yards away. A figure stood among the bluebells. It wore her exact denim jacket. It had her exact height and shoulder-length black hair. But its limbs hung a fraction too long, the joints bending at sickening, inverted angles. Its neck stretched upward, the head tilted at a ninety-degree angle. The thing righted its head with a sharp crack of bone. "Right. A Hel portal. Just what I needed tonight," it stated in her voice. Aurora tightened her grip on the knife. Her knuckles turned white. The figure took a step forward. The wildflowers beneath its boots withered, turning to black ash that drifted upward into the stagnant air. The pendant burned against her sternum, the heat blistering her skin. The deep crimson gemstone flared so bright it cast sharp, bloody shadows across the clearing. The entity raised an arm, pointing an elongated, multi-jointed finger directly at her chest. The joint popped, a sharp sound that echoed off the ancient oaks. "Get out of there," it whispered in Eva's distorted, static-laced voice.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"stark"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"searing"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count3
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"footsteps"
count2
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"lilt"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"chill"
2"pulse"
3"searing"
4"perfect"
5"etched"
6"pulsed"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"vibrated"
10"echoed"
11"footsteps"
12"rhythmic"
13"lilt"
14"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
94.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1080
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount925
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Heartstone1
Service1
November1
Richmond2
Park2
London1
Eva3
Welsh1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.851
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like wet tissue paper, slimy and c"
1"grooves that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye"
2"as if speaking through a submerged radio"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1080
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean18.62
std13.5
cv0.725
sampleLengths
048
115
25
320
415
544
621
79
824
99
1073
1144
1219
1310
1420
155
1621
171
185
1916
2023
2123
2218
2315
2431
2513
2618
273
2824
291
308
3123
3210
3320
344
355
3619
3729
3830
394
4019
4132
423
433
4421
453
4613
4729
4831
4912
97.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"was gone"
1"was covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02258064516129032
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002150537634408602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.38
std5.78
cv0.557
sampleLengths
019
19
220
34
411
55
66
714
815
912
1013
1119
1212
139
149
158
1616
179
1810
1915
2028
2120
225
2317
246
257
269
2719
2810
295
3015
315
323
3318
341
355
3616
3713
3810
394
4014
415
422
4316
4415
459
467
4715
4813
494
43.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3173076923076923
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners33
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just the heavy, suffocating quiet"
1"Dead black glass reflected her"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences87
matches
0"She pulled her denim jacket"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She shoved the phone into"
3"They felt like wet tissue"
4"She gasped and grabbed the"
5"It glowed with a faint"
6"She stood and swept the"
7"She took a step forward."
8"It brushed past her cheek,"
9"She turned back to the"
10"She pulled out her phone"
11"She held her breath."
12"They circled the perimeter of"
13"It pulsed with a slow,"
14"She jerked away, stumbling forward"
15"It was her own voice,"
16"She slid her delivery knife"
17"Her thumb rested on the"
18"It wore her exact denim"
19"It had her exact height"
ratio0.276
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air inside the tree"
1"She pulled her denim jacket"
2"The silver chain of her"
3"She checked her phone."
4"The signal bars vanished, replaced"
5"The screen displayed a spinning"
6"Aurora tapped the glass with"
7"She shoved the phone into"
8"The stark white beam cut"
9"Bluebells, foxgloves, and blooming heather"
10"Aurora crouched and brushed her"
11"They felt like wet tissue"
12"A sharp pulse of heat"
13"She gasped and grabbed the"
14"It glowed with a faint"
15"She stood and swept the"
16"The ancient oaks twisted upward,"
17"The standing stones formed a"
18"Moss clung to the northern"
19"Richmond Park sat in the"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The wildflowers beneath its boots withered, turning to black ash that drifted upward into the stagnant air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the voice repeated (repeat)"
1"it stated (state)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.316
81.4798%