| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "chilling" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "porcelain" | | 15 | "pang" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "marble" | | 19 | "crystallized" | | 20 | "velvet" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "echoed" | | 23 | "racing" | | 24 | "facade" | | 25 | "firmly" | | 26 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1330 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tastes of old wine and forgotten promises, Nyx whispered." | | 1 | "The roots drink deep where the soil is fed by want, Isolde said, her voice melodic but distant." | | 2 | "Keep close, Rory said, her voice steady despite the rapid beating of her heart." | | 3 | "Do not partake, Nyx whispered, their violet eyes narrowing." | | 4 | "It is trying to lure us, Rory said, pressing a hand to her abdomen." | | 5 | "Desire is the seed, consumption the harvest, Isolde murmured, gliding over the golden-inlaid stones." | | 6 | "Helbound souls, Rory whispered, her bright blue eyes wide as she took in the horrific display." | | 7 | "They sought the banquet, Nyx whispered, their shadowy form flickering as they drifted closer to the edge of the sunken f…" | | 8 | "Nyx, Rory said, her voice tight and commanding." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1330 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Shade | 4 | | Nyx | 6 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through a wall of col" | | 1 | "shadow that seemed to drink the ambient light" | | 2 | "sounded like dry leaves skittering across" | | 3 | "grapes that seemed to throb with an inner light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.752 | | wordCount | 1330 | | matches | | 0 | "not blood, but a rich, heavy wine" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.11% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 39.12 | | std | 17.93 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 80 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 32 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "is fed" | | 2 | "was replaced" | | 3 | "were occupied" | | 4 | "were petrified" | | 5 | "was laid" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was overwhelming" | | 1 | "was reacting" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1339 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.017923823749066467 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006721433905899925 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 12.67 | | std | 7.27 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 48.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 96.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes blinked" | | 1 | "Instead of water, a thick," | | 2 | "Instead, the chairs, massive, thronelike" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt like walking through" | | 1 | "She stopped and looked up." | | 2 | "It was reacting to the" | | 3 | "Their voice sounded like dry" | | 4 | "She left no footprints, gliding" | | 5 | "Her silver hair, reaching her" | | 6 | "She rubbed the small crescent-shaped" | | 7 | "We do not know what" | | 8 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 9 | "It was Dymas." | | 10 | "Her stomach gave a violent" | | 11 | "It is trying to lure" | | 12 | "She forced her mind to" | | 13 | "It is a psychological trap." | | 14 | "She paused by a massive," | | 15 | "She looked at Isolde." | | 16 | "I cannot lie, Aurora." | | 17 | "They rounded a towering hedge" | | 18 | "It was a massive, circular" | | 19 | "They were petrified, frozen in" |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the shimmering" | | 1 | "It felt like walking through" | | 2 | "The metaphysical barrier parted with" | | 3 | "The air changed instantly." | | 4 | "The biting chill of the" | | 5 | "She stopped and looked up." | | 6 | "The sky above was a" | | 7 | "The scent was overwhelming, a" | | 8 | "Rory touched the silver chain" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant, a deep" | | 10 | "It was reacting to the" | | 11 | "Nyx materialized beside her." | | 12 | "The Shade stood six feet" | | 13 | "The air around them dropped" | | 14 | "The air tastes of old" | | 15 | "Their voice sounded like dry" | | 16 | "Isolde stepped through the rift" | | 17 | "The Half-Fae seer did not" | | 18 | "She left no footprints, gliding" | | 19 | "Her silver hair, reaching her" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "If I drink, I will" | | 1 | "Before them lay a sunken" | | 2 | "If anything moves, you blind" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade stood six feet tall in their solid form, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that seemed to drink the ambient light." | | 1 | "She left no footprints, gliding over the ground as if she weighed nothing at all." | | 2 | "Ferns with translucent, veined leaves unfurled as they passed, releasing puffs of golden spores that hung in the air like suspended dust motes." | | 3 | "Vines thick as a man's torso coiled around the bronze-barked trees, bearing clusters of dark, glistening grapes that seemed to throb with an inner light." | | 4 | "The Shade's grip was incorporeal but carried a distinct, chilling pressure that made her gasp." | | 5 | "Rory felt a strange pulling sensation in her chest, a sudden, sharp pang of hunger that made her mouth water." | | 6 | "Roasted beasts with gilded horns, mountains of exotic fruits that glowed in hues of neon blue and vibrant magenta, and towering cakes spun from crystallized sug…" | | 7 | "She stepped in front of Isolde, her mind racing through exit strategies, her cool-headed facade locking firmly into place." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |