| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded unnaturally [unnaturally]" | | 1 | "she commanded more [more]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 67.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1246 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "precisely" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1246 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurched" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "calculated" | | 12 | "predator" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1233 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1215 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.883 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed unattached to anything, floating in the air before pulling back into the darkness with a soft scraping sound" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1233 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 9.80% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "learned that running" | | 1 | "chose that moment" | | 2 | "was that it" | | 3 | "understood that the" |
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| 93.76% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 58.71 | | std | 28.07 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 97 | | 2 | 94 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 103 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 70 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 48 |
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| 76.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "been led" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "been summoned" | | 3 | "been chosen" | | 4 | "been chosen" | | 5 | "being taken" | | 6 | "been brought" | | 7 | "was forgotten" | | 8 | "was claimed" |
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| 62.54% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "were pacing" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was lurking" | | 3 | "was responding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.153 | | matches | | 0 | "The half-mile walk to the hidden clearing had been unremarkable—a typical London park after hours, save for the absence of streetlights near the grove's entrance." | | 1 | "She'd come because the dreams had started again—the ones with whispering voices and crimson light." | | 2 | "From the corner of her eye, something moved between the trees—just a flicker of shadow that didn't belong to the still oaks." | | 3 | "In that brief moment of clarity, she saw them—the figures standing at the edge of the clearing, partially obscured by the standing stones." | | 4 | "She counted three, then caught a glimpse of a fourth, and then they were gone—if they had ever been there at all." | | 5 | "She sensed it was reacting to something—something fae, something not natural." | | 6 | "The smell was wrong—the heady perfume of the flowers had turned cloying, sickly sweet." | | 7 | "She had heard the tales of the Fae Grove from those who knew—how time moved differently, how it was a place between worlds." | | 8 | "She had come looking for answers about the pendant, but she might have brought something else with her—something that fed on places where the veil between realms grew thin." | | 9 | "Their forms became more distinct now—tall, unnaturally thin beings with elongated limbs and heads bent at impossible angles." | | 10 | "Their eyes—description failed Rory, for they seemed to be made of pure void, endless black holes that sucked in the moonlight." | | 11 | "The realization struck her with terrible clarity—she hadn't come looking for answers." | | 12 | "In that moment of suspended horror, Rory realized with terrible certainty that the wrongness wasn't just around her—it was inside her." |
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| 96.49% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1234 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.04376012965964344 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02025931928687196 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.51 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 48.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3411764705882353 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they formed a circle" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 78.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Her old trainers crunched softly" | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 2 | "She'd come because the dreams" | | 3 | "Her muscles coiled, ready to" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded unnaturally loud" | | 5 | "They weren't human." | | 6 | "They didn't cast shadows in" | | 7 | "She counted three, then caught" | | 8 | "She had delivered illegal packages" | | 9 | "She could handle this." | | 10 | "She sensed it was reacting" | | 11 | "she whispered to the empty" | | 12 | "It reminding her of carrion" | | 13 | "It wasn't human, not by" | | 14 | "It was too long, too" | | 15 | "She had heard the tales" | | 16 | "She had come looking for" | | 17 | "she commanded more to herself" | | 18 | "They didn't approach." | | 19 | "Their forms became more distinct" |
| | ratio | 0.354 | |
| 39.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to her" | | 2 | "The half-mile walk to the" | | 3 | "Her old trainers crunched softly" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant around her" | | 5 | "Rory ran a hand through" | | 6 | "The sound was too regular," | | 7 | "Time moved differently here, Eva" | | 8 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 9 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 10 | "Rory had come seeking answers" | | 11 | "She'd come because the dreams" | | 12 | "The rhythmic rustling stopped." | | 13 | "The silence wrapped around her" | | 14 | "Her muscles coiled, ready to" | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant grew faintly" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded unnaturally loud" | | 17 | "The temperature dropped sharply." | | 18 | "Rory shivered, rubbing her arms." | | 19 | "The moon chose that moment" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stood beneath the" | | 1 | "Even in late spring, the" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was too regular, too deliberate, as if something were pacing just beyond the circle of sight." | | 1 | "From the corner of her eye, something moved between the trees—just a flicker of shadow that didn't belong to the still oaks." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin now, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with light that throbbed in time with her frantic heartbeat." | | 3 | "Their eyes—description failed Rory, for they seemed to be made of pure void, endless black holes that sucked in the moonlight." | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant glowed fiercely now, bathing the grove in crimson light that reflected off the standing stones." | | 5 | "Its mouth stretched into a smile that defied human anatomy, too wide, too many teeth, each one sharp as shards of glass." | | 6 | "It made no sound, but the voice entered her mind directly, a silvery whisper that skittered across her thoughts." | | 7 | "The darkness between the standing stones deepened, swallowing the grove, swallowing the moonlight, swallowing even the voice that had promised her home." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |