Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEDN3A8Z6ET9QYDHM8BFE7

Run Details

Duration:
35.1s
Cost:
$0.001075
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones stood as silent sentinels, their twisted shapes silhouetted against the moonless sky. Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, had entered Richmond Park at 11 PM, seeking the Fae Grove. The half-mile walk to the hidden clearing had been unremarkable—a typical London park after hours, save for the absence of streetlights near the grove's entrance. Her old trainers crunched softly on the gravel path, the only sound in the unnaturally quiet night. The Heartstone pendant around her neck remained cool against her skin, offering little comfort. Rory ran a hand through her straight black hair, pushing it back from her face. At twenty-five, she'd learned that running rarely solved problems, but she'd run to London anyway, from Cardiff, from Evan. Now she stood beneath the stars, listening to the rustling of leaves in the trees. The sound was too regular, too deliberate, as if something were pacing just beyond the circle of sight. Time moved differently here, Eva had warned her, but no one had mentioned the silence stretching thick as honey, broken only by leaves that rustled against branches with unnatural precision. Her bright blue eyes scanned the grove, taking in the wildflowers that bloomed impossibly in every month. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist prickled, an old childhood accident reminding her of times less complicated. Rory had come seeking answers about the pendant, given to her by a stranger who had disappeared the next morning. She'd come because the dreams had started again—the ones with whispering voices and crimson light. But now, standing between the boundaries of human and fae, she wondered if she had been led into something far worse than she imagined. The rhythmic rustling stopped. Rory froze. The silence wrapped around her like a shroud, heavy and expectant. From the corner of her eye, something moved between the trees—just a flicker of shadow that didn't belong to the still oaks. Her muscles coiled, ready to run, but the wrongness of the place held her rooted. The Heartstone pendant grew faintly warm against her chest, its silver chain catching the moonlight in a dozen tiny points of light. "Hello?" Her voice sounded unnaturally loud in the oppressive quiet. The temperature dropped sharply. Rory shivered, rubbing her arms. Even in late spring, the air had turned winter cold. The moon chose that moment to emerge from behind a cloud, illuminating the grove in eerie silver. In that brief moment of clarity, she saw them—the figures standing at the edge of the clearing, partially obscured by the standing stones. They weren't human. They didn't cast shadows in the right direction, their forms seeming to absorb the moonlight rather than reflect it. She counted three, then caught a glimpse of a fourth, and then they were gone—if they had ever been there at all. Rory's breath came fast. Panic clawed at her chest, but her cool head prevailed. She had delivered illegal packages in Cardiff, dodged Evan's fists, and outrun worse in her short life. She could handle this. The Heartstone pendant pulsed with warmth, almost uncomfortably hot now. She sensed it was reacting to something—something fae, something not natural. "What do you want?" she whispered to the empty clearing. The wildflowers nearest to her swayed gently, though there was no wind. A branch snapped somewhere in the darkness, closer this time. Rory took a step back, her trainer squelching in the suddenly damp earth. The smell was wrong—the heady perfume of the flowers had turned cloying, sickly sweet. It reminding her of carrion flowers in the tropics, beautiful but corrupt. From behind a standing stone, a small white hand reached out, fingers skimming the ground like spider legs. Rory's stomach lurched. It wasn't human, not by any measure. It was too long, too thin, jointed in impossible places. The child-sized hand seemed unattached to anything, floating in the air before pulling back into the darkness with a soft scraping sound. She had heard the tales of the Fae Grove from those who knew—how time moved differently, how it was a place between worlds. What she hadn't understood was that it was a place of transition, of becoming something other. She had come looking for answers about the pendant, but she might have brought something else with her—something that fed on places where the veil between realms grew thin. The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin now, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with light that throbbed in time with her frantic heartbeat. The wildflowers began to writhe around her feet, vines extending from their stems like serpent tongues. Rory fumbled in her backpack, extracting the small silver knife Eva had given her "just in case." "Stay back," she commanded more to herself than whatever was lurking in the shadows. The figures reappeared, moving just at the edge of her vision. They didn't approach. Instead, they formed a circle around the grove's center, where Rory stood. Their forms became more distinct now—tall, unnaturally thin beings with elongated limbs and heads bent at impossible angles. Their eyes—description failed Rory, for they seemed to be made of pure void, endless black holes that sucked in the moonlight. They didn't blink. Didn't breathe. All these years, Rory had prided herself on her quick thinking, her problem-solving skills honed by necessity. She had calculated odds, planned escape routes. This place defied all calculation. There was no strategy here, only the fundamental law of predator and prey. The Heartstone pendant glowed fiercely now, bathing the grove in crimson light that reflected off the standing stones. The pendant was responding to whatever was here, drawn to it like a lodestone to true north. The realization struck her with terrible clarity—she hadn't come looking for answers. She had been summoned. The benefactor who had given her the pendant had known exactly where it would lead her. She was bait, placed precisely where these things would find her. The figure nearest to her raised its void-filled eyes to meet her stare. Its mouth stretched into a smile that defied human anatomy, too wide, too many teeth, each one sharp as shards of glass. It made no sound, but the voice entered her mind directly, a silvery whisper that skittered across her thoughts. "You are home now, child of the breach." Rory backed away slowly, her right hand gripping the silver knife, her left hand pressed against the burning warmth of the pendant. The grove no longer seemed like a park, but like a cage, the ancient oaks standing stones turning into the bars of her prison. She had come for answers, and now she stood on the precipice of knowing things she couldn't unknow. The figures began to move, drifting toward her with painful slowness. In that moment of suspended horror, Rory realized with terrible certainty that the wrongness wasn't just around her—it was inside her. The pendant had been chosen deliberately. She had been chosen deliberately. And now the choice was being taken from her. The darkness between the standing stones deepened, swallowing the grove, swallowing the moonlight, swallowing even the voice that had promised her home. As the Heartstone pendant pulsed with blinding intensity, melting her shadow into the night, Rory understood that the truth didn't lie in why she had been brought here, but in what she would become when her name was forgotten and she was claimed by the Fae Grove forever.
created_at"2026-05-27T10:06:58.679Z" 5/27/2026, 10:06:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded unnaturally [unnaturally]"
1"she commanded more [more]"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
67.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"deliberately"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
2"gently"
3"suddenly"
4"precisely"
5"slowly"
6"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"lurched"
count1
10
word"throbbed"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"predator"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"silence"
2"scanned"
3"rhythmic"
4"flicker"
5"oppressive"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
8"stomach"
9"lurched"
10"throbbed"
11"calculated"
12"predator"
13"whisper"
14"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"d with warmth"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1215
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory15
Richmond1
Park1
Fae3
Grove3
London2
Heartstone6
Cardiff2
Evan2
Eva2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.883
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed unattached to anything, floating in the air before pulling back into the darkness with a soft scraping sound"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1233
matches(empty)
9.80% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"learned that running"
1"chose that moment"
2"was that it"
3"understood that the"
93.76% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean58.71
std28.07
cv0.478
sampleLengths
090
197
294
376
410
5103
656
710
861
960
1068
1156
1214
1370
1442
1578
1654
178
1864
1974
2048
76.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences84
matches
0"been led"
1"were gone"
2"been summoned"
3"been chosen"
4"been chosen"
5"being taken"
6"been brought"
7"was forgotten"
8"was claimed"
62.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were pacing"
1"was reacting"
2"was lurking"
3"was responding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences85
ratio0.153
matches
0"The half-mile walk to the hidden clearing had been unremarkable—a typical London park after hours, save for the absence of streetlights near the grove's entrance."
1"She'd come because the dreams had started again—the ones with whispering voices and crimson light."
2"From the corner of her eye, something moved between the trees—just a flicker of shadow that didn't belong to the still oaks."
3"In that brief moment of clarity, she saw them—the figures standing at the edge of the clearing, partially obscured by the standing stones."
4"She counted three, then caught a glimpse of a fourth, and then they were gone—if they had ever been there at all."
5"She sensed it was reacting to something—something fae, something not natural."
6"The smell was wrong—the heady perfume of the flowers had turned cloying, sickly sweet."
7"She had heard the tales of the Fae Grove from those who knew—how time moved differently, how it was a place between worlds."
8"She had come looking for answers about the pendant, but she might have brought something else with her—something that fed on places where the veil between realms grew thin."
9"Their forms became more distinct now—tall, unnaturally thin beings with elongated limbs and heads bent at impossible angles."
10"Their eyes—description failed Rory, for they seemed to be made of pure void, endless black holes that sucked in the moonlight."
11"The realization struck her with terrible clarity—she hadn't come looking for answers."
12"In that moment of suspended horror, Rory realized with terrible certainty that the wrongness wasn't just around her—it was inside her."
96.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1234
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.04376012965964344
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.02025931928687196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.51
std7.63
cv0.526
sampleLengths
017
117
225
317
414
515
619
715
818
930
1017
1118
1220
1315
1424
154
162
1711
1822
1915
2022
2110
224
235
2410
2517
2623
273
2819
2922
304
3110
3217
334
3410
3511
3610
3712
3810
3913
4014
4112
4218
433
447
4510
4622
4723
4816
4929
48.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3411764705882353
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners29
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Instead, they formed a circle"
ratio0.012
78.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her old trainers crunched softly"
1"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
2"She'd come because the dreams"
3"Her muscles coiled, ready to"
4"Her voice sounded unnaturally loud"
5"They weren't human."
6"They didn't cast shadows in"
7"She counted three, then caught"
8"She had delivered illegal packages"
9"She could handle this."
10"She sensed it was reacting"
11"she whispered to the empty"
12"It reminding her of carrion"
13"It wasn't human, not by"
14"It was too long, too"
15"She had heard the tales"
16"She had come looking for"
17"she commanded more to herself"
18"They didn't approach."
19"Their forms became more distinct"
ratio0.354
39.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences82
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter, Rory to her"
2"The half-mile walk to the"
3"Her old trainers crunched softly"
4"The Heartstone pendant around her"
5"Rory ran a hand through"
6"The sound was too regular,"
7"Time moved differently here, Eva"
8"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
9"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
10"Rory had come seeking answers"
11"She'd come because the dreams"
12"The rhythmic rustling stopped."
13"The silence wrapped around her"
14"Her muscles coiled, ready to"
15"The Heartstone pendant grew faintly"
16"Her voice sounded unnaturally loud"
17"The temperature dropped sharply."
18"Rory shivered, rubbing her arms."
19"The moon chose that moment"
ratio0.841
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now she stood beneath the"
1"Even in late spring, the"
ratio0.024
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The sound was too regular, too deliberate, as if something were pacing just beyond the circle of sight."
1"From the corner of her eye, something moved between the trees—just a flicker of shadow that didn't belong to the still oaks."
2"The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin now, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with light that throbbed in time with her frantic heartbeat."
3"Their eyes—description failed Rory, for they seemed to be made of pure void, endless black holes that sucked in the moonlight."
4"The Heartstone pendant glowed fiercely now, bathing the grove in crimson light that reflected off the standing stones."
5"Its mouth stretched into a smile that defied human anatomy, too wide, too many teeth, each one sharp as shards of glass."
6"It made no sound, but the voice entered her mind directly, a silvery whisper that skittered across her thoughts."
7"The darkness between the standing stones deepened, swallowing the grove, swallowing the moonlight, swallowing even the voice that had promised her home."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
72.4058%