Run: 2026-05-27-01KSMEE1NV170TBXP90VQCF8WF

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18.2s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crumbling stone columns of the ancient ruin loomed before them, seemingly untouched by time. Strands of vines snaked around the weathered buildings, as if nature itself was reclaiming this forgotten place. "By the seven hells, this feels like a bad idea," Nyx muttered, their glowing violet eyes scanning the shadowy niches carved between the decaying stones. "Demons, inhabited, or just a rotten place in a forest, all bad choices." "Then we're even, cause' you weren't invited," Rory shot back, her blue eyes flashed a flicker of a second. "We'll be in, get what we came for, and get out. No drama, right?" Nyx rolled they're their eyes but didn't argue as Rory pushed on, her footsteps heavy on the worn path. The air grew thick and humid as they delved deeper into the ruin. Strange, sickly sweet blossoms pulsed with an otherworldly luminescence, staining the grass a matte emerald hue. "Tell me this doesn't trigger your shade senses," Rory muttered under her breath. Nyx shook their head. "Nothing from the Shadow Realm that I can feel." Their voice was grave. "But…I've never seen flowers like this before. I don't like it." Rory reached out a tentative finger to brush the velvet softness of a petal, which seemed to ripple at her touch. The blosso,blossom tingled against her skin, sending a trickle of icy heat down her arm. She yanked her hand back. "What the fuck was that?" Nyx just shook their head and pushed on, passing through a broken archway. The resemble of a once vast assembly hall stretched out before them, its floor now a field of pebbles. On the far side, a massive dome ceiling appeared to have collapsed inward like a punctured lung - time met its end in a violent petrification. "We're in deep shit if we came the wrong way," Rory whispered. She could feel the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. There was something here, an…energy. Nyx seemed to shudder as if feeling it too. "Can't put my finger on it, but something's off. Can you feel that?" Before Rory could answer, a flicker of movement caught the corner of her eye. She spun around, the Fae-forged blade Isolde hadgiven her already in hand. A dark figure darted between two pillars and fleet out of sight. "Did you see that?" She hissed, tensing. Nyx nodded grimly, their hand extended to where their own shadow pulsed like a heartbeat. "Yeah…That was no escaped spirit. That's flesh and blood." Rory palmed the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt, feeling its reassuring warmth. "Stick close," she whispered. "And keep those eyes open." Side by side, they crept further into the heart of the ruin, both their hands tight with dread at what horrors this place might unleash. The central chamber was immense and circular, its walls lined with more of those strange, hulking columns. In the very center rose a dais, and upon it stood what looked like an altar, pools of foul oil still lingering around its base. "You think someone got sacrificed here, in our time?" Rory asked quietly. It explained the oppressive, heavy feeling that permeated this place. Nyx just shook their head, continuing to scan the chamber. "No sign of any recent slaughter. Just…decay. Floods of it." Suddenly, the light did was out, and more creatures of flesh flooded in from the outer edges, all of which looked to be shadows given skin and bone. Rory heard herself gasp for breath, but as she grabbed him, her grip failed. She found her whip — or at least her recollection of it — now coiled around her arm, and with a deafening crack, the were wipe into the deep night. But the blade, razor-edged and cold to her burning, vicious touch cut through creature after creature, leaving them charred, lifeless husks where they fell. "You have to get out of here, Rory." Nyx suddenly flashed in the smoky air, their voice unerringly urgent. But Rory couldn't. Not with this. Not when justice still needed to be served, and the battlefield was this, amidst the ancient stones. She felt that decreasing pulse of the Heartstone again, like a final breath. Then, she was surrounded by shadows, their viscous touch cutting her, ripping her, tearing away the beautiful image of Rory and Eva, of them as friends - "RY!" Evan screamed, his muffled cries breaking into her rattling prayer, "No! Please, no! I'll do anything, anything! Just please, come back to me!
created_at"2026-05-27T10:07:11.561Z" 5/27/2026, 10:07:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.111
79.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount745
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount745
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"delved"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"otherworldly"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"hulking"
count1
12
word"oppressive"
count1
13
word"amidst"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"scanning"
2"flicker"
3"footsteps"
4"delved"
5"pulsed"
6"otherworldly"
7"grave"
8"velvet"
9"could feel"
10"warmth"
11"hulking"
12"oppressive"
13"amidst"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences44
matches
0"t with dread"
12.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences44
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords749
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount588
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Nyx8
Fae-forged1
Isolde1
Heartstone2
Side1
Eva1
Evan1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.565
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"d before them, seemingly untouched by time"
1"as if feeling it too"
2"looked like an altar, pools of foul oil s"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
83.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean31.21
std13.78
cv0.442
sampleLengths
032
138
233
348
413
528
646
758
830
922
1038
117
1224
1321
1425
1542
1622
1720
1828
1968
2019
2123
2240
2324
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"was surrounded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was reclaiming"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences52
ratio0.038
matches
0"On the far side, a massive dome ceiling appeared to have collapsed inward like a punctured lung - time met its end in a violent petrification."
1"She found her whip — or at least her recollection of it — now coiled around her arm, and with a deafening crack, the were wipe into the deep night."
88.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount586
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Strange, sickly sweet blossoms"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.04607508532423208
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.015358361774744027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean14.4
std6.87
cv0.477
sampleLengths
015
117
225
313
419
514
619
713
816
913
104
1113
1211
1321
1415
155
165
1713
1819
1926
2012
2113
225
239
2413
2514
2612
2712
287
2915
309
3112
324
335
3425
3517
3625
3712
3810
3910
4010
4128
4214
4330
4424
4519
463
473
4817
4913
97.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5961538461538461
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"Suddenly, the light did was"
1"Then, she was surrounded by"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences42
matches
0"Their voice was grave"
1"She yanked her hand back."
2"She could feel the hairs"
3"She spun around, the Fae-forged"
4"She hissed, tensing"
5"It explained the oppressive, heavy"
6"She found her whip —"
7"She felt that decreasing pulse"
ratio0.19
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences42
matches
0"The crumbling stone columns of"
1"Strands of vines snaked around"
2"Nyx muttered, their glowing violet"
3"Rory shot back, her blue"
4"Nyx rolled they're their eyes"
5"The air grew thick and"
6"Rory muttered under her breath"
7"Nyx shook their head."
8"Their voice was grave"
9"Rory reached out a tentative"
10"The blosso,blossom tingled against her"
11"She yanked her hand back."
12"Nyx just shook their head"
13"The resemble of a once"
14"She could feel the hairs"
15"Nyx seemed to shudder as"
16"She spun around, the Fae-forged"
17"A dark figure darted between"
18"She hissed, tensing"
19"Nyx nodded grimly, their hand"
ratio0.714
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Before Rory could answer, a"
ratio0.024
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Strands of vines snaked around the weathered buildings, as if nature itself was reclaiming this forgotten place."
1"It explained the oppressive, heavy feeling that permeated this place."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Evan screamed, his muffled cries breaking into her rattling prayer,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3"She hissed (hiss)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Evan screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.857
effectiveRatio0.667
79.7418%